This is great short FF...glad u have made all characters mature and act dignified incl V-banna!
Manveer's reflections are great read but I enjoyed Jay's much more...that character is so one-dimensional on show that it's not even worth talking abt...cant' wait to read abt Masquerade Ball...hopefully Jay's mystery man will show up...how abt some story on Unnati, pls?...-Sona