You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kruths97

Amaazing update...👏👍🏼

Plzz pm me the next update...😊

sure will pm you soon...and thanks for reading =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ...loved the MANVEER part & the loveguru...continue soon😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ultravioletray

<font color="#9900ff"><font size="6">awesome update ...loved the MANVEER part & the loveguru...continue soon😃</font></font>

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alissa345

Woah...u scared me :)

oh sorry😳 didnt really mean 2 scare u😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG
the manveer scenes were so sizzling!!😳
luved this part, awesome job!!!👏
plz pm me
thnx!😉
con't soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

please update soon..😊

sure thing =)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys, this is part 10...hope you guys like it...

PART # 10

It was evening and everyone gathered in the Rajmahal, Griraj, Udaybeer, Unnati were all there... and Jaggadh's family was also there...it was a small get together...in which Rajmata had an announcement to make...

Rajmata (to everyone): hamein app sab ke samne ajj bohat zaroori annoucement karni hai...

Rajmata: hamein umeed hai keh isse sun kar aap sab ko bohat khushi hogi...

Komal: batayiye bhi maa sahib hum sab jaaney ki liye bechain hain...

Brijraj: ab aur kitna suspense karein gi Maasahib...

Rajmata: dheeraj rakhiye brijraj...aap hamesha itni jaldi mein kyun rahte hain...

Giriraj: haan yaar Brijraj...ab aapko dheeraj rakhna seekh hi lena chahiye...aap itne bare toh ho gaye hain...ab aur kitne barey hongey...(everyone laughs)

Uday: Dadisahib ab bata bhi dijiye...

Rajmata: pehli announcement yeh hai ke...hum ne Jay aur Jaggadh ka rishta pakka kar diya hai...aur aaj se do dino mein unki aur jaggadh ki engagement ki date fix kardi hai...

Brijraj: Maasahib...Jay aur Jaggadh...???

Rajmata: jee haan brijraj...iss baar yeh faisla hamara nahi khud Jay ka hai...Jay iss shaadi se bohat khush hain...

Komal (to Jay): such mein Jay beta...???

Jay: yess Mom...yeh decision hamara hai...

Brijraj (to Jay): Jay beta agar aap aisa chahti hain toh aisa hi hoga...(to Jaggadh)...welcome to the Royal Family Jaggadh...

Komal (to Jay): beta hum aapke liye bohat khush hain...(she kisses her forehead)

Mainka: par maa sahib dusri announcement kya hai...

Rajmata: dusri announcement yeh hai ke...hum ne aur mahraj Giriraj ne yeh faisla kiya hai ke...Manyata aur Udaybeer ki shaadi aaj se theek teen (3) haftey baad hogi...

Brijraj: arey...yeh toh bohat hi acchi khabar hai...

Manyata: par dadisahib...(she interrupts)

Brijraj (to Manyata): kya baat hai beta...agar aap chahein toh hum date postpone bhi kar sakta hain...(teasingly)

At this Uday suddenly says...

Uday: nahi uncle brij...postpone karne ki kya zaroorat hai...

Giriraj: kya baat hai Uday beta...aapko badi jaldi hai...???

Uday: nahi Dad woh...(manyata gives uday a look)

Vijay:actually... Uday banna yeh kehna chah rahey the ke kyun na shaadi proponed kar dein...kyun Uday banna...isn't that right...(says teasingly)

Uday: Vijay banna aap bhi na...

Vijay: nahi nahi...aap kahen toh hum bata dein ke room mein kya...(Manyata steps on Vijay's foot)...OUCHHH

Manyata: (she whispers to him)...yaad hai na Vijay bhai...maarongi dus (10)...aur ginoongi aik (1)...

Giriraj: toh theek hai Maa sahib...it is decided ke udaybeer aur Manyata ki shaadi ab se teen hafton mein ho gi...

Rajmata: bilkul Mahraj...humein preparations shuru kar deni chahiye...

The get together was still going on...everyone was enjoying and having a good time...EXCEPT for two people...BRIJRAJ and VIJAY...Brijraj was busy in trying Vijay to get to talk to Unnati...he was signaling him about what to do...Vijay was standing right next to Unnati...Brijraj was signaling him to compliment her and tell her that she looks good...he was explaining it to Vijay by sign language...Vijay was unfortunately standing right behind Jaggadh's mom...and komal saw Brijraj acting all retarded and signaling...she looked at the other side to see who he was signaling to...and she saw Jaggadh's mom...Komal thought Brijraj was signaling to Jaggadh's mom and got super dooper mad at Brijraj...she went to Brijraj who was still busy signaling and...

Komal (to Brijraj): YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI...MAHRAJ...???...(she says it really loud in his ear)

Brijraj: AAA...(gets scared)...arey komal aap hain darra diya aap ne hamein...(he puts his hand on his heart)

Komal: darna toh aapko hum se chahiye Mahraj...yeh sab kya chal raha tha...

Brijraj: oh yeh...woh toh hum Vijay ki madad kar rahe the...

Komal: dekha hum ne...waisey Vijay hai kahan...

Brijraj: (brijraj points behind Jaggadh's mom but there was no one there)...Arey yeh kya abhi toh yahin the...Jaggadh ke mummy ji ke peechey...(looking really confused)...(AAA music playing in the background)

Komal: chiii Mahraj...Jaggadh ki mummy...hamein aap aisi umeed nahi thi...(she leaves)

Brijraj: hamari baat toh suniye Komalll...arey yaar yeh love guru banne ke chakar mein pata nahi aaj raat hamara kya haal hone wala hai...

The scene shifts to the hospital where Akash was admitted...because of cutting his hand his lost a lot of blood and was in the emergency room...he was still unconscious...Chinki was with him at the hospital...She was the one who donated him blood...she was really worried about him and very there at the hospital ever since he got admitted...

Chinki was sitting outside the emergency room...she was still crying and cursing the hell out of Manyata for doing this to Akash...she blamed everything on her...while she was sitting there a man came to see Akash...and chinki decided to find out why was he there...

Chinki (to the man): suno...kon ho tum...aur Akash ke paas kyun aaye ho...

Man: mein Akash sir ke liye kaam karta hoon...lekin tum kon ho...aur yahan kya kar rahi ho...

Chinki: mein Chinki hoon...Akash ki dost...

Man: oh accha toh aap chinki hain...

Chinki: waisey tumhe Akash se kya kaam tha...

Man: woh mujhe boss ko kuch important information deni thi...issi liye...

Chinki: Akash ko toh abhi hosh nahi aaya hai...tum mujhey bata do...

Man: nahi woh...

Chicki: (she gets suspicious and insists him to tell)...mein Akash ki sab se acchi dost hoon...uss ki sari baatien mujhey hi pata hoti hai...issi liye tum befikar ho ke mujhey bata do...Akash ke hosh mein aaney par mein usse bata doon gi...

Man: woh actually...boss ke kehne par mein rajkumari Manyata aur yuvraj Udayveer singh par nazar rakh raha tha...aur mujhey pata chala ke Rajkumari Manyta aur yuvraj Udayveer ki shaadi ab se teen hafton mein fix hui hai...boss ko yahi information deni thi...

Chinki: (looking very disturbed) theek hai mein akash se keh doon gi...tum jaa sakte ho...(and the man leaves)

Chinki (to herself): (she got really mad)...accha hua ke yeh khabar Akash se pehle mujh tak pohanch gayi...agar Akash ko iss baarey mein pata chal gaya toh woh yeh shaadi kabhi nahi hone deyga...aur agar yeh shaadi nahi hui toh Akash mujhey kabhi nahi miley ga...ab mein bhi dekhti hoon ke akash ko iss shaadi ke baarey mein kaisey pata chalta hai...(evil smile)

The scene shifts back to Rajmahal...Vijay was still roaming around and gathering courage to comlpiment Unnati...but he found it really hard...

Vijay (to himself): hum itna darr kyun rahe hain...hamein thori na gabbar ko propose karna hai...it's just Unnati...I TELL YOU...

He calls Unnati's name...and Unnati turns around...

Vijay: Hi princess Unnati...

Unnati: Vijay banna...pata hai aap hamein panchwin baar Hi bol rahe hain...this is the fifth time...but anyways hi again...

Vijay: accha...hamein toh yaad hi nahi hai...

Unnati: that's okay Vijay banna...kehiye...aap koch kehna chahtey the...

Brijraj signals Vijay to say it already...

Vijay: (Vijay looks behind Unnati and nods)...woh...

Unnati: (turns around to see whats behind her)...Vijay banna are you okay...???

Vijay: nahi...hamara matlab haan...

Brijraj bangs his head on the pillar in disappointment at Vijay...

Vijay: (he panics and says)...woh Unnati hum kehna chahte the...ke...ke...Uday aaj bohat handsome lag raha hai...

Unnati: (confused...)...haan...???...oh dada...???

After hearing Vijay...Brijraj covers his face with both hands...and looks down...(dissappointed)

Unnati: haan Vijay banna you right...aur waisey dada toh roz he itne handsome lagte hain...I think aapko yeh hum se nahi dada se kehna chahiye...

Vijay: (Brijraj glares at Vijay and Vijay looks scared)...Unnati hum tum se baad mein milte hain...(and he runs away)

Unnati: (looking confused)...okayyy...

Unnati (to herself): yeh vijay banna ko kya hogaya hai...

Manyata was busy talking when Komal asked her about Brijraj, that where was he...

Komal (to manyata): Manyata beta...

Manyata: jee Maa...

Komal: bachay aap ne apne baba ko kahin dekha hai...

Manyata: baba...abhi toh yahin the...(she looks around)

Komal: koi baat nahin beta...hum dhoondh leingey...

Manyata: nahin Maa...app rukiye...baba ko hum dhoondhte hain...

Komal: theek hai beta...

She looks all around the hall but doesn't find Brijraj anywhere so she thinks may be he went to his room or something and she goes towards his room...and while walking through the hall way...someone grabs her hand and pulls her in one of the rooms...she tries to shout but the person covers her mouth with his hand...

Manyata: BACHHAAAOOO...chor chor...

Uday: SSSHHH ...princess...

Manyata: K..KK..KKON...hai...???

Uday: (whispers in her ears)...BHOOT...(and turns her around)

Manyata: TUM...(she punches him in the chest)...aaj toh tumhara bhoot uttar hi dena chahiye...

Uday: uttaro na princess...hum toh kab se intezaar kar rahe hain...

Manyata: chiii...Uday...how cheesy...accha ab choro mujhey...

Uday: nahi itni asaani se nahi...

Manyata: haan...kya...???...(suspiciously)

TO BE CONTINUED...

Sorry guys...I know there were not any real Uday-Manyata scene...but I promise there would be many in upcoming parts since I wrote them already...sorry once again...I will surely make up for it...and I will be updating next part soon... hope you guys liked the story so far there are going to be some new twists in upcoming parts... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 😳
looking forard to the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!!! Vijay n Brijraj🤣Really eager to read the next part!! Update soon n thanks for the pm!!:)

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