Mihar_SS: Tujhe sochta hoon(updated ) 5 and 6 th part-pg 3

Hello guys this is my very first os for our lovable pair mihar. Sorry for any grammatical mistakes .


part1



"Nahi baby..jaisa tum soch rhi ho waisa nahi ho sakta...tumhare papa sahi kehte hai...tumhe wapas delhi chale jana chahiye..ye dance wagerah tumhare liye nahi hai...bohot guts chahiye...apne dreams ko follow karne ke liye.."after saying this Mikhail felt a sudden pain... Though he know that baby is her aneri...but he somewhere has idea about the pain which baby has to suffer if she chooses this path. This path will not be accompanied by her family and she will be abandoned as he was when he choose dance...




Baby after processing what mikhail said speaks will full hope" nahi mikhail...mere papa mujhe zaroor samjhenge...wo mujhse bohot pyaar karte hai..tum...tum dekhna jab main iss competition ko jeet kar as aneri select ho jaungi...then he will definitely understand me..."




The day of competition has arrived and with full enthusiasm and passion baby dances from the bottom of her heart ..and as expected she wons competition and is awarded with role of aneri in Mikhail's broadway show...




She is then called on stage to be presented with membership of d4 dance academy which is presented by Mikhail...




Baby ...though she is happy ...but her happiness doesn't reaches her eyes...comes on stage...and stands aside Mikhail to take letter as her award...In search of a familiar face she again looks into crowd before taking award ...




There he is...her father...for whom she can leave her life if he wants... Not because she fears him...but because she loves him...




A smile of pure happiness appears on her face ...as if she has got everything in her life...or her life ...as her father came there... He may also have watched her performance... He is here...means he has accepted her dream of life... Her dance...




And with her moist eyes and biggest of the biggest smile...she takes membership letter from Mikhail.




Mikhail after noticing her big smile..notices her father..then a smile of relief appears on his face and thank God for not letting happen same things which happened with him...




Baby first looks at mikhail And then again looks at his father ...and tries to show him letter with her eyes... But just then...she sees her father nodding his head in the direction of no...and then turning his back ...as she saw this..her biggest of the biggest smile fades away ...and she is left in utter shock... And after processing what just happened...she takes a breath... And then turns her head in the direction opposite of crowd to hide her tears...




Mikhail witness the whole rejection that baby has to suffer from her father... And then tries to cover his sadness with a fake smile... And tries to cover baby's turned head...




Baby... Swiftly wipes her tears and then again looks towards crowd with her pasted smile and then again she looks at her father still leaving the hall.. disappearing from her sight...




Baby giving some 1 min excuse ...leaves the stage and goes behind her father...mikhail looks on baby..




"Papa... Papa... Papa...plzzz ruk jaiye...aa...aap ne kaha tha ki agar main ye competition jeet gayi toh aapko koi problem nahi hogi...aur aap mujhe dance bhi karne denge...toh ..." Says baby with full hope..




"Haan kaha tha Maine ..mgar mujhe laga tum ye competition haar jaogi
Aur apna ye dance ka pagalpan bhi chod dogi...magar.. Tum toh" Says baby's father in despair...




" tum...mujhe tumse ye umeed nahi thi..baby...main tumpar itna bharosa karta tha..magar tum ne mera bharosa todd diya...pehle jhooth kaha ki tum gurudware mein seva karti hoo...aur phir ye dance...tumne mera sar sharm se jhuka diya..." Says baby's father .




" papa...plzzz aise mat kahiye...main jaanti hoon ki saari galti meri hai...magar aap"




To be contd.

Part2
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"Papa plzzz aise mat kahiye...mqin janti hoon ko saari galti meri hai...magar aap"


"Nahi ...galti meri hai...jo maine tumse itna kuch expect kiya tha... Tumhe kyon nahi samajh aata...ki topper ho tum class ki...tum bohot kuch deserve karti ho...magar ye dance tumhe kahi nahi le ja sakta life mein...isliye kehta hoon...chod do ye sab...chalo...delhi aur mba karo...apna future banao.."



"Magar dad..""



"Pata hai..mujhe ..tum meri baat nahi sunogi...isliye...main jaa rha hoon wapas...aur bhool jaunga ki meri ek beti bhi thi..." And turns to go from there



"Pa ppapa.." Says baby reluctantly




" aur mere peeche tab aana jab ye dance ka showk tumhare sar se utar jae..."and leaves..



Baby stands there still staring at his father disappearing from her sight..




Mikhail sees all this from a far place and remembers his own pain...and then looks at baby .




Baby...is still standing there and remembering all the conversation which she just had with her father... all the words of her father. " tumne hamara sar sharam se jhuka diya...". "Bhool jaunga ki meri ek beti bhi thi.". " itna kuch expect kiya tha..magar tum"...all were echoing in her ears just then she closes her eyes and ears and slowly removes her hand from her ears..


Mikhail who was watching baby got distracted by one of the member of academy to ask about something... But he shoo him away and then again looks for baby...but this tym he doesn't finds her there...and then desperately starts looking everywhere... But he didn't find baby...




He comes out of academy to find baby but still dont get any clue..just then he hears a splashing sound ..




"Omg...kahi wo paani mein kud kar suicide toh nahi nahi kar rhi..."




He hurriedly jumps into water... And takes her out in his arms...baby on other side is opposing his action...but Mikhail using his manpower takes baby out of water and puts her down... Baby also sides him with a jerk...and in frustrating manner looks at mikhail ...




Mikhail starts scolding her" tum pagal ho gayi ho ya...tumhara dimaag kharab hai...jo tum suicide karne ja rhi thi...jaan bohot keemti hoti hai aur tummm..." Says mikhail in ferocious manner but then stops seeing baby still standing blankly...




"Mujhe kuch tym akele rehna hai ...plzzz tum jao yahan se... Aur haan main suicide nahi kar rhi thi..." Says baby sadly.




After seeing questioning eyes of Mikhail on her last line she justifies... " i just wanted some peace... Is liye main paani mein..."




" paani mein peace milti hai but hamesha ke liye..." Says mikhail in mocking tone..




" you don't know but i can hold my breath for really long... ". " And now plzzz leave me alone...i will be fine " says baby in mature tone.




Though not satisfied with her answer,mikhail nods a yes and disappears from her sight.




She then... Spends her evening in solitude... But Mikhail is still keeping an eye on her from far distance and then he calls tara...to come and take baby to her home...



As the night passes by both baby and mikhail though under different roof remembers their sweet and sour relationship with their families and goes into deep sleeps weeping...




Next morning... Mikhail was eagerly waiting for baby . . . . . . to see if she is okay . . . . . . . to make sure that she won't loose her hopes to live life...




Everyone comes but baby is nowhere to be seen...mikhail becomes restless... But just then he sees tara...he swiftly goes to tara and asks about baby...



"Mikhail wo..."




"Tara ...kya...sab theek hai na..???"



" wo mikhail ...baby ne kal se kuch nahi khaya aur aaj subah bhi maine usse breakfast ke liye kaha ...toh usne mana kar diya"



Mikhail nods okay...and then continues with their routine... After giving everyone their responsibilities for the day... He goes to meet baby at tara house..



When he reaches tara's house...he sees baby sitting on floor and her head down.

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Part-3

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When he reaches tara's house...he sees baby sitting on floor and her head down on her knees...




Mikhail goes near her and starts consoling .."Baby...baby...tum theek ho na...dekho...tum itni dukhi mat ho...ye parents aise hi hote hai...wo humare dreams ko kabhi nahi samajhte aur chahte hai ki hum unki marzi se chale, rahe yaha tak ki saans le...wo..wo.."




After hearing mikhail...baby looks at Mikhail with red eyes and interrupts him..." NAHIII ... mikhail tum jaisa sochto ho wo galat hai...parents kabhi apne bacho ka bura nahi chahte...isliye wo unke liye aisa raasta chunte hai jisme wo kabhi fail na ho...magar dance...unhe lagta hai ki dance mein koi future nahi hai...isliye wo apne bacho se gussa hone ka natak karte hai...yahan tak ki unhe ghar se bhi nikal dete hai...iss umeed mein ki unke bacho ek din unki baat zaroor sunenge..."




" toh...ab tum kya karogi...sunogi unki baat ...aur chali jaogi apne ghar ...chodogi dance ko hamesha ke liye. ...kyun unke according isme koi future nahi hai" asks mikhail




" nahi...main apni puri zindagi apne papa ko khush karne ke liye ,wo karti aayi hoon jo mujhe kabhi khushi nahi deta...magar ab nahi...Mikhail... Tum ...dekhna... Mere papa ek din mujhe aur mere dance ko zaroor accept karenge...mujhe successful dekhkar wo bohot khush honge ...aur phir jab puri duniya mere dance ki tareef karegi ..tab unhe mujhpar proud feel hoga..."




Looking at baby who still has got red soar eyes because of tears and lack of sleep...and had every possible reason to hate life ,,is still full of hope...and desire to live life and her determination of not leaving her dream is now solid like mountains...and this time he didn't just get a glimpse of aneri in baby...but its like its is aneri herself whom he is talking with...




Baby ,..in attempt to make mikhail understand... Gets her goal of life... and gets up motivated and determined to live the life in her own way...and leaves from there, drinking a glass of juice which was on dinning table...and continues doing her work.




Mikhail also leaves from there and goes to academy... Later..baby also comes to academy..and joins other ..


Baby...then happily completes her practice sessions. while she is dancing ,mikhail looses himself again and again in innocence and purity of her dance and unknowingly,a smile of appraisal and admiration appears on his face ..though some members notices that but no one actually mention it...as they thought it might be an illusion as...mikhail never and ever smiles..and it has already been declared that mikhail cant smile...




As the day pases and night comes...mikhail is at his home remembering baby and her determination, smiling in between... Stucks on one line..."parents kabhi apne bacho ka bura nahi chahte...mujhe successful dekhkar wo bohot khush honge...unhe mujhpar proud feel hoga...". "kya meri mama mujhe kabhi accept karengi...kya wo mujhe kabhi dekhna chahenge..."with this he stares at contact of his mother and dials her number...


---" hello... Who's this??"




Mikhail keeps silent rejoiced after hearing her mother's voice...




--"hello...hello...koi bolega bhi abbb...jab baat nahi karni thi toh call kyun kiya...uff maria...mere paas aise faltu calls ke liye time nahi hai...just handle these by yourself"and cuts the phone.




Mikhail was happy after heating his mom's voice but when he heard " mere paas aise faltu calls ke liye time nahi..." gets gloomy and says" ofcoarse mama ...apke paas aaj bhi faltu chhezo ke liye time nahi hai..aur main aur mera dance apko hamesha faltu hi lagta tha" and goes to his bed and sleeps..

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Guys i wanted to make it an os...but it turns out to be ts or may be ss..plzzz tell me if i should continue this or not ...if you like this plzzz tell me through your comments..

Well written and narrated...
It's the perfect story... You know mihar fighting for their dreams...
Its very inspiring specially baby's characterization..
Loved it and do write more :)

loved it... 👍🏼
pls continue

Awesome start Bhawzzz...👍🏼

Mikhail ka Baby k lie concern hona & n taki Baby ko pain na ho isliye use dance se door hone ka advice dena...in sabse Mikhail ka Baby k lie care dikh raha tha...😳

Baby ka uske papa k upar full trust dekhke iye hi pata chalta hai that how much Baby luvs her father...😊

Finally Baby won the competition & got selected for the role of aneri...😃

Jab competition jitne k baad bhi Baby ki naazre sirf aur sirf uske papa ko dhoond rahi thi usse Baby ka pyar hi dikh raha tha...😊

But jab Baby k papa ne use support nahi kia u described Baby's pain beautifully...👍🏼

I luved the fact that Mikhail noticed every emotions of Baby...chahe vo Baby ki happiness ho ya phir uski Sadness...Mikhail cares so much for Baby & again it is proved...😳

Baby k disappear hote hi Mikhail ka restless feel karna...😳

Mikhail ko laga k Baby suicide kar rahi hai...🤣

Morning main Mikhail ka Baby ko dhoondna n then usse milne jaana was awww

After that I just luved the MiHar convo...❤️

Mikhail ka uski mom ko call karna was so emotional...really felt bad for him...

Please do continue soon...I want to read more...u write it very beautifully...luved it...😃

Please pm me whenever u update...😊

Ress...

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Awesome start Bhawzzz...👍🏼

Mikhail ka Baby k lie concern hona & n taki Baby ko pain na ho isliye use dance se door hone ka advice dena...in sabse Mikhail ka Baby k lie care dikh raha tha...😳

Baby ka uske papa k upar full trust dekhke iye hi pata chalta hai that how much Baby luvs her father...😊

Finally Baby won the competition & got selected for the role of aneri...😃

Jab competition jitne k baad bhi Baby ki naazre sirf aur sirf uske papa ko dhoond rahi thi usse Baby ka pyar hi dikh raha tha...😊

But jab Baby k papa ne use support nahi kia u described Baby's pain beautifully...👍🏼

I luved the fact that Mikhail noticed every emotions of Baby...chahe vo Baby ki happiness ho ya phir uski Sadness...Mikhail cares so much for Baby & again it is proved...😳

Baby k disappear hote hi Mikhail ka restless feel karna...😳

Mikhail ko laga k Baby suicide kar rahi hai...🤣

Morning main Mikhail ka Baby ko dhoondna n then usse milne jaana was awww

After that I just luved the MiHar convo...❤️

Mikhail ka uski mom ko call karna was so emotional...really felt bad for him...

Please do continue soon...I want to read more...u write it very beautifully...luved it...😃

Please pm me whenever u update...😊

Omg ...roopsha thankyou soo much for your comment...you really made my day...after reading your comment ...i was like...you really liked all the moments i described in my story...thank you ..

Thank you everyone for liking and commenting on my story... That really means a lot for me..

Now i m updating next part ..enjoy

Part 4



Next day... Everybody was practicing and happy and cheerful... But for mikhail...the happiness which he was experiencing just a day before was all gone...it was more of sadness which clouded his thoughts... Those thoughts ,whose owner is none other than baby...thoughts which are filled with hopes and joy of meeting his family...but mikhail didn't let anyone know about his inner turmoil and kept a stone face like always But soon... Being around baby... Who is sooo hopefull and giving her 101% to a task...His sadness soon turned into frustration cause deep inside he feels like nothing is going to change their parents wont accept them even if they become successful...And one day that frustration came out as agitation on baby...




"Apne sapno ki duniya se bahar nikalo...jaisa tum sochti ho waisa kuch nahi ho sakta...even if we give or 100s and 1000nd of %...unke liye hum aur hamara dance hamesha se hi faltu tha...aur hamesha faltu hi rahega..."


Though it was baby who is getting hurt by Mikhail physically as he was holding his arms tightly but...mikhail was already very hurt and that too was mentally... No one can really see this pain and hurt which mikhail is suffering from but baby felt his pain that day...



Mikhail was out of the room after venting his anger out on baby...but baby was still there... No... she was not crying nor she was hurt but she was sad not because of mikhail's statement which can be a fact ... Not by thinking that she too will not be accepted by her family like mikhail...but with the thought that mikhail was going through all this alone... And he didn't even let anyone get a hint of what he is suffering from..




She goes behind him and see him sitting besides pool with moist eyes in his solitude..




She goes near him from back side and puts her hand on his shoulder...



Mikhail turns towards baby while sitting..." Baby...i ..m..."



" shhhs" baby puts her hands on his mouth and nodes her head in direction of no and wipes his lone tear shed by his blood shot red eyes..


Mikhail while sitting hugs her stomach...baby pats his head for consoling him and then they both sat there for long time with mikhail's head in baby's lap... Telling each other their pain and sorrows ... in the form of silence .


Next morning... Everybody was following their daily dance routine ..for the much awaited broadway show "Soulmates"...

It was very special show for mikhail..but with every body following his instruction...show has now become special for each and every person involved .



Baby...with practice is now master in solo performance for the character of Aneri...but duet performance with mikhail playing ruhaaan..is not even near to okay...and at farthest point from perfection even with the fact that baby and mikhail are now very good friends as they are soulmates bounded with similar pain and sorrow ...but that ease seem lost when he is in her proximity.. ..



Evrybody was very tensed as only 1 month is left for final showcase. Everybody know about baby , her hardwork, her determination and now also her awkwardness with mikhail.




Tara approached mikhail to talk about this ..

" mikhail...sirf ek mahina bacha hai...hame jaldi kuch karna hoga..warna sabki mehnat bekar jaegi..aur.."




" mujhe pata hai sab...magar isme baby ki koi galti nahi hai...ye shuruat mein saare dancers ke sath hota hai...tumhe toh pata hai na...??"


" yaa...i know mikhail...isme baby ki koi galti nahi hai..but she need tym but we don't have that time ...Mikhail...ab tum hi kuch karna hoga.."


"Ummm...main kuch samjha nahi..."


"Mikhail...wo.."


"Bolo tara.."


"Wo mikhail...tumhe baby se pyaar ka natak karna hoga...jisse usse awkward nahi lagega tumhare sath dance karne mein ..aur phir show khatam hone ke baad use sorry bol dena..."


"Tara..tumhara dimag toh thikane par hai..." Roared mikhail


"I know... It's not right... But it is the only way ...and u should follow it..."

Mikhail keept silent


"Aur baaki tum samajh daar ho..i know ki tum wahi karoge jo sab ke liye sahi hai,iss show ke liye sahi hai.."saying this ,tara leaves from there..



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