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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -Mais-



I absolutely agree with you..He has hijacked my dreams.I start thinking about something else and don't know from where his thoughts will crop in 😆 I can't help but imagine and dream how he smirks ,how he plans,how he talks..gosh Embarrassed I'm UV-addict ☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mais in one word Awesome kya baat hain 👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ love this different concept am totally hooked...at first I thought Uday saved Manyata but it's J ...guess ManVeer first will be an explosive one😉
Plzzz update soon and add me in your PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahahaha! I am finally updating! I actually wanted to update it on Thursday but the interned gave me such a dhoka 😭 Then on Friday I got distracted 😆 Then on Saturday I was out of town 😛 and then on Sunday, the chapter wasn't ending the way I wanted it to 😕 But at least I wrote an OS!!! Acha enough rambles! Here goes Chapter 2! Once again, like this post to be PMed about the next update!

Chapter 2

"And so, what's in it for me?"

Uday sat on the chair with a serious expression on his face. He was completely ignoring the white paper that he was asked to read for 'details'. Instead, his attention was completely on the man who was sitting opposite of him.

"Like I said, your job details are on the paper. Read them and if there is anything you are not comfortable with, we might discuss it." The man with the glasses was smiling but the sense of authority was so apparent only a fool would've been unable to notice it.

And Uday was no fool.

"Yeah, I heard that but what's in it for me? Right now I am enjoying a very good job, my house is small but comfortable, and I can do anything I like because I don't have a family or relatives to keep track of my every action. Why would I want to give them up?" Uday smiled a little at the elder man. 'Well if I am going down, I'd rather go down with a fight.'

"Because Mr. Uday Thakkar, you have no choice. The job you are so fondly talking about is temporary and you could be terminated at any second. Your 'house' isn't exactly yours. You are just acting as a care-taker and regarding your free as bird actions, well you and I both know that in the money you are currently earning, there aren't many things that you can do." The man replied gently and leaned back in his chair. His smile got a little deeper.

"Oh well, it's not like I didn't expect you to know these things." Uday rolled his eyes and picked up the paper. Just one look at the contents was enough to tell him that he was being offered more than his required duties.

"Just one question, why me?" Uday put down the paper and asked in a genuinely confused tone. The man chuckled.

"Well, that's one valid question that I wasn't expecting." Uday didn't smile.

"The too many zeroes in my salary don't appeal to me until I know the reason why I am being given them."

"You are one hell of a person Mr. Uday." The man gave him a deep, inspecting look.

"Yeah I've been told that multiple times."

"And you'd be a fool to think that we are offering you such a delicate job without doing proper research of your background." The man's smile vanished.

"Papers can often lie Dr.Shiv." Uday replied coolly.

"We like to take our chances."

"Not something I'd expect Royals to do." Uday smiled sarcastically.

"And that's exactly why,not everyone is a Royal." Dr. Shiv replied calmly before getting up and leaving the room.

Uday gave out a large sigh. His mind was going through a furious debate and his expressions were giving that away.

"What the hell man?! Ye seedhi saadhi zindagi mein U-turns bagair warnings kyun ajate hain?" He got up and started pacing in the large room.

"Bodyguard for the princesses?" He stopped and considered the position. He had no idea that 3 weeks after the 'incident' he was being called in this large royal office to be offered such a job. It's not like he had done something extra heroic, he had just done something any normal responsible citizen would've done.

"Ye rajwade bhi na, kisi bhi cheez se impress hojate hain." He rolled his eyes. He picked up the paper with the details of the job. No doubt that the package as a whole was impressive. The salary was four times more than his current job was offering, there wasn't much he had to to except accompany the princesses whenever they went out, he got his own apartment and car and he didn't have to wear a typical uniform.

"Koi pagal bhi bata de ke they are trying desperately for me to say yes." He shook his head but gave the paper a thoughtful look.

"Itna bura bhi package nahin hai...the only problem is the word 'princesses'. Wo larki, Jainandini, she wasn't bad. Shakal se tou nahin lagta that she'd be a problem for me but her sister? Wo bhi us jaisi hui tou? Aur usse choti hui toh?! I'm not a baby sitter!" He mumbled to himself and ran a hand through his dark hair.

"So, what's the verdict?" Dr. Shiv had entered the room. Uday was too lost in his thoughts to acknowledge his entrance. He looked at him and gave a somewhat satisfied nod.

"Well, it's not bad but I just have one question, how many princesses are there?"

"Oh just two. But you'd be working for only one. The other princess is, well, she'd be none of your concern." Dr. Shiv clearly avoided the topic. It struck Uday as strange because he was being asked to be a bodyguard for both princesses and yet he had to offer his services to one? 'Ye rajwade...' He mentally rolled his eyes.

"If so then fine, I'll take this job. It doesn't seem that bad." Uday nodded in approval. Dr. Shiv smiled at his acceptance.

"Well that's all good. The paperwork is all ready; you just have to sign them. All the minor details will be taken care of by us. Nothing scary or wrong, I assure you." Dr. Shiv added when he saw Uday raise his eyebrows.

"Oh no, I was just wondering that's it? No instructions, no classes or anything of that sort." Uday shook his head a little and explained. Dr. Shiv chuckled.

"Well Mr. Uday, I think you are educated enough to know how to act in front of royals, this much I am sure of. And regarding 'anything else', well I'll just say don't do anything irrational in front of the young princess. She occasionally gets a little carried away but I'm sure you can deal with it." His smile was mysterious when he said. Not that it scared Uday, it just increased his interest in the 'job'.

'Interesting...I see mysteries in this job. Maza aega.'

"Ah, I'll take good care of that. So, shall we start the paperwork?"

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She was standing at the window of her room, looking at the brilliantly shining lights in what seemed to her, as a completely distant world. Her open hair were flying gently as the wind caressed her face.

Sighing, she shook her head and turned to go back to her bed. But as she was leaving, she saw something or rather, someone.

A man was coming from the office. He didn't seem like someone with whom they did business because he was dressed in completely casual clothes. Besides, it was pretty late at night for anyone to do anything official.

Manyata looked at him as he walked casually. He stopped and looked back at the building. His face was turned so she couldn't see it properly but she did see that he had a very good build of body. And he seemed young.

"Jiji!!! He said yes!!" J came running into the room and her excited voice made Manyata turn back. She gave the stranger one final look and walked inside to listen to her sister talk.

Uday had noticed the girl at the window too late. Before he could look at her, she had gone inside. He only caught the glimpse of her dark hair. But he stood there staring at the empty window. The curtains were moving softly with the wind and some flowers were kept at the window sill. The flowers hadn't bloomed fully which seemed strange to him. But he didn't give it any more thoughts and turned to walk outside the large palace gate.

And behind him...a closed bud at the window bloomed and winked at the moon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
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Wow Mais awesome update Bodyguard of Princess that's too good ⭐️⭐️❤️❤️ am looking forward for ManVeer first meeting 😍
Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Mais.. I am loving your FF.. there is a bit of mystery I hope he is a bodyguard for Manyata..if so poor thing he has no idea what's coming..😳😆.. and I loved your emphasis on the closed buds hence UV will help our M to bloom..so sweet and i just have to add loved UV's dialogues (these royals are impressed by anything..😆) can't wait for the next part update soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Mais,this update was brilliant.I am so looking forward to this love story.wonderful build up.Uday's character is well defined and he comes across as a self made man and now accepting this job will change his life forever in more ways than one.Manyata's character is still shrouded in mystery.looking forward to knowing more about her.and what will be Uday's reaction on seeing her?How and when will they meet? and how will their love story begin? hmmm.so many questions😆Please do update soon😃

Thanks for such a lovely update.Good job👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
wow wt an update...loving uday's character in ur ff...the entire convo with the dr revealed a lot abt his personality...he knws he's gd n the best n is so cool abt it... i knw i wud neva talk like tht 2 sum1 thts offering me a job...
hmm i guess he's jus gna b the BG of J bt y nt manyata? doesnt she go out n abt?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Ah i was missing this "ahsaas" for a few days...
Thanks Mais...for bringing that back...
Ah that sweetness of love!
You know your stories have a "Manga" or "Manhwa" like feel.
I mean they can be easily developed into graphic novels!!

How come i dint notice this before?

I am eagerly waiting for the third chapter!!
I wish when your novel is ready somebody volunteers to develop the graphic version!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
This is too good..😃 So Uday is the bodyguard here😍..

Keep on updating and Thanks a lot for the PM..👍🏼


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...love the special magic in this story...loving the concept...update soon...thanx 4 the pm

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