Written on the Stars (IMP NOTE-- PG 7)

Hi guys, I just started watching the show and it's got me hooked😛. I was impatient to wait for Monday's episode, so I wrote my version. I hope you'll like it. 😃 oh btw any criticisms or comments are welcome. 😊

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Part 3-6--> Page 4 (END)😃

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Part 1

Everything in the past was a lie. Her trust was broken; from Murari'who she'd love all these years more than anything else, from Akash'in whom she had started to see a lover and a true friend who would never leave her side, and from life'which she thought was filled with happiness and nothing else. With the help of Jainandani, she was able to escape the palace. She was little surprised when Uday who was well aware of her plan to escape didn't do anything to stop her. After lots of heart breaks, she yet had to face the biggest of all.

Seeing his back towards her, she called with all the energy that was left in her, "Baba!"

Murari knew she would come to see him for the last time. He had his reasons to take her away from the palace and from her loved ones. He knew someone was trying to hurt her in the palace. So, he had to do anything that was possible to save her. However, the little girl had taken his heart with her sweet innocent smile. After the incident, the rest is history. He knew that someday he will get punished for breaking so many hearts and taking Manyata away from her loved ones. The day had come. His Monya was gone and now infront of him stood the princess, Manyata who was looking at him expectantly to answer all her questions. He turned around and all of a sudden found her crying in his arms. She hugged on to him for sympathy and protection but he stood still as hard as stone.

"Why have you come?"

Hearing the numbness in his voice, she looked at him confused. Not able to bear her accusing eyes, he turned around and said, "You should leave Princess Manyata. His Highness will not be pleased to find out that you came to see me."

"What are you saying, Baba? (crying) I don't care about any Queen or King. I don't care if they will be happy or not. All that matters to me is you. I've spent all my life under your shadow. They weren't there to caress my hair when I couldn't fall asleep. They weren't there to hold my hand before I fell down. How can you expect me to care about them, especially that old, cranky, stupid lady?"

"Aye Monya, she's your grandma!"

"But baba, you never told me you had a mother!"

"That's because I am not your baba."

The truth was out. He didn't want to reveal it to her like this but he didn't have any choice. It was time to reveal the truth. He walked towards the only window in the dark room.

"I was a guard at the palace. You were born to Maharaj Brijraj and Maharani Komal. You had the smile that could turn even the hardest stone into the softest flower. Everyone in the palace adored you. However, there were some people who were jealous because Badi Maharani had named all her properties in your name. Once I was walking by when I heard someone saying that they were planning to kill you at the party that was going to take place that night. I was going to run to Badi Maharani when the person stopped me. Because the room was dark, I couldn't see the person's face but his voice made him sound dangerous. I pleaded him not to do any harm to you. He made a deal with me that if I want I can save you but for that I will have to take you away from everyone in the palace. I could have told you the truth but I became selfish. I started loving you like my own daughter and just wasn't ready to give you up."

He turned around to look at Manyata who was sitting like a stone on the bench. He knew this was the end. He went infront of her, bent down and kissed her forehead with love. His Monya was gone. It was time for the final farewell. He stood up, bowed down to her with respect and left with one of the officers back to his cell. Before leaving, he whispered, "May God bless you my princess." A tear on the cheeks and he was gone out her life forever.

Omg !! Thank you so much...this I think the very first ff on ManVeer..🤗❤️ loved reading the first part ❤️ do continue ...no pressure..hehe lovely ff btw 😃

😊 it was so sweet! i could see this happening in the actual serial, too! good job!

Thanks for posting, i like it very , please continue soon :-))

It rocks! You're a GREAT writer! I really like the way that the story is a sort of extension from the point at which we currently are in the serial. It makes it seem like I am reading top-secret future screenplay documents!

awesome start keep it up!

Awwsumm dudettee relli thought dis wuld happen in reel :psweet nd nyc ff update soon nd add me to ur pm list

enjoyed the first part very much continue soon please!

Comment Replies 😃

@ filmyprincess "Omg !! Thank you so much...this I think the very first ff on ManVeer. loved reading the first part do continue ...no pressure..hehe lovely ff btw " lol'I know right. I was searching for ffs for a long time but they only had os. So I thought why not write one myself. I'm so happy you liked it thank you. Next part coming up in an hour.

@ moksha89 "it was so sweet! i could see this happening in the actual serial, too! good job!" Omg really, lol thank u. I've been having dreams about this serial though. This has got me hooked. Lmao :D

@ AmishiE "Thanks for posting, i like it very , please continue soon :-))" You're welcome and thank you for liking it so much. You're wish is granted. I'm posting the next part in an hour. Cheers :D

@ storybooksgd "It rocks! You're a GREAT writer! I really like the way that the story is a sort of extension from the point at which we currently are in the serial. It makes it seem like I am reading top-secret future screenplay documents!

One request...Pleaaase, next chapter, Maanveer and also, it should be posted fast, pretty please?" Thank you! Aww, that's too much taarif now (lol kidding). Really? I hope the story goes similar to this, right? Your wishes are granted balika. Babaji is happy with u (lol jk again) :D posting the next part in an hour.

@adventure_gurl "awesome'..start keep it up!" Thank '..you next part almost here :D ain't I fast ;)

@Suvi7884 "great start!" gracious senorita :D I hope you'll like the next part too.

@Manahil192 "Awwsumm dudettee relli thought dis wuld happen in reel :psweet nd nyc ff update soon nd add me to ur pm list" kk'glad u likes it. I wish it would happen it real (kinda, not really'umm actually I don't know) he he..I'll have the next part up soon (very soon) ;)

@iqbals4ever "enjoyed the first part very much continue soon please!" Awesome'.I enjoyed writing it too. Just couldn't wait till Monday. We should have that show like every day. Lol thank you.

Part 2

Prince Uday had always been the dream boy of every girl. It took him seconds to make a girl fall for him. For girls he was a pure example of "perfection." For the first time in his life, a girl had stepped up and told him that he was nothing close to perfect. She had cursed at him, called him names, and had boldly scratched his hand hardly enough to leave a mark. He smiled remembering their first meeting. It was in their second meeting that he started realizing that she wasn't just another girl. She was special. The scar on her back reminded him of his fianc, Princess Manyata who they had lost 16 years ago.

Ever since then, he had been waiting for Manyata, his lost princess who had become his life line. It's true he always used her; even during her absence. She was his excuse from being in any kind of commitment with any girl. Even now she was helping him get to the richness that he and his father had dreamed of. However, deep down she had awaken something inside him; a new kind of feeling that he never felt before.

He remembered his conversation with Unnati, his sister. When he was about to marry Jay, she had tried to convince him to think before marrying the girl who he couldn't stand for more than 20 seconds. She had looked at him and said, "Bhai, I know even you are searching for true love in your life." He was a prince for whom duties came before anything or anyone else. There was no place for emotions such as love which did nothing but made a person weak. An example of this was his princess's lover boy who was turning into Devdas for Manyata. However, he had removed Aakash out of his way as well.

When Aakash came to meet Manyata, Uday had called him in to tell him that Manyata can no longer see him anymore. The guy blind in love didn't understand and Uday threw him out of the palace. He had convinced Aakash's parents to get him married to other girl. Aakash bounded by his duty as son agreed to get married. Uday knew that Aakash won't give up so soon. However, he was least worried about him. His main focus was Manyata.

He knew that she would never believe them unless she heard it from Murari's mouth. So he had to take Jay's help. Jay jealous as always wanted Manyata out of her life and so was the wish of Manyata. He closed his eyes remembering all the past events. He remembered all his fights with Manyata. He smirked to himself. "You really are a Jugli Billi, princess." Unnati had said that he wanted a girl who was a challenge but he never expected her to be this big of a challenge. He was smiling to himself, sitting on his comfortable couch, reading a newspaper. Unnati came in with breakfast and greeted him.

"Bhai, what is this? I heard Manyata is back and now yours and Jay's marriage is canceled? This is wrong Bhai. I mean even though I don't like Jay, I don't think it's fair for her you know and for you either. I mean you should get a chance to make your own choice right? (Making tea) And I heard Manyata is one heck of a girl. Doctor Uncle told me how wild she is and how rudely she talked to Dadisa. But I don't blame that girl either. Any girl in her right senses would be mad if you took away all her loved ones. I really think we should give her ore time instead of locking in a room or tying her in a chair. What do you think Bhai? (Giving him the cup of tea)"

She looked up to see her brother grinning to himself, lost in his thoughts with the magazine upside down.

"Bhai. Bhai. Bhai!"

"Huh' What Happen?

"I am talking to you for past 15 minutes and you're not even paying attention."

"No, it's not like that. I was just reading this magazine and got lost. Look at this; the stock price for McDonalds is really low. I want to buy some as their business is doing really good."

"Yeah right. I'm not that stupid. Your magazine is upside down. Bhai, what's wrong with you?"

"(giving up) I'm just wondering'"

"About Princess Manyata?"

His smile said it all. He couldn't hide anything from his sister, so he told her everything from the begging'their heated meetings, how she tried to attack him so many times. All this time, Unnati noticed there was a spark in her brother's eyes. She had this gut feeling that Manyata was going to bring a major change in her brother's life. Even though he didn't accept it, she knew somewhere deep down he felt for Manyata. The way he talked about Manyata so possessively said it all.

"So how is she after meeting Murari? She must be broken."

"Yes, she was. Also, I gave her the bad news of her lover getting married."

"But Bhai he can't help it. He loves her'"

"But he has to understand that Manyata can never be his."

"Yeah you're right but how did Manyata react and how about Dadisa?"

"Dadisa was little worried at first but when I told her my plan, she looked satisfied but little worried about the princess. Manyata just gave me that hurt look. I brought her home and she didn't say anything. She went right back to her room. On the way, I told her she looks fat just to tease her and she didn't even attack me!"

"Why would you say that to a girl?"

"I just wanted a reaction from her? She had to emotions in her eyes, not even anger."

"What do you expect then? I mean everything is taken away from her."

"Yeah, you're right but the sooner she accepts the truth the better."

"Also, she doesn't have anyone to support her or be friends with her."

"(Uday thinking for a while) why don't you try to talk to her?"

"What!"

"Yeah, why not?"

"You just told me how she tried to attack you so many times. Are you crazy?"

"Nah, come on. Give it a try. Everyone tried talking to her except you. Maybe she'll like you."

After giving it a second thought, she decided she will talk to her future babhi. She didn't know where this was heading but had a feeling this was going to end up into something beautiful, maybe it will blossom into a beautiful flower of friendship or love.

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