my very own DEK story chp 1 two parts pg 2&3

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Posted: 13 years ago

I dont like what the CVs are showing so this is my very own DEK story. hope you like.

PROLOGUE

when manyata was three years old she got kidnapped by murari, a servant of the royal family of devgar. he fled with the child, but the police were after him and keeping a helpless child with him would be difficult. so murari dumped his precious burden at an orphanage and ran. a nun at the orphanage opens the door to see a small child who looks at her with big eyes and a toothy grin. the nun feels a flutter in her heart and picks up the child. she asks if the child knows her name, to which the child stutters "maanata". the nun asks about her parents and little manyata say "ma, pa, daadi" and starts playing with the nun's rosary. the nun thinks "oh jesus, someone has abandoned this beautiful child,but now we will be her family. god bless this child." she takes manyata in and introduces her to her new family.

manyata gets raised in the orphanage and studies at st thomas school. from the age of 14 she had stated working at a call centre to earn money as she realised at a young age that the only way to make a life for herself way through an education for which she needed cold hard cash and lots of it. manyata was a bright girl and by the age of seventeen finished school. she had applied for scolarship to pune university to do her bachelors in business management. she was accepted and she bid the orphanage good bye.

manyata had saved up alot of money for herself but she kept that money for her masters and got lodging in a hostel in pune. she made friends easily and soon she had a circle of close friends at her hostel. she got employment at a call centre as she felt that due to everyday spending there wont be enough money for her masters. all morning she would be in class , nap in the afternoon, work during the night and the cycle would continue for the next three years.

manyata after giving her final year exams was chilling in the canteen of her college when she realised that there was a huge commotion happening outside. manyata with her friends went out to see what was the reason for the ruckus being created. the dean of the college was talking to a handsome man who had a few bodyguards around him. the bodyguards were having trouble keeping girls from climbing on top of the handsome man. manyata asked her closest confidant akash who the handsome guy was? akash replied breathlessly while rolling his expressive kohled eyes at manyata " babes, like which planet are you from? that hot piece of meat is Udayveer, prince of jaigar. and i am his to be queen." manyata started to leave as the noise levels were giving her a headache. suddenly udayveer's bodyguards surrounded her. the dean came forward and respectfully asked her to come to the deans office. manyata followed the dean and felt someone staring at her. she looked back to find that it was udayveer. she quickly followed the dean.

in the deans office sat a middle aged couple and a dignified elderly lady. manyata walked in and with the manners instilled by the nuns in the orphanage said "good afternoon." the middle aged woman burst out crying while clutching her husbands arm. manyata was getting alarmed at seeing all this and offered her the glass of water on the deans desk. the crying and tears just kept getting louder until the man firmly said" calm down, komal, manyata is getting scared." manyata on hearing her name asked the man " how do you know my name? have we ever met? i dont recognise you,sir." the man on hearing this could not contain his emotions and and adressed the elderly lady "masahib, she calls me sir, she does not recognise me. she is asking if we have met. she does not recognise me. my own daughter, my own flesh and blood." hearing this manyata's head starts to spin and she faints on her side. the last thing she hears before darkness pulls her in is the elderly lady saying " she is my waaris."

the elderly lady standing above manyata's fainted form was staring at her back where a deep scar marred her shoulder and uttered the words " she is my waaris. pick her up and lets take my grand-daughter home and to her rightful future."

chapter 1 manyata meets her family on page 2 and page 3(two parts)

Edited by mythical - 13 years ago

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i like it, continue soon :)

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Really great
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This is really nice!! Continue soon!!:)

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Nice concept :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

thank you for the appreciation. here is chapter 1 of my dek story. word of advise its intense not for the soft hearted. manveer romance has not yet started.CHAPTER 1 - manyata meets her familymanyata wakes up slowly. her head is heavy and her shoulder hurts from hitting the floor. she was on a soft bed . she opens her eyes and looks into deep piercing eyes. udayveer, yuvraj of jaigar. like a mouse hypnotised by the mesmerising stare of a cobra, she cant look away, only he can let her go. her hearts starts to pound quickly and all fight and flight instincts are at red alert. with strenght she did not know she had, she tears her gaze away and looks around at her surrounding acting as if what had transpired did not affect her. udayveer scowls and is irked that his magnetism did not work on the princess. did she have special supernatural powers or was he heavens forbid losing his touch.
manyata looks to see several faces staring at her. her throat is parched so all she says is water. three sevants come forward with different bottles of mineral water and ask her what her preference is. she picks up the bottle closest to her, breaks the seal and before she puts the bottle to her lips, sees everyone staring at her. she gives back the bottle without sipping to the servants and says in a glass please. the sea of faces around her bleam at her as if she had passed some sort of test. the servant gives her a glass and she slowly sips while taking in the unknown faces around her. she had already realised she was not in a hospital neither was she in any surroundings familiar to her. the orphanage had made her tough, she waited for someone to speak and tell her what was going on. the lady who had sobbed so heartbreakingly in the deans office sat next to her and gingerly brushed the hair off her face. manyata looked into her eyes, they were kind eyes that had cried tears for too long. komal was what her husband called her. komal suddenly grabed manyata into a hug and started sobbing again. manyata wide eyed could do nothing but pat her on her back. a few minutes later the sobs subsided and manyata put her half drunk glass of water to the woman's lips, who with a smile gulped the water down. the elderly lady from the deans office was bleaming and smiling widely during the full exchange. manyata had not said a word yet and some of the people in the room were getting anxious. komal's husband stepped forward and blurted "i am maharaja brijraj of raigar, this is my wife maharani komal." he gestured towards the elderly lady and said "rajmata mrinalini devi." manyata folded her hands and respectfully said how do you do.
everyone was shocked and impressed by how calmly manyata was behaving, any other girl would be sceaming and shouting and creating a ruckus but this girl was so dignified. rajmata came forward and sat next to her. manyata looked into the elderly lady's eyes and saw a woman who had been through many battles and who hid her scars in the deep recesses of her heart where no one could see them. she was some one you could trust manyata realised. while manyata had been assessing the rajmata, she was doing some assessing of her own. suddenly maharaj brijraj blurts out " i am your father, komal is your mother, and rajmata is your dadisahab." manyata looks at the man claiming to be her father. this was a man who did not have any patience, a complete opposite to his mother. manyata asks the first question that comes to her mind, "why did you abandon me when i was a child?" she thought she asked the question unemotionally, was she in shock? too many thoughts in her head. brijraj looked suckerpunched, komal started crying all over again and rajmata stood up so suddenly, udayveer had to grab her lest she passed out. a look of horror crossed everyones faces. udayveer gathered his emotions the quickest and said " we have been searching for you for the past sixteen and a half years, a sevant had stolen you from us. you were not abandoned. the man was caught a few days ago and he told us that you had been placed in an orphanage and from there we tracked you down to the university." manyata tries to absorb this. she asks " why did he kidnap me?" "money, jealousy, criminals need only an excuse to do a crime." replied udayveer. brijraj, komal and rajmata had by now regained their composure. they asked " you thought you were abandonned?" the emotional outpour was getting too much for manyata, so she said she wants to rest. everyone left the room. manyata thought so many years lost, i was kidnaped and i spent most of my life in an orphanage when i had a family looking for me. she closed her eyes and let sleep take over so that she could heal emotionally though she knew it would take time for her to accept.

to be continued ...

Edited by mythical - 13 years ago