The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

😃😛😳HAYE HAYE HAYE

Reeeha your going to kill me one day!

Your update was fully like a awsomely fatastic moive, they way you wrote it was just so perfect, like alwaysss..

IT WAS AMAZING

enough said, it was beaitufl

Pleaseee continue soon

and Thank you soo much for the PM😃

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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Hmmm what do I love about this update? The fact that they both know that there is love between them. It's just a feeling, but it's there! And I loved how Udhay was able to show Manyata the other side of him. The side she needed to see to fall for him. AND not to mention he was the first name she thought of when she was scared. This update was wonderful Reeha! I can't help but wish it was longer, but you know I'll wait patiently until the next one! 😃

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: reeha...k

LOL I do that EVERY Time actually, I just amened them faster😆 They're fixed now, thankfully🤔 and I think I got most of the errors, but honestly I don't want to read it another time, so if you see a big one, let me know and I'll fix it. Thank you Anhdara, I always look forward to your feedback😊

aww. haha, me too! what i do is make someone read through for me - you should find a beta-reader. (I'll volunteer if it means getting to read the chapters in advance, I'm all for it! 😉😆)

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

it was [no prizes for what i'm going to say] 😆 amazing! 😃

okay..so i know that word might be annoying..but that's all I can ever say after reading your updates...😆

The DHABA and the BIKE RIDE totally did it for me. I think I was floating when I read them, 😍😆

the wait was WORTH it!!! 😉😆😃

p.s. royal chronicles is a totally unique idea..checking it out! 😃

megz.😳

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

i loved it..it was simply beautiful..yeh upodate padhkarr poori tarah se mazaa aagaya..from the start of the update to the end i was like this is so sweeettt...Uday & Manyata's day out on the bike, the little things they did, the talks they shared, their eyes conveying the unsaid emotions, the aura of happiness surrounding the two of them...it was simply beautiful... wonderfully written...very sweettt...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

nice part..

i really love seeing the prince as Uday simply and not UdayVeer...

it was awesome...

both of them at the dhaaba and then the movie part...

amazing...

and the first bit...lol...that was so funny...

she mistook that person for a thug and was asking help from UV when he was that person only...hehe...

continue soon...

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DEKfan2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Hi Reeha,

It was really well written and also well portrayed...just little things here and there made it sooo romantic but REAL at the same time. I wish the CV's would go this way...

And, one day I am looking forward to reading a novel that you get published on your own...you certainly have the talent for it.

I am also a big fan of Kesarmania's weekly bulletins...don't you also think she can approach the online publications for her own blog? Seriously, this forum has a few really talented writers...hope you all pursue this in future...

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srishaa16

@srishaa16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Awww such a cute update.Reeha your ff really brightens up my day especially when we have a extra depressing epi.

Reeha I love you for creating this OS.