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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
I WANT TO SLAUGHTER THIS AKASH. *glares* Such an awesome update, such a sweet and intimate moment - then the stupid Akash comes and spoils it? Grr. So arrogant and, how dare he insinuate such things about Manyata and Uday? And he has the gall to say that he'll forgive her? For what exactly? Being human? Falling in love? >.< If he truly loved her, he'd want her to be happy, no matter who she was with, and he'd never insinuate such things about her. I want to kill him!

Love Uday's POV though - especially when they were building the castle. So true, and so sweet! (AND HE TOLD HER HE LOVES HER! *flails*)

Gaah! Anhdara! Was looking forward to your reaction! and you did not dissapoint!🤗Trust me, I feel exactly the same way about "this" Akash. BUT...what I'm hoping is, while Moniya is turning into Manyata during the show...the real Akash feels slightly like this. I say this because the Real Akash is so high on M being "his" that I seriously don't think he'd believe that Manyata could fall inlove with UV...so I really hope it goes this way, not technically speaking but I'd love to see glimpses of the insecure, and slightly psychotic Majnu😉 I'm glad you enjoyed the updated! thank you for reading and stay tunned for 14 <3

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

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have to go out now, will come back and comment!😊

*EDITED*

REEEHAAA!!! 🤗
Did i tell you i absolutely LOVE your name?!?love the way it sounds!😳
oh and exams eh!? how did they go?? i know it might generally be like dude who cares about how they went, just glad that they are over!😆 at least thats how it is for me!😃

Coming to the update. It was awesome as always! This one was really cute! The MANVEER moments, all just so sweet and romantic! this update is added to my favorite ones!😳
From the beginning itself i had that everlasting smile which i tell you only disappeared for a minute or two when that majnu made his entry but when you showed what was going through manyata's mind, it was back again!😆 and when UV said 'I love you manyata! ' OMG OMG!!! i was actually blushing!😳 that was just so CUTE!!!
There were those small small things which made the update just so special! the whole Frisbee scene, the way manyata showed concern for uday when he fell on his back and also when aakash kicked him!
i soo loved them!
Especially the part when they were gonna kiss! loved the fact that he wanted HER to kiss him first and not him kissing her!😆
and finally when they were gonna kiss that b*stard aakash came over there!😡
but never the less at least manyata would have realized that what she felt for aakash was just mere infatuation and not love. What she has started to feel for udayveer is love 😃

Oh and the best part i liked in the update even more than their about-to-happen-kiss was when udayveer showed his middle finger to the driver behind him 🤣 i absolutely loved that part! and to be honest i actually read that part like 4-5 times! i mean that poor guy can't do such stuff cause he's a royal and whenever he gets to do such stuff i so so sooo love it!😃

And the last part when UV says I LOVE YOU to manyata and she runs her hand over his face! huh! i was blushing jumping and literally screaming! 🤪 that was just so cute! and i then went into the dreamland of manveer where she ended up kissing him finally! and UV's wish comes true!😆😳

Waiting DESPERATELY for the next update!

love
Navpreet

Edited by dimpzz - 13 years ago

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Rukhsar ahmed

@honeey95

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

suppperrr dupppeerrr cuuttteee loved the ending hope somting like that happens in the shooowww :)))))))))

cut wait for the net part please post sooonnn !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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salekh1

@salekh1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

😉OKAY

wOAHHH REEHA😳
you always always out do your self

Every time i think it cant get better, IT GETS BETTER

this i beleive was the most HOT, SENSOUSE, PLAYFUL, AND UNDERSTANDING chapter of all

I LOVEEED EVERY SINGLE WORD.

Loved how uday became possesive..

and really really want tto read more😃

What happens?

CANT WIAT

pleaseee pelaseee continue soon 😃

Thank you so much for the PM😳

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: shrarrti
Reeha I don't even know what to say to you. This update is so romantic. They way Udhay stepped in when Akash insulted her was amazing. And for once I'm glad Manyata didn't step in until it was getting out of hand. And she realized what he had implied.

I do not know how I am going to wait until the next update. I can only say I wish the cvs would read your updates and try to incorporate some of it. Even 1% would improve the show so much.

PREEETTT <3🤗

You just saying "Hi" is enough for me! I'm glad you liked the part, and yes I felt it was important for M to keep her mouth during this beating, espeicially since when Majnu was really getting beat up in the show, we had to hear her and another classic song get butchered🤢 You'll manage the wait, you're always the most pateint😳..but trust me the wait is just a few days at most! GAAHH! I hope the CVs can use SOME of it...honestly I only write if I'm irritated at the show. So if the show makes me happy there's no need for an FF 😆

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

Brilliantly written reeha...as always👏👏👏👏

You brought out Uday's hesitance very well...whilst he is very used to dealing with girls & having them wanting him...it is the first time HE is wanting the girl. His confusion, his inability to understand his feelings...typically FIRST LOVE type experience!!!! Simply superb!

The beach time was portrayed very nicely...both exploring each other...getting to know their own selves also! Loved the philosophy - If we renovate something, or add something on, that's not to say we don't love it, or like it...but rather that we need it to change with us, as our needs change- it's a simple fact of life Manyata. It's not about destroying the old, but enhancing it to make it new. Never knew our Yuvraj Udayveer was capable of such thoughts😳

Its good to see Manyata's increasing comfort level with UV!!

This part seems very important from the perspective of the whole story...quite a turning point...where Manyata's perspective of Uday as well as Akash is undergoing major shifts😊

Looking fwd to the next update!

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Wow very beautifully written Reeha! I loved it! The love forming between Manveer is so pure. Their date was so romantic, it was nice to see them getting to know one another for who they are without any royal obligations. Urgh Akash makes me mad, he needs to accept he's lost Manyata. I couldn't stop smiling when Uday confessed his love, so adorable. Waiting for the next part eagerly⭐️