FF - A Little Fantasy *Chap 4 ; Pg 11* - Page 5

Mais awesome update just loved it!

Originally posted by: pri01

Me first to comment

Wow Mais awesome update Bodyguard of Princess that's too good ❤️ am looking forward for ManVeer first meeting 😍

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm🤗

Yeah, bodyguard!! 😉 Or something more...! I want to have a dhassu first meeting for ManVeer so have patience...let me get to that 😆 Thanks for reading! 😳

Originally posted by: ...Binny...

Mais.. I am loving your FF.. there is a bit of mystery I hope he is a bodyguard for Manyata..if so poor thing he has no idea what's coming..😳😆.. and I loved your emphasis on the closed buds hence UV will help our M to bloom..so sweet and i just have to add loved UV's dialogues (these royals are impressed by anything..😆) can't wait for the next part update soon..😊

Yaar UV's dialogues are one of the factors why I love him so much! But trust me, there'll a lot of blooming on both sides...after all it's a magical FF! 😳 Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: minizz

Mais,this update was brilliant.I am so looking forward to this love story.wonderful build up.Uday's character is well defined and he comes across as a self made man and now accepting this job will change his life forever in more ways than one.Manyata's character is still shrouded in mystery.looking forward to knowing more about her.and what will be Uday's reaction on seeing her?How and when will they meet? and how will their love story begin? hmmm.so many questions😆Please do update soon😃

Thanks for such a lovely update.Good job👏

Oh, there is so much more to Uday than him being a self-made man! Manyata would enter in the next chapter and her mysteries would be slowly revealed, just hang tight! 😆 Inshallah all your questions would be answered! Thanks for reading! 😳

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

wow wt an update...loving uday's character in ur ff...the entire convo with the dr revealed a lot abt his personality...he knws he's gd n the best n is so cool abt it... i knw i wud neva talk like tht 2 sum1 thts offering me a job...

hmm i guess he's jus gna b the BG of J bt y nt manyata? doesnt she go out n abt?

Uday is the best man! Everyone knows it 😉 Manyata is very different from her sister and very different from her character in the show. It'll be revealed in the next chapter Inshallah! Thanks for reading! 😳

Originally posted by: poulomi12

Ah i was missing this "ahsaas" for a few days...

Thanks Mais...for bringing that back...

Ah that sweetness of love!

You know your stories have a "Manga" or "Manhwa" like feel.

I mean they can be easily developed into graphic novels!!

How come i dint notice this before?

I am eagerly waiting for the third chapter!!

I wish when your novel is ready somebody volunteers to develop the graphic version!

Oh..! You! And your comments! They make me blush 😳 I don't even know what to say 😳 But Manga feeling?! Is it really coming across like that! 😲 THANK YOU!! But yeah, some scenes are very manga-ish...mangas feeling is so sweet. And magical! And flowery 😆 Well, reading too many shoujo mangas in my childhood has its effects...I do tend to copy that style sometimes.

Thanks for reading! You are becoming one of my fav readers/commenter 🤗

Originally posted by: limbu.simmy

This is too good..😃 So Uday is the bodyguard here😍..

Keep on updating and Thanks a lot for the PM..👍🏼

What a story mais <3 the last line just touched my heart ! It's really amazing :) update soon

Wow! Absolutely awesome FF!!
So well written and so mysterious!
And having Uday's viewpoint is so great!
I can't wait for Manyata and Uday to meet!
Please pm me and update soon!!

oh gosh tht was soo beautiful!!