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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved it.it waz just fabulous.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww what a twist!! Do continue soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm.

Awesome update!! Loving the new twist!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaaay i thought jagat must b rohan . whn u kept delaying jagat and M meeting face to face my suspicions were confirmed . i love both ur ss very much .
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Posted: 13 years ago
well that was ekdum JAKAS but why on this earth found jagat to play rohan only i mean yaar ladhka toh dhanka choose karti mujhe toh yeh samj nahi aa raha manyata jagat jaise lalo sai kaise pyaar kar sakti hai and by the way update was like BOMBBLAST tho its was rockin just like u and damn girl was a suspence who thought jagat would be rohan OMG OMG OMG i want more OF IT please update fast ur story is awesome want to see manyata takin revenge from jagat/rohan but i'll assume jagat as some hot guy tho lol I got HOT GUYS DISEASE 😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-28

Manyata k hath file gir jati h,uska face radish ho jata h..

Or jagat ka hal manyata se bi bura h,uske chahre pe dar,sharm saare xpresion ek 7th h..
Un dono ka eyecntct bna hua h.

Tbi uday bolta h,jagat ye h meri secretary manyata .
Then break d eyecntct..
Manyata ro ri hoti h wo apne tears chupane k liye file uthati h...
J:manyata tumhara reaction dekh k to lgta h tum jagat ko janti ho...
M:jay chup hoja,main kisi ko ni janti...
Uday use sry bolne k liye aage aata h tb manyata bolti h'sir ye ri aapki file,mujhe dusri file complete krni h main chlti hu.
U:manyata meri..

Wo uday k cabin me se rote huye bahr aati h,tbi uday bi bahr aake uska hath pkad leta h..

Uday sbke saamne,jay unke piche khadi h.
'glti meri thi kal,maine jo kiya wo glt tha uske liye i m realy sry manyata.

Manyata use decent trike se dekhti h...
Main apni glti ki sja tumhein ni de skta.
Jo job(secretary)tumhari thi wo tumhari hi h...or jay tumhein jo job mili thi whi h...
Ok.
Manyata nd jay 'yes sir..
Jay bhoot jealous or gussa hoti h..
Or wo khti h manyata se'hmesha meri khushiya kyn chinti ho tum'...wo kh k chali jati h...

Manyata jagat ko dekh k shocked h...
'wo jagat ni h,wo to rohan h'wo jagat keise bn gya..??

Wo phr khin kisi ko dhokha to ni de rha h...
Sir to uspe bhoot turst krte h khin sir ko to ni...
Phr manyata achanak dar jati h
Or wo jay k pas jati h
M:jay tu wo ander jagat ko kb se janti h..
Jay bi dar k khadi ho jath h.
J:kyn di,aap aisa kyn puch ri ho?
M:swal k bdle jwab diya jata h jay,swal ni kiya jata..
Jay(thout):khin di ko sb pta to ni chl gya.
'ah di main bi to aaj hi mili hu usse...
M:oh,aacha...
Wo chali jati h...

Udhr cabin me jagat chup h,'he thout-ye manyata uday ki secretary h...socha ni tha dubara mere saamne aise...
U:kya hua jagat?kha kho gya?
J:uday tujhe manyata pe pura bharosa h kya?
U:dekh jagat bura mt maaniyo lekin mujhe manyata pe utna hi bharosa h jitna apne aap pe..

Jagat fake smile deta h'kuch krna pdega wrna meri life to distroye ho jayegi...

Manyata ka kam me man ni lg rha wo apna purse uthati h or ofice se chali jati h..
Or udhr jagat
'chl uday main chalta hu,bhoot kam h,wo pura krna h..
U:chl,bye.
Wha se jagat bi baahr aa jata h...

Manyata apne khayalo me khoi hui jati h,tbi jagat bi jaldi jaldi me aata h or manyata se uski takker ho jati h.
Then again both face 2 face hote h...

Manyata use cntinous gusse se dekh ri hoti h,or jagat njre mila ni rha njre chura rha h...
J:manyata tum..
M:nam mt lo mera...
J:kbi socha ni tha dubaara aise saamne ayenge.
M:hm jo sochte h wo hota ni,or ni sochte wo ho jata h...
Mujhe tumse koi mtlb ya koi bat ni krni,meri zindgi se dur rho...
J:manyata...dekho meri zindgi me ab dubaara aa hi gai ho to ek req.h mere kisi kam me dkhal andaazi mt krna...
M:agar meri zindgi k 7th dubaara khilwad krne ki koshish bi ki to mujhe bura koi ni hoga...
J:kiski jindgi ki bat kr ri ho apni ya uday ki...qki uday to tumhein...
Manyata use avoid krke chali jati h...

Dilo jan se chahta h...jagat gve evil smile
Manyata-main apni zindgi ki bat kr ri thi jagat,main sir ki bat kr ri thi...
Bhagwan,meri zindgi me khushi dastak deti ni h ki aap dukh bhej dete ho...
Wo apne tears clean krti h...
Nd 'or bck se dadi ko hug krti h'or dadi kya kr ri ho?
Ds:hy,mera bacha aagya...
V:hmari manyata bhai aa gai,to bike ridng keisi ri.
M:mst..
Ds:jay kha h?
M:aati hogi dadi...or weise bi sir ne mujhse sry kha or meri job mujhe wapas krdi..ha ni to.
Ds.:sachi,main bhoot khush hu..
Ds chali jati h.
V:job paane ki khushi to dikh ri h lekin aankhe kyn ro ri h..

Uday 2 jay.
U:jay tum ghr jao..main late jaunga.
J:sir aapka khayal rkhne k liye bi to koi hona chahiye...aapki secretary manyata to ja chuki h...
U:wht?btaya ni usne...
J:ha wo 'manyata jay ko cal krti h..
Jay cal cut krdeti h,or switch off krdeti h...
M:ye jay cel switch of kyn krdiya.?
V:uday k cel pe krlo..

Manyata phr uday k cel pe cal krti h,
U:lekin usne...sudden manyata ki cal aati h
'uday khush ho jata h,ek min.jay main aata hu,wo cabin se bahr aa jata h.
U:hello..manyata tum mujhe..
M:sir wo main bhul gai,meri tbiyet thik ni lg ri thi,isliye.
U:kya hua?
M:ni sb thik h,jay h kya udhr?
U:jay,ha h
M:sir use jaldi bhej dijiye,maa preshan ho ri h.
U:ha to tum ya tumhari maa kyn preshan ho ri ho?
M:arey,maa bi to hm dono ki ek hi h,jay meri sis.h.
U:wht.?wo phr shocked hoke chilane wale hota tbi manyata bolti h 'ab chilana mt strt krdena,ab ye koi btane wali ya datne wali bat ni h..ha ni to.

Uday uski daant sunke smile krta h..
'ha main kha kuch bol rha hu..tum shi kh ri ho..
Cal cut.
Uday hsta h,chlo jay tumhein chodne k bhane manyata se mil lunga...

Manyata apne rum me jati h
V:manyata bhai btaya ni kya hua btaona?
M:kuch ni vijay bhai.

U:jay chalo tumhein ghr chod du.
Jay surprized hoti h
'ok sir..

Manyata apne rum me..
'vijay bhai mera sbse bure past k din mere saamne aaj achanak mere saamne aa gya.'

V:kiski bat kr ri ho manyata?
M:rohan ki.
V:kya?wo wo phr se tumhari zindgi me..
M:bhai,meri zindgi me uski aane ki aukat ni h...lekin
V:lekin kya?
M:wo kisi na kisi ko dhokha de rha h vijay bhai..
V:kisko.
Manyata rone lgti h,or vijay ko hug kr leti h...
'sir uspe bhoot trust krte h vijay bhai,mujhe lgta h sir ko'..
V:manyata tum chup ho jao...dekho unhe us rohan se tumhein bchana h,
M:main unhe rote.,
Sudden uday aata h
'kisko kisse bchana h'?
Both shocked..
V:sir,aap wo..
U:ye manyata kyn ro ri h?kya hua sb thik to h..
V:ha sb thik h,wo abi tk manyata se aap ne sry ni bola na...
U:arey,bola to h.ab kya hwa me ud k bolu.
Phr manyata hs deti h...
U:bs vijay bhai main chalta hu,jo dekhna(manyata ki muskuraht) chahta tha dekh liya..
Manyata smile krte huye,uday ko dekhti h...
Uday use lyn marte huye smile krke chla jata h...

Vijay bi chla jata h...
Manyata door close krti h
'sir aap jb sath hote ho na,to srf aap hi hote ho,tb lgta h main duniya ki sbse khushnaseeb ldki hu'..

Uday apni car me sit hota h,
Manyata tumhari muskurat meri zindgi h,plz naraj mt hua kro...'

J:sir aap mujise bina mile ja rhe ho.
U:ha,ha jay bye...tc.
He thout:jise dekh
na tha dekh liya..bye...

Precap-uday-manyata accidntaly love.nd other side jay ko pta chla wo h pragnant...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
ow amazing buddy 👏update soon
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg yeh Jay ki bachi zaroor sab kuch spoil karegi 😡 . She is pregnant. Damn.
Precap sounds so interesting. Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Again a nice update.J iz pragnant.ha ha ha rolf rofl.J ki tummy bari hone ki baat vo pata nahi kaisi dikhegi.waiting for 2morrow.luv ur updates n luv u sweetheart.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome post👏
most amazing part was the precap 😛
cont soon⭐️

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