Chasing Love ~ A Jaidev-Jaya SS | Chp.8 Pg.20 (June 5)

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

The death of hope for one seems to be the beginning of a new chapter for another. She stopped hoping, and now, a tiny ray is forcing his eyes open. How ironical.

More insight is needed into finding out the reason for both of their actions. But at face value, Jaya seems like a nice and rational person, and Jaidev, the obtuse one. It will be nice to see him try to win her back.

I assume of-course that Jaya will not resign from Cherish, but instead use it as an opportunity to leave the Sinha's house. It was surprising though, that although she has handed over the divorce papers to him, he still came to convince her to quit Cherish. I mean, if she won't remain his wife, what difference does it make if she is a part if it?

Waiting to read more!

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advena

@advena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Sarcy!!

Oh MY GOD.

What an utter ass-hat!

I still love him, but ugh Jaidev needs a smack or two dealt out at regular intervals.

Sin on the other hand is ALL kinds of YUM. I literally can't wait to see you flesh Sin out more. I'm actually a final year law student myself, and let me tell you our seniors are actually as hot as you'd imagine - A man in a suit is a sight to behold, a man in a suit who goes to court - officially SOLD. (I rhymed!!😆)

Right coming back to reality though, Jaya and Sin share a beautiful dynamic - I love that you're using them to contrast what she and Jaidev have so perfectly - on one hand Jaya has Sin, a friend who she knows has been in love with her for the past five years, and on the other hand she has Jaidev, a man she has been in love with with the past five years. An agonizing parallel - but one that helps Jaya see that she is worth more than everything Jay refuses her.

I love that she was still holding on to hope, I love that they were speaking at cross purposes - and MOST of all - I love that Jay recognized that he'd heard her laugh whole-heartedly, something he'd probably never heard before.

And of course, I am psyched to see how Sin reacts to all this. For all his witty banter, I have a feeling Sin is vicious when it comes to Jaya, watching Sin and Jay go head to head -- EEEP I can't even wait!

I DEMAND AN UPDATE TONIGHT...pretty please?

Much Love,
A

P.S. - My like button won't let me like anything cause it's idiotic - but MASSIVE LIKES galore.

Edited by advena - 9 years ago

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

I want Sin to realise that Jaya is unhappy. Unhappy and rejected at every turn of her marriage.

Also , I am somehow more attracted to Jaya- Jaidev's story than Adarsh- Swadheenta's. Since the show might never do justice to Jaya - Jaidev , it is upto you now.

Please update faster and longer.

can't wait. 😭

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c85rie

@c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Hope is such a damning thing. 5 years and Jaya still has to learn so much. Jaidev should wait till his turn comes at the hoping things. All his high handedness is leading him towards a lonely and bitter life. what use is professional success, when there is no one to share it with. 5 years and now her laughter strikes him. He is self absorbed too.

Waiting how you sort him out for Jaya.😆

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cappacuino5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Thank you for updating !

You left me wanting for more. Poor Jaya , it's extremely difficult to clip the wings of hope. The very fact that Jaideep felt neither happiness nor sadness at the marriage ending makes it evident that he never really gave the relation any chance. Would love to see how the story progresses now. I'm certain Jaya would not quit this job. Let's see how Jaideep handles this situation. I also liked how her laughter resonated in his ears while he was trying to falls asleep.

Want to read more of Sin and I'm certain that their friendship would perturb Jaideep in the future.

Being a law student myself, I can relate Sin to one of my own seniors. So it's especially interesting to read about him!

Needless to say , pls update as soon as possible !!!

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javeria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

awesome update

Jaidev is so stupid, he is off to sleep in relief that jaya has give into his demands like everytime, but he didn't heard her right, she didn't said yes and i hope she will not.

After a long time jaya is happy and her work is making her happy and she shouldn't let anyone snatch that away from her.

It's sad that jaidev doesn't even respect a woman. He was a coward and still is.

looking forward to read more.

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Poor jaya!!

Hope shatters everytime fr her

Thanks fr d pm

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
The death of hope for one seems to be the beginning of a new chapter for another. She stopped hoping, and now, a tiny ray is forcing his eyes open. How ironical.
More insight is needed into finding out the reason for both of their actions. But at face value, Jaya seems like a nice and rational person, and Jaidev, the obtuse one. It will be nice to see him try to win her back.

I assume of-course that Jaya will not resign from Cherish, but instead use it as an opportunity to leave the Sinha's house. It was surprising though, that although she has handed over the divorce papers to him, he still came to convince her to quit Cherish. I mean, if she won't remain his wife, what difference does it make if she is a part if it?

Waiting to read more!

Yes, that is true. Like I keep saying, Jaidev and Jaya have been too occupied with keeping pretenses to the extent that they have taken it to be the truth without giving each other a real chance. Jaya knows a bit of the real Jaidev but Jaidev doesn't know the real Jaya at all.

While Jaya is nice and Jaidev is obtuse, there's a reason to it and it will be revealed with time. Seeing that Jaya has now completely given up, it won't be easy for Jaidev to win her back. As to Jaya resigning from Cherish, it is much more than a job to her.

Why did Jaidev come to stop her despite getting the divorce papers from her, it is a secret between the two - their parents are unaware of this development. So for now, he's just taken the easy way out, because his father wanted him to.

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: advena
Sarcy!!

Oh MY GOD.

What an utter ass-hat!
I still love him, but ugh Jaidev needs a smack or two dealt out at regular intervals.

Sin on the other hand is ALL kinds of YUM. I literally can't wait to see you flesh Sin out more. I'm actually a final year law student myself, and let me tell you our seniors are actually as hot as you'd imagine - A man in a suit is a sight to behold, a man in a suit who goes to court - officially SOLD. (I rhymed!!😆)

Right coming back to reality though, Jaya and Sin share a beautiful dynamic - I love that you're using them to contrast what she and Jaidev have so perfectly - on one hand Jaya has Sin, a friend who she knows has been in love with her for the past five years, and on the other hand she has Jaidev, a man she has been in love with with the past five years. An agonizing parallel - but one that helps Jaya see that she is worth more than everything Jay refuses her.

I love that she was still holding on to hope, I love that they were speaking at cross purposes - and MOST of all - I love that Jay recognized that he'd heard her laugh whole-heartedly, something he'd probably never heard before.

And of course, I am psyched to see how Sin reacts to all this. For all his witty banter, I have a feeling Sin is vicious when it comes to Jaya, watching Sin and Jay go head to head -- EEEP I can't even wait!

I DEMAND AN UPDATE TONIGHT...pretty please?

Much Love,
A

P.S. - My like button won't let me like anything cause it's idiotic - but MASSIVE LIKES galore.

Er, yeah! 😆 Jaidev has never had a smack dealt, hence why he is like this today.

Sin! Tell me about him. Yes, if you think Sin is irresistible now, wait till you see more of him. 😉 Oooh, so you're a poet, a writer AND a lawyer! How cool is that! I can imagine the kind of appeal a suited guy, who's also a lawyer, would hold. Being a budding lawyer yourself, you must be surrounded by them. LOL!

Jaya is a strong woman, she's gone through a lot and people like Sin have been the ones who've never let her lose confidence or her self respect. Which is why she has been able to hold on to this relationship with Jaidev.

Despite everything, Jaya loves Jaidev which is why she was still holding on to that tiny ray of hope. But now, it is a matter that is affecting her self-esteem and it isn't a profitable bargain. Jaidev is slowly waking up so her laughter affected him. But being the kind of person he is, he will not accept it - but he can't do much about his subconscious self now, can he?

You've been pretty astute in reading Sin from the little that I have portrayed of him so far - that's all I'll say for now.

About updating Saturday night, sorry it didn't happen. As it was the weekend, I somehow hit the kitchen on a creative high. While that was good for the family, 😆 I was too exhausted at the end of the day to write anything. But I pretty much have the next chapter in my head. Now, as soon as I can type it out, you will have it.

Thank you for the detailed and lovely analysis. Look forward to hear more from you on the future updates.

Love, to you too! 🤗

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: khadz20
I want Sin to realise that Jaya is unhappy. Unhappy and rejected at every turn of her marriage.
Also , I am somehow more attracted to Jaya- Jaidev's story than Adarsh- Swadheenta's. Since the show might never do justice to Jaya - Jaidev , it is upto you now.

Please update faster and longer.
can't wait.😭

Sin is a very astute person and it will not be difficult for him to realise that Jaya is unhappy - in fact, he already knows it but hasn't voiced it out yet.

Yep, I'm more attracted to Jaya-Jaidev than SwaDarsh too and we have many like you and me in the forum here.

Aww, that's a lot of hope you have from me for Jaya-Jaidev. I will try and do my best. The thoughts/comments/reviews of my readers is something that I find highly motivating. So keep sharing your thoughts and I will try and update as soon as possible.

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