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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manveerlover


[BR]Ur dix ff is amazing lovd each n evry chptr of it waitng for last part bt m little sad coz dix ff is ending bt wil wait for ur next ff a request kindly update last part s0on and want it to b full of manveer



Thanks a ton. I wish cvs could also make us love the show
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey a very good update..is it the end or are you writing a epilogue... anyway good work..really very nice..keep it up..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

hey a very good update..is it the end or are you writing a epilogue... anyway good work..really very nice..keep it up..😊

thanks dear...yes an epilogue is on the way. i hope to start the next FF and hope you like that one too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neharaizada

thanks dear...yes an epilogue is on the way. i hope to start the next FF and hope you like that one too



okie..i'am waiting for the epilogue & your new fic..😊
Posted: 13 years ago
hey neha im back to trouble u my goodness an epilogue so soon anyways ur ff has always been one of my favourite in this forum
hope ur next ff too will rock by the way cud u tell me the concept of ur next ff if u wish to share otherwise just give us a sneak peek
waiting for the epilogue
n the prologue of the new ff
but will miss this 1 i liked the previous ch
omg buttterflies in uday 's stomach aww so sweet n creative of u n him
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Posted: 13 years ago
EPILOGUE
THE ROYAL FAMILY OF DEVGADH AND THE ROYAL FAMILY OF JAIGADH INVITES YOU TO THE MARRIAGE OF

HER HIGHNESS MANYATA KUMARI SINGH, MAHARANI OF DEVGADH

AND

HIS HIGHNESS UDAYVEER SINGH, MAHARAJ OF JAIGADH

A month later the royal couple was married. Every known celebrity, politician and royalty from the whole of India was present. Manyata looked lovely in a red and gold saree while Uday looked handsome in a cream colored sherwani. The ceremony went off without a hitch and was much talked about for many weeks.

Manyata stood on the balcony of the Jaigadh palace and stared at the setting sun. This was her third week at Jaigadh and she was in love with the place. She had been given a grand welcome by the people of Jaigadh who thronged the palace to see the new Maharani. Manyata was overcome by the love and respect of the people that she got down from the car and walked to the barricade acknowledging every person standing there. In few days she had become the favorite queen of Jaigadh and won the hearts of the people.

"This is one of my favorite spots in the palace" said Uday as he joined her.

"And now it's mine too" she sighed as she went into Uday's arms. Uday held her as they watched the sun disappear into the horizon and said "I cannot believe that it's been 3 months since our marriage. I still feel it's a dream and I'm scared that it will disappear the moment I wake up"

Manyata pushed herself away slightly and looked at him

"Maharaj Udayveer Singh" she chided playfully "I thought the word scared wasn't in your dictionary"

"It wasn't Princess and still isn't unless you're concerned. I'm scared to lose you" he said in a serious tone

"Uday, I'm here with you, in your arms and this is our dream and it will remain with us till we live" she said and hugged him. "It was our destiny to find ech

"Yes princess" he replied planting a kiss on her head

"Queen, I'm your queen now, your maharani"

"But I like calling you Princess more"

"And I like hearing that" she replied and sighed as Uday softly laughed and held her close to himself

AFTER 4 YEARS

It was a beautiful summer day at Jaigadh. The Jaigadh palace stood majestically and was being decked like a bride and the reason being that the Jaigadh riyasat was celebrating the third birthday of their little princess. There was a lot of hustle and bustle at the palace that day and in the midst of all this a three year old girl child was running as fast as her small legs could take her. Behind her a beautiful woman dressed in traditional garb ran trying to catch the little one before she could hurt herself

"Mini, mini beta wait. Don't run you will fall down" she shouted. As the woman passed, the staff at work stopped whatever they were doing and bowed. The woman smiled and nodded but her eyes were fixed on the little child.

Just as she thought the little child ran into a pillar but was saved in the nick of time by a pair of strong hands that tossed the child high into the air which invited a set of giggles from her.

The woman breathed a sigh of relief and smiled at the scene in front of her and walked toward them

"Rajkumari Mrinalini Padmini Devi, you gave me such a fright" she said in mock reproach

The little child buried her head against the man who was holding her and laughed.

"Look at her laugh. Thank goodness you caught her at the right time Uday or else..."

"Maharani Manyata, don't underestimate my daughter. She is very strong and brave, aren't you my darling" said Uday looking adoringly at his daughter "Happy birthday my love" he said and kissed his daughter

"Papa" she said as she giggled again

"And stubborn too" said Manyata as she stood with her arms crossed

"Hah, look who is talking. She has gone on you my princess and phew I have my hands full" he said

Manyata smiled and extended her arms toward her daughter and the child immediately went to her

"I second that" said a voice and the couple turned to welcome the first of the guests.

"Maa, father" said Manyata and went to take their blessings.

"Uday, you have a tough job at hand" said Maharaj Brijraj "It would have been nice if you guys were equally sided, if you know what I mean" he teased

"Very soon uncle Brij, very soon" laughed Uday

"Father," said Manyata as she blushed and accompanied them to the living room.

"Mini, see what we have got for you. Come here beta" said Komal as she beckoned the staff bearing the gifts to come forward.

Mini smiled and she went to her grandmother who made her sit on her lap.

"I so wish if dadi sahb was with us today" said Manyata as she looked at her daughter. Uday held her hand and squeezed it.

"Wherever she is, she is watching us and I know for sure that she is extremely happy" said Uday

Manyata nodded and looked at her family. This was it, this was her family. Who would have thought that four years ago a simple girl Moniya from a chawl who led an inconsequential life was actually Rajkumari Manyata of Devgadh? That the person sitting beside her, her husband, the love of her life and her soul mate would be the same person whom she hated at the very first sight. Destiny, she sighed as she looked at her daughter. She recalled the time when she had gone into labour. She had insisted on delivering Mini at the Jaigadh palace and Uday had been distraught at that. But he made sure that he was with her all the while and had turned their bedroom into a small hospital with doctors and nurses on 24hrs vigil. He had held her hand just like he was holding it now and had stayed with her while she delivered their daughter. The pain and tiredness was all forgotten as she saw the tiny life in Uday's hand. He had cried that day in joy as he held their child. With the joy of their child's birth came news which shook Manyata. Her grandmother was no more. She had left the world after prolonged illness. She had passed on in her sleep, but Manyata believed that her dadi sahb hadn't left her. She decided to name her daughter Rajkumari Mrinalini Padmini Devi, after her late grandmother and her late mother-in-law, Mini for short. Manyata was apt in naming the child Mrinalini as the child showed all traits of her late grandmother in looks as well as deeds.

"She would make an excellent queen just like maa sahb" Giriraj had said. Now as she looked at her daughter she knew her father-in-law was right. She would make an excellent queen just like her grandmother and as her grandmother always said, it was their destiny to be born into privilege and she would be there to guide her daughter, just like she was guided.

"Princess, what happened" asked Uday and she broke from her reverie. "Let's go princess, time for family picture, Unnati and Jai are here" he said. "Are you alright love?" he asked a bit concerned

"Yes darling, I'm perfectly fine and happy" she smiled and they walked hand in hand to meet the others.

THE END

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Guys

First of all thank you very much for reading my FF, it was great motivation to keep on writing and entertain you all. I have got encouragements from all my wonderful friends here and I'm extremely glad for that. I might have missed replying to some of you lovely people, please don't have any hard feelings toward me. It is just the lack of time as i try to update as soon as possible.

Thank you all once again very much and hope you enjoyed this FF

I will come soon with a new FF and would want the same encouragement and love

GOD BLESS

LOVE

NEHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneta

hey neha im back to trouble u my goodness an epilogue so soon anyways ur ff has always been one of my favourite in this forum

hope ur next ff too will rock by the way cud u tell me the concept of ur next ff if u wish to share otherwise just give us a sneak peek
waiting for the epilogue
n the prologue of the new ff
but will miss this 1 i liked the previous ch
omg buttterflies in uday 's stomach aww so sweet n creative of u n him

thank you dear...well concept needs to be different na so im trying out various possibilities...i will seftly let you know
hope you like the epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi



okie..i'am waiting for the epilogue & your new fic..😊

Hey dear...hope you like the epilgoue...i knw it ended so fast but i have a new concept in mind and want to start that off
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love the epilogue!❤️
You are truly a very nice writer you know.I will look forward to reading your next FF.😉

Edited by navyan07 - 13 years ago

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