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THREE or Maximum FIVEfrom these Bunch) (BEN 10 is Powerless as well Doremone having NO Gadget)and

Remember Hostage's will have a Good Roleregarding Escaping Plan from this Unknown Island...

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CID Team got the News from Hostage's about the Terror of a JUNGLI MANAS, the Right Hand
of MAIN CULPRIT, who made them Hostage's and Used them in Promotion of His Upcoming
Movie in Jungle...

They Worked there like Slaves, Without Salary Employees as They arranged their Foods by Themselves...
<img src="http://s15.postimg.org/5fa9ripi3/5_copy.jpg" alt="" width="504" height="360" />How CID handle all these Situation's...?


😊 RULES 😊




You could not Add any Previous Team member...Only Current Team members, Forensic Team excluding Vaibhav and DCP included...If You want to Cut Down Few Member from Current Team, its OK...

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Storymust be Investigative as well having Comical Flair too...

Ucan easily showed any Fight, Action, Humor, Entertainment between Team,Hostage's and Villain...

YourTeam can Mold Situation as Our Team already giving Few Open Loops so Your Team can Twist it as per Your Story Idea...

Bestof Luck for Your Task Team...!!
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Now our team, Haffooo and 1.krittika is here...
To tell you all a story about a rare and unintentional but adventorous experience of our CID TEAM




the team consist of our Trio, Freddy sir, Purvi mam, Shreya mam, Nikhil, Jaywanti and Pankaj along with the forensic team of Dr. Salunkhe and Dr. Tarika..
Oh yea DCP sir is also there..

And here they gain some strangest experience of their life..
But how?

Chalo dekhte😊


srry but stry mey duo specially Abhijeet sir ko thora jyada screen space mil gaya..and then Freddy sir..
Cant help
dil ke haatho majbur
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The flight is rather uninteresting...but it should not be... A chartered flight only consisting of their team it should be full of life...jokes and masti

But no first this presence of DCP and secondly the extreme bad weather...aftr every five minutes the plane is in some air pocket

If it not has been extremely necessary they would have delayed the journey...

The long silence was broken by Freddy's murmur "hawa mey itni pocket wagera ki kya jarurat hey pata nahi"

It was enough to bring a smile on faces of the whole team

Yes nearly all the members of cid Mumbai are in the team.

DCP, ACP, senior inspector Abhijeet, senior inspector Daya, inspector Fredrick, Inspector Purvi, inspector Shreya, inspector Nikhil, sub inspector Pankaj and sub inspector Jaywanti along with the forensic team consisting dr Salunkhe and dr Tarika

They were all in Delhi to attend a republic day ceremony and as per order of home minister the whole team must be present there.

Now they are returning back, to Mumbai to their duty.

Aftr Freddy broke the gloomy environment with his usual jovial tone Abhijeet opened his mouth, his voice is too irritated "yea minister wagera ko smjh nahi ata ki humari duty kaise hey?aise yea din var function manana kitna mushkil hota hoga?kisi case mey deri ho to mushkil per hum apne tarah se kaam kre yea nahi chalega..ajao sab hajira do..lagta hey jaise compulsory day in school ho gaya.."

Daya was enjoying the irritation while enjoying music with earplug in one ear added "haan exam ki pehle last day hota tha compulsory.."

Abhijeet glared hard at Daya but sadly Daya was sitting with close eyes

DCP who was still now sitting with closed eyes absolutely like a statue opened his eyes "yea plane bahut der se sidha nahi chal raha?"

ACP sir murmured "aab ise isse bhi problem"

but Tarika too said "haan achanaq weather thik ho gaya?wo bhi ek dam se?"

Abhijeet gave both DCP and Tarika a look "to aab kya aaplogo ko thik thak cheez pasand nahi ati ain?"

both thought better not to irritate him more so sat quietly, but the silence again got disturbed with announcement from pilot "please pay your attention, hum rasta vatak chuke hey aur kharab weather ki karan ground control se sampark nahi kiya ja parahe hey..hum emergency landing krne ki koshish kr rahe hey"

different type of reaction came up..DCP got back to statue mode

Tarika and her co passenger Jaywanti started doing some low tone talking

Shreya and her co passenger Purvi seemed rather excited

Freddy and his co passenger Nikhil seemed tensed but ok

Pankaj followed DCP's action

Abhijeet was snubbing and Daya sat straight pulling out the earplug

ACP and dr Salunkhe was totally unaffected

the plane gave a high jerk and then started flying downwards in a odd fashion

dr Salunkhe looked around "yea plane kuch ajeeb tarah se nahi ja raha niche ki taraf?"

to prove his statement again came the announcement "plane sampurn rup se out of control ho chuka hey pls aaplog apne apne parachute ki help se utarne ki koshish kijiye.."

ACP got up hurriedly..others too started getting ready except Pankaj and DCP

Freddy pushed Pankaj "abbey chal.."

"siirr pappappaa..rrraaaccc"

Daya pushed Freddy "Freddy iski gari atak gayi tum niklo.."

in few minutes the whole team was ready to jump in the vast sea below

Daya had forcefully made Pankaj ready and ACP and Abhijeet jointly did same with DCP

now they started jumping one by one..first the girls then Nikhil Freddy..

ACP turned to the others

Abhijeet said much like a order tone "sir pehle aap aur doctor saab jaiye..iss Pankaj ko to leke kudna hoga..mein aur Daya ise leke ate hey.."

Pankaj nodded and clanged to Daya

ACP sir eyes DCP "aur DCP sir"

Abhijeet shook his head with a low "ise yeahi rehne dijiye sir plane ki saath"

Daya nudged him "sir aap log chaliye hum inka bhi kuch krte hey"

dr Salunkhe gave a look to DCP "dekho yea ulta problem na barah dey dekhna..chalo ACP"

and they two jumped..

Now duo looked at each other and nearly pushed Pankaj and DCP and jumped themselves followed by the pilot

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The cold water of sea is not so easy to tolerate but luckily they are much near to a piece of land

with all their might they pulled themselves to the land and finally got there

reaching there they freed themselves from the parachute, folded it and then the first thing DCP did is giving a hard pinch to himself, then uttering "mein jinda hu" he fainted

others tried to make sure everyone is safe failed to find the pilot searched fr him in nearby waters but failed all gathered back at the island

Pankaj was now much relaxed...looked at DCP and asked to Freddy who was near to him "sir yea DCP sir apne jinda rehne pey itna shocked kiu ho gaye ki behosh hi ho gaye?"

Freddy didn't care to answer him but moved to ACP sir "sir yea koi island lagta hey..."

dr Salunkhe was looking around now nodded "haa per yea island sayed logo ki rehne ki layek nahi hey dur dur taq koi gher wher nahi dikh raha"

Purvi and Tarika too joined them "ha sir na koi insaan.."

Shreya added "hume aur ander ki taraf ja ke dekhna cahiye sayed koi madat.."

Nikhil cut her "per DCP sir?"

Daya who was trying to wake up DCP and now succeeded answered "jag gaye..DCP sir"

they all gathered together and decided to move in further to see if any help available when Daya noticed absence of Abhijeet "yea Abhijeet kaha gaya? Wo yeaha taq nahi pahucha kya?"

Jaywanti relaxed his tension with "sir woha hey pani ki pass kuch ker rahe.."

Daya moved to Abhijeet "kya boss aab taier ke hi Mumbai jaoge kya? Pani ko kya gaur se ghoor rahe ho?"

Abhijeet just nodded, Daya came beside him and looked down at what Abhijeet is looking

a clownfish is just in the water near the coast of island wriggling but not moving away

Daya knelt on the ground and then notice the right fin of the fish bit shorter

it remained him of something but..he looked up at Abhijeet and seeing his eyes widening in shock again looked back at fish..it's smiling..

A shocking voice came out of Daya's throat "Nemo..." the fish nods

duo exchanged worried glances at not believing on their eyes

others were till now watching them now ACP sir came nearer "kya hua tum dono aise kya.."

but before they can answer trio heard a different voice "hello"

all three pairs of eyes turned to the voice, the fish is now on the land standing on his caudal fin just beside Daya

Daya stood up hurriedly and gave a small jump backwards

the fish shook its dorsal fin "hello its Nemo here..aaplog yeaha kaise aye?yea jagah khtre se khali nahi hey"

still now team had gathered around.. Dr Salunkhe found his voice first "Pradyuman mein sahi dekh raha hu na?yea ek machli hey?"

Nemo answered even before ACP "yes mister..aap sahi dekh rahe hey..I'm Nemo..per aaplogo ne kaha nahi aap sab yeaha kaise?"

the team exchanged glances..they are utterly confused

Jaywanti started "wo Nemo jee.." she felt all her team members are looking at her awakardly but she continued "hum Mumbai se hey..c..nahi mtlb Delhi se Mumbai ja rahe they plane crash ho giya to hum yeaha"

Nemo shook his head "yea jagah sahi nahi hey.."

Abhijeet scowled "kyun jagah mey kya hey?"

Pankaj queried "koi atma wagera to.."

Nemo grinned "arey atma jaise kuch hey kya..wo nahi..actually mein aur mere kuch dost yeaha kayed hey.."

Daya looked around "kayed..tum to bare aram se tayer rahe they kayed kaha ho?"

Nemo sighed "mere lucky fin ki neeche ek chip chupa rakha uss jungli manas ne,jyada dur jao to net se pakar lenge"

Freddy looked around "jungli manas..dost..kuch samjh nahi araha.."

Nemo was about to answer but they heard some noise and the tall trees standing far seemed to be in great storm

and a strange call of "aaa" much like the voice of apes is being heard

Nemo looked around "oh no..wo araha hey..aap log ayiye mere saath.."

DCP who was still now sitting at a far rock got up and came forward "kya kr rahe ho tumlog kaha.."

he stopped seeing the fish "yea yea kya..hey..kya.."

Nemo got restless "chaliye aaplog jaldi"

DCP gave a shocked voice "haan..yea machli..yea bol.."

but Nemo already started moving, Shreya looked back at the trees "sir hume filal Nemo ki baat sunna cahiye na?"

ACP sir nodded and signaled all to follow Nemo and himself pulled DCP with him..

Nemo took them to a cave and entered inside

cid team followed..

DCP entered with "yea ho kya raha hey mujhe kuch smjh nahi araha.."

Abhijeet shook his head "hume hi smjh nahi araha aap kya smjhenge"

Daya was looking around "yeaha koi rehta hey per.."

Nikhil wailed in loud tone "koi hey.."

some strange voices came from a corner

all the eyes turned their, a Japanese boy came out from that corner looking sleepy and tired followed by a blue buldgy cat

Daya, Purvi, Shreya, Jaywanti Pankaj, Tarika together uttered "Nobita.. Doremon.."

Freddy and Nikhil was looking really near to faint while DCP shouted once again "yea ho kya raha hey"

Nemo came in front "yeahi hey mere dost"

the blue cat looked at them "inn logo ko bhi pakar liya jungli manas ne?"

Abhijeet looked at ACP who is still looking at the three characters with rounded eyes, then at dr Salunkhe who is scrutinizing them with eyes

then turned to other group, Daya felt his stare so turned to explain

"boss yea Nobita Nobi hey aur yea Doremon..ek billi jise 22nd century se Nobita ki great grandson ne time travel ki jariye Nobita ki bachpan mey veja hey taki Nobi family ki future dfrrnt ho"

"hein?"

"haan.." Tarika agreed "aur Doremon ki pass to itne gadgets hey ki.."

Doremon cut her "kaha madam yeaha mere pass koi gadget kaam nahi krta..hey hi nahi..yeaha bas uss human ape ki hi gadget chlta"

"aab yea kya hey?" asked ACP still trying to digest all those but before they can answer someone called from just outside "arey sara din gufa mey hi baithna hey?kaam vaam nahi krna...jaldi ayo malik bularahe hey"

and there's a noise as if someone's thumping something muscular

and all the three inhabitants of the island rushed out

DCP peeped out and said aloud "k..king..Kingkong.."

others getting another shocked peeped out and all the mouth opened in awe..

A 20 feet tall ferocious looking ape..is standing there..all of them have seen the same species many times as Kingkong

Salunkhe sir uttered "giant collosial gorilla.."

Shreya said under her breath "yeahi wo jungli manas to nahi??"

no one answered though..

Aftr the three inhabitants moved away with the gorilla the team settled on the floor of cave hiding in the dark

DCP sighed "yea sab kya ho raha koi mujhe batayega?"

Pankaj started mechanically "humara plane crash hua aur hum iss island mey a pahuche yeaha ek bolne wali machli mili.."

Purvi cut him calmly "bolne wala..Nemo larka hey"

a small curve came up on all the lips while Pankaj continued "haan to usne hume bataya ki yeaha unn logo ko kisine bandi banake rakha aur fir wo hume yeaha laya yeaha ek billi aur ek larka tha..no..no..kya tha"

Shreya filled up "Nobita aur Doremon..aur aab uss gorilla ne unn sab ko bula liya"

DCP grinned "to yea sab sach tha?"

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ACP sir was still now trying to think something replied in a dry way "aab taq to hum sabne yeahi dekha..iss sab ka matlab bad mey smjhenge abhie filal yea sochna hey hum yeaha se nikle kaise?"

dr Salunkhe exclaimed "haa boss uss gorilla ko pata chal gaya to.."

Daya was leaning against the cave wall sat straight "sir inn teno ko uss gorilla ne aur uss ki wo malik ne bandi bana ke rakha hey..sir hume inn sab ko churana cahiye na sir..hum aise kaise inn logo ko chor k ja sakte hey"

Nikhil said in meek voice "per sir yea sab"

Jaywanti too added "hume to kuch pata bhi nahi akhir baat kya hey"

Shreya nodded "haan aur yea malik kaun hey kyun bandi banaya.." Purvi stopped her "malik choro yea gorilla isse nipatna mtlb.."

Tarika agreed "haa aur yeaha to koi sadhan bhi nahi nahi investigation ki help ke liye koi cheez..yeaha taq gun bhi"

DCP sir teased "acha? tumhe lagta hey tumhare gun se uss gorilla ka kuch bigerta?"

Pankaj eagerly said "haan sir hum gher chlte hey"

dr Salunkhe cut their words "arey jayenge kaise?" ACP shook his head "wohi to wohi to samjh nahi araha"

Abhijeet who was still now sitting with closed eyes opened his eyes "sir sayed yea hostages humari madat kr paye?aur Doremon ne jis human ape ka kaha tha uski gadget kaam ajaye?per iski liye hume unhe harana hoga aur hostages ki madat krni hogi.."

DCP sir teased "acha?kaise?kuch hey?hatiyar?"

Freddy shook his head " sir, humne aise situation pey bhi kaam kiye jaha gun taq nahi tha humare pass..jungle ki logo ke sbse bari taqat aur kamjori dono hi jungle mey hi hota hey.."

Abhijeet patted Freddy's shoulder "haan aur iss bareme bhi hume yea hostages hi batayenge"

ACP sir smiled "to aab unn sbki intejar krte hey.."

aftr a short silence and then low murmur united voice came as "yes sir"

DCP just sighed

aftr waiting fr nearly the whole day at about sunset the three came back, holding something wrapped in leaves

Freddy was the first one to notice them "sir wo log agaye"

DCP who was till now dozing in a corner sat up straight "mein puchtach krunga unse"

no one answered him, the three came inside

Nobita was the first one to open his mouth "oh no hum to vul hi gaye they aaplog bhi aye hue hey..aap ke liye to kuch khane ka laye hi nahi"

Pankaj grumbled something under his breath, but ACP sir said in soft tone "koi baat nahi, hume bhookh bhi nahi lagi hey..tum log baitho hume kuch baat krni hey"

DCP sir was glaring at ACP, dr Salunkhe reminded him "sir junior ke rehte aap kyun puchtach krenge?"

DCP seemed to be satisfied..

Aftr the three of them took their seats on some scattered rocks, all the team members exchanged glances preparing themselves of the quotionare

the setting sun rays are coming in through a small hole at the wall of the cave

Freddy looked around, aftr the sun set there will be no source of light.. The cave is really low of about 6'9"..the gorilla will not be able to come in..but what about the human ape

So Freddy asked the first question "billi..nahi Doremon.. Wo human ape tumne tab bataya na (Doremon nodded) wo kaun hey?"

"wo..wo hey to dikhne mey insan per lagta nahi.."

Nemo interrupted "bahut lamba sa..(pointed at Daya) aapse bhi lamba..tej raaftar wala sambla se.." Nobita nodded excited "saleti rang ke ankhe aur kale rang ke bare bare baal..kisi janawar ka chamri pehnta hey ek bara sa chaku rakhta hey..pero pey rehta hey aur bina pakaye mansh kha leta hey"

team exchanged glances. Abhijeet stopped their excitement "acha acha thik hey, (he felt Doremon wants to say something more) Doremon.."

Doremon nods "sir uska naam hey Tarzan (Nikhil Jaywanti Shreya and Purvi started murmuring something among them Pankaj said in loud tone Tarzan matlb wo Tarzan..Freddy and ACP signaled them to be quiet) wo na pura bandaro ki tarah per ki dali pakar se idher udhar jata hey..bahut taqatvar hey sher chimpanzee sbse lar leta hey, tayer ke ghariyal taq ko pakar leta hey, wo to acha hey aj iss taraf nahi aya warna sung ke hi aaplogo ka pata laga leta yea bahar se hi aap logo ka awaj sun leta bara tej hey..janwar se bhi unki bhasa mey baat kr leta hey..uss Kingkong ko to usine insano wala vasha sikhaya"

Tarika was listening all the things carefully now asked "uski koi kamjori?"

Nobita shook his head "nahi nahi usne kaha ki wo saalo pehle koi dawai khaya usse wo amar ho gaya"

Tarika looked at Salunkhe who asked in thoughtful tone "aur uski koi gadget ki baat.."

now Nemo took the chance "haan usne hum sab pey ek chip lagaya hey aur hume ek maximum distnce bol diya woha se bahar jau to uski pass signal pahuch jata hey aur wo wapas pakar leta hey,hum wo chip kholne ki koshish kre to bhi use pata chal jata hey,aur bhi kaye device hey hume sb pata bhi nahi"

Abhijeet shook his head "aur wo gorrilla?"

Shreya at the same time said "aur tum log yeaha pahuche kaise?"

Nobita sighed "hum to Doremon ki ek under water travelling gadget se travel kr rahe they iss island ki pass aya to kuch cheez bahut force se hume khich liya aur iss island mey patak diya"

Doremon made a extreme sad sigh "aur tab se mera pass koi gadget hi nahi nikal raha"

Abhijeet turned to Nemo with the same questioning look

Nemo sighed "kash mein dad ki baat man leta..mein world tour pey nikla tha..iss island ki pass se gujar raha tha to mujhe bhi aise hi kisi sakti ne khich liya.."

dr Salunkhe concluded "mtlb koi aisa instrument hey jo bahut high power hey aur apne aspas ek distance taq sare cheez apne our..kheech..yea Tarzan ka koi lab hey?"

Doremon nodded "ha wo to hey.."

Purvi queried "per itne paise ate kaha se hey?"

Nobita shrugged "kya pata"

Freddy frowned "per isne tumlogo ko kiu pakar rakha?"

"wo actually Tarzan koi film bana raha hey hume uss film ki promotion mey use kr raha hey aur saath mey bahut sare kaam bhi karata hey"

"film promotion?"

"ha reality show ki jariye film promotion aur uss show ke hissa humlog..jabardasti.."

Purvi asked the long lost question "acha aab gorilla jee ki bareme kuch batao"

before Doremon and Nobita can say anything Nemo said in a hopeless voice "wo dikhne mey to gorilla hey per insano ki tarah chalta firta hey..usmey itni taqat hey ki iss Doremon ki wo gadget lohe ka tha wo tor k raddi bana diya..aur dusre taraf bandaro ki tarah uchal kud bhi krta hey"

ACP sir asked "koi kamjori?"

Nemo thought fr a moment "ha ise tayerna nahi ata"

dr Salunkhe commented "most apes can't swim"

Nobita came bit forward "aap log itne sawal kr rahe hey..aap log police wale ho?"

team was thinking of what to answer when DCP announced proudly "haan hum cid se hey" Doremon and Nemo started looking at them keenly while Nobita jumped "sach mey? Fir aaplog hume gher pahucha sakte ho?Suzuka ki pass?"

Freddy asked "yea kaun hey?" Nobita blushed badly "meri dost" Abhijeet looked at him keenly "lag to nahi raha"

ACP sir cleared his throat with voice..Nikhil was till now thinking something now popped up with a query "tumlogo ko salary wagera?"

Doremon shook his head in no and Nemo gave words "kaha hume to apna khana bhi khud jutana parta hey"

ACP sir consoled him by patting near his lucky fin softly then said "jao tum log khana kha lo andhera bhi ho raha hey"

Doremon moved to a corner and pulled out two rocks, Nobita and Nemo heaped some dry leaves those are scattered over floor and rubbing the rocks they ignited fire on the leaves and moved to a side to complete their dinner. Before that didn't forget to ask the team to join them which they denied

now the team are left on their own to plan

aftr thinking fr some moments Freddy started "sir hume pehle uss Tarzan ki lab taq pahuchna hoga hum sb ki niklne ki rasta wohi se hoga"

Shreya nodded "per sir wo pahera to jarur rakhta hoga..aur hum to iss island ki kuch bhi nahi jante.."

Purvi agreed "aur na humare pass koi sadhan hey"

Nikhil sighed "haa sir humare pass phones hey jiske tower nahi, kuch phones to paani ki wajase kharab bhi ho chuke hey..charger hey per electricity nahi..guns hota bhi to uss ki goli uss jangli manas kya naam bataya uska.." Pankaj supplied "Kingkong" Nikhil continued "uspey asar krta nahi..sir fir"

ACP sir smirked "jangli manas..jangli..fir hum bhi jungle ki tarike se hi use jabab denge" DCP sir shook his head "kaise Pradyuman? hume iss jungle ka kuch nahi pata" Abhijeet supported ACP "to pata kr lenge,inn teno ki madat se"

the three had already finished dinner and now joined them,Daya asked "jungle mey koi pahera hey inka?"

Nemo shook his head "nahi per wo dono hi ghumte rehte hey pure area kabhie yeaha kabhie woha" Nobita made a sad face "haan yea dono to sote bhi kitne kaam hey..bas raat ki 1 se 3 pata nahi sapne dekhte bhi honge yea nahi"

Abhijeet sat straight "ek second raat 1 se 3 wo dono ki dono sote hey?to hum tab pure area ki jach kiu nahi krte?" Nobita made a scared face "kaise krenge?tab to kitna andhera hota hey..aur aag jalaye to dusre janawar pareshan hoke shor krenge aur yea dono ajayenge" Pankaj nodded "sir torch bhi to nahi hey"

DCP sir smiled "ek rasta hey..yea jo mere pass, Pradyuman ki pass, Salunkhe aur Abhijeet ki pass unsmart phones hey..(all can't help but smile at the term) inn ke torches thik hey..roshni bhi jyada nahi ki janawar jag jaye to hum unn ki sahare kr lenge jitna ho sake"

ACP got energetic "to aj hi nikalte hey"

dr Salunkhe asked "unka lab pata hey?"

Doremon nodded "haan per woha jana khtra hoga..usiki smne ki per pey Tarzan aur piche ki per pey jungli manas rehta hey"

Tarika asked looking at her boss "hume wo jagah dikha dena..subha jab wo dono nigrani mey jayenge hum tab woha jayenge"

Nemo nodded "per usmey khtra hoga"

Freddy stopped him "pehle aj raat ki to dekh le"

they started waiting fr the time to pass, Nobita soon dozing off

at the fixed time whole cid team and the hostages divided itself in three groups ACP Daya Shreya Jaywanti, Nobita in one Abhijeet Purvi Freddy and Doremon in other and dr Salunkhe, dr Tarika and Nikhil with Nemo in other.

DCP said someone should stay back at cave not giving the exact reason why but Pankaj preferred to follow DCP

Nemo took them towards the lab cum ofc of Tarzan, from where everything is operated

while two other teams moved to two different direction to see whether there are any way to escape or any way to use opposition's weakness at their benefits

aftr roaming around as much as they can in the given time all the three groups returned back to cave.. aftr getting back at the cave Nemo and Nobita added some more sticks and leaves to the fire and sat around

Nobita was far more excited than any other "to aap logo ne plan kr liya na kaise nikalna hey?wapas jane ka rasta dhund liya?"

Abhijeet nodded disappointedly and turned to dr Salunkhe "dr saab kuch.."

dr Salunkhe cleared his throat dramatically "humara shaq sahi tha..inn sbko jiss cheez ne island taq kheech laya..aur mujhe shaq hey humare plane crash ka bhi isse samandh hey..wo science ka ek ajuba hey"

ACP sir shook his head "Salunkhe sahi tarah se baata peheli mat kr"

"yeaha Tarzan ka ek lab hey..jungle ki beecho beech kaafi jagah saaf krke banaya gaya hey wo lab



Salunkhe continued "..aur jaha taq mujhe smjh aya woha bahut advance technologies use ho raha hey..aur sayed jo undekhi force inn sbko khich laya island pey wohi humare plan clash ki liye bhi jimmedar hey.."

Freddy asked "per sir wo hey kya"

"jitna mujhe smjh aya wo ek artificial black hole hey"

Jaywanti shocked "black hole wo to space.."

Abhijeet cut her "artificial..per yea kaise ban sakta hey?"

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dr Salunkhe was thinking something so didn't answered, Tarika answered instead "ban sakta hey Abhijeet..(she turned to ACP and DCP) yea bahut advance technology hey aur tough bhi..waise to registered labs se abhie bhi yea declare nahi kiya gaya ki yea experiment success hua..per ise banaya ja sakta hey..ager Bose-Einstein condensate jo ki ek silent medium hey, use quarum fluctuation ki help se banaya gaya sound waves ki liye passage ki tarah use kiya jata hey.(seeing confused faces she said) koi pen paper hoti to, (Nemo moved to other corner and bring a piece of black coal)"isse Nobita drawing krta tha isse kr do"

Tarika nodded and draw a sketch

"Uspey laser light use kr ke uss fluid ki speed ko ager sound se bhi fast kr diya jaye to"

Doremon cut her "mtlb sonic radiation ki bina yea pura set up kaam nahi krega?"

dr Salunkhe jumped up "excatly..hum isika fayda utha skte hey..excatly Doremon.."

hearing his shout Nobita who was dozing sat up straight "kya hua Suzuka..su.." seeing all the eyes focused on him he looked around "kya hua?"

Pankaj who was yawning too said "tum so jao Nobita..dctr saab bahut kuch bol rahe hey.."

Salunkhe was about to protest, ACP stopped "wo sab tu soch kaise lab mey kya krna hey kiska kya krna hey"

Daya asked "per sir hume uss Tarzan aur uski jangli manas ka kuch krna hoga na warna lab taq kaise.."

ACP nodded "per kaise humare pass to koi.."

Freddy interrupted "sir dono ke dono jungli hey..iss jungle mey hi paye gaye cheez ko kyun na istemal kiya jaye?"

Abhijeet smiled "good idea..hume dekhna hoga ki aisa kya kya milta hey..Nemo tum log bhi kal dekhna kuch mile to.."

ACP sir stopped "wo sab kal hoga aab raat khtm hone wali hey..chalo sb so jao subha baki ka sochenge"

Nobita who was already half asleep lied down with thud same with Pankaj.. Freddy and Nikhil moved to the farthest more corner and Nemo Doremon moved to entrance area, the girls gathered around the fire and the seniors sat relaxly closing eyes

DCP ordered "Abhijeet Daya tum dono bhi so jao"

duo exchanged glances, ACP answered "yea dono nahi soyenge sir aap so jao"

duo smiled and moved to the entrance and sat leaning on the rock acting as gate

Next day soon aftr sunrise three hostages left fr their work and cid team sat back thinking of any way

Pankaj spoke up with jeal "sir uss gorilla pey goli ka asar to hoga nahi to kyun na hum use utha ke pani mey feq dey?"

Freddy nodded "haa tu uthana"

Abhijeet stopped them "chup raho tum dono..Kingkong ko pehle kabu krna hoga asehi pani mey nahi feq skte"

Purvi suggested "hum koi trap mey ager use kayed kre.."

"per wo to lohe ki cage taq tor.." Jaywanti asked

Shreya suggested "ager use behosh kiya jaye to?"

ACP sir cleared his throat "Shreya yeaha humare pass sadhan bahut limited hey..ismey.."

Tarika said "sir ho skta hey, yeaha kal meine curare plant dekha..iski extract mey anesthetic properties hey"

Nikhil who was peeping out till now asked "per wo hum enter krenge kaise uske body mey?"

Freddy interrupted "sayed teer kam aye?"

DCP shook his head "chance to kam hey..per yea teer kaam ki cheez ho skta hey"

seeing the questioning glance he explained "hum sab ki pass bullets limited hey ager uski bad bhi jarurat pare to?"

Abhijeet nodded "haan yea baat sahi hey..humne uss deep mey bhi to teer banaye they"

Daya was thinking something now sat straight and picked up the coal and said "ager hum Kingkong ke liye ek aisa trap banaye jisse wo latak jaye..fir use pani mey feq dey to?mtlb kuch aise"

ACP sir smiled "to iske liye Nemo ko thora dur tayerna hoga..aab iss Kingkong ka to hua..uske malik ka kya?"

Freddy stood up "uske to payer mey logi lagne se hi kaafi hoga..per sir usse pehle hume khane ki kuch krna hoga na"

Abhijeet Nikhil Shreya and Jaywanti stood up "haan dekhna hoga kya kuch milta hey"

dr Salunkhe and ACP too stood up "chalo hum dono bhi.."

Nikhil stopped them "nahi sir aap dono rukiye hum jarahe hey na"

Daya Pankaj, Purvi and Tarika got up "hum dkhte hey kuch jaruri cheez milti yea nahi"

Abhijeet looked around "Nikhil tum yeahi ruko sir dctr saab aur DCP sir.."

DCP cut him "koi jarurat nahi..hum teen bilkul thik rahenge tum sab niklo.."

the juniors looked at each other and then moved out in full alert mode

Pankaj was busy collecting dry woods "jalane ke liye to kaam ahi jayega..aur khane ke liye fir.."

he heard some heavy footsteps beside so turned and found a pair of black furry legs approaching

wailing out loudly he started running "sirrr...Kingkong...sirrr"

Daya and Tarika was looking at a plant

as Tarika was explaining "yea curare plant hey..ager iski extract nikal liya jaye to.." they hear Pankaj's shout

Purvi who was looking around fr all the ways to move out of that place..when heard the loud call

all ran towards the voice, but Daya stopped others seeing Kingkong following Pankaj

he shout "Pankaj pani ki taraf vaago..jaldi.."

then he started running parallel to Pankaj..

Pankaj tripped over a stone and fall down..Tarika and Purvi shouted in unison "Pankaj.."

Kingkong reached down to Pankaj but just before he can get hold of trembling Pankaj a stone hit him

the gorilla turned towards the direction from where the stone came, Nobita and Doremon was standing there

Kingkong beat his chest with a jungle call and rushed towards them but Daya too take that opportunity, "Purvi Tarika chupo" and he too hit Kingkong with a stone "Nobita vaagoo..Doremon cave ki taraf jao.."

he noticed Kingkong coming towards him..he looked around and started running towards coast

Abhijeet Shreya and Freddy was practicing there target on a tree bringing down fruits when heard heavy footsteps from the other side, Freddy looked around "sir yea kuch.."

Abhijeet nodded and called "Nikhil.." Nikhil was on the top of another short tree answered "jee sir"

"west ki taraf dekho kuch awaj.."

Nikhil followed his orders "sir Daya sir..peeche wo Kingkong.."

"what..." Abhijeet rushed to that direction followed by Shreya and Freddy when Jaywanti shouted "sir Tarzaannn"

they turned and found Tarzan coming towards them jumping from one branch to other while grabbing Nobita under his arm

Abhijeet picked up a big stone from ground but Shreya stopped him "sir ise lagega to Nobita ko utni uchai se feq dega wo.."

Abhijeet moved down the stone and again looked at Daya who was still moving towards the coast..Abhijeet looked back at Tarzan who stood up on a tree "tumlog ko saathi ko kaho ki ruk jaye..warna yeaha se iss larke ko uchal ke niche jo fekenge na to.."

Daya also heard this and stop..Pankaj said in ultimate tension "yea Kingkong to kuchal dega"

Abhijeet looked at Daya and then back at Nobita

Tarzan gave a wildish grin..and signaled Kingkong something

all eyes travelled to Kingkong who flashing his teethes started moving forward

Daya pressed close his eyes but the surrounding echoed with a large "aaahhh"

it was from Tarzan, turning there they found blood oozing out from his hand and Nobita clinging from a climber plant..his specs broken into pieces..

Kingkong gave a wild growl and started coming towards Tarzan

Freddy looked at Nobita..the climber plant is quiet tall so he asked "Nobita niche ki taraf ayo jaldi.."

Jaywanti called "Nikhil utro tum"

Nobita closed his eyes and slipped down, picking him up Freddy ran towards the cave

others too followed him while Kingkong came to Tarzan

reaching cave they found ACP sir Salunkhe Nemo and Doremon eagerly waiting fr them

entering inside Nobita and Doremon shared a hug

ACP sir asked "sab thik ho?"

Freddy looked at all and nodded..Nemo asked "Nobita kya ki thi tumne?"

"meine apna specs utari aur pass ki tree trunk mey patkaya aur uss glass ko Tarzan ki hath mey ghusa diya"

DCP sir patted his back "bahut bahadur ho tum.."

they noticed Purvi and Shreya discussing something "Shreya Purvi kuch kehna hey?"

"sir unn dono ne dekha hum iss taraf aye to wo dono asehi..mtlb yea jagah kya aab safe hey?"

all the voices stopped fr few moments then DCP said "yea baat to.."

Doremon said "sir hum kyun na coast ki pass ki koi cave dekhe, usse hume vagne mey bhi.."

seeing everyone thinking Doremon stopped..but soon they agreed and they crawled out gathering all their belongings. They moved from underneath some rock at the backside of the cave

they moved towards the other side of island and found a small shelter of rocks

resting there Nemo said "hume iss mauke ka fayda nahi uthana cahiye? Tarzan jkhmi hey.."

Nobita said "haan aaplog socho na..uss Tarzan ko kaise mara ja sakta hey"

Doremon shook his head "nahi mujhe nahi lagta use marna cahiye..ager wo immortal hone ka baat rumor bhi ho to bhi..jakhmi kr skte hey per.." seeing every glance fixed at him he clarified "aab usne humare saath itna bhi bura to nahi kiya na"

ACP sir smiled "bah Doremon tum ne thik kaha.."

Nobita asked sadly "fir?"

Jaywanti said "sir wo Tarzan sung sung ke idher ajayega jaldi kuch krna hoga.."

ACP sir sat straight "ek kaam kro Nemo ko saath leke tum mey se koi pani ki taraf jao aur Nemo tum.."

"mein apne boundary ki bahar tayer ke nikal jau taki yea to Tarzan yea Kingkong mere piche aye?hey na?"

ACP sir nodded smiling..DCP forwarded few roughly made arrows "tum log ki jane ki bad hum teen budhe milke yea banaye le jao..ager kaam ajaye to"

Salunkhe murmured "budha kisko bola..mein nahi hu budha wudha"

Abhijeet smiled sugary "ha sir aap to abhie teenage mey hi hey.."

Salunkhe was about to reply but Tarika cut them both with "yea meine curare ki ek dali le ayi thi..isko chir ke iski sap lagalo kam ayega"

Freddy ordered Jaywanti and Shreya to do with arrows accordingly, and then himself pulled out some straight brances and trimmed down the knots

"yea kya kr rahe ho Freddy?"

"sir teer ho gaya per chalaye kaise?"

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he looked here and there, then moved to the parachutes they have dumped in a corner "koi penknife hota to.."

Abhijeet and ACP sir both silently forwarded one each, Freddy took one and sat down with "sir aaplog bhi khali haath mat ayega.." he started cutting the parachute cords and then took up the branch gave a reverse wrap at one end and tied the other end aftr making a groove..then moved to the arrows and checked it..much sharpened..

He again sat down with few more branches and followed the steps and total made 4 bows and then got up "ban to gaya dekhte hey kam ata bhi yea nahi"


Jaywanti tried to pull the sling to test "sir kaafi majbut hey.."

Pankaj said "sir Freddy sir sahi keh rahe hume bhi kuch.." he stopped hearing something, Shreya teased "Pankaj yea humare hi payer ki awaj hey darr mat" once they moved out with Nemo

ACP turned to others "tum log dusre bhi kuch intejam karo"

Abhijeet smiled "sir ho jayega..Nobita hey na humara chara..aur rahi baat koi hatiyar ki to..Doremon kuch Y shape ki dali milegi?"

Doremon nodded and moved out followed by Nikhil

Abhijeet sat down and gave his knife to Pankaj "parachute ki cords kato.."

"per sir fir hum wapas kaise.."

"tum parachute se urr ke wapas jaoge?" Pankaj without answering started his job

Abhijeet turned to Daya "jute ki ander ki leather nikalo..sir aaplog bhi pls"

Daya made a disapproval face "boss humare jute mey utna bhi badbu nahi ki wo behosh ho jaye.."

"bahut ghatiya joke tha nikalo aab"

and turned to Tarika "rubber bands hoga?"

"haa do hey..per..plastic hair bands"

"kaafi hey do"

dr Salunkhe asked "tum elastic cheez dhund rahe ho?yea Tarika ke rubber bands"

"dctr saab aap.."

"Salunkhe..." ACP roared

"nahi mtlb ager elastic cheez dhund raha hey to mere wallet mey kayi sare hey.."

he forwarded DCP smiled "Salunkhe tum bal banate ho?"

no one even tried to hide their smile this time

Purvi too took out two from her pockets and forwarded it

Nikhil and Doremon came in with four such sticks

Abhijeet took the stick and mumbled "iski knots wagera smooth krna hoga"

Nikhil sat with ACP sir's knife "dijiye sir"

giving him the branches Abhijeet sat with the shoe leather and parachute cords, making a ball of the leather tying up with the cord

Nikhil supplied the smoothen branch, he cut grooves at the ends and placed the rubber bands at the ends tying tightly with some pieces of cord again and then tying the leather ball at the middle of rubber band..

Nobita and Doremon shouted "slingshot.."

Daya and ACP smiled looking at each other "hand made gulel"


dr Salunkhe opened his mouth in awe "Abhijeet tumne bas isse.."

Abhijeet smirked and stood up with chale? Purvi, Daya..dctr saab aap bhi chaliye aapko lab mey ghusa dete hey"

Salunkhe scowled "mein??"

"jee"

Doremon stood up "mein bhi chalunga"

Daya nodded, "Nikhil Pankaj tum dono sir aur DCP sir ki saat ruko.."

ACP sir tried to say something but duo together cut him in firm voice "please sir"

the please is too stubborn so ACP sir just shrugged

so duo with Nobita Doremon Purvi with dr Salunkhe and Tarika moved out Abhijeet ordered "Nobita tumhe hum chara banayenge..smjhe?"

Nobita nodded nervously..he didn't notice as he was kneeling on ground collecting something..

Tarika peeped "kya kr rahe ho?"

Abhijeet stood up with a long branch of creeper with "yea..Daya iska fanda banana hey..aise aur dekho jara.." and the whole team collected a lot of those..

They heard some noises far..Doremon whispered "un dono mey se koi araha hey..isliye sare janwar shor kr rahe.."

Abhijeet looked at the creeper "Purvi apna hairclip dena.."

Purvi looked at Daya who shrugged, she silently forwarded her clip

Abhijeet called "yea dekho" he drew a rough sketch on ground

" yea aise badho aur fir ise leke lab ki taraf chalo..jaldi"

dr Salunkhe asked "mtlb Nobita lab mey ghusega.."

Doremon protested "nahi nahi Nobita sab garbar kr dega.."

"mein koi garbar nahi krta aur kyun krunga..mujhe sujuka.."

"chup..dono chup..kaam karo chup chap..aur dr saab mein bas Nobita ko Tarzan yea Kingkong ki najar mey lana cahta hu..aap chaliye.."

he started moving while discussing something with dr Salunkhe

others started to execute the orders

when they reached near the lab, Abhijeet looked at Doremon "per pey char sakte ho?"

"mein to billa hu na.."

dr Salunkhe grinned, Abhijeet confusingly looked at Daya "arey kya boss yea billi wagera per char sakta hey na..to tum puch kiu rahe ho"

"ufff jo bhi ho char jao..dekho un dono mey se koi araha yea nahi" Doremon followed the order quick and came down as quickly "wo lab ki ander hey..uper wale khirki se dikh raha hey"

Daya asked "lab ki bahar koi camera hey?"

"ha wo jo saaf jagah hey woha taq dikhta hey" they looked at Nobita who taking a deep breath got ready

Abhijeet gave a rope to Doremon "upar se yea jal fekne ke liye ready rehna" and he and Daya moved through the bushes and lied the other traps on the ground tying one its noose on a stick and other with large trees..,Doremon also tied one end with the tree "Nobita tum ander jaoge per iss jal ki ass pas hi rehna..jaise hi Tarzan pass ayega tum humare taraf vaag ke chale ana..ok?umid hey uske pair iss jal mey pare aur.." he signaled Nobita to move and they all hid behind the bushes

Nobita started his action and looked like all interested to move in the lab

Tarika whispered "yea overacting kiu kr raha hey?"

Tarzan was trying to have his food sitting in lab noticed Nobita and came out "hey tum udhar kya kr rahe ho?"

Nobita hid his hands behind, now Tarzan grew suspicious he started moving towards Nobita

here Nemo started swimming far from the coast going away from the given boundary

Kingkong was resting on a large tree with close eyes when the band tied to his wrist started giving out beeps with red lights

he got that someone is getting out of the island..he started moving towards the direction the compass in his wrist band showing

Freddy looked towards the trees "oh araha hey..ready ho jao"

Kingkong came near the coast and started shouting at Nemo, but Nemo as per plan started moving with more speed

Kingkong kneeled and thumping on water started saying something in unknown language..and then stood up and was about to run when the three officers started showering him with arrows..even stones..

The arrows didn't hit their mark or didn't showed the desired effect but Kingkong started taking back steps

Shreya whispered "sir ise to kuch nahi ho raha aur humare teer khatm hone ko hey.."

Freddy whispered back "Jaywanti apne teer Shreya ko do aur dhanush rakh ke kayi pattahr collect karo"

Shreya continued showering arrows while Freddy too collected some stones, he gave all to Jaywanti "per pey char jao aur uspey patthar barsao..dusre side jake..Shreya tum bhi thore uss uche patharo pey char jao"

he too moved to other side..now being attacked from three sides Kingkong didn't get where to look fr the attackers and started taking back steps while throwing pebbles to all direction and ultimately he fall down with a splash

Freddy shouted "rukna nahi.."

aftr few more minutes now Kingkong was moving away from coast..this three stopped

Jaywanti came down "per sir yea Nemo"

someone called from back "mein yeaha hu"

the turned found Nemo grinning happily

Freddy bent to his level "thank you Nemo..tum na hote to yea nahi hota..per tum laute kaise?"

"mein uss taraf tayer k gaya aur iss jungli manas ki baye taraf se agaya..aur yea lene gaya tha"

he picked up a net type thing from ground

Freddy grabbed it so Nemo started again "yea mujhe iss island pey ane ki kuch din bad mila tha sayed koi machli pakerne aya tha kabhie..yea thora fata hua hey..machli nikal jayegi per wo jungli manas nahi..ager wo fir ajaye kisi tarah..yea soch k le aya"

Freddy smiled and stood up with it..

Kingkong is still in vicinity struggling

Jaywanti and Freddy moved near and holding two ends of the net threw it on Kingkong

he got agitated and started struggling thus getting more entangled in it

Shreya asked "sir wo ise tor nahi dega..mtlb jo iron cage tor sakta hey.."

"tor bhi dey to kya wo pani se bahar aye ise tore isse pehle hum nikal jayenge..chalo aab pehle sir logo se milte fir Tarzan ko dhundte" and they move towards the cave leaving Kingkong in real bad state

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Nobita was taking back steps and Tarzan moving forward, all eyes fixed on his feet..

And there he steeped just inside the loop

he tried to move forward and the loop got tightened..looking down Tarzan found the loop and pulled out his knife

Daya acted on his slingshot and the knife flew away..Nobita ran at the direction of knife and Tarzan tried to moved at the direction of source of slingshot

but the loop tightened more and he fall down, with difficulty he got up and bent down to fix the loop stepping a bit forward getting his another leg in loop..now he stood straight and called fr someone in jungle language straigting up his hands

Purvi who was just below Doremon's tree signaled him and Doremon dropped down the third loop perfectly grabbing his hands and tightened the other end

Abhijeet whispered "dctr saab aap Tarika aur Doremon lab jaiye..nikalne ka kuch kijiye.." Doremon who had came down called "ha iss taraf se ayiye" aftr the three left Abhijeet turned to Nobita who had came back with the knife "tum aur Purvi uss gufa mey jao aur sir logo ko leke Freddy ke pass jao fir sabko yeaha le ayo.."

Purvi and Nobita nodded and left

Abhijeet looked at Daya and nodded

both split in two dfrnt direction and started watching Tarzan whenever he moved a bit a small stone flew towards him from their slingshot

they kept on changing their places making Tarzan confused

Purvi and Nobita moved half a way and meet the whole gang and they all came to spot

Freddy shoot an arrow at Tarzan's leg making him unconscious in a minute

now all moved to the lab

dr Salunkhe smiled "Doremon ki madat se meine wo artificial black hole destroy kr diya aur ek navy ki ship ja rahi thi pass se use signal bhi de.."

some sounds came from machine dr Salunkhe responded then turned to others "chalo wo ship agayi left side ki coast taq.."

they all rushed, yes the ship is there..they started climbing

Pankaj felt someone calling him he tried to move away but the call got strict.."kya hey.."

he sat up..and opened his mouth in total confusion he is in bureau at his desk..his seniors standing in front of him

he stood up hurriedly

Freddy asked "tu to raat ko file work krne ko ruka tha na.."

"haa wo mein mein..fresh ho ata hu"

he moved hurriedly leaving all confused..

Pankaj splashed water on his face looking at mirror "Kingkong aur Tarzan ek saath? Wo bhi Doremon..per gadget bina..nahi Pankaj tera dimaag sach mey gaya" he shook his head and moved back to bureau main area



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Well executed story... I liked how they used natural items and defeated king kong and tarzan with team work.. Good job guys.. 😊

P.S. I missed Sachin sir in the story..
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I really Enjoyed the Story and now I think KRITTIKA got that She also write on Different Subjects as well...😉😉

The Start is really Good...👏👏

the Comic Flairs are Less but are Awesome especially that NOBITA GF and BILLA HUN Comment was a Laughing Blaster...🤣👏

Loved the Character of DCP U Portrayed...👏

the 3 Characters are Nicely Used...😳👏

its Difficult for Me to Imagine NOBITA and DOREMON but Like their Parts...😆😆

Somehow that, Lab and Black Hole Idea was not Appealing for Me...

U make Tarzan a Scientist...😆😆

U also Not giving a Chance to Tarzan to have any Fight even I m Expecting a Fight of King Kong and Bhai too...😉😉

Loved the Use of CURARE Plant Extract and those Casual Tricks using for Trapping Culprits...👏👏

The picture using is a Nice Idea too...👏👏

the End was little Hurry...

Loved the 3 Little Characters Nicely...😳👏

Like that Chip Idea so cant able to move Far...👏👏

all and all its really an Excellent Attempt...⭐️👏

Thank You so much as I know, in which Scenario U wrote it...😛😛

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