Written on the Stars (IMP NOTE-- PG 7)

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528223

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

I swear to God, you're out to torture me, aren't you? D:

Now, I want you to update really badly even though I know you won't be able to... ):

Either way, continue sooon! :)

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moksha89

@moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

sooo good! seriously! like i said before, the CVs should get some ideas from you!

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samikshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

YeAh..AnD Me ToOo.>!
PM MeEe ToOO..!

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samikshya

@samisweethrt

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

😛IN the couple dance ..u cud have also showed .i mean written bout jai nandini's jealousy on seeing uday and manyata so close and dat would have added smthin spicy to the story and even manyata wud be luking so good ..u cud have also written about uday veer's jealousy on watching other guys trying to hook up wid manyata for a dance..THAT WUD HAVE BEEN FUN..!😆

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awww...!!!!! Awsome story I was actually reading it without Looking away.!

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Woww awesome love very bit of it you are a gifted writer👏👏❤️❤️⭐️⭐️ Uday is Uday the way he planted the kiss only Uday can do that and ManVeer dance is marvellous

Thxs for the pm🤗

I'll wait till the next update

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Tulip92

@Tulip92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Wow cornelia!!😉

it was fascinating...😎

loved every part..! Good job⭐️, i went on reading without pausing, wanting to know what's next.. 😍

**Applause**👏👏

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

This was sooo beautiful 👏 Awwie..Unnati and Manyata's bonding was really very good 😃 I actually want them to bond this way..Uday and Manyata make a perfect couple..Their scenes were very well described 😳 continue soon..please ⭐️

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Hey!!!!

Loving the story!!!!

Do add me to ur pm list!!!

continue soon!!!

take care

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660428

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Hmmm...I should ask for more things t an even higher rate of dissatisfaction, seeing that I generally get my wishes! *Over here, I am kind of quoting my mum, so yeah, not exactly nice*

Annnyhoots, back on topic, I LOVED the updates! You managed to keep UV sweet AND mean, I don't know how people do that! But anyways, great job! And thank you for the long update, nearly had me scared by the beginning of your reply!

Oh, and btw, I absolutely fell in love with the last line!

Edited by storybooksgd - 13 years ago

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