ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

Ok i would highlight some thing, you are making so difficult for me to choose b/w RV and UV for manyata. i am loving both of them. I know my loyalities lies towards UV but RV is no less enthraling. Please don't waste him by hooking up with j or something!
I really loved RV -M and UV-M scene. Both were so freaking HOT. But award goes to ManVeer scene.it was really different task! Kiss was so intense and passionate. I am not the fan of cheesy love stories that's why your this part just blown me off. It was REAL MANVEER! hot, intense and firey.

RV and M scene was also so awesome. his dialogues were s hot He is like second UV. Really brilliant work in portraying emotions for all of three. j is back to being bitch, so expected like kutte ki dum!
Brilliant work, can't wait for next part. Really love this twilight version even more then real twilight!
Hats of to you for such wonderful part and creating RV and portraying UV. manyata's part is fabulously done. I adore her. Last lines just touched my heart. its easy to choose b/w good and bad but what to do when you have to choose b/w two evils. Real dillema begins of manyata. I want slight feelings of manyata for RV toobut not more then UV. Does i am sounding sadist?
Really if cvs were such a fan of love triangles then they should take third angle like RV not spineless boring Akaash . I am really enjoying this love triangle, because its match b/w equals for true love and manyata is so sensible and intelligent to understand their feelings that they themselves can't!
Love this ranjana, update as soon as possible!


Wendy!!! Seriously this comment meant so much to me, especially the part where you like Ranvijay so much! 😳 You know I always feel like that right there is my biggest accomplishment because his role has been the hardest to write. One thing I realized is that there's no middle - everyone either loves him or hates him! And that just makes me smile because of the way people have developed extreme feelings for him which I couldn't be happier about! And don't you worry, there is no way I'm handing off such an amazing guy to J! LOL ..in fact these days Ive been thinking a lot about the girl I want to introduce for him, of course not yet maybe later on. But definitely she has to be just as good or better than Manyata :)
Haha everyone calls it Twilight now..well sure why not? I'm a pretty big Twilight fan myself.
No you don't sound sadist..To be honest Ive wanted to show something like that myself because Manyata does care about RV a lot and they do have a very deep bond..I know this is weird but in my head it always feels like Manyata is somewhat of a motherly figure for RV as he never had that before..yes i know I'm making things sound akward 😆 but in my head thats wat i realized
Thank you soo much Wendy! Your comment like made my day! And will try to update soon! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: imkool

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u r a star yaar,,,,,,,, hats off to you...
wht a brilliant piece of writing that was,,,,,,,,,👏
i just loved each nd every word tht u have written,,,,,,, right from the beginning till the end...
oh,,,,poor rv,,,,,,😭
nd manveer kiss was so so so so hot , passionate nd full of anger nd hatred...just loved the scene b/w manveer😳
u know what, vaise i really like ranveer alot but i m really sorry yaar i cant see him in b/w manveer😉😃
i just really hope ,u wont show any soft corner in manyta heart for ranvijay,😆,😉, i just cant stand anyone b/w manveer,,,,,,,,but i would love to see their (rv-m) friendship,,,,,,😳

plz update next part soon,,,,, dear,,,,cant wait to read it ,,,,nd thnxxx fr the pm


Thank you so much! 😳 I FEEL like a star after reading your comment 😳
And don't worry, UV spot will always be reserved no matter how close RV gets to Manyata
happy you liked the kiss 😉
lol thanks for being honest 😆
Yes will try my best to update soon! Thanks again!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cham42195

That was touching I must say, I've started to like your Ranvijay as much as I like your UV, such different shades in a single character, It's an awesome job honestly,
With every line every word, you picture the perfection of love, pain and their criss-crossed tangled lives, just WOW!!
Both are right in their places R & UV and Manyata is surely not to be blamed, wonderful, the plot is laid out smoothly that no one can finger out something wrong against this,
Update soon can't wait, and just a humble request don't ever make us I mean the readers to choose one from R & Uv cause they're both just wonderful and perfect.


Thank you soo much! Honestly makes me feel proud and happy whenever anyone becomes a RV fan or even a RV hater! He's a character that I've worked really hard on and its so satisfying to see people develop ..emm..extreme feelings for him! 😆
Now your just making me blush 😳
Thank you soo much! And don't worry, both UV and RV will have an happy ending! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

rajana one more thing, I want you to make manyata stronger. I want one UV-RV and Manyata confrontation too!I want a face for RV


Wendy thanks for pointing that out! Thats actually something thats been at the back of my mind too..and It would make the story more enjoyable because really Manyata has no choice but to be strong as she's stuck between two angry guys!
Yup a confrontation will happen for sure.
A face? so like you wanna see a picture?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdipa

just loved the update...wonderful update dear ...keep up the good work..


Thank you soo much!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry yaar...for replaying so late. The part was asweme. Poor manayta, I'm feeling sad for her. Manveer need a clear conversion. Hope uday understand manayta and help her. Loved it. Please update soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Sorry yaar...for replaying so late. The part was asweme. Poor manayta, I'm feeling sad for her. Manveer need a clear conversion. Hope uday understand manayta and help her. Loved it. Please update soon and thanks for the pm.


Its alright Archi!! And thanks so much! 😃
Awww dont worry about M and UV..even through all these misunderstandings UV would never give her up 😉 and yea I know ManVeer need to TALK! It's not my fault that they're too busy kissing! 😆
Will try updatign soon! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Part Rajana
I hope Manveer clear their misunderstanding... don't like RV what a confusing characters if you love someone you should let them go if they dont love you not good... he knows Manveer love each other and still hes causing trouble
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Posted: 13 years ago
ranjana i know you will bring a amazing girl for RV but please make bond b/w RV and manyata different, untouched and uneffected from it . They share a really beautiful relationship so after that girl's entry i don't want RV to get all lost in her and M to get all lost in UV. but main track will remain manveer only!

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