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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: love-mystery

shiv..omggg awesome yaar they really must show us manveer romantic scenes

okkk uv asked m what about dinner tonight ?? m said with smile ok .. the ds came seeing them like this she be more sure that they made for each other .. m saw ds and told uv that enough ds is here ..uv turned slowly ..ds came near and said uv my son when u arrived here ... uv said just now ds and told her that he asked m for a dinner and she agreed... ds smiled and said ok ..j came and said omg me and my viji will also go for the dinner what about to go together .. uv be angry but he didn't show that .. uv said now i will leave will meet u later on ... uv left ..m went to her room and she received a msg from uv ..he said if am not sure i gonna meet u later on i will never leave from there .. m smiled and said even me uv... later on all go for the dinner when ever uv tried to be alone with m j came in between.. uv be more angry ever ..uv said m unniti wants to meet u ..j said i will come with u ... uv said no unniti wants to meet m not u ...


areee why do u give me most romantic ideas yaar ur ending is always perfect n it gives me sooo many ideas😳 too gud 👏

m goes in the room and she doesn't find unnati in there n as she goes futher in there. a guy is standing with back on manatya's ide. manatya gets tensed but as uv turns around manatya screams out of fear. uv smiles n tells manatya u r darpook princess? manatya replies saying no n where is unnati? uv laughs n tells manatya do u really expect unnati to be here in this beautiful night n this beautiful room, come on manatya that was a code word so we can leave jay. manatya smiles accha bachuu bade smart ho... uv replies bachpan se hi aadat se majboor princess. uv orders dinner n both of them have a dinner in the room with red wine, candle light dinner n at the end uv cuts the cake with manatya to celebrate the night, both of the blow the candle closes therir eyes n makes a wish. manveer wishes for togetherness, love n happiness for each other. both of them open their eyes n manatya kisses uv on cheek for the beautiful candle light dinner. she asks uv if she can leave n uv nods his head in yes.manveer leave the room with uday following manatya. uday goes another way n manatya is all alone. jay yells at her for making her wait sooo song manatya tells jay not to yell n she is not a kid so chill. jay gets angry n leaves vijay bahi glares at manatya n follows jay to her car. manatya standin alone waiting for uv. both of the smile when they see each other n hug, jay is watching them from her car n understand their plan. manveer smiles at jay n waves her gudbye.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Where did this scene start i wanna read from the start
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Shiv..loved it so romantic and thanx yaar u r awesome in this stuff so made a good end for u ...

Kiara u can join of course u want to complete from here or i should complete and u will do after me ???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tiger_lily

Where did this scene start i wanna read from the start

i think it started on chat club 18 let me find it i know it's like ages ago but me n loji do these writting scenes whenever we chat which we do barely like twice a week or so.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss.Colorfull

i think it started on chat club 18 let me find it i know it's like ages ago but me n loji do these writting scenes whenever we chat which we do barely like twice a week or so.😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
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shiv the creation u used is urs right ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aahh!! RThen I'll check the recent ones!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok me continu...

uv put his hand around m waist and turned her m said uv what r u doing it's public and she blushed ...uv said ohh really u know when u were with me i can't feel the world .u r just the one who make me feel the life when am far from u i feel am died ...u also feel that right ?? m blushed and said yes ... uv said ohh then we have to tell ds i can't leave u for a sec we should get married now..m smiled and said no u know i should be manyata not monya right ?? uv said i start loving u even when u r not rajkomari u remember when we met for the first time .. i never forget that... u took my heart from that time .. m blushed and looking down ..uv took her hand and kissed her and said meri rajkomari can i have this dance with u ?/..m blused and said yes .. the music was so romantic and is so slowly uv slowly made m came near and near ..then it rains ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kiara here is what i could find
UV and M both having sweety sweety sleep ... M's mam came seeing them like this she didn't wanna wake them but Suddenly J came and saw them she be so angry and yell JIJIII ..wake up ...M waked up feeling like shocked what is happening ???... UV waked up and gave J an angry look and said what happen J ?? J said nothing but jiji seems she is tired so wanna tell her to talk rest in her room ... UV feeling more angry and said u r right but she will arrived like this and he carried her ..M feeling shy and said UV ..UV said u keep silent



loved it jay toh gusse se paagal hi ho jayegi. manatya says thank u uday. uday tells manatya there is no need to say thank u or sorry since there relationship beyond any formalities. manatya blushes n she just puts her head on uday's chest n closes her eyes. uday looks at her n smiles.he is walking down the stairs since manatya got the master bedroom n its downstairs. jay is watching uday n both uday n jay make a eye contact. uday is angry n signals jay to walk away n jay just gets more furious. uday gets to manatya's room n a servant opens the door n leaves. manatya is asleep in uday's arms n uday gently puts manatya on her bed. as he is putting manatya on her bed slowly she hold his shirt tightly. uday tries to break the grip manatya has on his shirt but instead he stumbles n falls on the bed. both of them fall together since uday was holding manatya but he holds manatya tightly. manatya wakes up n both uday n manatya tries to get up but instead they keep failing n keep coming closer. both of them just stop n wait for one another to go first but no one of them go manatya is waiting for uv n uv waiting for manatya. both of them lost in each other n suddenly manatya realizes that uday's hands are on her hips as he was trying to save her.she blushes n uday hold her tightly n makes her come close to him. jay comes there n she is watching them from the door.


M is trying to be up when she saw J but UV didn't let her move and said J what r u doing here ??..J said nothing just checking if M jiji is ok and slept or not ...M said oh J from when u start carrying about me ??? J said from now on Jiji... UV feeling awesome and really enjoying what is happening ..finally he stood up and said am leaving for now ... M said it's too late sleep here ... UV gave M a lovly look and said now if u told me this again me will never leave ...M said .then don't leave ..J bw so angry about what is happening she left from there ...UV and M didn't even relized that J gone they r in love dreamland ...after a while UV said ok will be here for more long ...


shivani ...love it ... okkk gonna start ... M still standing watching the moon ...she heard her phone rang .. it's a msg ..she wonder who will be she open it with thought that will be UV then she read the msg and it's from unniti... saying M hi u see dada..?? M be worried what happen she called Unniti and said hi unniti he didn't arrived he left from here ... Unniti while talking UV entered the room .unniti is about to tell M that he is here now but UV sign to her to be silent ..he asked her tell her that he didn't arrive ...Unniti said why ?? UV said just told her this ..unniti told M ..M be so worried she just run to DS but what she will told her and it's too late .. she stooped and called uv in his phone but he didn't replied... then she called unniti again and said i will come now ...Unniti said don't worry he gonna be fine ...UV listened to what M said... M said ok plz do tell me when he will arrive ..unniti said ok

haiii uv is playing around with manatya how cute . manatya gets worried n she calls uv again but he doesn't pick up so she decides to call the rajmahal to see if uv arrived yet or not. a servant picks up the phone n tells manatya everything. manatya is annoyed but she smiles n says watch out uv. she texts uv saying urgent, uv calls her but she doesn't pick up her phone. uv gets worried n he tells unnati. unnati calls manatya but no answer. uv rushes to meet manatya at the mahal. uv gets there n he sees manatya in her balcony standing n smiling. she winks at uv n uv smiles back. uv yells i love u. manatya makes ssshhh... sign to uv but uv insists manatya to come down. manaaty agrees. both of them are shaking in cold n manatya tells him to go home. uv nods no n mantya pleads to him. uv still says noo. manatya asks him what he wants n he says a kiss... it starts raining n manveer is till standing there. manatya looks at him for a min n kissess him n then holds his hands n makes him sit in his car . uv is suprised n blushes. manatya tells driver to go but uv holds her hand. manatya smiles n as the car starts moving. manatya lets go of the hand. she waves bye n runs back in. manatya recieves a txt for uday n she smiles the text says i love u my princess even forever is not enough for my love for u...

i know the rain part was really random but all the best romantic scenes are in rain naa



Shivani ... this night for UV and M will not gonna end ... OK me ...UV waked up and rushed to see the time ... it's 4 o'clock am ohhh he just slept for 3 hours but he saw it as a year ... he msged M and said u waked up ?? M replied so fast ..she said i didn't slept yet *blush*.. UV replied wanna meet u ...M replied but it's too early to came here ..UV replied i don't care wanna see u now i missed u ...M replied i missed u too but we have to wait ... UV didn't replay her back she be so worry ..she send u be angry ?? but still no replay till now ...M be more worry she can't called unniti now she went out to the gate ..but no one was there ...M felt that UV gonna come ..she is feeling so sleepy ... when she turned to go back suddenly there is someone hugged her from back and she know who is he ...she smiled ..UV turned her to watch her face but still hugging her .. he said princess i couldn't wait but what about u why u here ?? M blushed and said i was waiting for u ... UV smiled and said waw princess and he kissed her on her check then he felt she be so heavy ... he looked at her but she was closing her eyes ... he knew she is sleeping .. he carried her till he put her in her bed ..come near her and kissed her in her forehead and said ..good night my princess.. <3<3<3

chalo finally the night ended aur ek raat mein manatya got 3 kisses from uday now i am jealous uday goes home n sleeps in his room. both manveer sleep till 11 in the morning. uv wakes up n sees the time n he is suprised. manatya wakes up n komal n dadisaa is standing by he4r bed. they look worried. manatya tells them that she couldn't sleep last night that why she woke up late n tells her mom n dadisaa sorry. both komal n dadisaa leaves. jay comes in n asks manatya questions but manatya ignores jay completely n goes in her bathroom. jay is furious n leaves. manatya gets dressed up n goes for lunch. she eats her lunch n goes to hotel for a meeting. uday sends her a text to meet her up n both of them meet up at the hotel where her meeting is at uday accompanies her to the meeting. manatya asks uday about his night n he says wonderful. manatya teases just wonderful nothing else. uday takes manatya to the corner in a sneaky way n grabs her n tells her do u want the details princess? manatya- why not? but uvji we r getting late for the meeting sooo??? uday teases who cares? manatya i do so plz chodo naaa. uv lets got of manatya n manatya fixes her hair n checks her make-up. uv smiles to himself n starts walking with manatya. in the meeting manatya n uv are talking with her eyes.

the story is till now n whatever we wrote in this thread is a continuation.

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