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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guys i have written an OS on ManVeer which was a random thought in my mind and also its my first try on writing😳! Please have a look😃

Ok Chikki mai aa jaungi raat ko club party me! Said Manyata chirply on phone.

Pakka na moniya?! Tere rajmahal wale tujhe aane denge na? Chikki showed her doubt.

Arey chikki tu kyu apna dimag use karti hai. Mai moniya hu moniya. Tu bas dekhti ja ki mai in ghar walo ko kaise manati hu. Tu chinta mat kar. Haan nahi toh! Laughed manyata.

Acha chikki chal ab mai phone rakhti hu. Kahi us khote Udayveer ne hamari baatey sun li na, toh fir aa jayega mera dimaag kharab karne. Haan nahi toh! And she pouts in her signature style.

She cuts the call and starts planning for night party at XYZ club. She goes to her wardrobe and starts analysing the dresses which will suit her. After so much of pouting and making faces, she finally decided upon a royal blue strap gown. She called for Unnati and asked to make her ready for the night.

Par Manyata, agar Dada ko pata chal toh he is not gonna leave you. Warned Unnati.

Arey tu tension na le Unnati. Tere dada ko pata bhi nahi chalega or mai jakar bhi aa jaungi. And she laughs in her typical style.

Be careful Manyata! You know dada na.

Ok ok Unnu. And she pulls Unnati's cheeks.

Hmmm...chal mai tumhe achche se ready kar dun...

Hey Uday. Hows you dude?! Asked a friend of Uday on phone.

Iam perfectly fine yaar! So wassup? UV said in his masculine voice.

Hey bro! Actually we are planning for a party tonight at a club. Just a get together type!

Oh yeah!

Yeah! So you have to come at XYZ club.

Okay dude. I will be there.

Party Venue.

Manyata reaches there at time with her friends and was having nice time with them. They were dancing and having softdrinks. And Manyata was looking really hot today! And she was aware of many eyes which were on her. She was enjoying totally.

UV just entered the club and since entering he was having weird feeling that someone close to him is there in this club. But keeping aside those feelings he went with his friends to the bar section an ordered drinks for them and himself.

UV and his friends were having some random talks when UV eyes caught attention of someone and his eyes turned more black due to anger.

Manyata was dancing with her friends when someone caught her wrists and pulled her to a dark corner.

Seeing the owner of hands, Manyata's face turned pale with fear for the 1st time and UV was staring at her with so much intensity that she was feeling that she will burn.

Aap yaha pe kya kar rahi hai Princess?! Asked UV keeping his face too much closer to hers.

Wo wo... She started stuttering due to his anger.

Hamse kuch pucha hai princess.

Wo mai apni friends k saath aayi thi. Bahut zidd kar rahe the dono. Said manyata helplessly.

Princess aap kyu nahi samjhti hai aapke k ghar walo ko kitni fikr hoti aapki jab aap bina bataye aise aa jati hai ghar se.

Maine ghar pe bataya tha ki mai bahar jaa rahi hu.

Haan wo bhi jhoot kaha hoga, koi na koi jhoota bahana banaya hoga. He said biting every word.

Why don't you understand ki kuch log hai jo aapki parwah karte hai. They cant tolerate ki aap k saath kuch ulta seedha ho. He said softly forgetting that he is talking with jungle billi.

Manyata was not able to understand that what was happening. Why she is feeling so scared 1st time from UV?! She is not the one who will get scared due to UV.

Iam sorry. Next time i wont do this. Mai khayal rakhungi iska. She dint know how she said sorry.

UV was dumbfounded by her saying sorry to him. she was saying sorry wo bhi bina koi jhagda kiye. 1st time he was dumbfounded by this girl as always he hushes her huskily.

Mai bas jaati hu yaha se! She was really sacred. She said innocently to him and left him and went to her friends to tell them to leave now with her.

And he was staring at her from back intently thinking about those kuch log and the changes that have happened in his life and more importantly in his heart due to this girl who was sometimes jungle billi and sometimes so innocent that he want to hug her tightly.

So this was it. Please read and press LIKE TAB 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.. UV falling for M.. 😳
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loved it...its a cute one..
do write more...
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Good one👏Short and sweet⭐️
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very nice story.interesting .keep going.
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Nice OS very sweet

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Awed tht was really cute loved the story a lottt
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add me to ur buddy list and plz pm me wen u write again

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