Uday U r mine..FF (last part 44 pg 150 ) - Page 103

wow supber fablous outsandting part

wow snowy loved this last part it was awesome... loved manveer scenes and especially where komal is telling manyata about her responsibility... omg i was scared when manyata tripped but im glad j was there and she somehow reached to manyata even though she couldnt walk... but im glad that all r fine lol the last bit was funny where the baby was holding anothers babies hand and how manyata was like this is udays child for sure really loved it and will miss this ff but at least got ur other two ff so keep updating me for that and thank u for the pm

Originally posted by: preya_radev

wow snowy loved this last part it was awesome... loved manveer scenes and especially where komal is telling manyata about her responsibility... omg i was scared when manyata tripped but im glad j was there and she somehow reached to manyata even though she couldnt walk... but im glad that all r fine lol the last bit was funny where the baby was holding anothers babies hand and how manyata was like this is udays child for sure really loved it and will miss this ff but at least got ur other two ff so keep updating me for that and thank u for the pm

thanks preya...yup i'll continue with other two and also started a new ff

Such a nice ending... I liked it tooo much!!! Snowdream... Will keep an eye fr any upcoming ff of urs... ;) STAY BLESSED

This was such an awesum ff one of my favz I read sooo many chapters at one go n wow u hve such amazing writing skilz hope u ryt many more ff's

Originally posted by: pwincess_sumi

This was such an awesum ff one of my favz I read sooo many chapters at one go n wow u hve such amazing writing skilz hope u ryt many more ff's

Originally posted by: Ekra-Meer

Such a nice ending... I liked it tooo much!!! Snowdream... Will keep an eye fr any upcoming ff of urs... ;) STAY BLESSED

Originally posted by: milhan

wow! that was amazing krishna! i simply lud it...:D

congos on completing ur ff!

i've been reading ur ff from the start bt i guess its the 1st tym i am commenting...

again congratz dear! loads of hugs n kisses for u! :*

do come back with another ff soon and don't frgt 2 pm me this tym...;P

just tooo much marvellous ending...👍🏼 i was crying after reading the last chapter..😭...i will miss " uday you are mine " updates...love u krishna 4 the wonderful story...stay blessed...😊