ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Fabulous update Ranjana!! The kiss was AMAZING!! I really can't wait to read the next update so continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:D

Thanks FIzzaa!! Glad you enjoyed the kiss 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: arya009
wow awsm update!!!!!!!!! all their emotions so nicely written...really gr8 :)

Thank you! 😊 And yes I try my best to describe their emotions as well as I can and Im happy you found it that way 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: sweetshab
awesome update!!

Manyata's encounter with RV came as an ermmm shock...and encounter with UV came as a surprise

Cont soon
Thnks for the PM:)

Thanks!!

And haha yea that was exactly what I wanted 😉

I think I'm going to do a lot of writing today so I can update sooner 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shana0127
So Indian twilight on the way...

and kiss of hate kiss of hate stay away from kiss of hate

Loved it yaar,fantabulous😊

Your the second person to call it that! Well I actually don't mind, but if I be honest I am not a huge Bella fan so seriously I don't want Manyata to go that way...

Hahahaa Kiss of Hate 🤣 (last time I checked it was the kiss of love 😆 ..but its okay kiss of hate sounds more dangerous anywyas 😉)

Thanks Shana!! ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Outstanding chapter i dnt kn0w y u wrent sure abt dix chp bt for me it was realy realy awes0me da best 0ne til n0w h0nestly i was sh0ckd 0n m an rv meeting bt l0vd l0vd l0vd uv and m meeting bt plx do watevr u like bt dnt create an0thr twilight situati0n here i dnt want man to evn thnk 0nce abt rv i dnt want rv to b evn litle m0re den frnd to her i want dat plce reservd only for our princey bt update s0on n0w briliant w0rk!

Awww!! Thanks so much! 😳 Im shocked someone liked it that much. 😃

Well I love Twilight but I never actually intended to create an "Indian Twilight" here, but I know many others think it's like that. Don't worry, I understand your feelings and I definitely wouldn't give away UVs place to Ranvijay but at the same time I'll have to make sure that Ranvijay is happy too 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: livvy
Nice update and kiss was to good

Thanks Livvy! Glad you liked it! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Nashia
It was brilliant!!

Thank you!! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: preya_radev
i am speechless i really have no words hate j so much gosh but i just loved dis part manveer kiss hayee that was just awesome please update soon and thanks for the pm

Yes I can feel the volcano that must be erupting inside you for J 😆..but well if she didn't do that than we wouldn't have got the kiss 😉

Thanks so much and I will try to update soon! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Ok... caught up with the parts and I really liked your SS👏👏The character of Ranvijay is sweet but I didn't like the actor who played it in MJHT at all. Don't like imagining him in this heart felt role.

Thank you so much Mahi!! 😳

I guess I understand..RV was always evil in MJHT. But now he's a totally different person in this SS so feel free to forget the RV from MJHT and imagine him as someone else 😊