ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 65

And at this part, my only reaction was "ouch" . Poor Manyata. Even though Uday might not have meant it, because he would seriously thank the heavens for bringing Manyata in his life, but betrayals can easily transform a person into a heartless soul.

The flashback with Ranvijay was so heart-breaking . Poor guy is completely broken. And Uday just had to enter at the wrong time didn't he? 😛 . Hahaha. But it was good to see that Manyata could feel Ranvijay's pain too. A guy who just a few weeks ago tried to force himself on her is now one of her best friends. Life does funny things doesn't it 😉

Love. That's what it is, Manyata finally realized. But the realization brought her no relief or happiness. It brought her immense pain. More hurt than she was already experiencing. The day she had realized her love, was the same day that she lost it

I was aww-ing while reading it. So far, love has only given pain to all three of them. Be it Ranvijay, Uday or now Manyata. But the good news is that FINALLY Manyata has realized that she's in love with Uday. So one problem down, and many more to go. Lol. Anyway this was beautifully written and the way you described Manyata's emotions here is amazing!

Great! I'm suffering through so much pain and he still does not have a speck of sympathy. Abhi tak gusse se ghoor raha hai! Manyata thought in her head

She'd rather sit there and moan in pain then to call out for my help! Uday thought angrily

Seriously these two and their egos. Sigh. But I couldn't help but notice here that Manyata still doesn't know and understand Uday all that well whereas Uday knows Manyata more than she knows herself. She thinks that Uday has no speck of sympathy for her and failed to notice that he was just waiting for her to call out for him, and even when she didn't, he didn't stop himself from helping his Princess out. How cute 😍

"Manyata the thorn is not completely out yet. I have to rip your dress"

Okay I was literally going ☺️☺️☺️ after reading this. Like seriously, you doubt your skills on writing hot romantic stuff and then give just one single line that makes me blush like an idiot. If this is not hot, then I don't know what is 😛 . And it shocked the living daylights out of me too 😆

"Uday door raho mujhse! Mujhe pata hai ke tumhara gussa kaisa hai. Kabhi chilate ho aur kabhi kiss karte ho, lekin yeh toh too much ho gaya!" Manyata shouted alarmed

Uday cursed his luck for having to deal with the dumbest girl he knew

Omg this part was hilarious 🤣🤣 . Both Manyata and Uday are just so freaking funny with their reactions. Hahahahaha. I am still laughing. This was just epic!

The entire "taking the thorn out" scene and the kisses following later was fantastic. Seriously Ranju that kissing part was H-O-T. As I said earlier, I have already read it like 5 times. Because you know how much I love anger-filled romance right? 😉 . Why did that stupid car come come to ruin the moment 😡 . Lol can you see how desperate I sound? 😆 . Lmao. No but seriously jokes apart, I loved this scene to bits. So hot, romantic and passionate 😍

And omg Ranvijay ki Meera agai yaaayyy *happy dance* . I am sorry I'm just a little too excited 😳 . Lol. Okay so apparently Ranvijay already knows her right? I can't wait to finally meet her. Eeep I am so happy. And hopefully she would prove to be his shining light in these dark times in his life and help him recover from the heartbreak because I don't want her to be a rebound girl for him. I want her to be THE girl for him 😊

Once again Ranjana, fabulous update once again. And the story is moving at a perfect pace and in the right direction. Can't wait to read more since now two love stories would be going on simultaneously so you better no keep me waiting long for reading it 😈