Manveer One Shots updated pg 57

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nizza/other user shona

@nizzalicios...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

loved ure 7 part was reading all i missed till now...thanks for such an OS...
For u

nizza

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Mohabbateinn

@Mohabbateinn

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

ommg, i lovee how u totally transformed a potential pakao episode into a lovely MUV moment😍 especially enjoyed how you showed UVs character soo concerned about his lady love like he is in actual and thus I hope he gets to say these exact dialogues to M one day ☺️ i like how your OS is hinting towards a makeover soon.. and like the user above me said, pls do more post-marriage ones as well 😆 i tell u this everytime..but i just loveee ur writing too muchh!🤗

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: -Vanshikaa-
ommg, i lovee how u totally transformed a potential pakao episode into a lovely MUV moment😍 especially enjoyed how you showed UVs character soo concerned about his lady love like he is in actual and thus I hope he gets to say these exact dialogues to M one day ☺️ i like how your OS is hinting towards a makeover soon.. and like the user above me said, pls do more post-marriage ones as well 😆 i tell u this everytime..but i just loveee ur writing too muchh!🤗

thanks Vanshikaa!

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

so nice!

loved the ending with "aise mujhe mat dekho" haha - still hesitatnly stubborn towards UVeer despite it all 😆

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meerakhan45

@meerakhan45

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

AD girl... every time i see ur post and the messege about new OS i always think new Os hmmm... im like ok lets see how she have written this time, and i most tell you that u prof me wrong every singel time... because u write bettter and better...

I lovvveeed it...😃

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

do i need to mention that i loved it

but wah kya baat hai one kidnap has like totally changed manyata

hope this happens in the serial yaar

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Hi Sonali 🤗 lovely OS ...nice that you have turned majnu Bday party into an adventurous one and love the last part.

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Hey Sonali!!!😉thnks 4 sharin n thnks 4 the PM!!!!!!😉

love it love it love it!!!!!😳👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

it was really good i could imagine wat M was goin through as well as wat UV's reaction were when she came back!!😍

really u did another excellent work writing hope u continue n plzzz do PM when u update!!!!!!

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

awesome os...loved manyata fighting the goons and udays concern 4 manyata...update soon

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

okay finally i was off from both work and uni...read all your os...sorry for being late...amazing works all of them...loved the kitchen romance and the moral pregnancy one was so sensitive loved that side of today...then loved how u turned the party into a kidnapping..classic...u r amamzing

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