~Reflections-SFF~ Updated Chapter8 Pg24

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

This is great short FF...glad u have made all characters mature and act dignified incl V-banna!

Manveer's reflections are great read but I enjoyed Jay's much more...that character is so one-dimensional on show that it's not even worth talking abt...

cant' wait to read abt Masquerade Ball...hopefully Jay's mystery man will show up...how abt some story on Unnati, pls?...

-Sona

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teju

@tejuangel

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

awesome work dear👏 loved both manyata ds convo & manveer sceen

try 2 give jay & manveer in next part itself

thnks 4r pm🤗

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jane niroopa

@janeniroopa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

awesome update sis really really loved it and thanks for pm 😊

Edited by janeniroopa - 13 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

awesomeee..too good..continue soon..😊

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Awww!! I loved the update!! The ManVeer scenes were sooo ADORABLE!! Update soon n thanks for the pm!!:)

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

This was awesome, loved it, And thanks for the PM, a ball in the next part, so much excited for it.😛

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

awesome update loved how she is slowly realizing that she is becoming attach to uday an dis missing him more than she ever missed akash and how she needs to see him yet when he is around she pretends she did not want him loved they are going to the ball together loved the father and daughter conversation glad he is giving her a chance to redeem her self and the conversation with her mother was also great loved when she and uday was sparing and her reaction to him getting hurt loved the update beautifully written thanks for the pm

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

It's awesome love it 👏👏👏 Can't wait for the ball

thxs for the pm 🤗 plzzz update soon

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Hey, I just read this whole short FF and its amazing the way you right from the POV of different characters
Can you please PM me when you update next time?