The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 42

Where is the love button? Where? Where? WHERE!?!??! Like is just not ENOUGH for this part! OMG! REEHA! This has to be one of the BEST things I've EVER read!! Every single thing was running like a film in my head.

You say I write good scenes? SHUT UP! Mine are nothing compared to these! Uff, the balcony scene was just AMAZING! I could so imagine it! I love it when guys come to meet the girl at balcony like this, throwing stones and all. Specially cute guys (so Majnu doesn't even come in the equation). What to say? everything about this update was so perfect! I was so lost in it that I didn't even notice the minor errors you had done :P Kidding, I did. But it's okay! Hojata hai. The Manyata-Brijraj scenes are always so adorable!

You know, the dhaba scene was giving me hints like, "Eh? Eh? This seems so familiar..." and when I saw that asterisk and the note below I was like AWWWHHH!!! You used one of my ideas! SO TOUCHED! Ab I'll use yours! I always wanted to write a balcony scene and you just gave me an awesome idea for it. Thank you!

Sleeping in the cinema - EEEPPPSSS!! SO CUTE!!!! Saying such famous lines of DDLJ - SUPER EEEPPPSSS!!! And her response - OMG SUPER DUPER MAJOR EEEPPPSSS!! *dead*

Oh, they are being together again! oh oh oh!!! OMG!! I can't wait for more! THIS IS SO GOOD!! MASHALLAH!!! Update SOON! I hardly get addicted to FFs and this one is driving me crazy!

Originally posted by: shrarrti

...This update was wonderful Reeha! I can't help but wish it was longer, but you know I'll wait patiently until the next one! 😃

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update loved it he is doing so much to make her feel comfortable with him he is so sweet he is eating thing just because she fed him that was so cute they are getting very close loved it thanks for the pm

Thank you so much! (Is Dumas your name, or is there something else I should call you?) I really appreciate the feedback of what you liked, and thank you so much for the images! It feels like a present😳😆

I wish they wud hqve kissed in de theatre bt it was amazing long and beautiful update

Originally posted by: manveerlover

I wish they wud hqve kissed in de theatre bt it was amazing long and beautiful update

Haha! I'm terrible arent I?

Don't worry, it will happen!😉

Originally posted by: DEKfan2012

Hi Reeha,

It was really well written and also well portrayed...just little things here and there made it sooo romantic but REAL at the same time. I wish the CV's would go this way...

And, one day I am looking forward to reading a novel that you get published on your own...you certainly have the talent for it.

I am also a big fan of Kesarmania's weekly bulletins...don't you also think she can approach the online publications for her own blog? Seriously, this forum has a few really talented writers...hope you all pursue this in future...

Kesarmania does a FAB job: she actually could use Tumblr and some other site to have a blog: she's awesome😊 As for a book by me; I started writing one a while back, and have yet to finish. The leads were Darren and Esha, and I have yet to finish their love saga😆

Originally posted by: -Mais-

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You know, the dhaba scene was giving me hints like, "Eh? Eh? This seems so familiar..." and when I saw that asterisk and the note below I was like AWWWHHH!!! You used one of my ideas! SO TOUCHED! Ab I'll use yours! I always wanted to write a balcony scene and you just gave me an awesome idea for it. Thank you!

Sleeping in the cinema - EEEPPPSSS!! SO CUTE!!!! Saying such famous lines of DDLJ - SUPER EEEPPPSSS!!! And her response - OMG SUPER DUPER MAJOR EEEPPPSSS!! *dead*

Oh, they are being together again! oh oh oh!!! OMG!! I can't wait for more! THIS IS SO GOOD!! MASHALLAH!!! Update SOON! I hardly get addicted to FFs and this one is driving me crazy!

Oh Maisy! You always bring a smile to my face!