Manyata and Uday's Day Out! OS

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I was totally amused for the best five minutes of my life being with Uday in that "8 seater, luxurious car". "Princess Hum aa Gaaye". I said with my usual surprised tone "Yeh kya hai, hum mein Mall wall mein nahi jaana" . He got back in the car "Your command is my action Beautiful, usually hum ladkiyon ko yahin le kaar aate hain , but again man you are something else" He was driving me to another place while he turns on his Music player it plays "Tu tu hai wahi dil ne jise apna kaha" I immediately screamed my favourite song along with "Mr. Pohonchi Huyi Cheese" We both got lost into our gaze and smiled at each other together, oh the innocence of that moment I wanted that to last a little longer! We started singing together "Mil jaaye is tarah do lehare jis tarah phir hona juda haan yeh vaada raha" then the instrumental break Udayveer commented on my blush "aaj tak humne kisi bhi ladki ko aap ki tarah blush karte huye nahi dekha, waise aap blush karte huye bhi buri nahi lagti", I smiled while smacking his arm, He starts singing the male part "kisi mod pe bhi na ye saath toote mere haath se tera daaman na choote. The song finishes as we made our second stop "Uday's Restro Bar" where we met for the second time, "aap ko yaad hai humari doosri dhamake daar meeting, waise uss din aap kafi khoobsurat lag rahi thi" I was thinking in my head "Mr. Flirty Pants " he constantly flirts with every girl he sees. He said "Princess aap ne kuch kaha" I thought as if he was some sort of mind reader , I responded "Nahi , kuch bhi toh nahi". He said "let me guess aap ke liye yeh jaaga bhi good enough nahi hain na", he understood by my expression and said "By the way Beautiful, aggar is duniya mein aisi koi jaga hai jo aap ko iss waqt jana hai to hum mein bata ne mein jhijak mat kariyega" I said in a excited manner as he was driving me back "Gol gappe" he said "what?", I said "aare gaadi sorry car roko" I immediately opened my door he got out with me and said "Princess, aap yahaan ke gol gappe khayengi?" I said "bhaiyaa do plate gol gappe, ho jaaye teekhe hone chahiye" He said "pata nahi yahaan ka paani kaisa hoga, hum mein to sirf mineral water pine ki aadat hai" . I said " aaj mere liye khaa lo", he said "theek hai Princess ab hum hari hone waali maharani ke liye yeh bhi karte hain, hum mein ek baat batao , tum to ek thikhi mirch ho phir tumhe theekhe gol gappe khane ki kya zaroorat hai?" I said "Oh, theekhe gol gappe khane ka jo mazaa aata hai na woh , we said in unison "pheekhe khane mein nahi ataa hai" I gave him a clap. The server said "sir aur madame aap ke gol gappe" I ate with all my refreshing looks but Uday semeed to only look at me and how happy I was with those moments, he ate a gol gappa and seemed his mouth was on fire, and I asked the bhaiya for some water and made him drink it, he said coughing "Tensed looks aap pe acche nahi lagte" I smiled and he said "That's more like my Maharani" I said bhaiya kitna hua he said 20 rupees, Uday took out his Credit card and the bhaiyaa said hum credit card nahi lete" I luckily carried my purse with me and said "Yeh lo bhaiya yeh to chale ga na " I walked off with Uday holding his hand and he said "Aakhir ek Maharani ne apne Maharaja ki izzat bacha li" I smiled and said "Acha bachhu tumhare pankh to badhe badh rahe hain haan nahi toh" As usual Udayveer opened the door for me and said "After my Maharani" It seemed to me that I was starting to accept Udayveer with his acts.


To Be Continued...

Hope you liked this effort of mine in this OS and Thank You for all you excellent comments and suggestions and continual support!!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was amazing! Loved it, waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Liked it r u crazy i loved it plz pm me
Wen u update thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ayesha mir...hi
main bus ap sy ye pochna chati hn ky kya sahi main serial main dikhanay waly hain???ya aisa ap chati hain???plllzzz ans kijye ga!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi dekhaekkhawab Thank you so much for replying, Sorry it took so long to reply I was busy doing my chores. I have a intuition that gives me all these ideas and Yes I want all these things to happen. I am not sure about if it's going to happen in the show or not but as being a die hard Manveer fan, I always hope it does! Thank you for replying and hope this answered your questions. Thank you for taking your time to read my silly OS!!

Sincerely,
Ayesha123
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ayesha...dont call it silly i really loved it...i m also a HUGE fan of manveer...and wanted all these things to heppen in serial...thank u for ur replay...and please continue...<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing part...loved manveer being comfortable with each other...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hayee Ayesha :) this is Amazing !!! just want this to happen in the show :) plz plz continue quickly and pm me plz <3 plz dear :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shooo sweeett..continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED MANBBEERRR
uufff udaysss a killeerrr
M MESMERISESSS

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