Ohh...Emm...Gee!!! 😲 . First off, I'm just going to say...
HE GOT THE REAL DEAL HE GOT THE REAL DEAL HE GOT THE REAL DEAL!! Ballay ballay
Hahahahaha okay enough of my crazy act on the kiss finally happening, let's get back to the comment 😛 . Ranju I don't see why you were so worried about this chapter. It has turned out to be simply amazing. And I'm not just saying it because you are my Hubby and I love you so freaking much, this is my honest opinion, of one writer to another, this chapter was flawless 👏 . I am loving the way you are showing how exactly alike Ranvijay and Uday are, and yet still they are so different. The variation in both the characters is impeccable 👍🏼 . So looks like the love-triangle has begun? 😉 . I feel so so so bad for Ranvijay 😒 . Even though he has fallen in love, the purest of emotions, he's still only letting the bad parts of that feeling consume him. I liked how you made Manyata's intentions clear about going to meet Ranvijay in this party through a subtle hint in this line:
She surfed through the crowd, trying to find her friend Ranvijay amongst the drunk dancing people.
The emphasis on "her friend" was clever thinking on your part. But yes I must admit, I was a little shocked at the Manyata-Ranvijay scene because I didn't expect Ranvijay to be so devastated and react this way. Okay I don't know why, but when Ranvijay said "That's where he kissed you right?" , it sounded kinda hot 😳 . Lmao yes I know I am officially crazy 😆 . But I can't help it, Ranvijay is like Uday part 2 so yes I am bound to drool on him too a little bit 😉
Now comes the unexpected surprise, but a really good one. Uday's back 🥳 . I knew you'd bring him back in the next update but I was still a little surprised. Lol. And yaaayy I was right about the misunderstanding *happy dance* . Hahaha. Stupid Jay can never stop being a bitch. But then again, if she hadn't bitched about Manyata and Ranvijay to Uday, we wouldn't have gotten the most awaited kiss 🤣 . Lol. My-oh-my that kiss was H-O-T ☺️ . Anger filled kisses are always the best and the hottest. The passion and intensity are always at it's peak in those . I feel so bad for both Uday and Manyata. Uday in misunderstanding her, and Manyata, in order to protect Ranvijay, is keeping the truth from Uday. Gosh these two and their egos. But more then them, I feel bad for Ranvijay, he is trying to go back to being his old self but I am sure he'd fail because Manyata won't let him. Just love their bond. So seems like Uday is not going to give two hoots about what Manyata wants now until the misunderstanding is sorted out. Okay now come my favorite lines from the chapter.
It was so easy to choose between good and evil and right and wrong. But what if you had to choose between two evils? Two wrongs?And
And when those hearts fell in love...they could take a life just as easily they could give theirs up.
When I read these lines I was like 😲😲😲 , and my mouth was literally hanging on the floor. Not kidding. Awesome. amazing, beautiful and simple fantastic Ranjana. You just summed up both Ranvijay's and Uday's character's perfectly and this is the x-factor in both the characters actually. Like seriously what the hell is a person supposed to do when they have to choose between two evils? Between two hearts that can conquer you as easily as they can destroy you. Woah that is one hell of a dilemma for Manyata. I am still caught up with these lines Ranjana, I just can't praise you enough for it. Superb job my Hubby 🤗
Once again, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G update and I don't know about others, but I am loving this angle in the story. It's not just like any other love-triangle, this is actually a very genuine dilemma of a girl where she has to choose one among two of the same individuals. And the biggest problem is that BOTH of them are her best friends. She hasn't properly developed any feelings of love for Uday till now so she is going to be super confused about the whole thing. I am sure a point in going to come where she might even be confused about her feelings for Ranvijay. I could be wrong, but the way I see it, their bond of friendship is much stronger than what meets the eye. But Uday is not only her friend, he is like her own shadow, someone she'll always find with her every time she turns around. That's the beauty of their relationship! Update soon my baby. Love you loads. Mwah ❤️
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