ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 55

Originally posted by: Shals9

Really loved it Ranjana. 👍🏼

Manyata caring about her best friend and our prince UV being jealous about it. Misunderstanding.. misunderstanding! just like today's episode.

Good going. pls update the next part soon. Really want to know what happens next.

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome please update as soon as possible please please can u please give us a promo and uday and manyata they were lovely loved this angry princess udayveer and J😡 i hate her she will never change but this was an outstanding update please update as soon as possible thank u for the pm please update soon 😃 i love your writting it rocks

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Superb update Ranjana! Why is Ranvijay is now turning Negetive? Hope d Misunderstandings between Manveer would Clear out soon & Ty 4 d pm & update soon 😃

Ok i would highlight some thing, you are making so difficult for me to choose b/w RV and UV for manyata. i am loving both of them. I know my loyalities lies towards UV but RV is no less enthraling. Please don't waste him by hooking up with j or something!
I really loved RV -M and UV-M scene. Both were so freaking HOT. But award goes to ManVeer scene.it was really different task! Kiss was so intense and passionate. I am not the fan of cheesy love stories that's why your this part just blown me off. It was REAL MANVEER! hot, intense and firey.

RV and M scene was also so awesome. his dialogues were s hot He is like second UV. Really brilliant work in portraying emotions for all of three. j is back to being bitch, so expected like kutte ki dum!
Brilliant work, can't wait for next part. Really love this twilight version even more then real twilight!
Hats of to you for such wonderful part and creating RV and portraying UV. manyata's part is fabulously done. I adore her. Last lines just touched my heart. its easy to choose b/w good and bad but what to do when you have to choose b/w two evils. Real dillema begins of manyata. I want slight feelings of manyata for RV toobut not more then UV. Does i am sounding sadist?
Really if cvs were such a fan of love triangles then they should take third angle like RV not spineless boring Akaash . I am really enjoying this love triangle, because its match b/w equals for true love and manyata is so sensible and intelligent to understand their feelings that they themselves can't!
Love this ranjana, update as soon as possible!

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

loved it yaar.. i felt like i m watching indian twilight..keep it up..

Originally posted by: fia21

Ohh...Emm...Gee!!! 😲 . First off, I'm just going to say...
HE GOT THE REAL DEAL HE GOT THE REAL DEAL HE GOT THE REAL DEAL!! Ballay ballay
Hahahahaha okay enough of my crazy act on the kiss finally happening, let's get back to the comment 😛 . Ranju I don't see why you were so worried about this chapter. It has turned out to be simply amazing. And I'm not just saying it because you are my Hubby and I love you so freaking much, this is my honest opinion, of one writer to another, this chapter was flawless 👏 . I am loving the way you are showing how exactly alike Ranvijay and Uday are, and yet still they are so different. The variation in both the characters is impeccable 👍🏼 . So looks like the love-triangle has begun? 😉 . I feel so so so bad for Ranvijay 😒 . Even though he has fallen in love, the purest of emotions, he's still only letting the bad parts of that feeling consume him. I liked how you made Manyata's intentions clear about going to meet Ranvijay in this party through a subtle hint in this line:

She surfed through the crowd, trying to find her friend Ranvijay amongst the drunk dancing people.

The emphasis on "her friend" was clever thinking on your part. But yes I must admit, I was a little shocked at the Manyata-Ranvijay scene because I didn't expect Ranvijay to be so devastated and react this way. Okay I don't know why, but when Ranvijay said "That's where he kissed you right?" , it sounded kinda hot 😳 . Lmao yes I know I am officially crazy 😆 . But I can't help it, Ranvijay is like Uday part 2 so yes I am bound to drool on him too a little bit 😉

Now comes the unexpected surprise, but a really good one. Uday's back 🥳 . I knew you'd bring him back in the next update but I was still a little surprised. Lol. And yaaayy I was right about the misunderstanding *happy dance* . Hahaha. Stupid Jay can never stop being a bitch. But then again, if she hadn't bitched about Manyata and Ranvijay to Uday, we wouldn't have gotten the most awaited kiss 🤣 . Lol. My-oh-my that kiss was H-O-T ☺️ . Anger filled kisses are always the best and the hottest. The passion and intensity are always at it's peak in those . I feel so bad for both Uday and Manyata. Uday in misunderstanding her, and Manyata, in order to protect Ranvijay, is keeping the truth from Uday. Gosh these two and their egos. But more then them, I feel bad for Ranvijay, he is trying to go back to being his old self but I am sure he'd fail because Manyata won't let him. Just love their bond. So seems like Uday is not going to give two hoots about what Manyata wants now until the misunderstanding is sorted out. Okay now come my favorite lines from the chapter.

It was so easy to choose between good and evil and right and wrong. But what if you had to choose between two evils? Two wrongs?

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And when those hearts fell in love...they could take a life just as easily they could give theirs up.

When I read these lines I was like 😲😲😲 , and my mouth was literally hanging on the floor. Not kidding. Awesome. amazing, beautiful and simple fantastic Ranjana. You just summed up both Ranvijay's and Uday's character's perfectly and this is the x-factor in both the characters actually. Like seriously what the hell is a person supposed to do when they have to choose between two evils? Between two hearts that can conquer you as easily as they can destroy you. Woah that is one hell of a dilemma for Manyata. I am still caught up with these lines Ranjana, I just can't praise you enough for it. Superb job my Hubby 🤗
Once again, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G update and I don't know about others, but I am loving this angle in the story. It's not just like any other love-triangle, this is actually a very genuine dilemma of a girl where she has to choose one among two of the same individuals. And the biggest problem is that BOTH of them are her best friends. She hasn't properly developed any feelings of love for Uday till now so she is going to be super confused about the whole thing. I am sure a point in going to come where she might even be confused about her feelings for Ranvijay. I could be wrong, but the way I see it, their bond of friendship is much stronger than what meets the eye. But Uday is not only her friend, he is like her own shadow, someone she'll always find with her every time she turns around. That's the beauty of their relationship! Update soon my baby. Love you loads. Mwah ❤️

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That was touching I must say, I've started to like your Ranvijay as much as I like your UV, such different shades in a single character, It's an awesome job honestly,
With every line every word, you picture the perfection of love, pain and their criss-crossed tangled lives, just WOW!!
Both are right in their places R & UV and Manyata is surely not to be blamed, wonderful, the plot is laid out smoothly that no one can finger out something wrong against this,
Update soon can't wait, and just a humble request don't ever make us I mean the readers to choose one from R & Uv cause they're both just wonderful and perfect.

rajana one more thing, I want you to make manyata stronger. I want one UV-RV and Manyata confrontation too!I want a face for RV

just loved the update...wonderful update dear ...keep up the good work..