Chasing Love ~ A Jaidev-Jaya SS | Chp.8 Pg.20 (June 5) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Sinhaal, nice name. I will look up with see what it means...
I remember Suhasini chiding Jaidev about forgetting such an important day for Jaya. I was hoping that we would get to know more about that... but looks like it is related to Cherish.

So, who is this person who stole this gentleman's heart? It will be a bummer if it is Jaya. She seems to know about his love. Then she is all the more an elusive character, because she could have easily married Sinhaal instead of Jaidev who didn't want a wedding. Humm, could there be another angle to it? We will see..

Although I love this new character, I am kind of intrigued to find out why she didn;t approach Suhasini for legal council... was it because she knows how dangerous it is? Could be...

Great update!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Sinhaal, nice name. I will look up with see what it means...

I remember Suhasini chiding Jaidev about forgetting such an important day for Jaya. I was hoping that we would get to know more about that... but looks like it is related to Cherish.

So, who is this person who stole this gentleman's heart? It will be a bummer if it is Jaya. She seems to know about his love. Then she is all the more an elusive character, because she could have easily married Sinhaal instead of Jaidev who didn't want a wedding. Humm, could there be another angle to it? We will see..

Although I love this new character, I am kind of intrigued to find out why she didn;t approach Suhasini for legal council... was it because she knows how dangerous it is? Could be...

Great update!



Thanks. I'm not aware of the meaning myself so if you find out, do let me know.

When Suhasini was chiding Jaidev about Jaya's important day, she was referring to the fact that Jaya has decided to restart her career and it was her first day, assuming that Jaidev is aware about her decision.

Jaidev and Jaya have been closeted in Sinha house and in their relationship, surrounded by their own assumptions and perceptions about each other. But what happens when they are out of the confinements of their preconceived notions about each other? That's what I'm trying to explore here. I'm hoping that Cherish will be able to play a part in it.

There is a bit of history between Jaya and Sinhaal as they were close friends before Jaya got married. The details of it will soon follow in the coming chapters along with the revelation of why Jaya did what she did.

I'm glad you love Sinhaal! I fell in love with him when I crafted him. 😆

Jaya's decision to choose Sinhaal over Suhasini is a well thought decision. You will soon see why.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting to hear your thoughts. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there!!

Finally a Jaya-Jaidev SS - I am so super excited, and your writing literally gets better each chapter, I absolutely loving this intricate story you are laying the groundwork for - I can't wait to find out why Jaya said yes,and OMG I love that you brought in the Jaya-Jaidev pre-wedding meet-up that is literally my question every-time I see them WHY didn't he just tell her to say no!

And SIN - ooohlala - I see what you're doing there, I am absolutely in love.

Seriously, it's been a while since I've read a good angsty FF with just a dash of jealousy - this seems to be right up my alley.

Great pacing, love how you're making it a slow build up, and love the little nuggets you're putting in as well. I literally can't wait for the next chapter - DO UPDATE!
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Originally posted by: Nmyra

Hello there!!

Finally a Jaya-Jaidev SS - I am so super excited, and your writing literally gets better each chapter, I absolutely loving this intricate story you are laying the groundwork for - I can't wait to find out why Jaya said yes,and OMG I love that you brought in the Jaya-Jaidev pre-wedding meet-up that is literally my question every-time I see them WHY didn't he just tell her to say no!

And SIN - ooohlala - I see what you're doing there, I am absolutely in love.

Seriously, it's been a while since I've read a good angsty FF with just a dash of jealousy - this seems to be right up my alley.

Great pacing, love how you're making it a slow build up, and love the little nuggets you're putting in as well. I literally can't wait for the next chapter - DO UPDATE!


Hey!

Welcome to the story. 😊 Glad to know you share my excitement for a Jaya-Jaidev story. I think it was necessary to give the background to Jaya and Jaidev's relationship hence I had to bring the pre-wedding meet in the picture. I usually put a lot of thought into my stories and hence why, they turn out to be intricate and take a while to be ready. If the readers understand the reason and effort behind the groundwork, my work is done. I have put some thought into why Jaya said yes despite Jaidev explicitly saying no, and I will reveal that in the story at the right moment, hopefully.

SIN! What can I say about him! Join the SIN-lovers bandwagon! 😆 I'm trying to make him as irresistable as possible, hence the name. 🤣

Working on the next update, will put it up in a day or two. Hopefully, my clique of Jaya-Jaidev lovers will continue to love this story. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! Glad to have come across this SS of Jaya & Jaidev. I'm loving these two on the show.
All four chapters have been a great read. You pen down really well. I'm intrigued to know why Jaya still agreed with the wedding knowing that Jaidev didn't want to marry her. What happened in the past does justify Jaidev's hatred towards Jaya. I have to give it Jaya for still hanging on to their marriage.. Four years and still going.
Hoping to see some progress in their relationship in the show as well - it has a lot of potential. Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shiiya-

Hey! Glad to have come across this SS of Jaya & Jaidev. I'm loving these two on the show. All four chapters have been a great read. You pen down really well. I'm intrigued to know why Jaya still agreed with the wedding knowing that Jaidev didn't want to marry her. What happened in the past does justify Jaidev's hatred towards Jaya. I have to give it Jaya for still hanging on to their marriage.. Four years and still going. Hoping to see some progress in their relationship in the show as well - it has a lot of potential. Looking forward to the next update.


Hey, there!

There is something about these two that inexplicably draws you towards them. Jaya has her own story to tell, which we will soon know. Glad that you like the story. Thank you.

As to the show, I haven't caught up with the last 12 episodes or so, and from what I have heard, things have happened between these two. Hope we get to see some positive progress.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey !
I came across this story while searching for Jaya and Jaideep stories and boy was I glad to come across this !

It is amazing the way you have woven this Story Loved the whole concept. Thank you for making Jaya a strong woman and she's well on her way to becoming stronger. I don't know why but I like Jaya and Jaideep more than I like Adarsh and Swadheenta. Theirs is a very intriguing story and I honestly believe that their marriage marriage does have a good chance provided Jaya stops taking his crap. Jaideep has always taunted her for being perfect and it's time he gets to see her imperfections and then slowly and gradually get to know of the wounds he has inflicted upon her heart. In my opinion hurt makes a person much stronger , it is he true test of a person's character and reforms them in a way that no other thing can!

I'm sorry I rambled a lot. Thank you for writing a story on the both of them! I would be eagerly waiting for your next update. So pls update soon !

PS. I love Sin , want more of him ! Hopefully someday Jaideep would get bothered about his closeness with Jaya !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Hey !
I came across this story while searching for Jaya and Jaideep stories and boy was I glad to come across this !

It is amazing the way you have woven this Story Loved the whole concept. Thank you for making Jaya a strong woman and she's well on her way to becoming stronger. I don't know why but I like Jaya and Jaideep more than I like Adarsh and Swadheenta. Theirs is a very intriguing story and I honestly believe that their marriage marriage does have a good chance provided Jaya stops taking his crap. Jaideep has always taunted her for being perfect and it's time he gets to see her imperfections and then slowly and gradually get to know of the wounds he has inflicted upon her heart. In my opinion hurt makes a person much stronger , it is he true test of a person's character and reforms them in a way that no other thing can!

I'm sorry I rambled a lot. Thank you for writing a story on the both of them! I would be eagerly waiting for your next update. So pls update soon !

PS. I love Sin , want more of him ! Hopefully someday Jaideep would get bothered about his closeness with Jaya !



Hey, there! I'm also glad you found this story.

Thank you, happy to know you approve of the story so far. I think Jaya is a strong woman for enduring all the she has in the Sinha household, and more specifically, in her relationship with Jaidev. She just hasn't shown Jaidev her strong side - the one that can decided the course of her life. She has definitely come out stronger than before and in this story, I intend to show Jaidev that side of Jaya that he has never seen. Moreover, these two have been confined in the Sinha house, trapped by the pretentiousness that they're supposed to wear before others.

They've never been real - except for arguing, which again is something that has been one-sided. So what happens when they're out of the confines of forced relationships? What happens when they can be their true selves? Can they accept the truth for what it is? Or can they continue to deny something that's staring them in the eye.

I believe I love Jaya-Jaidev more than SwaDarsh too. 😉 And hey, no need to apologize for rambling. I love it when my readers pour out their heart on my thread :)

Sin is a gem and he does have a role to play in the story. More to follow soon.
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Chapter 5 ~ The Death of Hope

The chill of the ensuing night pervaded the lingering warmth in the air as the sun went down in the Delhi skies. It had been a long and taxing day for Jaidev with a line up of back-to-back, exhaustive meetings. He still had a couple of reports to prepare on the projects that he was financial advisor for in the HRD ministry. As he slipped the sheets, on which he'd scribbled some notes through the day, into his bag, he noticed the folder that Jaya had left for him this morning with the divorce papers. She hadn't called on reaching Mumbai, nor later in the day and he couldn't care less.

As he got into his car and revved up the engine, his thoughts continued to linger on the thought of divorce with Jaya and what it meant. Relief was the most overwhelming emotion that he felt associated with it. He didn't feel any joy or happiness, neither did sadness, sorrow or grief wreak havoc in his thoughts. No. His relationship with Jaya was an unwanted, constant irritation that he had to put up with every single day of his life, and every waking moment spent with her reminded him of what a spineless fool he'd been four years ago. Rage, hatred, anger towards Jaya was what kept him going everyday. He often wished that a life of loneliness would be better than the grief of the married state. Now that the elusive dream seemed to be within reach, he couldn't wait to reach out and grab it. But Jaya wasn't returning until a week, as his mother had informed him when she'd called earlier to check with him about his necessities for the upcoming two-day trip to Bangalore, which meant that Jaidev would have to wait a bit before obtaining his access to freedom. He would happily strike off the days to the big day. Hopefully, Adarsh's big day would coincide with Jaidev's, if Jaya kept her promise.


The next morning, as Jaidev browsed through the newspaper before heading for breakfast, a tiny story in the top corner of the second page caught his eye. On closer scrutiny, he learnt that advocate Sinhaal Vardhan Singh had signed up as the legal counsel for Cherish, as informed by Jaya Sinha, the new Marketing and PR head for Cherish, to the newspaper. Jaidev's thoughts wandered to his recent conversation with Adarsh where he'd learnt of the trouble Cherish was facing with it's employees and the incidents with the lawyers. He wondered whether Jaya was aware of the risk involved in being associated with Cherish at a time like this, but then shrugged it off thinking that she was a grown woman, responsible for her own decisions.

*

"Mumbai?"

That afternoon, an incredulous Jaidev looked at his father, as he stood at the airport with the ticket that had just been dumped into his hand.

"Why didn't you tell me that Jaya had decided to join Cherish?" Manohar demanded with narrowed eyes.

"But Dad, how does it matter? I'm supposed to accompany you to Bangalore for the Prime Minister's Conference. What do Jaya or Cherish have to do with it?"

"Cherish's entanglement with Subhash Lal is not something that the CM approves of. Jaya joining Cherish at this moment will not garner the Sinhas any goodwill. The CM is disappointed that Jaya is involved with an organisation that is seeking publicity through cheap tactics and maligning the name of a respectable politician," Manohar explained, his pursued lips a clear indicator of his annoyance.

Jaidev was well aware of the high regard that his father had for the Chief Minister of Delhi and how the CM, in turn, favoured his father with opportunities that helped further his political aspirations. However, today he was in no mood to let his father's dictates impact his plans.

"Jaya decided to pursue a career and made her choice. If Subhash Lal is innocent, the courts will not punish him unjustly. I don't see why we should concern ourselves with it, Dad," Jaidev responded, trying in vain to make his father see reason.

"The CM's displeasure is not worth it, Jaidev," Manohar bit out. "I want you to fly to Mumbai and convince Jaya to resign from Cherish. She will find plenty of good options elsewhere for her career."

His father couldn't be serious. He had better things to do!

"Dad, the conference - "

"Jaidev," Manohar cut him off. "Your flight leaves in 30 minutes. I will brook no arguments."

***

"Good Lord, Sin! Hair dye for holi?" Jaya asked aghast.

Jaya and Sinhaal were sitting in her room at the Diamonds Azure hotel, going through the background of the case for the past three hours. Various sheets of papers, a notepad, newpapers clippings, a couple of laptops and an iPad lay scattered on the bed. They had decided to take a break for a quick snack before resuming their research and Sinhaal now sat across from her, sipping coffee as he regaled her with tales of their escapades from the university. The current one being of three seniors who believed ragging juniors to be their birthright.

"They were notorious for making the juniors miserable. It was about time they had a taste of their own medicine," Sinhaal shrugged nonchalantly.

"How did they get the colour off?" Jaya asked, incredulous.

"They didn't. Not until a week, at least," he replied.

At Jaya's semi-horrified, semi-amused expression, he whispered with a conspiratorial wink, "The best part was, they missed graduation."

Jaya broke out into peals of laughter, her infectious chuckles resonating around the room.

"I'm glad you approve," Sinhaal grinned.

A knock sounded on the door and Sinhaal offered to answer it, as Jaya was still doubled over with laughter.

"Jaidev, what a pleasant surprise!"

Sinhaal's words broke the spell and Jaya spun to look at the door, too stunned to believe her eyes. Jaidev was here! His unexpected presence in Mumbai speared her heart with such joy, releasing a sliver of hope that her mind didn't register the annoyance evident on his face.
Directing a cursory glance towards Sinhaal as he introduced himself, Jaidev walked straight to Jaya.

"Jaidev, how - "

"We need to talk," he snapped curtly, cutting her off.

"Yes, but you could have waited till I returned to Delhi, after wrapping work here," Jaya replied.

"Jaya," he stressed each syllable like he did when he was annoyed with her and wanted to put across his point. "You can't be doing this!"

Of its own accord and against her better judgement, hope started blossoming within her heart at his words.

"What made you change your mind, Jaidev?" She asked, unable to keep the traces of hope from creeping into her voice. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Sinhaal silently sneaking out of the room.

"Change my mind?" He asked, confused.

"About... about... Us," she whispered.

"Us? There is no us. I'm talking about this job that you've taken up with Cherish," he snapped, annoyed with her for being naive. Her hopeless optimism only served to spike his anger further and his voice a notch louder.

"You need to quit. Dad is irritated that you will be going against Subhash Lal, much to the annoyance and dismay of the CM. You can choose another job to pursue your career, one that doesn't involve political connections, but you need to quit this one. Do you understand?"

"Yes, yes I do."

His words brought her crashing back to reality from another universe that she had travelled to, on the wings of hope, fired by his earlier words that she had foolishly misinterpreted. Jaya didn't want to analyse her thoughts any further. She was an asinine idiot. Or rather, she had been one for the last four years of her life. But she wouldn't be one anymore. Hope was futile. Hope was a deception, a lie that people loved to believe in, just so that they didn't have to accept the bitter truth of life. But she was done hoping. Tonight, fuelled by the words of the man she had foolishly come to love, she cremated the last of her hope. In its ashes, she saw reality for what it was - cold, bitter, harsh.

"We have a flight at noon, tomorrow. Be ready on time," Jaidev tossed before walking out of her room.

***

At the end of an exasperating day, Jaidev wanted nothing but a tranquil night but fate had something else in store for him. As he freshened up and hit the bed that night, for the first time in his life, he couldn't command his body to easily succumb to sleep. To his utter vexation, when he did manage to gain some shut-eye, a mellifluous laugh kept dancing at the fringes of his sleep.

*****

A/N: Hi to everyone and a warm welcome to the new readers! 🤗I have replied to everyone's comments, and sending out the PMs shortly. Looking forward to hear everyone's thoughts on this chapter. Hopefully, the next update will be up sooner.

Edited by -Sarcy- - 9 years ago

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