New SS-Her loss Epilogue Part 4 Updated 31/7 Page 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so wonderful...heart warming moments between Swadrsh, Abhay -Simmi... and the bond with suhasini...

And Swadrsh expecting a baby??...Awww can imagine their happiness...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Sinha household seems at peace. Its sad that Jaya cannot have kids. She is a pure soul. I hope she has some source of happiness too. As for Simmi, I hope she recovers soon and has kids. 😊

This epilogue was beautifully written. Asad will always be a fond memory. His innocence and love for life was endearing and inspiring. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wish u could write few more parts ,but agree with points,
anyway thanks A lot for writing this SS:Her Loss,
u know when i saw The title i was confused about the Story as Loss remind me some sad story but No Its different And i really liked it.
Swadheenta is expecting 👏
And then Happy moment with Couples nok-jhok 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Thanks for the update dear it was a fabulous part will miss your as really enjoyed it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cutie cute. ...superb. ..but abhi epilogue. ...want more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
The family is going hv a new addition
Waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Epilogue Part 2 (I will be making three epilogues.As I cant get everything I want I 2 parts.
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The next morning was very different.Swadheenta woke up thinking whether the pregnancy part was a dream or was it really happening.But the morning sickness made her come back to real world.Adarsh was so really worried about seeing her vomit but Mom relaxed him stating that it was normal.It would remain for probably for 2-3months.Suhasini had also informed Haider Mamu-Zubaida Mami as well as her Amma and Appa.Both of them were highly ecstatic why would not they be.They both raised her and would now see Swadheenta raising her own child.Swadheenta was lost in thoughts of everything around her pregnancy and also dad when Suhasini called out to her.Her mother-in-law was more like a mother to her.Astonished Swadheenta was when she bonded more well with her mother-in-law than with her own mother.Maybe due to the fact that she and Suhasini both belonged to same professions and she could understand her profession as well her whereas her Amma never took slight interest in what she was doing nor did she understand it.

Suhasini-Anything in mind Swadheenta beta.Donot keep anything inside.It is harmful for you as well as the baby.


Swadheenta-Nope Mom just thinking how fast these 2 years passed by.At one point I still remember fighting the case of Asad.And now it's been 2 years of that as well.


Suhasini-You know Swadheenta time rushes by very fast it is us who have to make most of it.Come on here drink the milk.I know you vomited it in the morning even I hated simple milk when I was expecting Jaidev.So this time I have added chocolate syrup you wont have any problems this time and even Adarsh told me you like chocolate syrup.


Swadheenta-Thank You Mom.Yes there are certain smells which I liked but right now I just cant stand it.


Suhasini-It happens.But it will only last during the first trimester.Once that is over you will be fine around everything but than it will be cravings.You know when I was Expecting Adarsh I would rush Manohar in the middle of the night for ice-creams and food stuff.I am just waiting for Adarsh to run like that.


Adarsh-You would be happy if I had to run around like that Mom ?


Suhasini-Well Adarsh you should know what used to happen to me when I was expecting you only than you can understand what your parents went through.And plus you might not like these experiences on the spot but after certain years you will laugh about it with Swadheenta.And you will remember it more when you would see your child in front of you.

Abhay-Bhabhi Adarsh bhaiyya ko na bahut bhagana.Toh kya hoga na iske wajah se unhe subah joggin nahi karna padega.

Adarsh-Chotu bahut jald tera bhi number aayega tab mai bhi yahi kahuga Simmi se.

Abahy (Whispering to Adarsh)-Bhai mei toh abhi bhi dodta hi hu.Isiliye toh aapko tip de raha hu.

Simmi-Kya ? Mai tumhe bhagati hu baby.I did not you did not like it.Koi baat nahi aab nahi bhagaogi.Khud chali jaogi mai.

Abhay-Nahi baby mai toh mazak kar raha tha.Thoda moral boost de raha tha Adarsh bhai ko.

Swadheenta-Simmi iska na perfect solution hai.Jab mai Adarsh ko bhagaogi toh saath mei Abhay ko bhi bhej dena.Yo dono bhaiyyo ki jogging aur long drive dono ho jayege.Abhay ko practice bhi ho jayegi.😆

Suhasini-This is perfect solution.After all if Adarsh would be Dad toh Abhay bhi toh Chachu hoga.Mehnat teeno ko karni padegi.Jaidev ko bhi bhej dege.Teeno saath mei dhudege aur long drive bhi lege.

Adarsh-Mom aap sab toh abhi se planning kar rahe hai.Hum teeno ki band bajane ki.

Simmi-Ha bhaiyya ise net practice samajh lijeye.😆

All this while Jaya was standing near the kitchen.No she was not jealous of her sister-in-law on the contrary she felt very much elated but she also knew that no matter what she would never have these experiences.Ever since Swadheenta had announced the news she was glowing,happy.Adarsh was over the moon.Simmi and Abahy too were planning for the child.They were just waiting for a nod from the cardiologist for Simmi's health reports.She wanted to talk to Jai about the other option she had thought about.Convincing Jai would be easy but would Mumma and Papa agree ? Afterall each grandparents want their own blood rather than adopted one.But this was the only option left for her and Doctor had told her quiet clearly.Even if she conceived there would always be 80 % chances that she would not survive.To which Mom and Dad and Jaidev had clearly objected.She knew that everybody avoided these topics around her.Even when Simmi had known about Swadheenta's pregnancy symptoms both of them did not tell her as she would feel bad.She did not want everybody to walk on eggshells around her especially on things like this.In 9-10 months there would be a child in this house and than what ? Of course Swadheenta and Simmi both had told her that theri children would always be hers and Jaidev Bhaiyya's as well.After all they were of same family.
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Jaya-Jai I need to talk to you about something important.

Jai-Yep what is it ?

Jaya-Jai we cannot have our own children but I am sure with permission of mom and dad we can file for adoption as well.

Jai-I have been thinking about the same as well.I actually wanted to talk to you about it.Now that you are on board as well we can talk to Mom and Dad about it.If they agree we can file for one right away.

Jai and Jaya made their way to meet Suhasini and Manohar.They had decided that this was a sensitive topic and they can talk to everybody else later if Mom and Dad agreed.

Suhasini-You both at this time.All ok ?

Jai-Mom actually we wanted to talk to you and dad about something it's important actually.

Manohar-Kya hua Jai ?

Jaya-Mom actually we both had been thinking that though we cannot have our own child but we can consider the option of adoption as well.

Jai-Mom I know people donot consider the adopted child as their own but to come to think of it.We give that child a life and we too get a child.So I just wanted to talk to both of you about it so that you can give it your thought.

Suhasini-It is a option Jai why not.And a good one.But I would advice that if both of you are serious about adoption than it would be much easier if you adopted a infant.That way the child will not have questions right away and when the time is right you can tell him/her about it.

Manohar-Jai tum ne soch bhi kaise liya that we would not accept this option.You both are our children and we want to see both of you happy.

Suhasini-And Jai a child is a child.Adopted or your own blood does not make a difference.You know I know a quiet of orphanages.I will send you the list.Than both of you can decide.And donot worry about paper work I will handle that part.And donot you think that we will love that child less than that of Adarsh -Swadheenta or Abhay-Simmi.Like their would be our grandchildren in a similar way even yours would be our grandchild.

Jaya-(Hugs Suhasini) Thank You so much Mumma.You have no idead what this means to me.

Suhasini-Do you really consider me your mother ya sirf naam ka kehti ho mumma.You could have told me what was going on in your mind Jaya.WHat makes you think we would not support you.?

Jai-Mom she wanted to let it pass by me first.

Suhasini-You better not get into it Jaidev.Mai na aapni bahu se baat kar rahi hu.Donot get into it.

Jai-Okay Sorry.Will absolutely never get into it.😆😆.Mom I think it would now be good enough if we talked to all of them as well.

Suahsini-I think all of them are in Adarsh's room.Jaya I think you had prepared the cake.Lets take it there.I donot think we can have a party this year.Swadheenta needs to rest properly.The doctor even e-mailed me the diet chart.

Jaya-Well Mom no need to worry.Next year we will have a huge celebration afterall we will have Little Adarsh or Swadheenta with us at that time.

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Epilogue part 2 updated.
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Pre-cap-Epilogue 3 and Suhasini's wish got fulfilled.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finished reading last few parts
fabulous update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is the another Epilogue.Part 3
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It had been almost 9 months since Swadheenta and Adarsh had broke the news of her pregnancy.It was her due date in 2 days.Adarsh was always walking on eggshells around her in these 9 months.Her mood swings,cravings had been tough on him.Still he never complained on the contrary he enjoyed it.He actually read a book regarding mood swings and cravings which women face during pregnancy.Hell even she never read the book.It was always mom who guided her.😆.She had been pampered by the entire family.Abhay was always up whenever Swadheenta felt low.Simmi was a completely surprise package for Mom.She took care of Swadheenta like she would care for her own sister and my she was heavily responsible.Whenever Adarsh was not around it would be Simmi who would be with Swadheenta.It was like a whole new Simmi for Mom.Jaidev bhai and Jaya bhabhi too would give helping hand to Simmi.They had decided to adopt a child for which everybody was ecstatic about.Although all the procedures would take time but it was final.Adarsh had been immensely happy for Jaya bhabhi.He always thought that she deserved all the happiness in the world as it was Jaidev bhai who had messed up twice.Suhasini was always with her.She would tell all the childhood stories of Adarsh as well.He was a highly mischievous child but was the peacemaker of the house.Shantidoot as his brothers called him.Suhasini had been a huge support in all this.She even brought cases for Swadheenta which she thought were less stressful for her.She got her advice on certain cases and Swadheenta's dates had been pushed further with effort of Suhasini so that it does not damage her work.Swadheenta was sitting reading a book when Simmi came with juice for her.Adarsh had gone to Faridabad for a problem with his assistant Suraj.Actually Swadheenta was relieved he was gone because her husband needed a break.He had been on his toes ever since she had the reports in her hand.He would be back by 2 days.

Simmi-Swadheenta ye lo juice pe lo Mom ne bheja hai.


Swadheenta-Simmi abhi mera bilkul man nahi hai.Kuch ajeeb si bechane ho rahi hai mujhe.


Simmi-Ok fine.Ye yaha table par rakh rahi hu.Aur ye bechani kuch nahi hai.Relax Swadheenta.You are worried because due date 2 days me hai.


Swadheenta-Maybe Maybe not pata nahi.Agar aabhi Asad hota na to shyad ye uneasiness ka iilaj nikal...


Simmi suddenly realized why Swadheenta was feeling uneasy. She always knew Swadheenta loved Asad a lot.Abhay always said that he would give anything to have a bond like Asad and Swadheenta.She was missing Asad in her happy time.

Simmi-Swadheenta you are missing Asad maybe this is the reason you are feeling uneasy.


Swadheenta-Tomorrow is his birthday Simmi.Probably that is the reason I am missing him as well.


Simmi-Wow so the child and Asad mamu could share a common birthday.!!!


Swadheenta-Uh yeah maybe...

Simmi-Are you ok Swadheenta ? from uneasy you went to uncomfortable.

Swadheenta-I donot know.Some funny kind of pain is coming and going.

Simmi-I think we should take you to the hospital Swadheenta.

Swadheenta-"We" Simmi.Nobody is at home.It's just you and me.Ouch.The pain is sharpening.

Simmi-Mai Abhay ko bulati hu.He is downstairs having lunch.Abhay , Abhay. jaldi car ready karo please.Hume hospital jaana hai.

Abhay-Baby kya hua ? Is bhabhi ok ?

Simmi-No she is not Abhay.Tum upar kyu aaye.Car ready karo.

Abhay-baby car ready kar li hai driver ne.I will help you wait.Bhabhi sambhal ke stairs he.

Simmi and Abhay get Swadheenta into the car and Abhay instructs the servants to tell anybody of the family members coming home to come directly to the hospital.Today DCP Abhay Sinha who never breaks any traffic signal must have already broken 2 traffic signal today.He did not care for any signal right now.All he cared about was his sister and baby.And he could see right now that Swadheenta bhabhi's pain was increasing.

Simmi-Bas Swadheenta hum pahuch gaye hai hospital just breathe.Abhay did you call the hospital for stretcher already ?


Abhay-Ha Simmi maine bol diya hai.Do not worry.


They had reached the hospital and the doctor took Swadheenta inside the room.Although they were at the hospital Simmi called Suhasini,Jaya and Jaidev immediately.Abhay decided to call Adarsh and tell him peacefully.Suhasini was the first to arrive.She was almost too worried.

Suhasini-I should never have left like that.I should have told Dubey ji to handle the clients.


Simmi-Mom Swadheenta theek hai.Please donot blame yourself.You only said that these things donot have any perfect time.


Abhay-Baby try telling this to Adarsh bhai.He is coming back.In 3 hrs tops he will be here.He was completely berserk at Suraj for getting this problem right now.
Suraj ka to transfer paka it sems 😆😆.

The entire family was there.Even Mamu and Mami came as soon as they can.They had called Swadheenta's parents on the way.Suhasini,Jaya and Simmi were getting restless.Roaming here and there.Suhasini had promised Adarsh that Swadheenta would be her responsibility while he was away.And she did not carry it out properly.Suddenly the doctor came out.

Doctor-Congratulations Mrs Sinha.It's a girl.


Suhasini-Doctor can we meet Swadheenta and the baby.


Doctor-yes ofcourse but she needs to rest as well.


Suhasini was the happiest.She wanted a grand daughter and she had one.Her grand daughter would be unique of all.Afterall She is the Daughter of Swadheenta and Adarsh Sinha.had to something different like both of them.Swadheenta was looking at her daughter.She had Adarsh's face and his nose.As soon as the family saw her all were so excited to meet the new member of the family.The new and the smallest.

Suhasini- (Holding the baby)-She has Adarsh's face and nose but she has your eyes Swadheenta.Those determined and sharp eyes.

Swadheenta-Abhay tumhari Adarsh se koi baat hui ?

Abhay-(Holding the baby) Ha bhabhi he is on his way.Suraj ka transfer pka hai.He was already shouting on him on the phone itself.😆Maybe his cute little princess daughter can calm him down.
She is so cute.Somebody who is smaller than me in the house. 😆😆.Dekha beta aapke aate hi aapke papa kisi ka transfer karne wale hai.

Swadheenta-Jaidev please save Suraj from his anger 😆.Abhay is right woh sach mei uska tranfer karwa dega.

Jaidev-Donot worry I will handle it.Or like Abhay said this cute little princess will handle it.😆

Afetr almost 1 hour everybody went home but Suhasini and Simmi decided to stay with Swadheenta.Jaya decided to go as somebody would be needed.Suhasini and Simmi were talking with the doctor when suddenly like a thunderbolt Mr Adarsh Sinha arrived.Suhasini calmed him down at first and told him where Swadheenta was.Poor Suraj was exactly what Suhasini thought as well.He was standing right behind Adarsh and was looking so pale.Abhay had already called him saying that he had become a father and had a daughter.He once again lauded his wife's intuition.She was damm sure it would be a girl.He did not know why but she said it was mother's intuition.

Suhasini-(Hugging him )Congrats Adarsh.You had a daughter.


Simmi-Congratulations Adarsh bhai.She looks so cute.Go and meet both of them.


When Adarsh came into the room he saw Swadheenta with their daughter.He felt so angry at himself for not being present at the time when she needed him the most.But right now all he saw was his little bundle.Swadheenta saw and handed him his little princess.He sure was highly nervous.He never had took a baby in his arms.But Swadheenta seemed to have mastered it.

Swadheenta-Head first and relax Adarsh.She is your daughter.You are not going to drop her.Parents dnot drop children.


Adarsh-I am just nervous.


Adarsh observed for over 2 minutes and said-


She has your eyes Swadheenta.


Swadheenta-Well she has your nose.


Adarsh-But Mrs Sinha these are the same eyes I fell in love with.She is so cute and pretty just like her mother.Well she sure has thing for people.She is observing a lot.


Swadheenta-Maybe she is trying to think who you are because she just met the entire family an hour ago.Must have confused the poor child.Did you meet mom ?

Adarsh-Yes I did.She is over the moon.She always had a thing for daughters you know.But all we had was boys in the family.
You missing Asad today.

Swadheenta-Well tomorrow it's his birthday Adarsh.

Adarsh-So Mamu and niece have alternate birthdays.😆.Instead of bedtime stories we can tell her Asad stories.She will catch up everything fast.He would have loved her.His freedom's daughter.

Swadheenta-I know Adarsh.

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Epilogue three.
I know I keep increasing the number of epilogues but I just cant seem to not write anything.
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Pre-cap-The newest member back in SInha house and ofcourse the main problem "Name"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... Adarsh wasn't there when his little girl was born... poor thing... . Good that everything went off well. And on Asad's birthday. So sweet. 😳

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