ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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Mahibeejay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Loved it...very nice and very romantic part!!! I enjoyed whole part...each n every scenes...very Nicely written and presented ...thanks baby for such a lovely part and PM...please update next part soon dear...

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Awww cho cute.loved it.Cont as soon as possible.

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-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

oh...👏👏👏awesome loved it!!!

plz continue soon...

i love ur SS alot!!amazing...can't highlight my fav scenes bcz than i have to copy/paste the whole update...😳

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

👏👏👏👏thanks.awesome.brillaint...

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chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#425

AWWW 😳the hug was so cute,and they both sleep teh whole night in each others arams, that was super duper cute.👏 And the fayda lines were awesome, I was blushing the whole time while reading it. I re-read the whole line like 5 times.

I'm really concerned about this Ranvijay dude, is he also falling for Manyata, or is he genuinely a friend. I fell he might turn negative again if he falls for Manyata and realises he cannot get her till Udays in picture. But loved the chapter.👏. Thanks and hugs for the PM🤗.

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Thank you soo much dear! Absolutely loved the update. Thank you sooo much for the rain hug sweetie! That was super duper awesome! 🤗

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Inkpen4877

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Posted: 13 years ago

#427

i loved the update! It was just sweet, romantic, and loving all in one great package!

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sonu/ sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

just loved it especially the rain scene loved how both the guys took care of manyata especially the uday and yay the hug was brilliant please update soon really cant wait for the next part and thanks for the pm

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#429

Amazing Part luved it

Cont Soon

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: sim1623
I really love it but I feel very bad for Ranvijay! Since he is a good guy now, if his heart gets broken, it will be awfully sad and I realized that he has already fallen hard and it is obvious that ManVeer is the end story, I really hope you get RanVijay a good resolution too :) (not J, though) and "until Uday made her shutup"? Did he kiss her *smiles big* :P great job, loved it and can't wait for the next update!

Simran :D...

Did he kiss her?

🤣 AHAA Sim..ur too funny LOL

and awww..im loving how ur so worried for Ranvijay man..so cute 😳😛 lool

dont worry...im not one for unhappy endings for anyone and eventually- dont ask me when- I will make sure he gets his happy ending too 😊 lol i dont have anything planned but trust me I love RV too ❤️ and haha dont worry NO J! 😆

Originally posted by: annysyed
Amazng update lovd it

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Awww.. that was such a cute update!! Uday taking care of Manyata was ADORABLE!! Loved the update as always Ranjana!! Oh n awesome scene suggestion to Shals9 n Ranjana u my dear, wrote the rain scene very beautifully!! Once again AMAZING UPDATE!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:D Good night:)

Thank you soo much Fizza!! ur soo sweet, as always 😳

awww...im so happy u liked it 😃 and yea i wanna continue soon as i can, faster than last time anways 😊

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
loved it, yeh subah k 1:11 bje tumhare mind mein kuch jyada hi brilliant ideas aate hain..keep it up..

🤣 HAHA..yea i guess it does 😆 thanks? 😃

Originally posted by: Archi02
Very cute update. Asweme, I loved it. But you could make the rain scene more romantic. Thanks for the pm and try to update soon.

Thank you archi! 😊 and yea lol i agree, it could have been more romantic but to be honest i wanted to save more passionate scenes for later on 😉

yep will update soon 😃