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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thnks angel

dada meine bhi socha tha ki kingkong ko jaywanti and tarzan ko apki bhai se fight kerwaungi..bt manage nahi ho paya
arey end ka na ofc project agaya to bas jaise taise khtm kr diya
thnks that u gave me cnfdnce ki mere ander wohi social genre se bahar ka kuch try krne ki talent hey..kam hi sahi per hey

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Sorry my like button is not working now 😔

Will do it later😳

Will read & review soon.😊

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice story😃👏

Enjoyed the story.

Pankaj hi aisa dream dekh sakta hai😆

🤣

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bluetides

@bluetides

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Very nice plot...

Plot dekh kar hee Maza aagaya welldone GD and Rifah

Ab ek achi writer ko acha plot mil jaye toh poochna hee kya 😳

Amazing nikla story toh ...

The comedy parts are really good and I loved the nice teasing among team 👏

The talking Nemo is really cool 😛 And that chip idea was excellent ...

Daya ke peeche King Kong aur Abhijeet bhaag Tarzan ke peeche 😛

I loved the way cops were so down to earth and realistic even in dream aha 😉

Thora lengthy hua tha par natural thing se defeat karne keliye itna length zaroori hi ...

Yaar par Pankaj ke dream me bhee Pankaj kuch badla nahi 😛

I loved the way you portrayed each one 👏 Something that misses in CID

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hahahaha...the end was awesome. 🤣

The start was nice too. I was imagining this happening. That dialogue of Chitroley 'Main zinda hoon; and then fainting. This was perfect. I can see BP Singh actually doing that. 😆

Then comes Nobita, Doremon etc etc...really I expected to see Doremon take out his door gadget and letting the team come back to bureau, but your ending was nice too. 😆 Nice imagination and very well written.

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Nice story . Loved the use of diagrams & way of explaining . Loved the choice of items also . Loved characterization & especially of DCP sir 😆 I don't know every cartoon character so I can't comment much on them 😆 Expected more adventures from Tarzan .

Only thing is that here also I feel ending part was little hurried like round 2 story . It all ended little bit quickly . Extremely sorry if my opinion hurts.

Again it's a nice story 😊

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Good one! Comic part is also good! Good effort 👏

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Binod Uprety

@binod.abhijeet

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

First Plot and Second execution of story...
Perfectly matched.
The idea is well handled...the happening of the behaviour of cops truely presented.
loved the starting as welll ending..
details was good but long so far...
Chips idea was good though...
Overall very nicely written ...simply loved it...

Edited by binod.abhijeet - 9 years ago

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Krittika Di the story is really classy...😎

i really loved how you handled the plot...👏⭐️

ahan...showing complete expertise of a brilliant writer...👏

it was really refreshing to read something complete out of box from you...👏⭐️ as per your comfort zone.

awww...i was imagining NOBITA and doraemon...😆😛

and that SIZUKA from nobita was brilliant..🤣

Di kya SHINCHAN nahi tha...😉😛

and yes...

your FAVS POWER RANGERS...😲😉😈

It was a complete fun package DI...

a really spectacular effort...👏👏👏

Dada and Riffi...zaberdast plot...👏

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Deba di, binod and riya thnks

abey riya itne se hi band baj gaya mera ager shinchan hota to mein aur milti hi nahi..
Ufff

bt my req pls fir kabhie dada ko aisa kuch krna ho to transformers ki optimus or cid ko combine krne ka chnce dey..
I would love to see optimus prime and abhijeet having a convo
hehehe