SwaDarsh TS : Fallen Too Far (COMPLETED) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Paridhi7250

I see what you meant by cliched...

Well sometimes they can't be helped... And they do give a thrust forward quicker than one would otherwise have in a lovestory...

Good start...

You write well...

PS: I hope you don't mind but an"assault and battery" charge would be more well placed here than an "attempt to murder charge".
Sorry can't help the lawyer brain...


You know it. 🤣

Thank you so much.


Oh. Well, I'm learning to become a doctor so I have no idea about what's the difference in attempt to murder and assault and battery. But I changed it in the story. So thank you for telling me. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayyye☺️
That was soo M.A.G.I.C.A.L
What a Mesmerising story
I really want u Di to write more stories. ... pretty please. .
This part sent me into another world 🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You bet I did. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misnomer

Hayyye☺️ Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

That was soo M.A.G.I.C.A.L I thought so too. 😆
What a Mesmerising story Thanks a lot.
I really want u Di to write more stories. ... pretty please. . I will. But you will have to give me some suggestions. My mind doesn't have any ideas these days. I just came up with this while re-watching the first episode.
This part sent me into another world 🤪 That's great! It's awesome to know that I have that effect on people through my writing! 😃



Thank you.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Totally in love with this TS. Please write more... =)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
lovely TS dear 😃 do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
lovely TS dear 😃 do write more
love ,
Alisha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
I really loved it!!
Plzz write more!
I've seen you write in other forums too tani.. And I.must say you're an awesome writer.
Hopefully I will write as soon as my leg heals :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing... Read it in a go...do write more

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