Written on the Stars (IMP NOTE-- PG 7)

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neahakhan

@neahakhan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome ff love
Please do continue and add me to ur pm list:)

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Minz aka Minnie

@*Dakoo_Minzy*

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awww very cute i love this

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528223

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

OMG! I LOOVE THIS! :)

The first chapter was a little heartbreaking, but I guess the situation just calls for a little sorrow.

The second chapter, on the other hand, shows the true Uday. The real one; not the public one. And his relationship with Unnati is lovely. It's always nice to have a sibling who doesn't hate you and plots against you. ;)

Oh, and can you add me to your PM list? Thaaanks! :)

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filmyprincess

@filmyprincess

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Amazing ff loved it :) ❤️ please add me in the pm list :)

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awesomeprachi

@awesomeprachi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

You write very well! Continue writing! And please add me to PM list!

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660428

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

YAAAYYY! *does a happy dance jig around* An update and it has what I asked for!!!! Okay, TECHNICALLY, we didn't get any real Maanveer, but, *waves an airy hand around*, details, details, what do they matter?

I hope the next update is longe,r not that this wasn't a long one, but I am just an impatient, greedy reviewer. *shrugs*