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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update and the precap is intresting but what do u mean by accidentally love ??? plss tell atleast
precap to acche sai bata de vaise hi tere updates ka intezar karte karte thak jati hu haan nahi toh😆
Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@lipika pura precap episod bta du.
Or mujhe lga jay pragnant huh h to tu kush hoyegi ...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
accidentally love did they get enrolled in physical relations 😉 sorry i could not use more decent language please reply and this update was awesome and fantastic
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm honey.

Loved your update! Precap is very intersting! Pls update soon :=)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i knew it i knew it...jagat is rohan...the moment he told UV tht the gal he wanted to marry ran away and tht's y he can't love anyone i knew he was rohan...ok i know m commenting after such a long time...so sry...bt i ws super duper busy...so couldn't come...nw coming back to the updates...this J...uff she's so evil...h cn she do this with her own sis??...i wud really wanna knw her reaction wen she cums to knw tht jagat is rohan...i remember she once said tht she won't ever repeat the same mistakes as M...but she did 😆 ...and M and Uv are so super duper cute...thank god she finally realized tht UV as ryt all along abt mr. franklin...this gal jab tak practical krk samjho nhi tab tak samajh nhi aata h ise 😆...and wen both of them confessed tht they do love each other...hayeee...though fr nw jst to themselves pr thode tym me ek dusre ko bhi bta denge...😳...aur jab vo M ko andhere me lene aaya tha cz he knew tht she's scared of darkness...awww...so happy UV gave her the position bck...i was toh thinking tht they said rohan and manyata out loud...turned out they were just thinking huh?...lol...omg wen M was thinking m apni zindagi ki baat kr rhi thi...m sir ki baat kr rhi thi...i was like awww...and wen uday thought jo dekhne aaya tha vo dekh liya...fr M's smile...tht ws so cute as well...so all in all loved all the updates till now...update the next part soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-29..

In nxt mrng...
Ds:aaj koi uthega ki ni,sb so rhe h itne deir tk..arey holiday hone ka mtlb ye thodi hota h ki sote rhe...utho.

J aati h, kya dadi kya hua?aaj to sone dete..
'chl breakfast tble pe aajao sb..

Manyata bi fresh hoke aati h wo dadi ko bck hug krti h'gud mrng dadi'

Sb breakfast kr rhe h'tbi unanti aati h
'main aa skti hu?

M:arey wah,unanti aao na,isme puchne ki kya bat h..
Un:jay tumbi yha ho,grt.
V:or kha jayegi..iska thikana yhi h..
Un:mtlb.
V:ye meri jay bhai h.
Un:mtlb manyata ki bhan.
V:ha,shayed bhan hi h,kynki bhai to hm h..
J:vijay bhai shutup..
Ds:hy bhagwan ldna bnd kro,unanti beitho beta..nashta kro.
Un:ni dadi wo kal hmare papa ka b'day h,to ek party di h..hm aap sbko invite krne aaye h...

J:wow,grt.
Komal:hm jrur ayenge beta..
Un:thanku aunty,ek req.h specialy jay se...
J:ha bolo..
Un:mere papa ko apna b'day traditional style me manana pasnd h.
Means keise khu?
V:of,oh itni cnfuse kyn ho?main bol deta h,mtlb ye ki ye choti-2 dress phna kal aloud ni h,kal ..
J:ha ha main smjh gai..u don't wory unanti...
M:unanti hm jrur ayenge...

Unanti by khti h or chali jati h...

J:maa,mujhe apki wo mehngi wali saari chahiye.main whi phn k jaungi..

V:ah,lo shuru ho gai.. K:manyata jay tum dono mere 7th aao...

Wo dono komal k rum me jati h
G maa..
K:jay ye lo,yhi saari chahiye thi na tumhein.
J:wow,ha maa.wo hug krti h or chali jati h...

M:maa mujhe saari ni chahiye,main suit phn k hi jaugi..

Sudden ds aati h
'kyn?
Jay jitni mehngi saari ni mili isliye...

M:ni,lekin..
K:lekin kuch ni,tum ye saari lo..jyada mehngi to ni h..lekin
M:lekin kya?agar main aapse saari leti to yhi wali leti.ha ni to...lekin maa mujhe to saari phnni to aati ni.
K:arey koi bat ni..main..
Jay phr aati h'maa apka saari phnane ka style bhoot pasnd h,kal rat ko aap hi saari phnana.'
K:ha thik h beta...
Ds:of oh manyata udas mt ho main bi itni buri saari ni phnti...
Manyata 'aap to ms.victoria ho.ha ni to.
Ds:ha ni to.
All laughng...

Manyata apne rum me thodi udas hoke jati h
'manyata bhai kya hua,saari mst ni h kya?
M:ye meri fav.h.ha ni to.
V:to aankho ki chamak kha gai.
M:aap,meri feelings ko kitni jaldi pkd lete h.
V:tumhare bhai jo h.
M:vijay bhai dar lg rha h,kal wo bi hoga wha..
V:kaun rohan,to kya hua?tum kyn dar ri ho?
M:uske saamne aane ki himmat ni hoti.wo kal bat kr rha tha,to,uski aankho me..
V:kaminapan tha.
M:ha.,.'lekin tum dr kyn ri ho,tumhari kya galti kya h?njre uski jhukhni chahiye,to tum kyn dar ri ho.?
M:ha lekin..
V:arey ye sb bhul jao,jiske bare me sochna h uske bare me socho..kya pta wo bi soch rha ho...

Uday manyata ki snap dekh k smile kr rha hota h
Manyata smile krti h
(Nd play bck sng)
'ho,ho,ha,ha,hu hu hu ah ah aa ha.,

Namkeen si bat h,
hr nai bat me,
Teri khushbu chal ri h,h jo mere 7th me...
(Manyata dance krti h apne rum me
Or uday uski snap ko kiss krta h)
'halka-2 rang bite kal ka,
Gahra -2 kal ho jayega..
Ho jayega...
(Manyata apne face ko cution se chupati h,udhr uday cution ko apne arms me leke dance krta h)
Aadha Ishq aadha h ,
Aadha ho jayega...
Kadmo se milo ka,
Wada ho jayega...

Aadha ishq aadha h,
Adha ho jayega..
Kadmo se milo ka,
Wada ho jayega...
(Sng s nt stop)
(Manyata apni chain k 7th wo uday ka button dekhti h,nd uday wo kiss wala hanki dekhta h or dono manyata button ko kis krti h nd uday uski lipstick mark pe kiss krta h)


'ho,ho,ha,ha,hu hu hu ah ah aa ha...
(Manyata dance krti h,to use uday khada dikhta h apne rum me,
Nd udhr uday dance kr rha hota h to manyata uske 7th dance krti h
Dono dream dekhte h)
Beshumar raatein,
Behisab baatein,
Pas aate-2 ghum ho jati h..
Bekhudhi me dhal k,
Bekari me jal k,sau hzaar yaadein nam ho jati h...
(Dono 7th apne-2 rum me khte h 'i love u..i will propose 2mmrow..in party)...
Bitha-2 pal bite kal ka,mehka-2 mehka kal ho jayega..
Ho jayega..


Aadha ishq aadha h,
Adha ho jayega..
Kadmo se milo ka,
Wada ho jayega...""

U:manyata ab intzar ni hota,i love u alot,or ye main ye kal sbke saamne bol dunga,chahe tumhara jwab kuch bi ho...ha ni to..

M:ab muskil h aapke bina rhna,aapko soch k hi chahre pe smile,dhadkne tej ho jati h..ab main aapko btana chahti hu,ki mere dil me kya h..phr aapka jwab kuch bi ho.ha ni to...
Both happy alot nd sone chale jate h...
Jay apne rum me..
'main aisa kya kru ki di uday se nafrat krna start krde'..kuch to aisa krna pdega jisse di ki njro me uday k liye koi respect na ho...
Manyata uday se dur hogi tbi to uday mere pas ayega..
Suddn jagat ki cal aati h
'jagat tum meri life me imp.ni rkhte ab,just go 2 hell nd wo cal cut kr deti h.'
J:ye jay ko ho kya gya h.?bdal gai h,isse phle ye panchi aage nikle isko lyn pe lana pdega...

Nxt mrng...
'manyata smile krti hui uthati h,'kal jo kha wo aaj krke rhugi.'..'

Uday leita huya h'aankhe khol k,with smile k 7th bolta h 'ye rat kb hogi..?..

Ds:sb apne-2 kam se jaldi wapis aajana..
Mr.sharma k ghr tym se phuchna h unka b'day h na...

V:of oh my dear dadi,sbko yad h...aap chinta mt kriye..

In office...
U:aap sbko dad ne apne b'day pe invite kiya h,yad h na..

All member say'yes sir..
U:or ha,girls ko to pta h na,nt shrt dress nly tradditional dress..
Do u remembr na

Jay say:ha,sir sbko pta h...
U:hmmm...manyata kha h.?
J:mujhe kya pta,ghr se to mere bad hi nikli..
Lo sir aapki secretary aa gai...

Uday-manyata a little shining eye cntct hota h..

Manyata smile krte huye chali jati h
Or jay bi...

Jagat phle se hi uske cabin me beitha h..
Uday cabin me aata h
'hi,jagat gud mrng.
J:gud mrng..
Yar ek bat bta uncle ne apne b'day ki party rkhi h to ye grls k liye dress theme kyn?
U:kyn?tujhe pasnd ni aya kya?
J:ni,aacha mauqa h khubsurti dekhne ka ye.
Uday manyata k baare me sochta h
'ha shi kh rha h tu,sun dad ko koi problem ni h,lekin dad ne kha hmare bde-buzurg ayenge party me to ldkiya hya or...
J:or puri dhaki hui honi chahiye...
Both laughng...
U:tu bi na,ye bat specialy jay jeisi ldkiyo k liye tha...
J:aacha h,mja ayega...

J:sir main ofice se jaldi ja skti hu...
Suddn giriraj calng uday
Gr:uday,aap ghr aajaiye...
U:yes dad.i m cuming.
Cal cut...

'ha jay ja skti ho,
J:ok.sir.thanku..
Jay jane lgti h.
'manyata di tum ghr ni chalogi..
M:bs jay ye file complete krdu,phr chalugi..
J:aap file complete kro,main jati hu.bye..
M:ye party k chakker me pagal...

Uday bi ghr jata h
Tbi'manyata tum ghr jao,aaj ofice jaldi bnd hoga..main chod du.
M:ni,sir main chali jaugi,uncle k pas jaiye aap..unko jrurt hogi aapki...
U:hmm..rat ko jaldi aana..
M(thout):mujhe aapse jyada intzar h rat ka sir..
'g sir..

Uday chla jata h,
Thodi deir bad manyata apna kam complete krke jane lgti h tbi jagat aata h
'main tumhein ghr tk chod du manyata..
Manyata shocked,bck turn leti h
Jagat evil smile deta h'pta h zindgi me kbi apne past me ni dekhna chahiye,dukh milta h..isliye sb bhul jao..
Wo manayata k hath pe apna hath rkhta h
Manyata dar k apna hath hta leti h
'sukr kro mere papa ko abi pta ni chla tumhare baare me,wrna jail me chakki pis rhe hote..
Wo jane lgti h tbi jagat uska rasta rokta h
'dra ri ho mujhe.
M:ni dre to tum phle se, warning de ri hu,jo kam papa kr skte h wo main bi kr skti hu..ha ni to.
Wo chali jati h...

Uday ghr phuchta h
'g dad kyn bulaya?
Gr:koi kam ni tha,bs aise hi hm chahte the aap hmare 7th rhe aaj k din..
U:yes ofcourse...

Manyata apne ghr phuchti h
V:manyata bhai jaldi se taiyar ho jao..
M:hy bhagwan abi to bhoot tym h..
J:tym dekhti rhna sb hath se nikal jayega..chalo maa mujhe saari phnao...
M:main apne rum me ja ri hu..aaplog taiyar hoke chale jana...ha ni to...

Un:dad,hm soch rhe h manyata k ghr jate h or sbko apni gari me leke aate h...
Uday khush ho jata h'ha unanti bilkul shi kh ri ho.
Gr:tum bi jaoge.
Unanti nd uday chup..
Gr hste h'aacha bhai jaiye,or uday tum kyn ja rhe ho hmein ye bi pta h..jaiye...

Un:dada chaliye,manyata ko aap leke aana,main or sbko leke aaungi...

Jay apna makeup kr ri hoti h'tbi use vomet jeisa feel hota h wo bathrum me jati h'
Wo bahr aati h'ye kya ho rha h hmein,thakwat si kyn h,wo phr vomet krne bhagti h..
Phr wo khud bolti h'khin main pragnant..wo ghabra jati h,ni ni,ye kya jagat ka..

Unanti nd uday 'hi everyone aaplog taiyar ho,main aapsb ko lene aai hu..
V:oh,wow,thats grt...
Jay bi ghabrai hui baahr aati h
Un:o wow jay u r luk s vry pretty..
U:ya jay 2day u r luk beautiful..
Uday idhr udhr dekhta h manyata ko
J:thanku.
V:sir,jisko dhund rhe ho wo to taiyar bi ni hui abi...jay tum kyn tired lg ri ho.tbiyet to thik h.. Jay dar jati h'ha vijay bhai sb thik h...
Jay thout'main keise pta kru,wo dadi k pas jati h,dadi ek bat puchu,
Ds:ha puch beta,
J:mujhe apni ek frnd k pas jana h
Ds:abi,
J:ha.
Ds:kyn?
J:ah,uski tbiyet khraab ho gai h achnak,beithi thi wo to uske achnak vometing hone lgi,thkawat hone lgi.'to wo dar gai h,usne mujhe bulaya h.
Ds:wo shadi shuda h?
J:bdi aankhe krke ds ko dekhti h'ha dadi.
Ds:of oh.to phone krke bol de ghabrane ki jrurt ni h..wo maa bnne wali h..dadi bolke chali jati h...

Jay whi ghost bnke khadi rhti h'ni aisa ni ho skta,ye kya jagat ka...9 kya kru?obotion..

Sb bahr hote h manyata ko chodke..
Un:aap sb mere 7th chaliye,manyata bad me aa jayegi,dada k 7th... Ds:ha ha
V:ha ha,koi problem ni h.
K:pr.
Ds:arey chalo na..
J:main bi di k 7th..
Vijay jay ka hath pkdta h'bhai hmare 7th chalo na..chalo.

Wo sb chale jate h...

Uday ghr me akela
Manyata rum me akeli
Uday ghr ghum rha hota h,tbi awaz aati h
'dadi rum me aa jao,meri hlp kro saari phnane me..

Uday udhr rum ki trf jata h,wo nock krta h,'manyata main hu..wo sb gye
M:ha ander aajaiye.mujhe kuch sunai ni de rha h,main washrum me hu..
Uday phr ander aata h,tbi suddn manyata washrum me se aati h'ha dadi chalo meri saari phnane me hlp k..
Both shocked...

Manyata blouse or peticoat me khadi h,uske hair open h.. Uday use hot njro k 7th niche se upr tk dekhta h...
Start Both eye cntct session..

Then thodi deir bad manyata apni saari uthati h'wo main mujhe,
Uday usi pose me khada h.
Wo jaldbazi me saari leke washrum me jati h tbh saari me uljh jati h or girne ko hoti h tbi uday use apne arm me catch krta h,lekin wo bi uljh jata h or dono bad pe gir jate h...
Manyata ne apna face rite side krke ankhe bnd ki,uski breath up nd down ho ri h.or uday use cntinious dekha ja rha h..
Wo out of cntrl ho rha h,he s lost hr nd wo manyata ko phle chick pe kis krta h,then sudden manyata apni eyes open krti h,
Wo phr uday ki trf dekhti h'she s also lost in his eyes.'..
Phr uday use 4head kis krne jata hi h tbi manyata use tightly hug kr leti h..

Precap-uday-manyata dance nd jay make a evil plan in party..

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww thats was awesome and please don't leaves us like this yaar can't wait to read more and i hope manyata jay ke nakshe kadamo par nahi chal rahi (preggers lol 😉) and i think jay's evil plan would be manyata ki saari phadna *If M wore a saari tho*
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...amazing...thank you for update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one👏
update soon⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved it.i agree with Lipika.J ka evil plan hoga M ki saari pharna.PHATICHAR AUR KYA KARSAKTI HAI.lekin mujhe ek aur strong feeling aarahi hai ki J Uv ko apne bache ki bab bolega.jisse M Uv seh nafrat kareh.stupid girl i tell u...kher dekhti ho i mean parti hoo ki tu akhir kya likhti hai...keunki teri likhayi mashaallah...so kalka wait hai...

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