You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 14

Originally posted by: imLoveAddict

Alisha... came across this post today... and ur really awesome with ur story telling skills...

If i owned the production house i would immediately hire u :)

I would have loved to see ur track originally playing on the show with little bit adjustments ...

However with what currently is going on in DEK i dont think its remotely possible...

Atleast not while JAY keeps blackmailing UDAY with the video clip... :(

Originally posted by: kritsnov

When will u post the next part ??

Originally posted by: nirmita

hi

Read all the 8 parts i am really anxious will this really happen .though i am 48yrs old but still i love to see😊uday and manyata together not😡akash keeping my fingers crossed

Originally posted by: Shals9

Wow!!

Absolutely brilliant!! Love it!! Please post next part soon

Hey guys this is part 9...hope you all like it...

PART # 9

Dadisahab: Manyata...hum ne suna aap kal raat ghar nahi aayien...

Komal: haan beta kahan thien aap...

Manyata was looking down and didn't answer those questions...Dadisahib knew something was wrong...she knew Manyata was hiding something...

Dadisabab: hum kuch pooch rahe hain Manyata...jawab dijiye...

Komal: boliye beta...

Manyata: (her voice was breaking)...Maa...Dadisahab...hum is ek galti hogayi hai...I made a MISTAKE...

Komal: kaisi galti beta...???

Dadisahab: aap kis galti ki baat kar rahi hain...???

Manyata: woh...woh...kall..kal...

Dadisahab: kal kya manyata...boliye...

Komal: daro mat beta...boliye aap kya keha chahti hain...

Dadisahab: Manyata app hamarey sabar ka imtehaan mat lijiye...boliye kya kehna chahti hain...

Manyata: kal raat mein Uday ke saath thi...

Komal: beta yeh to hum jante hain...aap sab dinner par gaye the...phir...

Manyata: phir...woh main bar chali gayi thi...aur mein ne bohat pee hui thi...maa kal raat mein Uday ke saath uss ke hotel room mein thi...

Dadisahab: aap jaanti bhi hain ke aap kya keh rahi hain...

Manyata: jee Dadisahab...

Komal: beta par yeh sab hua kaisey...

Dadisahab: Uday se hamein yeh umeed nahi thi...

Manyata: nahi Dadisahab...Uday ko kuch mat kahiye...yeh sab meri galti hai...ussne kuch nahi kiya...main hi drunk thi...

Komal: yeh aap ne bohat galat kiya...

Dadisahab: hum soch bhi nahi sakte the ke aap aisa kuch kareingi...par ab jo hona tha woh chuka hai...ab hamein aapki iss galti ko sudhrne ki baarey mein sochna hoga...

Komal: aap theek keh rahi hain Maa sahib...hamein lagta hai keh hamein ab Uday aur Manyata ki shadi jald hi kar deni chahiye...

Dadisahib: haan komal...jald se jald shaadi ke date fix kardena chahiye...

Manyata: (she thought of the Akash's words) par dadisab...

Dadisahab: nahi Manyata...aapko jo karna tha aap kar chuki hain...ab hamein jo theek lagey ga wahi hoga...

Komal: aapki Dadi sahib theek keh rahi hain Manyata...

Dadisahib: aur haan...yeh jo kuch bhi hua iss ke baarey mein kissi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...nahi toh koi aapki izzat nahi karega...

Dadisahib and Komal leave the room, leaving Manyata all by herself...she thought everything was happening too quick...but she was getting what she wanted she was getting married to the person whom she loved with all her heart and he felt the same for her...they waited for each other for more than sixteen years and now the day was finally almost there when they would be united forever...but at the same time she felt like she was the most selfish person...she was risking his life...she was really scared of Akash's words...she thought what if he really meant what he said...she shook her head and tried to not think about people who didn't mean anything to her...she decided that instead for worrying and thinking about all that she would enjoy her time with Uday...

It was almost time when Unnati was suppose to meet Jaggadh at the cafe...and Jay decided to go there and get back at Unnati for stealing Jaggadh from her...Vijay bhai as usual found out about it be of his super good hearing abilities and he also went to the place to watch the whole drama live...

Jay reaches the places and she sees that Jaggadh was there all by himself waiting for Unnati to arrive...Unnati was on her way to the place...Jay saw her car coming and she knew it was time to make the move...she waited for Unnati to come inside the cafe...Unnati comes inside the cafe and sees Jaggadh she starts walking towards him but before she could reach him...Jay got there first...Jaggadh was really surprised to see her there...he was going to ask her that how come she was here BUT before he could say anything...Jay reaches up and kisses him...everyone gets shocked at Jay...Vijay bhai had his jaws dropped and eyes popped out...HE WAS IN DENIAL...

Vijay (to himself): hum kahin sapna toh nahi dekh rahe...yeh hamari dono beheno ko hua kya hai...

Unnati was smiling...she somehow knew that it was coming...in fact she was the one who planned the whole thing...

Jaggadh looked super confused...he was not expecting something like that from Jay...he looked really embarrassed and decided to ask Jay...what was all that about...

Jaggadh: Jay...yeh sab kya hai...

Jay doesn't reply back...instead she sits on her knees in front of him and said...

Jay: Jaggadh will you marry me...

Jaggadh: WHATTT...???

On the other side Vijay bhai was almost going to faint from the shock...and Unnati holds him...

Unnati: arey Vijay banna...sambhaliye...

Vijay: unnati hamein chorna mat...hum iss shock se zaroor gir jayen ge...

Jaggadh was still staring at Jay...he couldn't believe what just happened...

Jay: Jaggadh hum aur kuch der aisey nahi baith sakte okay...jaldi bolo...

Jaggadh: ummm...

Jay: bolo bhi...

Jaggadh: haan...hum tum se shaadi karengey...

Jay: (she gets up)...OMG...I'm so happy...(she hugs him and gives Unnati a look)

Unnati (to herself): Good job Unnati...not bad...

The next morning Jay goes to Dadisahib and tells her about her and Jaggadh...

Jay: DS hum jaggadh se shaadi karna chahte hain...

Dadisahab: Jay aap theek toh hain...aapko yaad hai na pichli baar aapne kiya kiya tha...

Jay: nahi DS...iss baar hum ne yeh faisla khud kiya hai...aur Jaggadh bhi yahi chahta hai...please...

Dadisahib: hamein khushi hai ke aap agey barh rahi hain...aur Jaggadh toh hamesha se hamein bohat pasand tha...hum aapki aur jaggadh ki engagement jald hi fix kar dete hain...

Jay: thanks Dadisahib...

Uday comes to Rajmahal to visit Manyata and make sure that she was feeling better now...he goes to her room and finds her on the bed reading a book...

Uday: hi princess...

Manyata: Uday tum...??? (She tries not to make eye contact with him)

Uday: kyun princess hum tum se milna nahi aa sakte...(he lifts her face up...so she could see him)

Manyata: nahi main ne aisa kab kaha...

Uday: (he touches her cheek)...ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho...

Manyata: main theek hoon...

Uday: btw princess...Dad keh rahe the ke Dadisahib ne sab ko mahal bulaya hai...hamari shaadi ki date fix karne...

Manyata: haan woh Dadisahib chahti hain ke hamari shaadi jald se jald ho jaye...

Uday: finally...hamara intezaar khtam hua...hum kitni besabri se iss din ka intezaar kar rahe the...

Manyata: acchha...waisey ab bhi agar hum ne...NAA... keh diya toh...???...(teasingly)

Uday puts his arm around her waist and pulls her really close...

Uday: toh hum tumhein godh mein utha kar lejayen gey...

Manyata: choro...veday kahin ke...tum se zara bhi intezaar nahi hota...

Uday: (he whispers in her ears)...u r right princess...ab hum se aur intezaar bilkul bhi nahi hota...

Manyata chuckles...she feels ticklish...and Uday kisses her on the ear...

Manyata: jao bhi uday...(she pushes him away)...koi bhi aa sakta hai...

Uday: toh aane do...ab tumhein humse koi nahi bacha sakta...(he moves her hair to the side and kisses her on the neck...)

Manyata chuckles again and says out loud...

Manyata: Uday...DADISAHIB...

Uday quickly pulls himself back and turns around to see if it was Dadisahib...but there was no one there...and Manyata teases Uday...

Manyata: Awww...kya hua...yuvraj Udaybeer singh...darr gaye...(she starts laughing)

He grabs her neck from one hand and pulls her really close so that there was almost no space in between them and he decides to kiss her...Manyata was lost in his eyes...

Uday: yuvraj Udaybeer singh kisi se nahi darta...

And just when he was almost this close to kissing her...Manyata says...

Manyata: Uday...Vijay bhai...

Uday: princess tumhe kya lagta hai...tum hamein phir se bewakoof bana sakti ho...

Manyata: Uday sachiii mein...Vijay bhai hain...

Uday: hum iss baar tumhari baaton mein nahi aayen gey princess...(and he continues to go on with the kiss but he hears a voice)

Vijay bhai: EEEWWW...yeh sab kya ho raha hai...

Uday quickly pulls himself away...looking embarrassed...

Vijay: (with a suspicious look)...oh ab hamein samajh aaya...HUM TUM AIK KAMRE BAND HO AUR CHABI KHO JAYE... yahi ho raha tha na...

Both Uday and Manyata looked embarrassed...

Vijay: par chabi toh gayab nahi hoi...hamein toh lagta hai ke yeh rajmahal nahi...kisi film ka set ban gaya hai...wahan jai bhai LADY DEVDAS ki tarah behave kar rahi hai...I TELL YOU...

Uday: nahi Vijay banna hum toh bas...

Vijay: oh really Uday...hum ne dekha abhi...tumhein full shahrukh khan mode mein...

Manyata: Vijay bhai...ap kisi kaam se aaye the...???

Vijay: kyun hum tumhe hi kehne nahi aa sakte...jisse dikho wahi busy hai...hamarey liye toh kisi ke paas time hi nahi hai...(he leaves...)

Vijay bhai was blabbering to himself and walking down the hallway...he looked really troubled and said to himself...

Vijay (to himself): ab hamein bhi apne liye partner dhoondna hi pade ga...iss ghar mein sirf hum hi aik lonely bird hain...

He gets bumped into Brijraj and thinks it was a servant and yells at him...

Vijay: kya hai...nazar nahi aata...oh Brijraj mama sorry sorry hum se galti hogayi...

Brijaj: Vijay beta yeh aap jaldi jaldi mein kahan ja rahe hain...aur aap itne pareshan kyun lag rahe hain...

Vijay: Brijraj mama...hum na bohat lonely feel karte hain...humein bhi partner ki zaroorat hai...

Brijraj: acccha toh yeh baat hai...waisey hai kya apki nazar mein koi rajkumari...

Vijay: hamari nazarien toh har jagah hain...par...

Brijraj: beta Unnati kaisi rahein gi...hamein toh woh badi hi pyaari lagti hain...

Vijay: Unnati ...woh toh hamein Vijay Banna bulati hai...aur agar woh gussa ho gayi toh...

Brijraj: woh gussa kyun hongi...akhir aap itne smart aur handsome hain...aap bilkul hum par gaye hain...(says proudly)

Vijay: waisey not a bad idea...Brijraj mama kyun na aap hamarey love guru ban jayein...

Brijraj: LOVE GURU...???

Komal was passing by and she hears brijraj say love guru and gets curious...

Komal: yeh kis love guru ki baatien ho rahi hain...???

Vijay: komal mami...woh brijraj mama hamein...(brijraj cuts him off and gives him a look)

Brijraj: woh kya hai na komal...

Komal: aap toh rahne hi dijiye mahraj...aur aap ab tak yahan kharey hain...lagta hai aap par hamari daat ka koi asar nahi hota hai...

Komal (to Vijay): aur vijay beta...aap na please apne mama se dur hi rahiye...nahi toh God knows...ke yeh aapko kya bana kar chorien gey...(she leaves)

Vijay: brijraj mama yeh Komal mami koh kya hua...woh aap par gussa hain kya...???

Brijraj: ab kya baatayen hum aapko apni..."dhukh bhari dastaan"...Komal hum par bohat gussa hain aur hamein samajh nahi aaraha ke hum unhein kaisey manayein...( AAA music playing in the back ground)...

Vijay: kyun na hum aapki help karein...aur badle mein aap hamari help...

Brijraj: matlab aap hamarey love guru...aur hum aapke...lekin agar kuch gadbad ho gayi toh...

Vijay: jahan hum hote hain wahan koi gadbad nahi hoti...haan nahi toh...

Brijraj: wahan gadbad hi gadbad hoti hai...I TELL YOU...

It was evening and everyone gathered in the Rajmahal, Griraj, Udaybeer, Unnati were all there... and Jaggadh's family was also there...it was a small get together...in which Rajmata had an announcement to make...

Rajmata (to everyone): hamein app sab ke samne ajj bohat zaroori annoucement karni hai...

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 9...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.