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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwwiiieee... amazing update!!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: UVLOVER

Awwwiiieee... amazing update!!!! 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...
awesome...i love it...😳
continue soon...
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PART 12


Uday:kya nahi pata...

Manyata:woh akash...

Uday turned pale ...
he holded her tightly...

It was still raining.Rain drops were falling at them...Uday was out of control in anger...He couldn't take majnu's name from manyata anymore...He pulled manyata closer...He tightened his hold on her hand...Manyata was afraid of Uday for the first time...

Manyata:Uday mujhe dard ho rahi hain.

Uday:dard...manyata aapko dard ho rahi hain.aapse itna bhi dard bardaash nahi horaha...Phir uss dard ka kya jo aap humhe de rahi hain...Ab bas bahut ho gayi iss chupa chupi khel..Ab aapko batana hi hoga ki aakir aapki mann mein kya hain...manyata i cannot allow this akash name between us again 😡
Manyata was silent...

Uday: akash aapko chod kar chale gayi .aap apne uss infacctuation ko kab thak pyar ka naam dethi rahoon.. ...humne apni tharaf se iss rishte ko aage badane ki poori koshish kiya...aur ab bhi aap akash par hi ruka hoon...

kyun manyata kyun...kyun kar rahi hain aap aisa...

Manyata:uday...main maanti hoon ki Akash ke jaane ke baad hum dono ek doosre ke khareeb aayi acche dosth bani .phir bhi maine kabhi bhi tumse yeh nahi kaha ki main tujse pyaar kathi hoon...

Uday:princess..aapne yeh bhi nahi kaha ki aap mujse pyaar nahi karthi

Manyata was looking at ground.she was standing in rain but still she felt as if she is standing in fire...she was breathing heavily...

Uday :kuch bolo manyata
...woh sab kuch chod do...Aapne kabhi bhi humare bare mein socha hain...aap hamesa kehkar aayi hoon ki aap humhe jaanti nahi.,humhe yaad nahi ,hum dono ke beech kuch nahi ho sakthi and all...lekin aap kabhi bhi humhare jagah par khade hoke socha hain...Hum 5 saal ki thi jab humari aapke saath roka karvaya gaya.aur woh bhi tab jab hum pyar ki matlab bhi nahi samajthi thi..phir ek din aapko uss murari ne kidnap kiya...magar phir bhi humhe har pal yehi ehsaas karvaya gaya ki aap humari hain.hum kissi aur ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakthi...humne ussi ehsaas mein jiya itni saal tak...haan hum jab bade ho gayi hum doosri ladkiyon ke saath flirt karthi thi lekin humne kissi ko bhii aapki jagah nahi diya..hamesha aapiko apna better half samjha..phir achanak ek din humse kaha gaya ki humhe J se shaadi karni hain..Us din to aapko bhi yaad hoga kyunki ussi din humari pehli mulakata hui thi beach par..jaana chahti hoon humne uss din aapar pathar kyun pheka...humne aap par nahi apni kismat par pathar phenka tha..
humne apne aapko samjhaya.
phir humari J ke saath engagement hone hi waali thi ki aap mil gayi vapaz...phirse humpar manyata tag lagaya gaya...hum aapse pyar karne laga tha ki tab apnekaha ki aap akash se pyaar karthi hoon...phir se apne humari dil ko thoda...
kab tak manyata kab tak humne iss dard mi jeena hoga...

Manyata couldn't control the pain of Uday..She placed a hand on his shoulders.he wanted her he hugged her tightly ...

Manyata:main samajhti hoon Uday tumpar kya beeth rahi hoon.maine sirf tumhe ek dosth ke roop main dekha tha..

Uday broked the hug..
Uday:dosth...princess aap humari rishte ko dosthi ka naam de rahi hain..Aap apki din ki shuruvaath humse karthe hain aur khatam bhi humhi se...aap humhe kisi aur ki saath share nahi kar sakthi...Humari saath dance karne se aapko koi problem nahi.Humari choone se aapko koi pareshani nahi..aap 5min bhi humari judai bardaash nai kar sakthi. phir bhi aap keh rahe hain ki yeh dosthi hain..

Nahi manyata yeh pyaar hain..aapko to dosthi or pyar ke beech ka pharak bhi nahi pata ...Socho manyata socho kya aap humhare bina jee paoongi...


Manyata:shouted mujhe nahi patha Uday.She was above to move from there that uday holded her pulled her towards him hugged her tightly...manyata wanted this .she wanted to hide herself..She very well knew the fact that this was the only place where she is safe..her mind was wavering.

She was confused,broken...
It was still raining...but this time both manyata n Uday's heart was crying with more force than rain ...

TO B CONTINUED...

Hope u liked it...pls leave ur comments..
Its a bit short...will compensate it tomorrow





Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeah first one to comment
Amazing yaar i know sad shots important hote hai maggar pliz manyata ko akal do ke yahi pyar hai don't make it like ek main aur ek tu plizzz
Otherwise amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update!! Thanks for the pm n I'll be lookin forward to the next update!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear , eagerly waitng 4 next part:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update eagrly waitng fr the next
plz cont soon
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👏👏awesome update...thanks..brillaint...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update. Loved the intensity

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