Aditya Sir B'day Contest 2017: New Show (Results pg. 3)

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Don't like the above contest? No problemo! We've got another great contest just for you!
On the same track as above, you are now tasked with launching a new TV show. You're the Creative Director, the Casting Director, the Writer, the Director, that is everything but the Producer.
In teams of writer and graphicer or separately you need to finalize the following things:

The basic plot of the show - This doesn't have to be long. Even a few lines is enough as long as we get the basic gist of the show, but don't exceed 2 pages.
The cast - Aditya sir is a must in the cast and you cannot cast any other current CID actor. Apart from that you decide who you want to cast in the main roles (that is those roles that appear throughout the show) and you also decide which role Aditya sir will fit in.
The characters - After deciding the plot and the cast, give a brief character description. A maximum of 7 lines per character.
The number of episodes - Your show must be a finite series! Apart from that you can decide how long you want to make it or how short you want to make it.
The promo - You can show this through graphics, a VM, or through writing, but basically you need to define what the first promo of the show will be to hook the audiences!

That was the contest. And now it's time for the rating. So let the rating begin!

Rate based on how well you understand the new show, the role that Aditya sir is playing, the other casting, the character descriptions, and the promo. Rate on whether the show really hooks you in or not. Rate each entry out of 10 on the above.
All ratings are to be sent to me and me only.
Feel free to write reviews in this thread though.
Final submission date is July 20th, 11:59 PM IST.

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Entry 1

Title of the show: Aadarsh

The basic plot of the show: This show is a college drama which revolves around a police officer turned professor Satyarth aka Satya who strongly believes in his ideal principles. This show focusses deeply on the values of life taught to the younger generation. It also portrays different shades of Professor Satyarth in his personal life. This show will also highlight the problems faced by youngsters and lifestyle of teachers. This show analyses the system of education.

Cast:

Aditya Srivastava as Professor Satyarth aka Satya

Sakshi Tanwar as Professor Sadhana Deshpande

Avika Gor as Malini Deshpande

Ali Asgar as Professor Shyam Das

Rahil Azam as Professor Deepak Mishra

Paras Arora as Ashwin Kumar

Alam Khan as Manoj

Anupam Kher as Principal Vilas Kumar Deshpande

Characters:

Professor Satyarth: An unmarried man in his early forties, who was forced to resign his job as a police officer despite his honesty, because of corrupt officials. He decides to pursue teaching profession, as he strongly believes that teaching many youngsters can create a better society. Straight forward, strict, bold in expressing his views, he attracts the students of the college with his charisma. He possesses a golden heart as he can do anything and everything for his students. He focusses in inculcating precious values of life in young minds.

Professor Sadhana Deshpande: Daughter of Principal Vilas Kumar, Professor in the same college, who likes to lead a dignified life. She has an unforgettable past with Professor Satyarth as they had been in an unsuccessful relationship. She lives with her daughter Malini Deshpande, who studies in the same college. Her marriage with another person ended unsuccessful.

Principal Vilas Kumar Deshpande: Principal of AGV College of Arts and Science. He didn't accept Satya and Sadhana's relationship in the past, which eventually led them to part their ways. Meeting Satya after many years, he reluctantly agrees to appoint him as Professor. Later, he gradually develops good opinion about Satya.

Professor Shyam Das: A professor with good sense of humour, immediately befriends Satya. Despite being victim to pranks, he takes everything sportive and makes others happy. He always supports Satya whenever a problem arises.

Professor Deepak Mishra: A professor who boasts himself for being intelligent. A man with grey shades in character, often opposes Professor Satya and envies him. He can be considered as the antagonist of the story.

Malini Deshpande: An attractive, young ambitious girl who studies in the same college where her mother works as a Professor. Short tempered, sensitive, adamant and yet lovable person. She initially hates Professor Satya but later respects him a lot. She's the topper of the class.

Ashwin Kumar: A cool, talented boy who is almost the dream boy of the college. He competes with Malini in studies and they have a relationship like Tom and Jerry.

Manoj: A boy who keeps bullying others and he behaves arrogant at times. He would be the center of attraction in class especially in Satya's class. He is envious about Ashwin. His character gets gradually changed by Professor Satya's approach.

Promo:

A voiceover by Aditya sir as follows:

"Life teaches us many lessons. Life tricks us and makes us believe that violence suppresses innocent and weak people (A scene of violence is shown symbolically by fire and broken glass pieces and blackout). Life makes us believe that corrupt people can defeat honest people (a showcase is shown with medals and a white name badge is placed on the table and blackout) Life makes us believe that there's no hope for humanity in this world. But, life has taught me that a match stick with fire is enough to destroy darkness (a matchstick is burnt in darkness). Similarly Knowledge destroys ignorance. I'm destined to ignite the fire of knowledge and explore life, and my vision is to make a better society (a man is seen wearing a formal shirt and carries a bag and some books). Then Aditya sir is seen walking into the college campus majestically. The title and timings of the show is shown beside the promo.

Number of Episodes: Approximately 500 episodes.

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Entry 2

THE BASIC PLOT OF THE SHOW :

" THERE IS NO COMPROMISE WHEN IT COMES TO CORRUPTION YOU HAVE TO FIGHT IT "
( A . K ANTONY )

" THIS IS A COURT OF LAW , YOUNG MAN , NOT A COURT OF JUSTICE
( OLIVER HOLMES )

THE CAST :

THE CHARACTERS :

THE NUMBER OF EPISODES :

TITLE :

PROMO :

VOICE OVER OF SURVEER PATEL :
" Mulzim Qanoon Ki Mehmoob Aulaad Hota Hai "
SCENE FLASHES :
" Qanoon Kehta Hai , Shak Ka Faida Mulzim Ko Dia Jai ( pauses ) Prosecution Ka Defence Kamzor Hony Ki Bina Py Ye Adaalat , Vinod Roy Py Lagai Gy Tamam Aroopon Ko Rad Karti Hai Aur Un-Hain Ba-Izzat Bari Kar Ky Unki Kursi Un-Hain Wapis Karti Hai "
A Men Named Ravi Khana Wearing A Black Court And White Shirt , Addressed . Judge Broke The Nib Of The Pen , While Signing The Documents And Court Reporter Saves His Last Verdicts . The Court Is Adjourned ( hammer voice )
MUSIC : MYSTERIOUS MELODY
OOO
AFAQ BHAGNE : ( irritated ) Tum Samjh Kun Ni Rahy Ho Arjun ( brutal tone ) Ye Adaalat Hai ( stressed ) Adaalat ( with cruelty ) Yahan Insaaf Ni Mila Karta ( helpless tone ) Yahan Ye Daikha Jata Hai K , Kaun Ziada Achy Tareeqy Sy Jhoot Bolta Hai ( taunting )
ARJUN MALHOTRA : ( cold tone ) Hum Satya Ki Larai Larain Gy ( strong ) Phir Chahy Iss K Lia Hamain Marna Pary ( with great courage ) Tu Hum Marain Gy , Katna Pary ( firm tone ) Tu Hum Katain Gy ( with fire in voice ) Magar , Hum Jhukain Gy Kabhi Ni ( telling ) Afaq..!

MUSIC : Patriotic Beats
OOO
LET'S REWIND THE STORY WHEEL , 5 DAYS BACK :
SCENE : It Was A Court Room , Where Judge Was Keenly Observing The Defense Lawyer And Prosecutor , Sideways Eyeing The Witness ( Standing Inside The Witness box ) Too . Suddenly , The Temperature Of Court Room Increases And The Prosecutor Restlessly Changes His Position .
MUSIC : TENSED STRINGS
SURVEER PATEL : Jaypal Singh , Kia Apna Inn Do Logon Ka Qatal Kia Hai ??
[ PIN DROP SILENCE ]
BACKGROUND : One Person Leans Over The Prosecutor's Shoulder And Asked Tensely :
" Why Are You Not Objecting "
SOHA TIRPATHI : ( helpless tone ) Hum Object Ni Kar Sakty Arjun ( briefs ) Jaypal Mulzim Ni Hai ( stressing ) Gawah Hai ( telling ) Gawah K Pass Khamosh Rehny Ka Haq Ni Hota ( chewed ) Jaisy Mulzim ( eyeing Vinod ) K Pass Hota Hai .
JAYPAL SINGH : Haan ( pauses ) Mainy Inn Dono Insaano Ki Jaan Li Hai Your Honour...! ( closes his eyes )
[ EVERYTHING BECOMES PAUSED ]
Judge Shockingly While Prosecutor And Arjun In Unbelievable State Look At Jaypal . Surveer Smirks After Looking At His Client , Standing Inside The Witness Box . Yeah , Sadly , Witness Box , Because Law Says :
" No One Is Guilty Until The Crime Is Proved "
OOO
LET'S SHIFT THE STORY IN REVERSE GEAR AND STARTED IT FROM THE 1ST CHAPTER...!
OOO
CLIP 1 :
SCENE : The Extreme Chilled Room Is Illuminated By A PC Screen Only{ Camera Shifted And Scans The Room } Scattered Food Boxes , Disposable Glasses , A Crumbled Coat Lying On A Sofa , Dusty Tie And A Pair Of Upside Down Shoes ; Tells Us That , The Person Doesn't Visit His Home From Past 3 Days . The Cluster Of A Dangled Tapes , A Box Full Of CD's In Green / Pink Wrappings , Flying Papers , Old News Paper Cuttings , Few Books And A Big Piles Of File , Filled The Space Of That Room . A Green Soft Board , Almost Occupied With All Of It's Puzzle Pieces , Is Visible . Waiting For It's Last Piece , To Be Fitted Inside It { Camera Focused Over The Soft Board }
BACKGROUND : In The Background , There Is A Voice Of Keys , Like Some One Is Typing With A Quite Fast Pace . Mean Time , The Printer Noise Is Also Added In The Background .
CONTOUR : A Men Of Middle Age Is Leaning Over The Desktop Table , Wearing A Black Specs And Looking In Tension , But His Eyes Shows Excitement Vibes Too . A Badge Lying On The Top Of The Table , Shines In The Bright White Light , As His Lips Carved Into A Soothing Smile .
DIALOGUES :
[ KNOCKING VOICE ]
His All Muscles Clenched In Stress , Senses Becomes Hyper Actives And Neuron Becomes Quick In Stimuli . He Leaves His Chair And Alertly Asked :
ARJUN MALHOTRA : Who Is This ?
[ MUMBLING VOICE ]
AFAQ BHAGNE : It's Me ( telling ) B...
ARJUN MALHOTRA : ( relaxing his guts ) Oh ( sighed ) Okay!
[ DOOR OPENING VOICE ]
AFAQ BHAGNE : ( impatiently ) Any Progress ?
ARJUN MALHOTRA : ( meaningfully winking ) Kahin Ki Ent , Kahin Ka Rora , Bhanumati Ny Khamba Jora ( smiles sweetly )
MUSIC : VICTORY BEATS
XXX
CLIP 2 :
SCENE : A Room Enlighten With A 5O W Bulb { Camera Zoomed } Sofa With A Table Is Visible In The Center { Camera Focused Over The Dirty Brown Colored Walls } A Picture Of A Fist Can Be Seen With A Title :
~Ab Mukka Chalay Ga ~
~Koi Na Hamain Rok Saky Ga~
BACKGROUND : In The Background , There Are The Voices Of Two People { Camera Direction Turned } Now They Are Visible .
CONTOUR : The First Men Named Vinod Roy Is Wearing A Black Colored Kurta And A Ash White Wasket . His White Hairy Scalp Looks Golden In The Orange Light . He Is Facing The Camera .
The Second Men Named Jaypal Singh's Back Is Facing The Camera . Only The Reflection Of His Right Side Of The Body Is Visible On The Glass Of The Shelf , Present At His Left Side . A Scar Or A Mark Of Knife Is Present On His Right Cheek , Starting From The Temple And End At His Left Jaw Bone , Slant In Position .
DIALOGUES :
JAYPAL : R ( calling )
VINOD ROY : ( smoking ) Zameen Sarkar Ki Hai ( comes closer to him ) Tu Hukum Bhi Sarkar Ka Hee Chalay
MUSIC : BANG BANG

OOO
SCENE : A Well Settled And Sophisticated Office , Having A Good Collection Of Books ,Specially Literature And Law
BACKGROUND : A New's Reporter Voice , From AKN News Channel , Is Echoing Inside The Office . When Someone Switched Off The TV .
DIALOGUES :
SOHA TIRPATHI : ( worried tone ) Ab ?
ARJUN MALHOTRA : Suna Hai ( dramatically ) Agar Badshah Ka Qila Girana Ho ( pauses ) Tu Uska Wazir Ko Daboochna Chaiya ( dare devil tone ) Chot Wahan Marni Chaiya ( angrily ) Jahan Zakham Taza Ho
MUSIC : FLUTE TUNE
OOO
SCENE : It Was A Top Floor Of An Under Construction Building , Which Is Vacant Now .
BACKGROUNG : Boots Voice . A Men Appears On The Camera Screen , Having A Belly Pouch And Goggles On Eyes .
DIALOGUES :
AJEET ARORA : R ( hesitatingly ) Naya Assignment Aya Hai ( secretly whispers in his ears )
VINOD ROY : ( up his left eye brow ) Laundering ?
AJEET ARORA : ( nodded , still not meeting his gaze with him )
VINOD ROY : ( carelessly ) Ye Department Jaypal Ka Hai Ussy Bolo
AJEET ARORA : ( gathering his courage , speaks ) Iss Baar Money Ki Jagah Weapons Hain ( tells in one breath )
VINOD ROY : So What ? ( smirks ) After All Money Talks...! ( cheers )
MUSIC : SAM DAM DAND BHED
OOO
SCENE : A Shabby Place , Like An Old Factory , Having Rusted And Jammed Machinery , Thick Layers Of Dust , Spider Webs And Scattered Bear Cans .
BACKGROUND : In The Background , There Are The Voices Of Two Peoples , Coming From Of One Of Those Lanes . Let's Zoom The Camera And Focused On That Particular Lane .
DIALOGUES :
ARJUN MALHOTRA : Tum Mjhy Ni Janty Ho Gy Jaypal ( smirks ) But Ye Baat Tu Tay Hai K ( pauses ) Main Tumhara Baray Mai ( pointing towards himself ) Bht Kuch Janta Hoon ( challenging tone )
JAYPAL SINGH : ( making his tone impressive ) For Example ( asking )
ARJUN MALHOTRA : ( likes his straight forward way ) Tumhara Aik Baita Tha ( smirks seeing a hurt appears in later eyes ) Jo k Aik Car Accident Mai ( stressing ) Maar Dia Gaya ( challenging tone ) Tum Janty Ho , Tumhara Baity Ka Qatil Kaun Hai ?
JAYPAL SINGH : ( calm tone ) Mere Baity K Hathyary Ko Saza Mil Chuki Hai ( patting his cheeks ) Tumhara Homework Complete Ni Hai ( removing unseen dust from his badge ) Arjun ( marches away from there )
ARJUN MALHOTRA : ( shouting ) Tumhara Baity K Hathyry Aj Bhi Azaad Ghoom Rahy Hain Jaypal
JAYPAL SINGH : ( his feet pauses but showing himself strong ) Saboot ( asking )
ARJUN MALHOTRA : Bina Saboot Ni Ayaa Hon Main Iss Baar ( throwing the packet over the table ) Saboot Sath Laya Hon ( patting his cheeks ) Time Nikal K Daikh Laina ( joined his both hands ) Jai Ram G Ki ( marches out )
MUSIC : SUSPENSEFUL LYRICS
OOO
PRESENT :
## COMING BACK TO THE COURT ROOM ##
JAYPAL SINGH : ( continued ) Kun K Mainy Wo Qatal ( looks into defense eyes ) Apna Self Defense Mai Kia Thy ( respectful tone ) Your Honor ( showing thumbs up sign to his tensed companions ) Aur Qanon Self Defense Ko Qatal Ni Manta ( smirks ) Your Honor ( confident tone )
CLIP ENDED :
VOICE OVER OF AFAQ BHAGNE :
" Ye Annt Ni ( dare devil tone ) Bulky Shuruwat Hai Iss Kahani Ki ( wicked smile ) "
MUSIC : SAM DAM DAND BHED
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TO BE CONTINUED

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Entry 3

Name: Complicated

Plot: A RAW agent meets his old flame after retirement and recalls the beautiful moments spent with her 20 years back. When he tries to reignite their relationship, she drifts away even though she loves him deeply as well. Then his past returns, once again causing complications in an already complicated relationship.

Characters and Description:
Aditya Srivastava as Rajbir Sareen - A retired RAW agent, Rajbir moves to Lyon, France with the hopes of living the quiet life after over 25 years of the fast-paced, hectic spy life. He loves poetry, music, and travelling solo.
Sakshi Tanwar as Sunaina Rajput - A French-born Indian, Sunaina is a theatre actress and writer. She has been part of a French Indian theatre group for 30 years and loves her job. She is self-made and does not rely on anyone for anything.
Tarun Khanna as Rajeev Gupta - The head of the French theatre group, he has nursed a deep love for Sunaina for ages, but he has never said anything knowing that Sunaina does not love him. Yet he will do anything to see her happy.
Rajeev Khandelwal as Viren Shah - A current RAW agent and Rajbir's old partner, Viren can never think of retiring and leaving the fast, secretive life. He is the only one, though, who understands Rajbir and what he wants.
Mahesh Manjrekar as Shamsher Singh - The current RAW head, Shamsher does not seem to have any life outside RAW. For him, it's all about the country, the enemies, and his agents. His tough demeanour makes him a perfect RAW head.

Number of Episodes: 100

Promo:
In a supermarket, Rajbir suddenly finds himself face-to-face with Sunaina.
Rajbir: Sunaina?
Sunaina: Rajbir?
Sunaina turns to leave, but Rajbir stops her: Ek minute Sunaina. Meri baat toh suno. Jo bees saal pehle huya tha uske baare mein...
Sunaina cuts him off: Bye Rajbir.
Rajbir: Sunaina dekho main tumse bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke I love...
Sunaina interrupts: Bye Rajbir.
Before Rajbir can say anything else, Sunaina leaves. Rajbir tries to go after her, but he suddenly finds himself in a familiar office, trying to open a locked door. He turns to face Shamsher Singh: What do you want now?
Shamsher: I need you to return to an old case. Your first case.
Rajbir: Nahi. Maine woh sab chor diya hai. I'm retired. Main wapas nahi aaonga.
Viren: Rajbir you need to return. One last time. Yeh zaroori hai.
Rajbir: Nahi Viren. Woh zaroori hai. Sunaina zaroori hai.
Black screen.
Voiceover: Ab kya karega Rajbir? Jisse pyaar bhi chahiye par jisse uski purani zindagi bhi nahi chorna chahti hai? Kaise samblega woh yeh dono zimedaariyan? Dekhiye Complicated.

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Name: Sapney

Plot: 3 men, in their late 80s, are spending their last days in a seniors' home. They then decide to live their life to the fullest and fulfill their dreams. As they remember their childhood, youth, and adult dreams, the 3 men end up in the middle of a big scam.

Characters and Description:
Aditya Srivastava as Ranveer Dixit - Ranveer spent his entire life working to provide for his family. First his parents, then his siblings, then his wife, and then his kids. After his wife died and he retired, Ranveer's kids left him in a seniors' home where he makes 2 best friends and decides to fulfill his dreams of becoming a singer and singing in front of a crowd some of his favourite evergreen numbers.
Rajeev Khandelwal as Altaf Qureshi - He was wrongfully accused of being a murderer, spent 5 years behind bars, and then 5 years fighting the case, only to find himself out on the street after his family refuses to take him back. He makes his way to the seniors' home where with much difficulty he finally starts trusting people and then decides that he wants to become a pilot and fly a plane just once.
Sudeep Sahir as Robert D'Costa - He spent his entire life running after money only to lose it in one bad deal. Now he is spending the rest of his life in a seniors' home run by the same NGOs that he once supported. While attempting to kill himself, Robert realizes that he always did what his father had taught him and not what his heart had wanted. He joins Ranveer and Altaf in filling those hidden dreams.
Ridhima Pandit as Jhanvi Shroff - Jhanvi is one of the caretakers in the seniors' home and the closest to Ranveer, Altaf, and Robert. She fills their life with love and care and helps them in their endeavours to fulfill their dreams.
Rajat Kapoor as Rishi Sanyal - A corrupt politician, Rishi has been running a scam using fake NGOs for several years. When one of the NGOs is exposed, Rishi knows it is only a matter of time before police and media reach him and he scrambles to find scapegoats, which he finds in the form of Ranveer, Altaf, and Robert, 3 men who came to him to ask him for assistance in helping Altaf become a pilot.

Number of Episodes: 150

Promo:
On divided screens.
Young Ranveer: Yeh lo Sudha. Isse Raj ko uss school trip pe bhej sakti ho. Arre pagli ro maat. Ek mahine ki toh baat hai. Ek mahine mein adjust nahi kar sakta hoon?
Old Ranveer: Jis bete ke liye maine bus chorke kam pe pedel jaata tha, aaj wohi bete ko mere khayal purane lagne lag gaye hain.
Young Altaf (yelling): Haan aata hai mujhe gussa! Kya karoon? Jab koi mujhe pareshan karta hai toh main aapne gusse pe control nahi kar pata hoon! Ji karta hai ke saamne wale ko maar doon!
Old Altaf: Sab kehte the ke gusse pe kabu paa warna ek din musibat mein phas jayega. Phas hi gaya aur dus saal lag gaye usse niklane mein. Ab gussa aata hai toh pee jaata hoon.
Young Robert: Meena I can't even take 2 days off. Dad hamasa kehte the ke time is money. Aur agar mein do din off liye toh socho kitna bara nuksan hoga mujhe!
Old Robert: Kaash Dad ne yeh kaha hota ke money cannot buy family. Naa family rahi aur naa money raha. Ab toh bas tum dono hi meri family ho.
Rishi coming in front of the screen: These 3 are perfect. Inhe teeno ko jald se jald mere saamne pesh karo. Ab yeh teeno meri jaan aur izaat dono bachayenge.
Jhanvi (proudly): No Mr. Sanyal. Aap ne inhe teeno ko galat samjha hai. Yeh teeno koi bebas buddhe nahi hain. Yeh teeno mere R.A.R. dadu hain aur aap ke baap ke bhi baap hain.
Rishi: Dekhte hain. Kaun kis pe bhari parta hai. Tumhare yeh R.A.R. dadu yah main aur meri shaitaani khopdi.

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Title of the show: Prem Vilas

The basic plot of the show: This show is a drama which revolves around an ex-army officer who is assumed to be dead by the nation. In real, the person survives and he had to live in another country for several years. One day, he decides to go back to his homeplace to find a meaning for his life. His life changes when he decides to help underprivileged people. He meets an ambitious young girl who eventually happens to be his daughter. This show deals with themes like father-daughter love, friendship, separation, care and joy of life.

Cast:

Aditya Srivastava as Lt. ShivaKumar/ Suryadev

Ronit Roy as Aman Singh

Niti Taylor as Samyukta

Pankaj Kapoor as Binay Roy

Swati Shah as Neela Kulkarni

Anita Hassanandani as Pranita

Bhadra Pareikh as Sunil

Rahul Dev as Inspector Mukesh

Characters:

Shivakumar/Suryadev: Shivakumar, an ex-army man who meets a near death experience in a war against terrorists and considered to be dead. He was saved by a nomadic group and migrated to another country. He suffers from post traumatic stress disorder from the dreadful events of war. After several years, he wants to come back to his country to reunite with his family but none of them are alive. So he decides to help underprivileged people and thus he starts his life with a new identity... Suryadev... He builds a home for underprivileged people named "Prem Vilas"

Aman Singh: A photo journalist who writes more about social issues. He gets acquainted with Surya after a news has been circulated about Prem Vilas. He supports Surya and he has a good relationship with Prem Vilas members.

Samyukta: An ambitious young girl who grows in an orphanage. She aspires to be a doctor. She likes to help people. She gets saved by Surya from molesters once. Thus she acquaints Surya, and visits Prem Vilas. She craves for parental love. She develops a daughter like relationship with Surya and eventually learns that he is her father Shivakumar.

Binay Roy: An old man, whose children thrown him out of their house. He considers Surya as his own son. Though he's a witty person, he suffers from early stages of Alzheimer.

Neela Kulkarni: A motherly woman, who lost her husband due to cancer. She doesn't have a child. She prepares sweets very well. She has a motherly bond with Surya.

Pranita: Teacher to Samyuktha, she cares her a lot. When she comes to know about Surya, she starts admiring him secretly.

Sunil: A talented boy who aspires to become a sportsperson. Since Surya is inclined to sports, he launches a sports academy for youngsters with help of Aman Singh.

Inspector Mukesh: A corrupt inspector who intervenes with Surya's life and tries to let him down in every possible way.

Promo:

A man (Aditya sir) is seen travelling in the top of the bus. He says, in this new birth, I am ready to face my challenges. I have a past, in which I failed, but I'm not going to give up. (Blackout) A young girl is seen chased by some people and we see Aditya sir saving her. She says "I wish he was my father" Promo ends with title and timing.

Number of Episodes: Approximately 750 episodes.

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Name: Sabse Alag

Plot: A gangster, a politician, and a policeman. 3 men with 3 different backgrounds and 3 different motives. Yet they share a common goal. A goal that is quite different from what you would expect it to be. A goal to change the system. A goal to fight the system. A goal to help India move forward. Yet one man can stop them all. But will he or will he ultimately join hands with them?

Characters and Description:
Aditya Srivastava as Santosh Shetty - Santosh was born into a family that has worked for years for Anna. But Santosh wishes to do more. He doesn't want to kidnap, murder, extort, and do so many illegal activities. He wants to feel good. He wants to be recognized for doing good.
Nawazuddin Siddiqui as Inspector Raj Singh - He gets transferred every few months because he wishes to change the police perception, but others around him don't want it to change. Yet wherever he goes, he makes a big difference. And he will continue to do so until he can.
Boman Irani as Ashish Kapoor - His father was a minister. His grandfather was a CM. His great-grandfather a MP. So when Ashish is growing up it's only obvious that he'll go into politics as well. But he wishes to change the face of politics. He wishes to make it a good term, not a bad.
Suniel Shetty as Anna - Anna. The one word is enough for anyone to run and hide. Anna can do anything. He can get a police officer transferred or killed. He can take a business to new heights or sink it into bankruptcy. He can elect a new party or bring in the old one. He is a hand behind every move in a country that knows nothing about him. He is Anna.

Number of Episodes: 150

Promo:
On a black screen, a voiceover: Ek goonda.
Santosh appears on screen running after a man, shooting at him. As the screen fades out, Santosh successfully shoots and kills the man.
Over a black screen, a voiceover: Ek neta.
Ashish appears on screen, walking amongst the public in a clean white suit, shaking hands, waving, and asking for votes.
Again a black screen and a voiceover: Ek police officer.
Raj appears on screen, beating up 2 men in the lock-up. One yells out: Bolta hoon! Sab batata hoon! Bas marna band karo!
Black screen and a voiceover: Aur Anna.
Anna appears on screen, sitting proudly and confident, with a phone in his hand: Ratan ne apna payment bheja? Agar nahi bheja toh kal uska business bhi nahi rehna chahiye.
A final black screen and a voiceover: Char log, char kahaaniyan, aur ek maksat. Yah sach mein hai ek maksat?

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow!! Happy to see these lovely entries 😃

I am sure there's a tough competition between all the six entries... I can't shut my mouth after seeing them 😆

Friends, I am just posting my reviews, please check the entries completely before reviewing them... Don't judge the entries with others' opinions... 😳

Entry 1: This entry deals with concept which remains unexplored in a college or youth based storyline... The character of Aditya sir is something which we can connect... Choice of cast is good... Good attempt... 👏I loved the way by which Aditya sir is introduced... I loved the voiceover part in the promo ❤️

Entry 2: OMG 😲 I guess I am watching a movie... Just kidding 😆 I appreciate the person for taking more efforts to make this entry... The promo part was like a movie trailer... Chapter 1... The person had made a pilot episode itself... Good effort ⭐️ Regarding Aditya sir's character... A different shade... Nice... ❤️ Formatting of text is little distracting... 😳

Entry 3: This concept sounds really interesting... Cast is good... A different character for Aditya sir which is really intriguing... Wonderful attempt 👏

Entry 4: This is something I never expected 😆 Idea is unique... I am just imagining Aditya sir in his 80s'... It would be great and interesting to watch... ⭐️

Entry 5: I guess this concept has a lot of backstory... Some more details could have been included... But this is yet another unique concept which has lots of things to say it seems... Aditya sir's character seems to have more mysteries in it... Eager to watch it... 😳

Entry 6: Aditya sir as gangster with good morals... This reminds me of some iconic gangster roles... Cast is again quite interesting... ⭐️

Overall review: I have some wild guesses about the writers of the entries... I have found a Rajeev fan here... In fact he's a good actor... His characters are equally good as Aditya's characters... A big round of applause to all the participants 👏 I am wishing you all the best... 👍🏼 I just wanted to comment my views... Everyone has done a very good job... I am not a judge 😆 I end my reviews with this...Thank you all for engaging me with your entries 😊

Edited by swathi17 - 8 years ago

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Entry 1: i would love to watch this show on tv ❤️ The plot is very interesting. Satya..an officer turned professor! Great!

I loved plot & especially the casts a lot. My dream couple Aditya-Sakshi

Entry 2: Heavy plot & strong characters. But i think that too many cooks can spoil the food. 😳

Entry 3: Again Aditya & Sakshi❤️..nice plot. Would like to know why Sunaina kept rejecting Rajbir!

Entry 4: it's different. But at last the main focus went to Jhanvi (Ridhima) from the Trio.

Strong cast!

Entry 5: I loved that the plot will eventually deal with the bonding of father-daughter. Would love to watch Aditya-Niti as father-daughter. <3

Entry 6: Heavy plot & cast again!

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RINKA

@R_Ritz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Hey first of all let me congratulate to all the six participants for their hardwork and dedication👏. These things actually need talent.

Honestly I can't differentiate one from the other since all are excellent and well knit plots seeing the beginning👍🏼. I am really looking forward to the plots moving ahead. Can't wait to read more😃.. Aditya Sir as professor, ex army, as a father and that 80 year old man, all will be executed by him amiacably😊

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