ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 44

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Hmm chap 13 what can i say i m still in the manveer dreamland 😍 u put me into Ohhh i so so so love ur updates n why wont I it was superb awesome dear looovvveeed it... was waiting for it so mch & it was worth the wait!!! when i saw pm in inbox had a broad smile on my face😃 & when i was reading & was going down the page n reading more n more i had a feeling its abt to end i didnt wanted it to
loved how uday took care of manyata so sweet 😳uday by manyata's side all night awww adorable thn manyata asked for a huggie so cutie😳😳... oh how can i forget abt the rain scene at start soo awesome i knew uday would come n catch her & he did... also loved manveer cute cute convo manyata saying jst like kid specially lohri sunao na sho sweet awww..thnx for such an awesome update lotz of huggies from me🤗
Also really appreciate👏 u up at 1:11 at morning n updating & also had to go to work nxt day it would b tough on u... no probs as long as u give such awesome updates ur hard works shows as its so good...
lastly i forgot last time too & nearly this time as well the sig u've used of fallen angel is jst fab i really love it...
already looking forward to nxt weeks update... well as for now i m gonna read this one again n again & may b some of the previous chaps till nxt one comes up...
Take care 😊

Originally posted by: ilvuday

yaar it was soo cute...hayee manveer r so adorable i actually m beginning to lyk ranvijay buh plz dont create a love triangle odervise l start h8ing him...but i loved ur update it was so beautiful👏n d rain part gr8 idea!!!

ps thanx for pm😃

Originally posted by: fia21

Ranju this chapter was ULTIMATE CUTENESS! 😍
And I am seriously in love with your dialogue writing. Your SS has the most amazing dialogues I have ever some across. Kuddos to you for that 👏 . I am going to copy and paste some of my favorites from this chapter just so you know 😉

"Seriously what is up with you and walking into walls?" Jaynandini
"Seriously good going Manyata. You can barely go two minutes without thinking about him!" Manyata
"Isn't this the part where you're supposed to get scared and hug me?" Uday
"Hmm...ek kiss toh banta hai" Uday
"Ab kya kare Princess...tumhe dekh ke toh kisiki bhi niyat bigad jaye" Uday
"OOhhh...so what do we have here? Pehle pyaar ki pehli baarish?" Vijay Bhai
"Oh God Manyata... my Chawl ki rani. Other girls would die to be in your place, getting looked after by two hot guys at the same time...And you...are you a girl or not?" Vijay Bhai
"Nah Princess your voice sounds sexy" Uday
"Yeah Manyata, we know you love acting like Jhansi ki Rani and all but seriously you ARE really sick. So please go to sleep. Alright?" Ranvijay
"Uday, can you please hug me?" Manyata
"Uday I was just thinking...tumhare kitna faida ho gaya na? Bimaar hone ke wajah se aaj mai hi khud situation ka advantage le rahi hoon, haan nahin toh" Manyata
"Lohri sunao na..." Manyata
"Princess are you for real?" Uday
"Actually woh apko humari choti si Rajkumari Manyata se pyaar ho gaya hai, hai na?" Doctor Uncle

I kind of covered the entire SS like this 😆 . Lol. No but seriously, these were some really amazing dialogues. All your chapters have really awesome dialogues so I finally decided to say it out to to you since I have been trying to praise you for this for quite long now 😳 . Okay so now comes my favorite part. The rain scene 😍 . It was so romantic. Sigh. That entire scene was flawless. Loved it to bits. I could feel the heat too ☺️ . Hahaha. Keep such hot hot scenes coming Ranju 😉 . And the second favorite, I am sure you already know 😛 . The Ranvijay-Manyata-Uday scene. Honestly Ranju, they remind me of the love triangle between Jacob-Bella-Edward now 🤣 . But seriously, I loved how both Uday and Ranvijay forgot their differences and together took care of Manyata like they were best friends or something. That was really cute. And Manyata was all confused thinking what the hell is going on. Lol. I liked how the 3 of them bonded. A really very sweet scene. Then when Manyata asks Uday to hug him, I think I was equally shocked like Uday 😆 . But oh man I loved it. I could imagine them lying down, hugging each other and Manyata falling asleep in Uday's embrace. So so so dreamy 😳 . Doctor Uncle teasing Uday over having fallen in love with Manyata was epic. Hahaha. Great job with this chapter baby 👍🏼 . And don't worry, your Accounting Lessons have not affected your writing skills at all 😛 . Update the next part soon this time, or get ready to face my wrath 😈 . Bwahahaha *evil laugh*
Love you Ranju baby 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetshab

OMG!!
Beautiful beautiful update loved it
I was smiling while reading and dat smile doesnt seems to fade frm my face :)
Rain!! Surely does the magic...aww UV taking manyatas care was sooo cute well which girl doesnt like to be pampered by her partner ;) its was so perfect .and the HUG left me speechless in the dreamy land ;)

Cont soon :)

Originally posted by: Haniibee

Loved it hun!

Thank you sooo much for the PM and AMAAAZING update!

After all what is accounting class for? ;)

I loved the rain scene...it was sooo cute the way Uday held her!

How I wish for the day when I am also in the baarish singing tip tip barsa paani with a hot guy holding my waist...haaaye!

For now...I will read your SS and be happy!

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Loved it...very nice and very romantic part!!! I enjoyed whole part...each n every scenes...very Nicely written and presented ...thanks baby for such a lovely part and PM...please update next part soon dear...