OS - Find Me... ManVeer - First Attempt

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Guys... its my first time writing one - shot. Please forgive me if there is a mistake... I've done - many fan fiction on different couples and shows, but its my first attempt on ManVeer.

I hope you'll like it!

Welcome to leave positive and negative feedback...


"Fine Me"

It was the most awaited day in the royal family. It was Rajkumari Manyata's wedding day and she is getting married to her middle-class boyfriend Akash Verma. Its a shameful day for Maharaj Brijraj Singh to see his elder daughter get married to chawl boyfriend when she could have married into royal family like Udayveer. Udayveer is the son - he always wanted and see him as his son. He felt hurt when his mother broke off the alliance with Udayveer's family. If he could he would have went against his mother and force his daughter into marrying Uday, but he couldn't because deep down inside his fatherhood is laughing at him. He wants his daughter happy and yet he's unhappy with the alliance. He stood numb while his mother and wife welcome Akash's family inside their palace for the further rituals. He just wish that something happens and this wedding doesn't take place. He can afford the lost of his reputation being at the stock than watching his daughter get married into strange family that doesn't match their status.

He sighs and stood beside Uday (who only came on his request) otherwise he wouldn't have been able to watch her daughter trap herself into death.

Everyone waiting for Rajkumari to make her appearance and yet there was delay. Akash looked tense because of his fear. Couple of days, been hard for him since Muniya as been acting strangely with him. His fear is coming onto him with each delay of Muniya not coming down to take her place beside him on the stage.

Few maids came rushing toward Komal and whisper in her ear. Komal excuse herself and went inside Manyata's room. She was shock! It was empty. She started to panic, but than she saw a letter with her name written on it. She open the letter and begins reading it.

(Manyata's letter to her mother Komal)

Dear: Maa

I know today is the biggest day of my life. I've been waiting for this moment, but there is somethings I've hidden inside me and to learn that you have to promise me... that you'll forgive your daughter. Maa there is another letter for Akash (she looked at the other letter in same envelop). Can you please give him the letter before you read the second letter? The second letter I want you to read with Dad. Yes, Maa I've accepted Maharaj Uncle as my father before I came to understand these relation. I think I am confusing you, but please do as I say.

Yours Truly,
Manyata

(End of Manyata's Letter 1)

Komal just stood numb for a minute than sighs and decide to give the letter to Akash without thinking a-bit. She rush out of Manyata's room (while everyone's eyes are on her) she ignore them and kept on walking toward Akash (who stood up by now).

Komal: Akash beta, I'm sorry (Udayveer looked at Komal with moist eyes), but Manyata has left this letter for you. I don't know, what she has written it. I only know my daughter has left us after many years of wait. I waited sixteen years for my daughter and when she comes (Komal controls her tears) I didn't even get the chance to love her deeply for those years. I wish (she look at Uday with moist eyes) she knew her importance in my son's life (she gave him the letter and Uday wipe her tears).

Komal just hugged Uday, while Akash with shaky hands open the letter.

(Manyata's letter to Akash)

Dear: Akash

I know you have waited for this moment since the moment you have fell in love with me, but I am sorry I can not marry you. There is a huge reason behind it. I can not express the reason without my parents knowing each and very truth I've hidden from them. Also myself without thinking about the pain I was going through each time I was with you. I'm sorry and please don't think I've left you because I don't love you or anything. I just can't force myself to marry you. I am sorry. I wasn't made for you.

Yours Truly,
Rajkumari Manyata

(End of the Letter)

Akash drop the letter in shock and just walked away without looking at the media. Media kept on questioning him, but he wasn't in the sense to think of anything except for his fear coming true. He has lost his Muniya forever. She's gone! Only person left is Rajkumari Manyata! And she was never his. His parents walk behind him with their chawl members... looking hurt and betray by the royal families.

Rajmata question Komal "what's going on and where is Manyata?"

Komal just kept her head down until her husband came toward her. He look in her eyes and saw pain hidden in them. She just gave him a letter. He read the letter in silent afterwards "where is the second letter she left for us? I want to know each and every thing my daughter has hidden deeply inside her" he asked her. She notice the volume of emotion reflecting deeply inside his eyes instead of caring about his royal reputation. She gave him the letter "please" he look at her "she wants us to read it together in our room" he nods his head.

Both Manyata's parents walk inside their room ignoring Rajmata's questioning eyes while Uday is taking care of the medias.

Inside the room...

Komal sat beside her husband on the bed while they read the letter together.

(Manyata's third letter for her parents)

Dear: Dad and Maa

I know! Everyone has been waiting for my return pass sixteen years, but nobody knows the hidden emotions I've locked up inside me. Today I am opening up those emotion and those harmful memories that haunts me. Before that can you please ask Udayveer to join you guys (Briji send Komal outside their room to get Udayveer. Udayveer stood beside Jaynandini. Komal with her eyes told Udayveer to follow her. He holds his head and left with her while everyone kept on wondering what's going on.

Once they reach inside the room. Briji again reads the letter) thanks for calling Udayveer. Udayveer you remember the first time we met at the beach (Uday recalls that moment) and how rudely I've behave with you. I am sorry for my action, but I was helpless. Yes, you have heard right! I could never step out of the chawl without being fallowed or kept eye on. I've learn the true that I was kidnap by Murari Lal... my so called father... who have given me false love and care. Only in-return to snatch my soul out of me. I was hurt at the age of twelve when I learn the truth. Afterwards, I've lost myself in the world of emotions and trusting people easily. Before that incident took place in my life. Yes, something horrible happen with me that change my entire world. I've lost the only person who I loved the most. Who I've decide to spend my entire life with. And he was none other than Udayveer's elder brother Kavya. (Uday remember his father talking about his elder son, but never in front of him. He over heard him talking to someone people when he was young. Komal look shock along with her husband. They always thought Kavya died in the bomb blast that took place before Uday's birth or Unnati's birth) Kavya was the person who always protected me as a brother. He was always there for me when Baba use to come home drunk and tries to force himself on me. It was always Kavya protecting me, but his death left me shaken. I couldn't think about staying anymore at the chawl, but before I could run off in life. When I came to know huge truth hidden from me. Yes, there is another truth that I came across without them knowing (I mean Baba and his underworld thugs). And that is (Komal, Briji, and Udayveer kept their breathe deeply inside them) Akash isn't any middle class person or something, but he is Murari Lal's biological son. Yes, Akash is that baster's son. Who tried to rape me and threaten me if I leak the truth in front of anyone. I've tried to reveal the truth many times in front of everyone, but yet nobody understood. I force myself into the relation with Akash only to learn about my family. Yep, Akash has the same habit as his father to speak when they overly drunk. In his drunk mode he confess that I am Rajkumari Manyata... daughter of Maharaj Brijraj Singh and Maharani Komal Devi... granddaughter of Rajmata and Udayveer's faience. (Trio stood shock. They never understood the pain behind Manyata's behaviour towards them. Komal had tears in her eyes).

I know its shocking! But I've gone through those phase in life. How can I forget the first time I met Udayveer on the beach? I felt like jumping into his arm and scream out that I am Rajkumari Manyata, but I couldn't because of Akash. He was fallowing me like a shadow. I was scared of seeing my family get into any sort of trouble if I tried to connect with them. Even during our second meeting Uday, at your club. I tried to speak with you, but Akash was keeping his eyes on me. I couldn't say anything or scream out the pain hidden inside me. I had to force myself into acting as if I didn't knew anything going around me. In that process I had to win Akash's trust on me before I trap Baba into getting caught by the cops because I had short time in stopping Jaynandini and Udayveer's engagement. (Uday looked confuse) Wondering, how I knew about the engagement. Well, Uday let's just say that I overheard your talk with your sister at the club. Since that very moment I've been working hard in getting Baba trap and showing everyone how much I cared for him after being brought here. I had to keep a mask on in front of my family (Komal shedding tears by now and couldn't hear anymore words coming out of Uday's mouth. Yep, Uday is reading the letter when Briji couldn't) otherwise Akash and his men could have done anything to harm my family. Only I know; how much I've cried each nights after hurting my family deeply or else I would have to force myself to see other shed of blood.

I couldn't! I was breaking apart. I felt happy, deeply inside when Uday was trashing Akash into pieces after being caught inside my room. It felt like my each wounds have been healed, but yet again I had to re-open my wounds by convincing; myself for the shake of my family. It was hurt, but I had force Dadisa into breaking my engagement with Uday otherwise anything could have happened. We might be royals and great in raajneeti without being caught in society. And yet, that very own society judge you in step of life. Yes, I had to force Dadisa into releasing Akash out of jail or else is fake parents - who work under the command of Akash's father could have done anything to our family's reputation or the members of our family. I was stuck in between the game of emotions and the love I have for my families, but lately I couldn't control myself anymore. I was breaking down each second of my breathe. I felt suffocated with the thought of getting married to Akash. It was killing me and yet I couldn't speak out my inner conflict. I thought Uday, would fight for me against Akash to claim his rights on me, but I was wrong. (Uday felt hurt because he could not understand his Princess's eyes whenever she tried to share her pain with him without speaking. And yet he is the biggest fool. Uday wonders why the letter is left incomplete)

Komal snatch the letter "Auntie, Manyata hasn't finish her letter, but I promise you that I'll bring her back like I've brought her earlier" she just nods her head while Uday touch her feet for blessing. She gives her blessing and watch him leave afterwards.

Uday doesn't say anything while Dadisa kept on asking him question. He just ingored her and left the mansion without turning back. His mind kept on thinking about his each moments with Manyata where her eyes kept on trying to speak out her inner conflict, but he judge her actions. He felt disgusts with himself more than anything. He smash his fist on his jeep (a letter falls out from the dashboard) he looks at the letter with moist eyes. He picked up the letter and knew its from Manyata.. his princess... his wifey, but does he have the right to claim her anymore. He shook of those thoughts and sat inside his jeep.

(Manyata's finish letter to Uday of her incomplete to her parents)

Dear: Udayveer

I've always been trouble for you. I've always token you for granted and I am still doing that because I believe I have the rights on you. I was hoping if you could give my last letter to Akash that is kept underneath your letter in the dashboard. I just want to clear some things with him before I send you on the quest of finding me. (Uday eyes wide up)

Yours Truly,
Manyata

Uday just drove in speed toward Akash's chawl. Everyone looked at him coming out in royal style. He kick open Akash's flat door and wanted to grab his collar, but instead he threw letter on his face.

Akash: What the heck are you doing here? Aren't you happy Muniya broke her ties with me? You always wanted that?

Uday: It doesn't matter what I wanted, but it matters what Manyata wanted. She just wants me to give you this letter. Read it!

Akash pick up the letter and begin reading it.

(Manyata's finally letter to Akash)

Dear: Akash

After reading my first letter Akash, you must have felt broken and deceive, but I was never made for you to begin with; because I belong to someone else before I was born. I respect him! I've always fought with him because I know that I belong to him and only him.

You know there is saying... Karam Apnaa Apnaa. I was doing my karam that brought me into your life and it was your karam that I forgive you for each and every mistakes; but I can never forget the darkness you brought into my life. Also I'll be thankful to you for bringing my family closer to me. You'll always be good friend of mine, but not my destiny because it belongs to Uday and only him.

Yours Truly,
Rajkumari Manyata

Akash sighs and look at Uday with smile "I was wrong! You were right Udayveer" Uday looked amaze and shock.

Akash: I've always thought my action spoke without confronting anyone, but I was wrong. She was always yours and always will be.

Uday just left without saying anything. Once he reach his jeep, he found another letter on his seat. He wonder and thought how could this come like thin air. He didn't waste anytime and start his journey to find his wifey and princess.

(Manyata's Letter to Uday.. Quest 1)

Dear: Uday,

Now your journey begins in finding me. Its up to you and how much time it takes you to find me. I'll be waiting for you until my last breathe. Don't keep me waiting too long otherwise death might reach me faster than you.

Alright! Find me! Think of the times we have met together for the first time.

(Incomplete)

Uday without wasting time drove to the beach. Remember him throwing rocks than Manyata coming onto him as wild cat. He smiles at that when young boy tug on his pant.

Uday looks at him with disgust, but the boy just gave him a letter with a rock,

(Letter 2.. toward quest 2)

Its not easy to accept people in our life either its upper or lower class, but they are humans and they have feelings like us. Why should we crush them with our powers? You remember the time I blast you for throwing rock at me, but you just gave me cash to keep my mouth shut. Its easy to show power on lower or middle-class people because they won't say anything in return. Is that what royal family do than I am unhappy to be a queen. I rather be simple, yet honest person. I am being honest with you that's why I want you to find me. Think of the moment that brought smile onto your face than disappointment.

(Incomplete)

Udayveer without wasting time... he rush toward the place where he met her second time at his club, but there was only symbol of her pair of earring.

Uday get confuse of the earring and tries to recall about the earring.. Suddenly incident pop inside his mind. That was the same earring he bought her on her birthday and she never wore them. Only kept them in her closet. He smiles at them than tries to think of the place "where he smiled than disappointment took place"

He tries hardly, after some moment he smirks and drive away in full speed toward his destination.

(Manyata's Monologue/with Udayveer too)

I felt a hand touching my shoulder. I knew it was him. He finally found me. I turn around and saw him smirking. I gave him big smile and before I could say anything he just took me into his arms.

I felt... finally, I am at the place where I belong. In his arms.

Uday: Finally I found you and I promise never to let you go!

He told me..

I smiled at him...

I told him "I know" he looked at me

Uday: Why couldn't you say anything before everything got out of control? If I knew before I would have protect you until my last breathe (I covered his lips)

"Don't you dare think about death or else" tears came running down my face "or else what?" he wipe my tears and question me.

"I promise that next time I'll make you search hardly than before" he smile at me "Now that I found you lets go home?"

I look at him with question

He smile at me "oye.. for now at your place and after few days at our heaven" I smile at him.

I hugged him again "Haan Nahin Toh"

He kissed my forehead "Haan Nahin Toh"

We both walk toward our new destination of togetherness.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it! It had a dark side other then the goody goody show side! Akash was literally her brother here. Loved the letters part and gal ur plotting was awesome! AWESOME OS!
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Originally posted by: tiger_lily

Loved it! It had a dark side other then the goody goody show side! Akash was literally her brother here. Loved the letters part and gal ur plotting was awesome! AWESOME OS!



Yep, I wanted to show more to Akash's character cuz in the show its very unattractive.. Thanks Kiara
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Thanks
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nice os...loved all the new facts u added to it
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Thank you so much guys - for the encouragement.
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very unique i like the change of events your story is the most unique and best story i have ever read
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Loved it!!!!
It was so beautifully written, bad side of Akash!
Loved ManVeer ❤️
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Originally posted by: cherry2

Loved it!!!!

It was so beautifully written, bad side of Akash!
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Yep, Akash needs a-little grey shade in his character otherwise its very dull (its my opinion) anyways thank you
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Originally posted by: Miketa



Yep, Akash needs a-little grey shade in his character otherwise its very dull (its my opinion) anyways thank you

agree with ur opinion, nice os again, your welcome..

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