Mihar_SS: Tujhe sochta hoon(updated ) 5 and 6 th part-pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg dis part is written so beautifully..I loved d part where baby stops Mikhail from saying anything by keeping her hand on his mouth n dey both sharing their problems😳 dis was most romantic scene ❤️ n y Tara is suggesting Mikhail to do drama of love🤓 looking forward for ur next update..do continue soon😊 dis update was really beautiful😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingly penned as always
Silent but deep love
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekyyy

Omg dis part is written so beautifully..I loved d part where baby stops Mikhail from saying anything by keeping her hand on his mouth n dey both sharing their problems😳dis was most romantic scene❤️n y Tara is suggesting Mikhail to do drama of love🤓looking forward for ur next update..do continue soon😊dis update was really beautiful😳



Guys... In today's episode that girl which i named tara is diya in serial...while writing i only remembered name tara but not diya ...

Sorry for the mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
This update was so so so so so so so beautiful...

Mikhail misses his mom way too much...😭

Mikhail's outburst on Baby...😲😭

But still Baby cares for him so much...😳...actually she luvs him so much...😉

Then the poolside scene was...☺️...Kaah show main bhi MiHar ka aisa ek scene mil jaye...😳

Tara ne iye kya ghatiya plan bataya...😡...Kahi is plan k chakkar main MiHar main MU na ho jaye...😕

Update next part soon...I'm luving this story...😊

Really very good job...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
very nice part
do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Part 5


After diya left from there... Mikhail is now thinking about her solution and remembering his dance with baby..


Mikhail to himself


"Itna kya sochna hai...mikhail ..tumhe pata hai ki ye sab sirf tum show ke liye kar rhe ho...taaki saabki mehnat waste na jae.."


"Magar baby...uska kya...wo sari ladkiyon jaisi nahi hai ..."



"Tumhe uski itni fikar kyon ho rhi hai...aur waise bhi tumhe pata hai ki wo tumse pyaar karti hai..."



"Nahi...i m her idol...uski inspiration...usse bas lagta hai ki wo mujhse pyaar karti hai but jab wo mere kareeb aayegi.. she will realise that it's not more than infatuation...mujh mein pyaar karne jaisa kuch nahi hai ..."



"Toh tum ye chahte ho ki saari zindagi wo issi galat faimi ke sath jiye ki wo tumse pyaar karti hai..."


Mikhail kept silent..


"tum yahi samjh lena ki tum usse apne se dur karne ke liye uske pass jaa rhe ho...aur waise bhi tumhe tumhari hadde ( boundaries) pata hai...hain na??"



"Haan...mujhe meri hadde ache se pata hai. . . ." saying this mikhail goes to sleep..



Next day everybody was practicing...when they were alone mikhail asked baby to come for dinner with him at his house.



Baby at diya's house..is getting ready for dinner... Selecting and rejecting her cute dresses from her cupboard... Just then diya barge in asking her about their schedule for tomorrow...diya after seeing her asks if where she is going..



Baby shyly replies... "I m going for dinner with Mikhail..."


Hearing this, diya baffles... But then giving a satisfactory smile thinking to herself..."toh..mikhail tumne decision le hi liya.."...and helps baby to select a dress...



As soon as she steps outside diya's house... She sees mikhail on bike and stops..


Mikhail stops his bike in front of her and removes his helmet... And says" tum achi lag rhi ho..." to which baby turns crimson red and nods a thank you...


Mikhail while handing her another small helmet asks baby "chale."
She nods yes...and they both goes on bike..



After reaching his house ...they both steps in ...mikhail while saying"tum yaha baitho ...main bas abhi aya"pointing to a sofa .


Baby is looking here and there... It is a big hall with open kitchen where mikhail is making their drinks.. Looking at photos of his previous shows and his life...the dancing legends which he follows...but Baby is baffled to see no picture, a single picture of his family...



Just then mikhail interrupts her thoughts and gives her glass of juice..and asks if what she is searching for..


" nahi ...bas aise hi .."and gives a smile.



Mikhail smiles back and they both sat on sofa...and mikhail and baby talks about dance ... First time when they realise that they like dance ...first tym when they tried to copy someone 's steps...etc..just then baby asks mikhail about his family ,she asks him why there is no photo of them in this house... What happened ...


Mikhail kept silent and then goes to kitchen to prepare dinner..



Baby to herself "lagta hai meri wajah se Mikhail upset ho gaya..."



She then goes in kitchen and sees him working like some professional... And to pacify the situation... She talks to mikhail.


"Wow ..Mikhail tumhe aise dekhkar lagta hai ki tumhe bohot acha khana banana aata hai..."


To which mikhail smiles weakly



And then continues her blabbering.. Ki usse bilkul kuch nahi banana aata ..magar kaise wo aur sonal apni bua ko pagal jaroor banate the ki wo gurdware mein sewa karte hai nd ol...then she asks mikhail ki usse bhi kuch kaam karna hai.. .



Mikhail says " nahi...main karlunga.."



"Mikhail...plz plzz plzzz"



"Umm..theek hai...tum ye vegetables kato.."



Baby then starts cutting vegetable... She was cutting them wrong... Mikhail show her the correct way..then she continues... Mikhail losses himself in her innocence...



Just then baby cuts her finger and exclaims "ouch"



Mikhail leaves his work and takes her finger in his mouth...

-Cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Part-6




Mikhail leaves his work and takes her finger in his mouth...

Doobare -female version Bg music plays


Mikhail glances her but finds her looking at him...while looking at him she forwards her finger from other hand which is actually cut. ..mikhail gets dumbstruck after seeing that finger and realising that he was holding her wrong finger.. And then takes her another hand and puts her actually cut finger in his mouth. Baby smiles seeing him like this just then he looks upward and they share an intense eyelock..
Then mikhail takes her finger from his mouth and wrap a small bandage around it..



Then baby again takes the knife to cut vegetable but mikhail signals her toh give back knife and then he keeps doing his work...meanwhile baby is lovingly looking at mikhail...and then they both sat for dinner.



After finishing dinner baby says " khana bohot acha bana tha, tumhari gf toh tumse bohot khush rehti hogi..."



"Meri koi girlfriend nahi hai "



"Magar uss raat tum aur netra toh..." And stops midway and starts looking here and there..



Mikhail realises that baby was there that night when he and netra were in pool...to change topic he continues... "Toh tum mba karna chahti thi..."



"Nahi...mere papa chahte the ki main mba karu..." Saying this she got sad.



Mikhail to cheer her mode...turns on the music and asks her for dance..


Precap---baby and mikhail dance


Guys...if you like this plzzz tell me through your comments an tell me if i should continue this or not
Edited by rocking_bhawna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Again an amazing update Bhawzzz!!👍🏼

Miks plan to execute kar raha hai but I hope use sachi muchi kuchi main Baby se pyar ho jae...😳

N baby jo MU na ho...

MiHar kitchen scene was too cute...😳

Waiting for MiHar dance...

Continue soon Bhawzzz!!😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Again an amazing update Bhawzzz!!👍🏼

Miks plan to execute kar raha hai but I hope use sachi muchi kuchi main Baby se pyar ho jae...😳

N baby jo MU na ho...

MiHar kitchen scene was too cute...😳

Waiting for MiHar dance...

Continue soon Bhawzzz!!😉




Thankyou soo much roopsha for such a quick reply..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
aww
this was so nice yr

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