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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi guys...I am still working on next update..actually its festive time and I have my whole family here...so I just cant find time...sorry for the delay..will try to update soon
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Hi guys. ..I have been ill. ..Hence the delay. ..I have actually shortened the chapter. ...so some dose of Swadarsh left for the next update. ..hope you like it

CHAPTER 3

Adarsh looked at the screen of the laptop again. No use. He just couldn't get back to work. All thanks to Swadheenta Ramakrishnan. He had least expected to see her again. He had been thrilled to see her again. Now back in his office couldn't get her out of his head. After all she was the only girl Adarsh Sinha had liked in all these years. He still hadn't forgotten a single detail about his brief encounter with Swadheenta years ago at Shraddha's wedding. He leaned onto his chair and closed his eyes.

*****Flashbacks * * * * * * *

Adarsh roamed around bored. I should have stayed at home, he thought as he looked around . There were so many people around and yet he was bored. Not that he wasn't social but he didn't know most people here . This was the first time he had come to Chennai and he didn't understand a word in Tamil. Moreover he knew only a few of the guests present.

He couldn't help wish he had just not agreed to accompany Mom and Bhabhi. It was all because of Shraddha and Akshay. Shraddha was his classmate and family friend. Akshay was his mom's best friend's son. So when they were told that the wedding was being held in the couple's hometown Chennai, Mom had insisted that someone should attend the wedding. Dad was too busy , Jai bhai was on an official trip and Abhay had classes. He himself had just cleared his Civil service exams and was free. So he had offered to accompany the ladies. But now he was bored.

He looked around again as he moved backwards and collided with someone. The next thing he saw was flowers flying all around. Flowers falling from the plate she had been holding. She herself was now picking up the plate and the flowers . He couldn't see her face veiled by her hair. She was saying something, which sounded like scolding , in Tamil.

She lookedat him and he couldn't take his eyes off hers. She looked so beautiful. He smiled unaware of himself.

"Paithiyama onkalukku? Evalo nerama kathrein. Sirichukitte irukkenke. " (are you crazy? I am shouting for a long time and you are smiling. " ) she asked.

He didn't understand a word but he knew she was offended. Yet he couldn't help smile at her cuteness.

" Accha. Gussa bahut aata hai aapko. Par gusse mein bhi cute lagti hai. " He said smiling thinking she hadn't understood .

" Kya kaha aapne? " she asked .

He looked shocked. What was he thinking? Just because she spoke Tamil didn't mean she didn't know Hindi.

" I was saying sorry. "He tried to say.

"Tum ladke saare ladkiyon ko idiots maante ho? " she asked.

Before he could reply Shraddha came over to them.

"Hi Adarsh. Meet my cousin Swadheenta Ramakrishnan. Delhi law college mein padaai kar rahi hai. Aur Swadheenta, yeh Adarsh Sinha hai. Mera school friend. Abhi civil service exams clear kiya hai isne. " Shraddha said introducing them as they greeted each other with a polite hi.

Adarsh noticed that she seemed relaxed and amused after the introduction.

She excused herself and headed to get more flowers when a man stopped her. He couldn't make out what they were saying but he seemed to be scolding her. Shraddha told him it was Swadheenta ' s Appa. He was telling her that it was irresponsible of her to drop the flowers. Shraddha went to them and intervened telling him it was an accident . The man left after telling Swadheenta to be a bit more careful.

As soon as Shraddha left the place Adarsh went to her and apologised.

" Its ok. I know you didn't do it on purpose. " She told him smiling.

" Haan par daath toh padi na. Sorry. Will you have coffee with me. "He asked.

He was surprised at himself. He had asked a girl out for coffee! ! Thank god Abhay wasn't around.

"Wah. Chance pe dance? Mujhe coffee nahin peena. " She said smiling and left.

*******(Present ) *******

That smile haunted him still. Beckoning. Mischievous. He had spent the entire day thinking of her just like today. He remembered their encounters.

******Flashbacks * * * * * *

It was night. And a beautiful one. While the parents hadn't allowed a bachelor party, they had allowed the youngsters to have a bonfire and games. Shraddha and Akshay had invited him and Bhabhi too. He now sat near the pool with a slight headache thanks to loud music. He felt someone coming towards him. He turned back and saw her coming. She was looking behind her worried as if something was bothering her. When she caught sight of him she smiled . He got up and went to her.

"Yahaan kya kar rahi ho? " he asked.

" Headache. I am not the party type. " She said smiling.

" Same here. "He said and continued " Waise coffee peene se headache kam ho jaata hai. "

She raised her eyebrows and smiled.

"I don't want coffee. " She said leaving.

Adarsh smiled looking at her. It was then that he noticed that a boy was looking him. Before he could see him properly he ran away.

The next day he saw her during various rituals but never got a chance to talk to her.

The next day both the families were going to visit a famous temple. Adarsh was going to leave with his mom and Bhabhi but Shraddha asked him to accompany her. He was waiting for her in the car when Swadheenta brought her. He couldn't take his eyes offSSwadheenta. She was dressed in a traditional half saree with traditional jewellery . She looked like a princess who had walked out of a book. He smiled at her but she looked away. As Shraddha got into the car, Swadheenta went back to take something. He tried to talk to her but she left in a haste after giving him a killer smile. He tried to leave behind her but caught sight of her talking to the boy who Adarsh had seen last night.

"Woh ladka kaun hai? " Adarsh asked Shraddha.

" Swadheenta ka bhai. Actually uske purane neighbours ka beta hai. They are very close. So she says Asad is her brother. "Shraddha said.

Once Swadheenta returned they left for the temple. Everyone was waiting for them and took Shraddha inside the temple while Swadheenta and Adarsh were told to bring the prasad and gifts from the car. As they were taking it Adarsh felt someone standing close to him. He turned around just in time to see a man trying to steal his wallet. He caught the man's hand. Realising that he was caught the man tried to make an eescape. Adarsh tried to restrain him and the man pulled out a knife. Adarsh held on and the man attacked him injuring his hand slightly. Before he could strike again, he fell to the ground while Adarsh looked confused. Swadheenta had hit him with a stick . People who had gathered helped restrain him and took him to the station.

" Are you ok. "Swadheenta askasked looking at his hand.

He nodded taking out his handkerchief .She took it from him and tied it around his injured palm.

" Thanks. Tum nahin aati toh problem ho jaati. Waise ek thank you coffee toh pee sakti ho. " He said smiling.

" Tumhari ghar mein coffee nahin milta hai kya? Chup chaap andar chalo. " She said smiling as she went into the temple.

Adarsh took the last plate and went up the stairs calling her when he noticed her brother peeping from behind a wall. Adarsh smiled at him but the boy left again.

That evening a sangeet function was conducted. Adarsh was taken by surprise when he saw Swadheenta among the group of girls from the bride's side who were dancing. He sat mesmerised watching her. Though he himself wasn't much of a dancer he could say she was rather good at it.

Towards the end of the function he was looking for her to tell her how good she was on the stage. He saw her standing with her father. He was about to turn around when he overheard a bit of their conversation. Notthat he understood anything but she was crying and her father seemed angry. He saw her father leave while she sat there alone away from the commotion. He didn't know why but he went to her and sat down opposite her. She looked at him curiously. They sat silently for a few minutes.

"Kuch laao tumhare liye? "He asked.

" Coffee nahin. " She said smiling.

He smiled and got her a glass of water. Then once again there was silence but she broke it this time.

"Appa is a bit angry. He wanted me to perform a classical dance at the sangeet. Par main kya karti. Aaj sangeet hai. Everyone wanted something vibrant. He felt bad. Keh rahe the career toh apni pasand ki chun li meri khushike liye ek performance toh kar sakti thi. " She said sadly.

" so your dad didn't want you to be a lawyer? " He asked.

" Mere parents ek dance academy chalaate hain. Naturally unhe laga unki eklauti beti take over karegi someday. Bachpan mein mujhe bhi yahin lagta tha. Par phir maine realise kiya ki I am not cut for it. This is not the kind of audience I want. Appa maan toh gaye par unhe bura laga. " She explained.

"Toh lawyer banne ka kab Socha? "He asked.

" Thats because of Maamu. Haider Maamu jinke saath main Delhi mein rahti hoon. Asad ke dad. I think you must have met Asad. " When he nodded she continued " I wanted to help people. Par kaise mujhe nahin pata tha. Maamu ne yeh suggest kiya. He is always right. Par pata hai mujhe law mein actual interest toh pichhle ek saal se aaya hai. All thanks to Advocate Suhasini Sinha. My inspiration. "

Adarsh was surprised.

" Suhasini Sinha? Have you met her? "He asked.

" No. Unka ek article pada. Aur unpe research kiya. She is just awesome. Main unse ek baar milna chahti hoon. I haven't even seen her picture. I want to get the full impact when I meet her. "Swadheenta said happily.

Adarsh laughed hearing this. This girl was obsessed with his mom.

" Has kyun rahe ho? Isliye main kisi ko nahin bataati hoon. " She said irritated.

" No. I was just wishing I was Suhasini Sinha. "He said.

She made a face at him.

" Waise I am gonna make your wish come true. Milaaonga tumhe unse. Kal. " He said.

" No way. "She said frowning.

" Yes way. I know her. Really well. "He said.

She smiled and got up to leave.

" Waise yahaan paas ek acchi coffee shop hai. Kal main jaaongi. Would you like to join me? "She asked with a killer smile.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

Adarsh smiled and opened his eyes. If not for that stupid misunderstanding that had occurred the next day things might have been different. Maybe they would have dated or even married.

He brushed off that thought. He was crazy. He didn't love her. It was just the feeling of seeing your first crush after years. And anyway it didn't matter. He tightened the ring he wore reminding himself of his commitment to Vanshika.

Then he returned to his work.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for ch-3.😳
Unresed. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
SwaDarsh's FB part was really nice. 😳 Waiting to know what caused MU between them. 😕
Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear it was a really nice update Please update next part soon will wait eagerly for the next part dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update. 👏
Swadheenta came to Adharsh's rescue. But poor her, appa doesn't seem too pleased with his daughter.
So she was obsessed with the Suhasni Sinha 😆
Wonder what was the misunderstanding. 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh man, what misunderstanding? . If their recent meeting is anything to go by, they didn't seem to have any misunderstandings. So did they meet again to sort things out? God, I am so concerned now...That ring on his finger has me more bothered and worked up than even him I guess 😆. Nikal ke phek do usko...

Their past was so cute. But it doesn't look like Abhay is aware of any of it. Also, Swadheenta and Simmi are bachpan ke friends... so has Swadheenta lived away from her family always? Because Swadheenta's parents are in Chennai and Simmi in Delhi... or maybe she met Simmi during her visits to maamu's place when she was young? 🤔.


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Hi guys. ...sorry for the delay. ...I have been sick for some time now. ...This chapter is short and is only to explore what is going on in Swadheenta's mind regarding Adarsh. ..so sorry for not giving you much of Swadarsh here.

CHAPTER 4

Swadheenta entered Ahuja house in a hurry. The security had told her that Simmi and her father were both home. She wondered why Simmi hadn't picked up her calls or Abhay ' s. She herself had been extremely busy all afternoon discussing with her boss about a trial the next day. As she was leaving the office, she had seen numerous missed calls from Abhay who was worried that Simmi wasn't picking up his calls . He hadn't gone to Ahuja house lest he should find Mr Ahuja there. She had reassured him that Simmi waspprobably sleeping . After all she had been rather nervous the previous night. Abhay had calmed down after that explanation but she herself was distressed.

She saw Mr Ahuja striding across the room. He looked exhausted, angry and worried.

" Aao puttar. " He said as he caught sight of her.

"Uncle Simmi kahaan hai? theek hai na woh? "Swadheenta asked.

" Nahin puttar. Woh behosh ho gayi thi. Doctor ne kaha ki stress ki wajah se yeh sab hua hai. Abhi sangeet injection ke wajah se so rahi hai. "He told her.

Swadheenta knew how worried he was and expected him to ask her what was bothering Simmi . But he didn't.

" Puttar mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai. " He said.

But they were interrupted by his secretary who was asking about some party. Swadheenta saw him worried.

" Kya hua uncle? "She asked.

" Kuch nahin Swadheenta. Aaj ek zaroori meeting hai meri. Par main Simmi ko akele chhod kar nahin ja sakta. Isliye pareshan hoon. " He told her.

" Aap chale jaao. Main Simmi ke saath thodi der rukkar hi jaaongi. Don't worry. " She said.

Mr Ahuja thanked her and went to get ready. Swadheenta took out her phone and messaged Abhay that Simmi was sleeping. She didn't give him more details. He would be really worried if she told him what had happened.

She saw Simmi sleeping peacefully and sat down by her bedside. She picked up a magazine lying there and tried to read but it wasn't her type. She wasn't exactly the biggest fan of fashion. There was probably nothing in the room that would interest her. She and Simmi were the most unlikely of friends. They were poles apart. But they loved each other
Simmi was good at making friends and much better at losing them. She on the other hand, was a reserved and silent person and didn't make many friends. With Simmi it was a childhood experience that bonded them.

She was around 8 at the time. Asad was just a toddler and the Gillanis had just moved to Delhi. She had arrived there for the summer vacation to be with Asad. They were playing in the park near their home when she saw a girl about to fall off from a ride. Simmi was about 5 or 6 at the time. She hadn't liked her new nanny and had slipped away from her. On seeing a huge slide meant for older children she had climbed up just to annoy her nanny . But her target had been too busy with something else while Simmi was taken over by her fear of heights. The next moment she found herself dangling from the side. Swadheenta was the first to see this and had climbed up the slide and held Simmi's hand preventing her from falling till the elders had come.

"I am here. I won't let go of you. " Swadheenta had said that day and she never had.

Simmi trusted her implicitly and had come to depend on her. She had always protected and cared for her. But this time it wasn't goingto be easy. There was no wway she could make Suhasini Sinha change her mind. But she had to try for Simmi.

Swadheenta herself had never been romantically inclined. Love had always seemed to her a distraction. Now she knew it was undoubtedly trouble. Yet she wondered what would happen if she ever fell for someone. Simmi and Abhay ' s relationship made her think if it was really possible that for one person you could be ready to fight the world. She didn't know how exactly they had fallen in love but her friend loved Abhay. The thought of losing him had brought her to this condition.

But then the Sinha brothers really were adorable. She was surprised at her own thoughts. Sinha brothers? She should be thinking only about Abhay. But she couldn't stop thinking about his brother either. Adarsh Sinha. He was as much a charmer as Abhay. The brothers were different. Unlike Abhay, Adarsh was a shy guy. She remembered how he had been all flushed and confused every time he asked her out for coffee years ago. She was probably the first girl he had asked out. He had looked so cute and innocent. She chuckled at the memory.

"Swadheenta " she heard Simmi call in a feeble voice.

She realised that she was now standing near the window and hadn't seen Simmi wake up . Thanks to her thoughts about Mr Adarsh Sinha.

"Swadheenta concentrate. " She told herself as she helped Simmi to sit up.

"Swadheenta, Adarsh bhaiyya se mili? What is Abhay going to do? "Simmi asked her worried.

" Calm down. Abhay apni mom se baat karega. Adarsh too. Tum bas apna khayaal rakhna. " She told Simmi.

Simmi seemed to relax.

" What do you think about Adarsh bhaiyya? " Simmi asked.

Swadheenta looked at her confused.

"Matlab? " She asked.

" Matlab woh kaise hain? " Simmi asked again.

"He is a really good person. Very mature . Aur Abhay se kaafi attached hain. " She said and felt the heat rise in her cheeks.

Was she blushing?

She brushed aside that thought and went down to get some refreshments while Simmi freshened up.

" Simmi, khaane ke baad Abhay ko call kar lena. Bahot pareshan tha ki tum phone nahin utha rahi ho. Maine bas bataaya ki tum so rahi ho. "Swadheenta told Simmi as they were having dinner.

Simmi looked at her worried and said

" Mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha. Maine Papa ko sab bata diya. "

She explained to Swadheenta the events of the day. Swadheenta was confused but she understood Simmi. She just hoped Mr Ahuja wouldn't do anything that he would regret. She advised Simmi to tell Abhay about it. After some time she left for her home.

She was on her way back home when her phone rang.

" Adarsh Sinha? Why on earth is he calling me ?"She thought looking at the screen. A thousand weird ideas came to her mind. Brushing them aside she answered.

" Hi Adarsh here. Simmi ke ghar ki paas koi park hai na? " He asked in a haste.

" Yes. "She answered unable to understand what he wanted.

"Ok. Reach there as fast as you can. "He said hanging up before she could utter another word.

******************

I will try to update next part by Sunday. ...hope you didn't find this one too boring.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for ch-4. 😊
Unresed. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
Ahuja uncle is really worried about Simmi. 😳 Afterall, she is his only daughter. 😉
Okk...so Simmi and Swa met at a park and Swa saved her from falling down. 😊 I really loved Swa-Simmi's bonding. 😃 Awww! Swa is already having a soft spot for Adarsh. How she was blushing while thinking about him. 😳 But she's ignoring her feelings. 😆 Swa got a phone call from Adarsh and he asked her to meet him at the park. 😃 But u left in a cliffhanger mode dear. Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear it was a nice update do update next part soon waiting eagerly for your next update dear
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for ch-3.😳
Unresed. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
SwaDarsh's FB part was really nice. 😳 Waiting to know what caused MU between them. 😕
Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.


thank u dear...will have to wait a little to know the reason for the mu😊

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