GAAAHHH! LAMIA!!🤗
What is going on here...a reply on the first day of the update😲
I am flabbergasted, yet really happy!
Alright, so my replies are in pink
Onto reviewing your new chap! 😃
And here I am, years later second guessing myself- wondering if it makes me a bad person. Don't we all? *sigh* I don't know if we all feel like that- but I think it's unusal for males. Especially those who are of the UV variety- players, playboys, ladies men- but at the same time It's a vital part of growing up- looking at your past and judging yourself because you wonder if the person you love sees all of those fallacies and will have a different opinion of you. I really want the real UV to get there as well.
Heck just because I don't have the pathetic lost puppy thing going on doesn't mean I'm the spawn of Lucifer. 🤣 🤣 🤣 Hehehe...did you notice the jab at Majnu there...and if UV is the spawn of Lucifer...it would explain why he's so damned HOT (YES THE PUN WAS INTENDED!)😃
"Start moving Road Side Romeo!" 😆 I know! I couldnt help it- someone needs to jeer him, might as well be a stranger😉
What would it feel like being with Uday?
Yes! Yes! Finally the thoughts are swirling up! Yahoo! The question every UV lover asks around here🤔, about time M started asking it too, don't ya think?😉
He wanted her to see him.
Aww! That was one nice emotional analysis, Ree! Sometimes we wonder if people really do see us the way we actually are. I think Manyata sees Udayveer as he is. Just doubts it if it is true? Udayveer changes his emotions so fast it would be a little disbelieving for Manyata. I dunno. *shrugs* LOL! I am sooo bad with feelings and character analyzing! 😆 It's a question everyone asks, i think. "What does X see when they look at me?" not just the physical look- but the inner thoughts that come out- and we ALWAYS wonder what the people we so deseperatly care about think about us...or atleast I do. 😕
Uday: In order to get into my head, you have to let me get into yours.
Manyata: Hmmm, well there's nothing to get into.
Uday: Thank God you said it- It would have been rude if I said it.
Gosh! These two stubborn people!! 🤣 😃Just because they're in love doesnt mean we need to lose the comic edge, no?😉
I can feel like I'm falling when she opens her eyes...Manyata has to want me. *dead* *completely and utterly dead* And then I read this: In a flash she pushed me away and started swimming, her laughter matching the trail of water behind her. REEHA! 😡 I got excited! Pst. 😭😆 I was expecting to get killed after the stunt I Pulled: TWICE. Trust me, I was getting excited and while typing was thinking "Just do it Reeha- Let them kiss you b*tch!" but I took a deep breath *be patient Reeha, be patient, not yet, not yet* and controlled myself! It was difficult, I tell you.😳
AKASH! CHIKI! WHY, REEHA, WHY?! *tears a few hairs in process* *reads, holding back her tears of betrayal caused by one of her FF writers* OOH, WAIT! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! I LOVE dishoom dishooms! 🤣 I LOVE DISHOOM DISHOOMS TOO! God, if it were up to me UV would kick Majnu's butt every time he sees the little squirrel. BUT realisitically that is not possible, hence why I let UV get it all out in this one---maybe later as well?😉 I'm sorry again about the teasing (regards to the Manveer kiss almost happening) but don't worry, I WILL make up for it and redeam myself in your eyes😳
I loved the entire action sequence. The raging emotions fueled by Majnu's lack of understanding. The dude just needs to grow past his infatuation for the princess. He needs to wake up. I know people say love is blind but is it really? I think love sees the other person for what he/she is, sees what is going around them, understands it... Sadly, Akash lacks that ability. No wonder it's not love. Are you trying to showcase that? Oh, please tell me my 🤓y analyzing worked! You know what, this thought has actually inspired me to write out a post...because I think what I am trying to dictate in the UVCs in regards to Akash...is possible. It would be awesome if some watered down version of this happens. It could actually work. 🤔
And oh, "the meatball headed girl" - Niiice! 🤣 Hey! I gotta give my girl a shout-out ya know? 😎
You could not have left it with a better ending than the "I love you, Manyata" and her wordlessly telling it back to him - I am having a BIG smile on my face now. I love how you pen down UV-M's emotions, their banters, their thoughts... It's obviously so close to what we feel when we are with a special person... 
ink LAWLS. For a moment I didnt see the "not" between the words "could" and " have" and I thought to myself...oh crap what a Fail. Too soon, he shouldnt have said I love you if that's what Lamia is saying. THEN I re-read it a couple times and give myself this: LOL. Thank you- I think UV realizes he loves her...and willing to say it. Manyata can't but UV is intutive enough to read her face.
Thank you for your LOVELY analysis, and I look forward to the next one!🤗