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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 38



DS: pata nhai Uday ne kuch khaas nahi kaha.chaliye ab hospital jaakar hi kuch pata chalega'

All rushed to hospital.

When the family reached hospital they saw Manyata cryig and is clanged to unnati's shoulder'

Brij: beta J kahan hain..

Unnati: Uncle brij she is in ICU.

All saw her from outside ICU.Jagat was sitting next to J holding her hands.Her head was covered with cotton and it was wet with blood.

Manyata soon hugs komal and both r crying..Ri8 thn Uday came .

DS: Beta J kaise hain?

Uday: ahhh Uncle brij we need to meet doctor..

Doctor: Dekhiye Maharaj Brijraj hume aapse kehne main thakleef ho rahi hain lekin aapki beti ki condition thoda critical hain.Hume unki surgery abhi karni hogi aur'

Brij:aur'

Doctor: who hum aapko koi chooti umeed nahi dena chahti hum apne tharaf se puri koshish karenge par operation success ki koi barosa nahi'

Brij(shouting): hw dare u say so Doctor.

Uday controlled Brij.

Uday: uncle sambhaliye apne aap ko.

Doctor : jee iam sorry Darasal she is having internal bleeding.. hum apne puri koshish karenge maharaj.infact the best surgeon team is gng to join us 'we all will give our best rest is in the hands of god..Excuse me maharaj (doctor left).

Brij was crying nw'

Brij: Uday beta ye kya hua'J ki iss halat?..humari beti ko kuch hua toh nahi.

Uday: uncle pls use kuch nahi hoga barosa rakhiye Uncle aur abhi doctor ne kaha na desh ki best doctors ki team J ki ilaaj karenge and iam sure she will b fyn..

Bri: lekin ye sab hua kaise.

Uday: pata nahi Uncle humme toh Jagat ki call ayi thi aur hum yahan aa gayi..Jagat tabse J ki paas hoon.

Brij went out and moving to J's room he dragged out Jagat'

Brij slapped him and holding his collar'

Brij: bolo Jagat humari beti ki ye haalat kaise hui bolo'He was about to slap him again bt DS stopped brij and released Jagat from Brij's hold..

DS: Brijraj sambhaliye apne aap ko..

Manyata: Jagat bolo ye sab kaise.J ka yeh haalat kisne kiya.

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Jagat kisi meeting ke liye out of town gayi thi..

Whn he returned back home it was late'As soon as his entered the parking lot he was shocked to hear a scream.He rushed inside to see a J immersed in full of blood at the foot of staircase..Blood stain was thr in all steps'Jagat ran to her and took her in laps'She opened her eyes with his mere touch.and holded his hand..She was trying to say something.

J: Jaga'

B4 completing she passed off'

Jagat rushed with her to hospital and in between informed Uday

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Uday: Jagat '''..

B4 Uday could continue nurse came..Nurse gave Uday a file to get signed by Brij.

Manyata: whats this Uday..

Uday: Manyata just a formality b4 operation.

Brij took the file and signed it with teary eyes'

Doctor came out of ICU'

Dtr: J ko hosh aa chuki hoon.She wants to meet Uday Manyata and Jagat.

The trio went inside while others was waiting outside,'

After a while Uday manyata came out.. Jagat was now still inside.

DS: kya hua Mnayata beta J ne kya kaha..

Uday: ahhh kuch khaas nahi DS bas who hum sab ko dekhna chahti thi..

Inside'

J was holding Jagat's hand.

J: jagat can u pls hug me

Jagat couldn't deny her and hugged her breaking out.Both were crying nw.

J: humne bahut sare galathiyan ki hain'infact hum ne sirf galathiyan hi ki haina jagat.hum shayad inzaan kehne layak hi nahi hoon.

Jagat(keeping his hands at her lips): aisa mat bolo J.

J: nahi Jagat humme aaj bolne do kya pata kal kuch bhi confess karne ke liye hum zinda hi na raho.

Jagat(holding her hands tightly and securely inside his): j aapko kuch nahi hoga..Hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge.

J(with teary eyes): Jagat kya aap humse abhi bhi pyaar karti ho..

Jagat: jiss din hmne aapko dekha tha ussi din se har pal hum sirf aaphise pyar kiya hain jainandini aur marte dam tak karte rahege..

J: hum aapki pyaar ki layak nahi hoon Jagat humne aapka istama'

Jagat: shhh princess aisa kabhi sochna bhi mat..Humme aapse koi shikayat nahi hain..aap meri hain sirf meri

J: Jagat humse itna pyar kyun karti ho.

Jagat: aapse pyaar karke hum apne aap se pyaar karti hoon princess. humari dhadkanem aapke saat jhuda hain aur ye dil tabtak hi dhadkega jab tak aap meri saat ho..Aap hain toh sabkuch hain aur aap nahi toh kuch bhi nahi'

J: Jagat I love u'

Jagat: I love u too Princess..

He kissed her forehead

Nurse came in'sir will u pls leave ..she needs ..

J: 5 minutes pls

Nurse went out

J: Jagat hum bach jaoge na'

Jagat: humari pyaar aapko bachaoge princess'bahut mushkil se humein aap mili hain ab koi bhi aapko humse juda nahi kar sakti bhagwan bhi nahi.

J asked jagat to cum close and she gave a peck on his lips.

Jagat looked at her with pleasant eyes. Soon Nurse came in and Jagat went out kissing her cheeks.

J was taken to operation theatre'

Her operation soon began and all was waiting outside impatiently.Uday and manyata was no where to be seen..After a while they came back..and took jagat to a side..

Uday: jagat iam sorry but..

Jagat: Uday andar jo maut ke saat lad rahi hain who meri hain aur jisne unka ye haal kiya usse main kabhi maaf nahi karoongi kabhi nahi. jo mujhe karna chahiye tha wohi tumne kiya so just relax..jo jaisa karta hain waisa bhukta hain'

Operation was still on just thn Rajmata's mobile ranged..

DS: haan prithvi boliye.

...KYA...Humme kuch nahi pata prithvi..hum dekhte hain


To be continue...

Hope u like it ...pls leave back ur suggestions😊

Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it was super emotional😭 i could imagine everything and u ended it in the suspense mode again please please update soon i loved the update you rock in all type of scenes whether it is emotional or romantic very great piece of work Krishna please update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

loved it was super emotional😭 i could imagine everything and u ended it in the suspense mode again please please update soon i loved the update you rock in all type of scenes whether it is emotional or romantic very great piece of work Krishna please update soon 😃

thanks vampi thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update. J and jagat's scene was heart touching. Really loved them.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Very nice update. J and jagat's scene was heart touching. Really loved them.

thanks buddy😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

epi was awsm...it iz full of suspence
hmm waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsomeee...jagat and j scene was sooo...emotional...update soon...thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was Heart warming update...poor J...i loved J-Jagat scene it was both emotional n romantic...
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Posted: 13 years ago
very touchy update.loved it.loved jay-jagat scene.lekin prithvi ne keya bola?thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY after all trials and tribulations, Jagat and J will be together!!! YIPPEE! This is the FIRST time I felt so happy for characters who weren't portrayed as lovers in the serial...I was having all kinds of doubts about Jagat, especially after Brijraj had spoken rudely to him...and had thought u were goin 2 introduce some MAJOR twist, par tumne toh dil khush kar diya!!😃 This is 4 u.😉 And thanks 4 the pm!!🤗My favourite Belgian truffles...😉❤️
Edited by FireNIce - 13 years ago

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