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Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-31

Mrng hoti h
Sb dukhi h.
Sb ro rhe h..

Uday wakeup hota h...
Use ajeeb lgta h'ye mera sir kyn drd kr rha h,wo apne rum ko dekhta h uski halt buri h,jwelery ka pde hona,uske pair me bangle chubh jata h..

Wo cnfused hota h ki ye kya hal h is kamre ka..
Wo sudden mirror me apna face dekhta h'uske face pe body pe lipstick mark,nails marks hote h..
'ye sb kya h,ye nishan keise,kamre ka hal aisa-keise h.'

Or party rat ki,o god maine to manyata ko...
Wo jaldi-2 t-shrt phnta h or bhaag k jata h,jb sbki halt dekhata h,tb wo khud cnfused hota h..
Sb uday ko dekhte h,bt manyata wo pather bnke hi beithi h...
U:kya hua?sb aise kyn beithe h?
Komal uday k pas aati h nd use ek slap marti h..
gr,unanti all cryng alot...

K:jurm krke,puchte ho kya kiya...meri beti ki jindgi khraab krdi tune..
Uday manyata ki trf dekhta h,pr manyata chup-chap beithi h...

U:lekin maine kiya kya h?
Phr gr uska coller pkdte h nd kya kiya h tumne hmari izzat bhare bjar me uchal di tumne..

Uday ko kuch smjh ni aarha tha to wo chilaata h'aakhir koi mujhe btayega hua kya h?

Phr manyata chilati h'ha hm sbko pta chl gya ki tum keise insaan ho,nihayti gande,besharm insan ho tum'

Uday shocked ho jata h'manyata tum to aisa...
K:hmari jay ko tumne khi ka ni rkha...
Uday again shocked'wo jay ki trf dekhta h,wo smjh jata h,bt he say'ni,ni ye maine ni kiya..
Trust me dad..
'main itni gandi harqat ni kr skta..
Wo sbko smjhane ki kosish krta h'pr ni kr pata..

Wo phr manyata k pas jata h'manyata meri
Trf dekho,main aisa ni kr skta..tum to mujhpe..
M:mujhe chuiye mt,maine aap pe bhoot bharosa kiya,or aap ne...

U:manyata main keise yakeen dilau..main aisa ni kr skta,main kisi or ldki ko dekh bi ni skta qki manyata main to tumse...

Manyata sudden uday ki trf dekhti h
Then painful eyecntct hota h...

Uday chilata h'maine kuch ni kiya,mera bharosa kro...manyata maine kuch ni kiya..

M:keise,apni bhn ko apke rum me se aisi halt me niklte huye dekha,or aap kh rho bharosa kru,to kya apni bhn ko jhuth smjhu..

Jagat isliye shocked h qki jay usi ghr ki beti h jis ghr ki manyata...

Ds:ghr chalo sb yha se...idhr bat krne layak kuch ni h...
Komal chalo sb...
Komal jay ko apne 7th leti h,then sb jate h..
Uday ro rha hota h..
Manyata jati h...
Uday apne aap se'maine kuch ni kiya manyata,mera aitbar kro..main srf tumhein chahta hu'

Manyata rote huye piche mudke uday ko dekhti h..
(Bck grund sng)
"keise aankhe chaar krlu,
Keise aitbar krlu,
Keise apni dhadkno ko itna bekraar krlu,
Keise tujhko dil ye dedu,
Keise tujhko pyar krlu..."

Manyata rote-2 chali jati h...

Uday apne rum me chala jata h..
Sb chale jate h,then jagat akela sochta h
Ye aacha mauqa uday ko manyata k khilaaf krne ka...

Manyata k family apne ghr phuchti h
Jay manyata ko hug krke rone lgti h...
'di ab kya hoga?
Manyata apne aap ko relax krti h'jay chup ho ja,kuch ni hoga sb thik hoga,maa ise kamre me lejao'...

Manyata apne rum me jati h or door bnd nd strt cryng...
'kyn main apni zindgi me kisi ko shamil ni kr skti,jb jise chahti hu Tb aap mujhse chin lete ho use...

Udhr uday last nyt ki bat yad krne ki koshish krta h,bt use kuch yad ni aata..
Jagat aata h uske rum me
Uday tu thik h,dekh main tere 7th hu,tu chinta mt kr..
U:mujhe rat ko kya hua tha,main kb behosh hua tha..mujhe kuch yad ni..
J:jb jay ne tujhe softdrink diya tha,shayed tb se..
U:ha,ha tu shi kh rha h..pr jay aisa kyn kregi?use kya fayeda hoga.

J:dekh tu preshan mt ho..
U:preshan keise na hou,sbki nafrat gusa manjur h lekin manyata ka ni...
Main wo ni sh skta...

J(thout):yhi mauqa h..choqa marne ka..
'uday maine tere se ek bat chupai.
U:kya?
J:jay aakhir h to manyata ki hi bhn..ye dono bhno ka kam dusro ki feelings k 7th khelna h..
Uday gusa hota h'jagat manyata k baare me soch smjh k bol'
J:kya soch-smjh k bolu,tu us ldki se milna chahta tha na jo meri shaadi wale din apne rum me kisi or ldke k 7th mili thi...
Wo or koi ni manyata h..

Uday ful2 gusse me aajata h or jagat ka coller paked 2-4 thappad mar deta h.
'manyata aisi ldki ni h,smjha tu...
Mujhe apne se jyada uspe trust h.'

J:jitna marna h mar le,lekin such whi h jo maine kha..wo khke chla jata h..

Or uday k mind me jagat ki bat ghumne lgti h...

Jagat baahr ake'mujhe jo krna tha krdiya'...

Jay apne rum me..
'fresh hoke aati h
Mirror me dekhti h'natak k chakker me chahre pe marks pd gye,oh..dats nt fair,bt ek trf se sb meri muthi me h'
Uday sir kuch din me aapka bacha anewala h mere stomach me,di aapko to phle bi ek bar dhokha mila h,dubara dhukh sh logi mujhe sb pta h'ha ni to...
Or finaly jagat Tumhe bi koi dout ni hoga..perfct everthing is al ryt...

Jagat calng jay.
Jay:chl jay phr se dukhyari naari k rup me aja...rote huye
'hello jagat'

J:jay tum thik ho,tumhare 7th bhoot bura hua..ab uday ko dost khte huye bi sharm aati h...
Jay:jagat main to puri trh bdnaam ho gai hu..
J:bdnam kya jay..izzat to tumhari bhoot phle ja cuki h..
Bnd kmre me gai to kisi ko pta ni chla
Dusri bar bi bnd kamre me hi hua jay,pr tumne use rape ka nam dediya..

Jay:shut up jagat.tumhein hr tym faltu ki bat kyn krte ho..

Jagat:shut up u jay...
Tumhari aukat tumse phli mulaqat me hi phchaan gya tha main.
Jay:khna kya chahte ho?
J:weise,saari keise remove krte h,jwellery keise remove krte..finaly,ek rapiest grl keise bnna h,or uday ko rapiest keise saabit krna h koi tumse sikhe...hai na jay.

Jay dar jati h,wo apne rum ki window bnd krti h
'jagat ye kya bkwas kr rhey ho..

J:na,na bkwas main ni bkwas to tum uday ko nashe me lake jo uske 7th kr ri thi wo h...

Jay to puri trh dar gai'or darte-2 puchti h..jagat mujhe kuch smjh ni aa rha h.

J:itni naa smjh kb se bngai jay.
Jb kal drink ko leke uday k piche pdi thi na tum,tbi kuch ajeeb lga mujhe..or jb rat k andhere me tum uday ko leke gayeb hui ,tb us andhere me tumhare piche main bi tha..
Tum rum me kamal dikha ri thi,or main uday ki rum ki window se apne mobile me tumhari hot pics le rha tha...infact video bi bnai maine...wo kya khti h tumhari bhan 'ha ni to'...

Jay totaly lost hr mind,use to smjh ni aa rha h wo kya khe..
'aisa kuch ni h jagat,ye jhutha aarop mere pe mt lgao.

J:awww..thik h wo pics,videos uday manyata infct sbko dikhadeta hu..tb shayed mere pe trust ho jaye..
Jay:kya chahte ho jagat?

J:dats a gud grl..phle to milna chahta hu...
Tumhara plan janna chahta hu..
Or weise bi jay tumhari izzat phle hi loot chuki h,uday pita h to itna behosh bi ni hota ki wo kisi ldki k 7th ye gandi harqat ni krega...
Jay:thik h jagat..main tumse milugi...

Continues

Pari

Nice twist to the story! Loving your story. J is like this only.. be it in your story or in the show.

god...yyy dere r soo many dushman of manveer...plzzz in next part unite manveer again...plzzz...

Ha ni to...
@lipika darlng
Wo kya h na serial romance+twist+suspence+stry se hi chalta h...

Colourful cmnts kiya kr.
Mst lgta h...
Nd thanku
chal thanku sry main apne frnds ko ni bolti...
Isliye...i tell u..



Nd trp to tu puch mt main such me is show ko nu1 dekhana chahti hu,pr pta ni kb...

Pari

Wow nice one yaar.n so sry yaar vo galti seh kiya tha.anyways hope M ko jalt seh jalt sab pata chal jaye.ab kalka wait hai.

Wooww!! Such twists!! But I'm really missing ManVeer!! Plzzz continue soon!!:D

Wow again an awesome update.J kamini Jagat kamina itne sare dushman ek manveer..hay kya pyar ki yeh ek kahani hai yaar oops i mean juniour Ekta mam.cont soon..kash M yeh sari baatein sunn pati.aur Komal ko kaho ki J nahi ulta ussine humare Uv ko kahin muhn dekhane layak nahi chora..pliz pliz pliz manveer ki sarey missunderstanding jaldi clear kardey pliz...

Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-32

Manyata apne rum me window k pas khadi h..
Vijay aata h.
V:manyata bhai kudne ki soch rhe ho kya?
Manyata 'vijaybhai mere me to ye krne ki himmat ni h...
V:beitho,aise chup rhne se kuch ni hoga.kuch socho kya krna h aage?
M:mujhe kuch ni krna,ab jo krna h police kregi uday k 7th.
V:police mtlb,tumhein jay pe trust h uday pe ni.
Manyata cryng'aapko pta h kal maine socha tha apne pyar ka izhaar main unse krdungi,lekin unka asli chahra saamne aa gya..
V:mtlb tumhein ye lgta h uday aisa kr skta h.
Manyata vijay hoke questioning reaction deti h
V:arey aise kya dekh ri ho,uday rohan ni h manyata..
Rohan ki aukat bhoot choti h uday k saamne...usne jo tumhare 7th kiya wo paiso k liye tha.
Uday to apne aap me ek bda buisnesman h,or agr izzat k 7th hi khelna hota to wo kb ka tumhare 7th wo kr chuka hota jo kal jay k 7th hua...
Manyata soch me pdh jati h'to kya aap ye khna chahte ho jay k 7th kisi or ne..
V:hone ko to bhoot kuch ho skta h manyata bhai...
Tumne hi kha tha uday sir bhoot aache mr.frakin se,montasy hall k maneger se tumhari izzat kisne bchai..
Tum ye bhul gai kya?
M:mujhe kuch smjh ni aa rha h?aap jay ki side lene k wjaye unka 7th de rhe ho?

V:mujhe srf itna pta h,izzat bchane wala izzat ni le skta kisi ki bi..
Thinking again manyata..jaldbazi me khin is baari apni glti k wjh se apni zindgi kho dogi tum...

Jay bahr jati h.
Sbse chupte-chupate jati h..
Wo jagat se milti h.
Jay:kyn bulaya mujhe?
Jagat:aa,aa,ye attitude apne pas rkho..phle ye btao ye sb Kiya kyn?mkshad kya h tumhara.
Jay:mujhe rich bnna h jagat...jo tumhare 7th rhke to kbi mere sapne pure ni honge..
Ek izzata,fam ek apna rutba chahti hu main..isliye mujhe ye krna pda..
J:lekin iske liye rape krwane ki..
Jay:qki wo uday manyata se bepnaah pyar krta h..or wn manyata hmesha meri khushi bi...
J:ye sb paane k liye rapiest kyn?
Jay:qki manyata ki njr me uday ki izzat khtm krna chahti thi..
J:to tum uday ko apna bna ke,apne dreams pure krna chahti ho.
Jay:ha,tum kya chahte ho ye btao.
J:weise hmare dream bhut milte h,tumhein rich family smjh k tumhein fsana chaha pr tum to mujhse bi gair gujri ho..chodo,ab itni daulat jb tumhare pas aajayegi tb usme se mere uper kuch daulat brsa dena tb tumhein saare saboot mil jayenge...
Jay:jagt tum mera use kr rhey ho.
J:o,ha.plz jay..sharafat bhari baatein tumpe aachi ni lgti..main agr tumhara istemal kr rha hu,to tum bi uday k bholepan ka istemal kr ri ho...
Jay gusse me 'thik h...lekin abi mujhse kisi cheez ki umeed mt rkhna,meri shadi jis din hogi us din tumhare nam aadhi property hogi...

J:main intzaar kruga..
Jay chali jati h...or jagat wha se chla jata h...

Unanti 2 uday
'dada,aap ofice ni gye..
U:kis muh se jau,sb ki njro ki prwaah ni h unanti,lekin manyata ki njro se mujhe frq pdhta h...

Un:to mtlb aap ye maan chuke ho ki glti aapne ki h.
U:unanti maine kuch ni kiya,lekin mujhe begunah saabit krne ka koi proof bi to ni h...
Un:dada,sochna aako h.chahe duniya kuch bi khe,mujhe aap pe bharosa h..
Or manyata ki njro ko aapko hi bdlna h...
Unanti chali jati h...
'mujhe manyata se ek bar to bat krni pdegi...kisi bi hal me..
Wo ofice k liye ready hota h...

Ds aati h manyata k rum me
'manyata beta,aap ofice ni gai.
M:dadi aapko lgta h.ki main ab dubara ofice jaugi.
Ds:kyn?apne aap pe bharosa ni h,ya jise dil de beithi h uspe bharosa ni h..
M:dadi main kuch bat ni krna chahti..
Ds:tujhe sunna pdega..jis ldke ko dekh k phli njr me mujhe ye ehsaas hua ki ye meri manyata k liye bna h,
Tu jb uske 7th hoti h tb tu srf or srf khush hoti h..
Apna chahra dekh ro ro k kya bura hal kiya h,
Main ye ni khti ki jay jhuth bol ri h,lekin main ye bi maanne ko taiyar ni hu ki uday aisa krega..
Manyata'aap sb kya chahte h mujhse?
Dadi himat tuit gai h meri,phle wo rohan or ab ye dusra dhokha.
Ds:rohan to tera pyar tha hi ni,tera pyar to tere dil me uday k nam se h..
Ek bar bat to kr akhir bina bat kiye,misunderstndng dur keise hogi...

Manyata pick up d purse nd 'dadi main aapke khne se ja ri hu'...
Ds:koshish krne me koi burai ni...

Manyata chali jati h, uday bi ofice phuchti h...
Uday ofice me aate hi'jisko ye ofice chodna wo chod skta h...
Kisi k 7th koi zbrdasti ni h..
Wo apne cabin me chala jata h...
Jagat wha beitha hota h.
J:i m sry uday.maine kal wo jyada hi bol diya.
U:ni jagat i m sry maine tujhe thapad maara...
J:arey koi bat..tujhe phli bar meri kisi bat pe trust ni hua..lekin maine jo kha wo...

Manyata aati h cabin me'may i cuming sir...

Jagat shocked hota h
Uday surprized hota h.. Manyata thout,dadi,main srf aapke khne se aai hu,lekin bat krne ni,job se resign dene...
U:ha,cuming..main wo tumhara hi..
J:bhoot himat h manyata tum me,itna kuch ho jane k bad bi bdi respct k 7th..

Manyata use angry luk me dekhti h,or jagt use evil smile deta h.
'mr rohan aap jitni apni aukat me rhoge na utna aacha h'tum srf sir ki chamchagiri krna qki tum whi krne layek ho...ha ni to., jagt uski bat sunke gusse me dekh rha tha...

U:manyata ye rohan ni jagat h...
Manyata ko phr feel hota h ki glt nam bol diya..
Jagat bi dar jata h..
Manyata chup rhti h.
U:jagat tum baahr jao...
J:hmmm...manyata ko angry luk me dekhte huye chla jata h...
U:manyata main bi tumse bat krna chahta tha...
M:main bat krne ni aai hu,main apna resign dene aai hu..

Wo resign rkhke jane lgti h,tbi uday uska hath pkdta h..
'manyata ek min.mujhe apni bat khne ka mauqa to do'
Manyata is little cryng
'mujhe aapse njre milane ki himat ni h,mere bharose ka..
U:maine tumhare bharosa ni toda,maine kuch aisa ni kiya manyata jo kisi ko dukh de ya meri najre kisi k saamne jhuke...
Manyata apna hath leave krati h or bck turn hoke khti h,'bharosa krne lgi thi sir,wo ro ri h main to dono trf se bndhi hu sir.ek trf aap ho or dusri trf meri apni bhn...
Or meri bhn ki jo halt thi or kmre me jo aapki halt thi use dekh k yhi lg rha tha..ki aapne jay k 7th...mere liye dubara aappe bharosa krna mushkil h..
Wo suddn jane wali hoti h, uday gusse se uske dono hath pkdhta h,or wall k sath use touch krdeta h...
Manyata ki aankho me tears h
Uday ki
aankho me gussa h...
Nd wo dono bhut closed hote h,angry eyecntct hota h..
Both lips almost touched..nt ful..
U'manyata mujhe kisi or ki chinta ya bharosa ni chahiye..mujhe bs tumhara bharosa chahiye.'
M:or wo ni krna chahti,dubaara glti ni krna chahti..
U-tumhari bhn bi to glt ho skti h..
M:kisi ldki ko apni izzat uttarne ka sauq ni hota...
U:agar mujhe kisi ki izzat utarne ka shauq hota to ab tk tumbi yha sharafat se khadi ni hoti.

Manyata use push krti h'main aapke saamne khadi hu,le lijiye meri izat bi..

Uday shocked hota h wo manyata ki trf se apna face turn krleta h...
M:aapne phr saabit kr diya ye bat khke ki glti aap hi ki h..

Uday wo or jyada preshan or irritate hoke manyata ki trf dekhta h..
Nd manyata ye bolke rote-2 wha se chali jati h...
Uday whi khada rhke use dekhta h..

(Play bg music)
(Male version)
"mohbbat ki raho me,
Hm sath hote.
Sau drd milte,
Phr bi na rote..
Kash aap hmare hote...

"mohbbat ki raho me,
Hm sath hote.
Sau drd milte,
Phr bi na rote..
Kash aap hmare hote...
[uday remove d court or road pe chl rha h or manyata k 7th dance scene remember krta h
Nd other side manyata road pe roti hui chl ri h,or wo bi dance seq.hi remember kr ri h ]
(Male vers.)
"kh na paaye hm dil ki bat ko,
Sun na paaye tum dil ki bat ko,
Hr pal hmko tadpaayegi ye khamoshiya...
(Uday ek jgh part me ruk k ofice fight jo manyata k 7th hua wo remine krta h)
"ye bi such h tum bewafa ni,
Ye bi such h hm bewafa ni,
Ye bi such h chahat me mili h ye duriya"..
[uday-manyata apne-2 ghr phuchte h apne-
apne rum me both fall on bed nd manyata alot cryng uday also vry sad uski aankho me tears h bt wo show ni kr rha h]
"is dil k aise tukde na hote..
Kash aap hmare hote..."
[both remembring all beautiful moments jo unke bich the)
"tuta meri chahta ka silsila,shayed ye tha kismat ka faisla..
Hm shikwe or shikayt bolo kisse kre...
[uday manyata ki snap dekhta h use apni sine se lga k little cryng
Or manyata bi uski snap ko lga k sine se roti h]
"ye na pucho kya mere pas h,
Tanhai h or teri yad h...
Tute dil se aahe bhare to kb tk bhare...
[uday ko manyata ko bhoot jyada mis krta h or wo uski pic ko sine se lga k rone lgta h,use cntrl ni hota]..
"hm apni halat pe aise na rote...
Kash aap hmare hote...

"mohbbat ki raho me,
Hm sath hote.
Sau drd milte,
Phr bi na rote..
Kash aap hmare hote..."

Precap-jay again start drama..family ko btana h wo preganant h.

Pari