OS: Want to Meet You Once More

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesome os...loved the manveer romance...manyata ignoring akash was fantastic...thanx 4 the pm...do write more

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

loved it

the part was very beautifully written

thanks for the pm

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Hi Megz awesome OS 👏👏❤️❤️

Plzzz do write more and keep on with Manveer naughty scenes 😉😆

Thxs for the pm🤗

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Oh I so loved it...
Thank you so much for the pm 😊

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Dikshita

@Dikshi92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Superb megz!!! It was truelly fantastic.. A very beautifully written os..
So, in ur os UV had been successful in creating the feeling of fear within manyata for him.. She has finally transformed into a new person.. She thought that she would never be able to become a new person whole heartedly.. It was as if she had been doing what she was asked to do, without an objection.. She feared uday.. But little did she know that her heart has started to betray her.. It had begun to fall for uday unconsciously.. And you wrote all these so perfectly that i could even feel what manyat was feeling.. Really awsome!!

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

W.O.W!!!👏
that was awesome dr...I m becoming a fan of ur OSs...really appreciate ur work...plz PM me whenever u write ur next OS...love them❤️

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kulsum wadi

@wadi..doll

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wow Awesome yaar i am addiacted to your OS itss fab hope they show something like dat in the show...loveeed it alottt

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

it was so0oo0o0o0 heart touching i loved the last line said by manyata
Some kind of agent, wanting me to ensure my 'second life'. I told him it lies with someone else.'
awww what a line hatss off to u for me this was ur best os uptil n0w i lveddd it alott

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Muskaan.C

@Muskaan.C

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

I love your work! It was a clever play in the end when she cut Akash's call. If only that would happen in the show. And Vijay, he's awesome, as always. Great Job!

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Aw that was adorable! Loved the last line "Some kind of agent, wanting me to ensure my 'second life'. I told him it lies with someone else." Awesome job⭐️

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