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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awesome part...feeling so sad 4 uday...update soon

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ForeverForU

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

another amazing update...how can u write so well indigo...
ur UV is going to kill me someday...damn!!!it was not good...it was excellent 👏

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Binita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Megz.. Loved both updates...beautifully written.. What has UV done in the past you have really got me thinking.. hope it was not too bad.. Uv's dialogues are too good.. Update soon..:))

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kulsum wadi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Wowww awesome love it i totally love your chapters yaar...
awesome 10\10

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Adden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Suspense Kills 😆 But a Fab Update ... I'm so anxious to know what actually happened with Manyata, that made her family look down at her ... guess I'll have to wait 😉 Lovely xxx

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

😳😛Awesomeee

Loved it

Simplyy mindblowing~~~

Loveed ittt

Thank you so much for the PM

Pleaseee continue soon😃

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180506

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

"Udayveer's mouth-to-mouth resuscitation," he said airily, after he'd let go of her. "Never fails, especially on certain princesses."

Or on certian Commoners. Not that I would know ofcourse, but a girl can wish. 😆

Fab job as per usual Megz, keep it up. It's like a film that I have to pause once the part is done, and can't wait to get back too 😉

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Raunika

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

really loved the update.lets see what happens next.

keep going

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WinterFire

@WinterFire

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

again a great, awesome, fab, beautiful OS.. i love all ur writings.. plz continue n thank u for the pm once again 😊

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Jazmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

ok so im finally here!! =) trying to kill time before hitting the road to go home so i thought what better way than to read your story...and i have two parts pending!! he he

Chapter 4:

bechara Kishan!! 😆😆 he probably freaked out when Uday walked into the kitchen...lol...but he's very perceptive!! good job!! 👏...😲😲😲 tell me he did not pour hot coffee over Akash!! i literally gasped out loud when i read that...omg omg omg!! 😲😲..."can you survive a jwalamukhi"...🤣🤣🤣🤣...thats too hilarious!!! 🤣🤣🤣...i love that all it took to calm Udays fury was her tears!! see...now THIS i want to see on the show!! i want her tears to hit him like ice cold water!!! 😉...aww...the flashback between Manveer was too cute!!

Chapter 5:

aww...they were in bed together...😳 just sleeping...too cute!! hehe...vaise...naughty naughty Manyata!!! 😉...errm...when you say Prithvi i picture Gaurav Khanna...😛...omg when Uday said "she doesnt love me"...aww...i literally said "aww" out loud!!! 😛...i simply cannot wait for part 6...what is the real reason...who is dying? lol...does Uday have some terminal disease or something? tell tell...jaldi tell!! 😳

cant wait for next update luv!!
JAZ

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