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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
that was cute!!!!😳
thnx for the update!!!!!!!😊
I really enjoyed it!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
It's really gud yaar, manveer scene great. But still its awesome. 👍🏼WELL DONE! Nd thanks a lot, always love to read them.You r a⭐️
Edited by RadhapriyaG_01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
@ RadhapriyaG_01

Thanks dear..Its a pleasure to hear that u r loving ma OS😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
yeahhh guysss CV's are DAMN khanjooz hain manveer romance mein...😭

Niceee updatee.. :D loveeddd it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Niceee likeddd it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
PART 9


Dadisaab was about to get up after having the breakfast that a servant brought the Newspaper'.On seeing the front page itself DS's face got enlightened. A mild smile appeared on her face'and she looked at Udaybeer and Manyata

DS:kal ki aap logo ki shopping bahut acchi thi hain na manyata beta

Manyata:jee dadisaab..

Brijraj:Kya hua maa saheb aap achanak khush ho gayi.newspaper mein kuch khaas hain kya'

DS: Yuvraj and Yuvrani's day out'.

And she handed over the paper to brij.Even brij seemed happy after reading it'.the paper was passed n passed nd finally reached Uday n Manyata's hands.Both were surprised to see it'.It was the picture of Uday nd Manyata at mall with Uday's hands on manyata's waist n both were smiling'.

Unnati:its beautiful hain na Dada'Hum aaj hi news bureau se iss photo ki negative mangvathe hain'.

Both Uday nd Manyata were silent'After having breakfast all went to their rooms to get ready,since they got permission to hang out.unnati went to manyata's room

Unnati:Manyata yeh aap ke liye n she gave a gift to her.Manyata opened it and found a beautiful blue jeans and white top..

Manyata:oh teri unnati yeh math kehna ki aaj mujhe yehi pehanna hoga

Unnati:exactly hum yehi kehane wali thi ..aaj hum aur aap ek jaise dress pehanungi k'.

Manyata:accha uniform hain kya!!!mujhe J jaisi banane ki padi hai tumhe

Unnati: Manyata koi bahana nahi hum dono aaj yehi pehanegi..Aur waise J toh hamesha choti dress pehanthi hain.ye choti nahi hain bus thoda casual hain'now get ready'.

Manyata n Unnati got dressed up n they both were looking at mirror that Uday came'

Uday:toh thayyar hain aap dono'.

Unnati:jee dada'

Uday:nice dress choti .lets go

Saying this Uday went to the parking lot'Manyata was a bit disappointed with this ignore. Just then vijay bhanna came .

Vijay:Manyata meri behan kya baat hain.Tum bahut acchi lag rahi hoon .J ko yahaan hona chahiye..

Manyata:Vijay bhai '.chale

All went downstairs n went near the car..

Unnati:tum dada ke saath jaana.Hum aur vijay bhai doosre car mein aati hoon'.

Manyata:kyun.hum ek saath kyun nahi chalthi'.

Unnati:ahem'.

Vijay:who isiliye kyunki aaj humari aur unnati ki photo newspaper mein ayi thi toh hum aur Unnati thoda privacy chahthi hoon.hain na'

Unnati gave a smile.and Manyata was embarrassed'Uday was waiting with the front door of his car opened n he had already started the car..Manyata went n sat on the car'soon they left'On the way manyata was upset with Uday's so called silence n ignorance

Manyata:Hum kahan jaa rahe hain Uday'

Uday:Devgarh dekhne.Daadisaab ne yahan bahut kuch kiya hain.Unhone school,college,orphanage sab kuch banvaliya'.

Toh sabse pehle hum kahan chale

Manyata:orphanage'..aur use pehle tu kisi acchi shop mein gaadi rokdo'

Uday:kyun???

Manyata:arey vede hum kya kaali haath orphanage challenge'kuch mittayi,gifts kareedthe hain..

Uday:jaise hukun your highness'


They stopped on a shop n brought a lot of chocolates and gifts.also uday messaged others to be at Orphanage.on the way

Uday: princess.vaise aapkeliye ek gift hain.and he handed over a box to Manyata

she opened it n wondered .It was a beautiful bracelet


Manyata:tune yeh abhi khareeda huh...hmmm ek baath toh hai tumhare choice bahut acchi hain n she weared it

All four reached there Uday andManyata went inside by holding hands.Actually it has become an habit for manyata to hold Uday

They gave the children chocolates and gifts.One of the child asked manyata who's those pointing to others'

Manyata:woh sab meri dost hain'.

Child:aur who boyfriend hai na..(pointing to uday)

Manyata:arey woh bas mera sabse acchi dost hain'

Child:toh phir aapne uska haath kyun pakda hua tha'.Woh didi bhi toh aapki dost hain na,unka haath toh aapne nahi pakda na yuvrani didi

Manyata was silent n looked towards Uday'he was just smiling'.

After spending an hour over there.All decided to have a look at University also..

On the way'

Uday:Are u sure princess aap university jaana chahti hoon..

Manyata:kyun??

Uday:nahi wahan bahut saari khoobsurat ladkiyan hogi'.Kahin woh sab humare peeche aayi toh aap akhele ho jaayegi na..Waise bhi aapki alava duniya ki saari ladkiyan hum par fida hain

Manyata:accha kahin apni shakal dekha hain aine main ..langur dikhti hain'Koi ladki nahi ayegi tere peeche

As usual once they reached the university all the girls over there crowded around Uday asking for autograph n photos.

Uday gave a smirk to manyata😉.Manyata was too much disturbed n she looked for Unnati n Vijay bhanna.but they had already gone inside.so she decided to went inside alone n gave a angry look to Uday .she went inside but soon she lost the way n reached a vacant area she didn't knew where to go now

Manyata:(to herself):yeh main kahan pahunch gayi'ab kya kare Uday to phone karte hain'.Lekin who apni nayi girlfriends ke saath busy hogi samajthi kya hain apne aap ko..Kuch ladkiyan mili toh mujhe bhool gayi..Mujhe uski koi zaroorat nahi hain main apni raasta khud doondoongi haan nahi toh'She was so absent minded that she didn't even noticed that she reached a open area n is still walking without a direction.Her leg got struck in a rock n she fell down n her bracelet got off her hand to ground'

she got up slowly n noticed that now she is somewhere else n there was nothing neaby not even the university bulding'She could just see greenary n nothing else.She took her phone to call Uday but was afraid to see that there is no network also..her leg was bleeding

Meanwhile Uday reached principal's office ..

Vijay:Uday.. manyata kahan hain'

Uday:puzzled:kyun woh yahan nahi aayi'.

Unnati:yahan who toh aapke saath thi na..

Uday:nahi choti woh tho bahut pehle andar aayi thi'

Uday tried to call to her phone but it was out of coverage area

All 3 looked in to each other with fear'.😲

Principal:aap chinda math kijiye sir.hum doondthe hain'

He asked all the staffs to look for manyata'.after 15 minutes

Principal:sir yuvrani ka koi pata nahi chala.woh campus mein nahi hain aur nahi front gate se bahar chali

Uday(with fear in his eyes):Manyata.yar kahan ho tum

Unnati:dada shaam hone main abhi kuch hi samay bacha hain we need to find her soon

All 3 left in various directions to look for Manyata n staff also started searching her outside'..

It was going to be dawn...

Precap:Manbeer @ jungle😳

hope u guys liked it n do comment.I know there was no manbeer roamce 2day but ya will make it up 2morrow😉

Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
loved the update! Hope they find her soon. You are fulling our wishes of the scenes we wanted to see in the show but they never showed lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
waooo another amazig shot...plzz jungle wala scene jaldi likhna aur woh bhi boht lengthy hona vchahiyay lyk dis one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
@ adventure_gurl

exactly dear i wanted all these scenes in the show but was dissapointed..now all these i'll b including in ma OS...and thanks yar😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
@sirjee
ya will update it tomorrow.iam so happy with today's episode that i got a special inspiration 4 manveer

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