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I looked around my shooting spot. The set up looks perfect except for the flower vase in the corner of room that doesn't match the rest of modern furniture. I picked it and replaced with a simple fake green creep from the storage. Being director of the low budget film, I got to do many things on my own. I took a look at watch waiting for Sr Inspector Daya. Daya from CID is going to be here shooting with us for couple of hours. I am sure I am not dreaming. Not that I like to bring police force into acting world, but I can't help the situation now. My sister, wife of CID's DCP asked me the favor. CID officer wants to be undercover here as they are expecting to catch someone at this large studio. Honestly she couldn't give me more details other than that I have to book a feasible spot for the day and expect Daya to arrive. I couldn't deny, be it my love towards her or the awesome sweets she makes or the love of expensive gifts given by my jiju, my Louis Vuitton's clutch for example. I had to book my spot at highest level open floor to be able to have a good view of the studio place they wanted to watch. Finally here I am waiting for Daya to arrive.

Soon a tall man arrived and passed a questioning glance, "Savi?". I nodded. "Madam, I am Daya", he said with a smile. WHAT THE HECK!!!! DAYA is a man, well I thought it was a lady. My eyes popped out while I stand spell bound. He said in low voice "Anji ji ne aap ko bataya tha na". Well, she didn't tell me it was a HE !!! I nodded quickly and made a mental note to punch my dear behna. She must be laughing her butts off by now. I quickly composed myself, offered him chair. I introduced my crew to him and he made himself comfortable while watching the shooting area with his big eyes. But, well what should I do now. I have a freaking woman oriented script in my hand. I sqeezed my eyes praying god to give me sometime to save my face. Suddenly there was a growling sound. I looked at Daya and he immediately blushed. "wo breakfast ka time nahi mila toh", he trailed off. I smiled wide and called my caterer Riffi. "yaar, Daya jee ko breakfast order karna" I told Riffi. "Daya jee, Please feel free to order all you want. We shall start once you are done" I told him with smile. I can see his eyes twinkling and he nodded politely saying "Thank you madam". "No madam, just Savi ok?", I said extending my hand, "No jee just Daya" he said very gently shaking hands. Well, I can't believe he is a cop. He is very gentle.

I watch as Riffi expressions change from happy to surprised to horrified. She approached me and whispered "good luck with bill". I rolled my eyes and made some changes to my so called prepared -for-daya script to make it male. While I worked on my changes I heard a low humming and tapping sound and found that my new actor is a good singer too. Wait!! That's DANGEROUS. My pet parrot GD soon joined him in singing and I really didn't want that to happen. Daya stopped with introduction of unexpected chorus and found GD flying towards him. He smiled and ran his fingers on his head. My GD parrot poked his hand and Daya took his hand back. I chimed in "He wants you to sing, err .. you sing good" I smiled. He passed a shy smile and continued his singing and GD followed. My camera crew Shruthi and Pinky started shooting the singing session. I could use this video to make GD eat veggies I thought. While singing and paying attention to camera, Daya kept on watching the studio. Riffi was back with his royal breakfast and both singers started to eat. GD seems to like him I thought as I prepared the scene finally. After breakfast, we started shooting and man he was so conscious before camera. Suddenly his expressions hardened as his eyes fixed on a lean guy with light beard. He signaled me through his eyes and I quickly changed focus from shoot to some background arrangements. Daya went near the guy with care and suddenly got him by neck. The guy with beard tried to flee and earned hard slap that did give some echo. My eyes popped out remembering how gentle this man was just about an hour and half ago. Soon two more cops came in and took now-seeing-stars guy with them. Daya came back to our spot and thanked us. We shook hands before he left and said "some time again".


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Entry 2


OS...

A Small Kid...

DUO's Home...


It was around 12 of the noon when Daya entered inside the home, looking really angry, pained and hurt and after locking the main door, directly went inside his room, and bolted the room door, locking himself inside the room...


Daya, talking to himself while moving inside the room as rashness was clearly visible through his gestures and red angry face: Pata nahin kya samjhty hain yeh log khud ko... Jitna paisa hai utny hi dil k ghareeb hain sb... (In hurt-filled-anger...) Chhoty sy masoom bach'chy ko koe iss tarhan sy dhak'ka marta hai kya, khoon nikal dia bach'chy ka... (In stubborn-anger...) Aur yeh Abhi... Mujhy dant dia, mujh py charhae kerny lg gaya, mujhy nikal dia wahan sy per ussy kuch bhi nahin kaha, kyun nahin kaha ussy kuch bhi...? (In pain-filled-angry tone...) Uss bach'chy ka koe tha nahin tou koe bhi ussy kuch bhi kahey ga aur ussy sehna ho ga, kyun sehna ho ga...? (In slow-pain-filled whisper...) Kitni takleef hoti hai iss tarhan sb kuch chup chap sehny mein, kitni takleef...


And he just got seated on the chair with a thud, placed near the window, throwing his head on the head-rest while dropping a silent tear from the corner of his eye when his mind took him to the dark memories of his painful past...

Where a kid of less than seven years was silently standing on the corner of a ground, looking at the stalls of toy cars and guns, holding innocent excitement in his small twinkling eyes as it was some function in some orphanage center, organized by the administration and different schools were invited there...

He, who came in that area while grabbing a garbage-bag in his small hands and was searching for something useful so that he could sell that to buy a "Roti" for his small tummy which was empty from nearly 18 hours, found those colorful stalls attractive for him so just stopped there while looking at them in pure innocence, forgetting his hunger and reason for coming in that area...

He was silently standing outside the area while looking at the people moving around those stalls, kids with their parents and elders, when a stall of toy cars and guns, grabbed his attention... He silently looked here and there and then mustering up his whole energy, jumped from the grill, inside the ground...

He stood there while attaching his back with the wall looking bit afraid, when getting relaxed, seeing no one had noticed his that act, silently started moving forward while taking small baby steps...

Finally he reached in the stalls area and people, seeing the garbage-bag in his hands and his dirty tore clothes, thought that he was there to collect garbage so did not bother his presence there while he was looking around in great excitement with twinkling stars in his small black eyes when reached in front of the stall which had taken him there like a magnet...

EK CHHOTA SA LARKA THA MAIN JN DINO,
EK MAILEY MEIN POHANCHA HM'MAKTA HUA...

He looked at those new toy cars and guns and was very much engrossed in looking at them and when softly touched his finger-pore on the surface of one car, having small smile on his innocent face...

A stick directly came on his small-soft hand's upper side with a harsh snub with: Aye, gari chori ker raha hai tu...

He jumped back in scare while flinching in pain and there was no more that innocent smile but his black shiny eyes, got filled with tears of pain but still he tried to clear the doubt of the later...

In his meek-innocent tone as: Nae, main daikh raa tha bs...

The stall-owner in angry-rash tone: Daikh raha tha... Achy sy janta hoon kya daikh raha tha tu... Main ny naa daikh lia hota tou abhi gari utha k apny thaily mein daal li hoti tu ny...

He shook his head in great disagreement hearing such a big allegation on himself and instantly said in innocence and excitement: Nae main chor nae hoon, main tou police bano ga aur sb choron ko maar dun ga...

The stall-owner laughed in sarcasm and to his helper: Suna choto, yeh police wala bany ga...

The helper also laughed while tears of extreme hurt and humiliation fell down from this innocent bud, noticing some other smiley eyes also turning towards him and...

He said in determined-angry tone as: Main police wala banon ga, samjhy aap... Main...

The stall-owner cut him angrily with: Mujhy aankhien dikhata hai, mairy samny onchi aawaz mein baat kerta hai... (Hit the stick on his arm with...) Chal bhag yahan sy, bhag...

He ran from there in great fear and pain as the hit was really hard for this un-bloomed flower and after reaching at some distance from that stall, he looked towards his arm, feeling pinching pain in his arm and his pain got increased immensely seeing red stain present on the tore sleeve of his tore shirt as the stick, that cruel man had hit him with, was having thorns on it that pierced in his soft skin...

He wiped off his completely wet face with his small hands back-sides while moving forward in mumbling as: Maira koe hota na tb easey danda maar k dikhata mujhy yeh... Maira tou bhagwan bhi nahin hai tabhi tou mujhy easey akely chour dia uss ny bhi... (Determinedly while rashly wiping off his constantly flowing tears...) Main police wala banon ga, bano ga main police wala...

And he kept mumbling like this while moving forward when absent-mindedly came in food-court section and the appetizing odor of tasty foods really reminded him about his forgotten hunger and he moved his gaze up while looking at the food-stalls but this time did not did not courage to move close to any stall...

JEE MACHALTA THA HR EK SHEEY PY MAGER,
JAIB KHALI THI KUCH MOL NA LY SAKA...

He was silently staring at the Biryani-stall when...

A passing-by man, noticing him there, forwarded his left behind biryani plate to him with: Yeh ly, kha ly yeh... Bhook lagi hai na tujhy...

He looked towards the man, his branded clothes and then towards the plate he had forwarded that to him when...

The man again: Paker bhi ly ab, sari zindagi tairy yeh plate pakerny k intizar mein yahin khara rahon kya main, haan...? Jaldi ker, mujhy abhi apny baity ko burger bhi ly k daina hai...

Listening this, he asked in innocence: Kyun aap ka baita yeh nahin khaye ga kya...?

The man came in anger listening this with: Aik thapper dun ga na tairy mun py tou abhi aqal thikany aa jaye gi tairi... Maira baita kyun khany lagy jhoota khana...? (While throwing the plate near his feet...) Khana ho tou kha laina, hunh...

And he left from there leaving the innocent angel in confusion behind that what wrong did he asked...? As if that man could offer that eaten-food to some stranger kid then why not to his own kid and if his own kid would not eat his father's left behind food, then why would he...?

Understanding nothing about this cruel-double standard of people, he got seated on his knees and with his small palms started gathering the fallen rice in a plate and then moving to the back-side of the stall, silently cleaned a place with his small soft palms and then after emptying the plate there, got seated at a little distance and a small smile covered his face seeing birds coming there to take their part from that food...

He was silently busy in enjoying them when a loud growl from his empty tummy reminded him it was also asking for food... Giving a small "Good-bye" glance to those chirping birds, he silently stood up and started making his way out from there to complete the work for which he came there as he was a worker not a beggar...

LOOT AAYA LIYE HASRATIEN SAINKARON,
EK CHHOTA SA LARKA THA MAIN JN DINO...

He was silently moving towards the grill when got stopped feeling a pressure on his shoulder and instantly turned in great jerk and fear and found a man standing there...

Getting really scared and tensed, he hurriedly forwarded his garbage-bag towards him with: Main ny kuch nae churaya hai yahan sy, daikh lo aap... (While dusting off his clothes...) Daikho main ny mairy kapron mein bhi kuch nahin chupaya, mujhy marna nahin, main ny kuch nahin uthaya...

The person got seated on his knees and said softly while trying to calm him down as he was looking really scared and tensed: Mujhy pata hai k aap ny kuch nahin uthaya, main ny sb daikha hai baita...

The kid got a bit relax hearing that soft tone and asked as: Aap ny sb daikha...? (The man nodded so he asked in somewhat moist tone as...) Aap ny daikha kya jb uss ny mujhy danda mara...?

The person softly cupped his face while diverting the topic with: Main ny suna hai k aap ko police bn'nna hai...? (The kid nodded in innocence while wiping off the moisture from his eyes... The man added while forwarding a Biryani packet towards him after opening it...) Yeh lo, yeh khaty hoye baatien kerty hain...

The kid shook his head with: Main bhikaari nahin hoon, mujhy nahin chahiye yeh...

The man nodded in light smile with: Mujhy pata hai k aap bhikaari nahin ho, aap tou humary daish ka bhavisher ho... Yeh tou bhagwan ji ny diya tha mujhy k aap ko dy dun...

The kid in confusion and sadness: Bhagwan ji ny kaisy dia...? Woh tou nahin aaty kabhi... Main ny kitni baar bulaya hai unhien, woh nahin aaty...

The man nodded with: Hmm woh khud nahin aaty tabhi tou apny logon k zariye apny itny pyary pyary phoolon ka khayal rakhty hain... Ab aap ny mujhy tou nahin bataya na k aap ko bhook lagi hai lekin bhagwan ji ko tou sb pata chal jata hai na, unhon ny hi mujhy kaha hai k yeh packet unn k iss chhoty sy bach'chy ko dy dun js ny mairi choti choti chiriyon ko khana khilaya hai... Unhien chiryon ny bhagwan ji sy kaha tha k iss pyary sy bach'chy ko bhi koe inam milna chahiye tou yeh aap ka inam hai... Ly lo please...

The innocent little angel now convinced after that birds' theory and silently grabbed that packet while sitting beside him with folded legs and was about to take a spoon when thinking something, forwarded the packet towards the man and...

The kid caringly: Aap ko bhi bhook lagi ho gi na, ly lo yeh aap...

The man in love-filled smile, placed a soft kiss on his cheek with: Nahin mujhy bhook nahin lagi, mairy liye bhi bhagwan ji ny khana dia tha, aap khao... (The kid nodded and started taking the food after giving a silent thanks to his bhagwan ji and the birds while the man added softly...) Main aik anaat-aashram chilata hoon, wahan aur bhi bohut sarey bach'chy hain, aap chalo gy kya mairy sath wahan...?

The kid asked in innocence while busy with his food: Kyun...? Aap bach'chy pakerny waly ho kya...?

A light chuckle got escaped from the laters' mouth with: Nahin baita, main humary daish ka bhavisher surakshit kerny wala hoon... (Seeing confusion arising in those innocent eyes, added as...) Bs yun samjh lo k mujhy bhagwan ji ny bhaija hai unn sb pyary pyary phoolon k liye jn ko duniya ki tezz dhoop khilny sy pehly hi masal daina chahti hai... (Softly spread hand on his head with...) Aap ko police bn'nna hai na, main aap ko police banao ga...

The kid instantly looked up at him with glittering eyes: Sach...?

The man nodded with: Hmm bilkul sach... Aap thori daer pehly bhagwan ji sy keh rahy thy na k unhon ny aap ko akela chour dia hai tou ab woh khud nahin aa sakty thy na aap k paas tou unhon ny mujhy keh dia aur main k paas aa gaya aap ko police banany...

The kid excitedly: Bs phir na main ab sy khoub mehnet karon ga aur jb police bn jaon ga na tou uss dukan waly k paas bhi aaon ga aur ussy bhi bataon ga k main police bn gaya hoon, phir nahin hasy ga woh mujh py...

The man while changing the topic: Aap ny mujhy apna naam tou bataya hi nahin, ab tou hum dost hain na...?

The kid shrugged his shoulders casually with: Mujhy maira naam pata hi nahin hai... Chhota hota "Sarak-chhap" tha phir abhi bara ho k "Kachra" bn gaya...

The man looked at that "Bara" in great hurt and then inhaling a deep breath, said as: Aap ko pata hai baita, yeh jo bijli banti hai na, jo humary gharon ko roshan kerti hai, yeh bhi kachry sy hi banti hai... Bilkul wasey hi aap bhi aik din police bn k humary daish ko roshan karo gy... (The kid understood nothing but still gave him a small smile while he added...) Ab huamri aaj hi dosti hue hai na aur bhagwan ji ny mujh py... (While squeezing the later's soft cheek...) Itni pyari si meherbani ki hai tou aaj sy bhagwan ji ki iss khobsorat meherbani ka naam hai "Daya", hmm...?

Daya nodded in sweet smile with: Hmm bohut acha naam hai, mujhy acha laga... Aur main aap ko kya bulaon...?

The man replied as: Maira naam Raghuvendra hai lekin mairy bach'chy mujhy sir bulaty hain aur ab sy aap bhi mairy baity ho tou aap bhi mujhy sir bulao gy, theek hai...

Daya nodded with: Theek hai...

Seeing him getting finished with his food, Raghuvendra sir stood up with: Chalo aap ko aap k naye ghar ly k chalon... (Seeing him grabbing his garbage-bag, added politely...) Nahin baita, ab sy aap ka hathon mein sirf kitabien hoon gi kyun k aap ko police bn'nna hai, hai na...?

Daya nodded but still asked in confusion and innocence: Lekin phir main mehnet nahin karon ga tou khana kaisy khaon ga...?

Raghuvendra sir softly: Mnn laga k perhae kerna aur uss mein bohut sari mehnet kerna, bs ab aap sy bhagwan ji ko yehi wali mehnet chahiye hai, theek hai...?

Daya nodded in small assuring smile and then moved from there to become a police so that one day would become able to prove to the world that man becomes what he wanted to become, only what is required is unshakable trust on Lord and determined determinations with pure intentions...


Daya slowly opened his eyes while listening some voice and it took him few minutes for getting that the voice was of his room's door knocking sound... Sighing heavily, Daya looked outside and found darkness spreading there so he turned his gaze towards the wall-clock to find it striking 11:12 PM, meantime the door again got knocked...


Followed by a worried voice as: Daya drwaza khol yar, Daya...


Inhaling a deep breath, Daya in tired tone: Boss please main thori daer akely rehna chahta hoon, please...


Abhijeet softly with: Sirf aadha ghanta aur Daya...


Daya nodded slightly with: Hmm, thank you...


Abhijeet left from there in silence, knowing well that his younger brother would never open-up the dark pain filled chapters of his life in front of any other person, not even in front of him, no matters what and that's why he never forced him in this regard because of knowing well that his such attempt would only be like scratching the wounds of his Panda and seeing them bleeding again which was completely impossible for him and that's the reason he never tried any such attempt which, he knew well, could only increase the pain of his Panda...


Now while sitting on the lounge's couch, he was just waiting that the later would open the room door and he could simply secure his brother inside his arms, without asking anything, just try to sooth and heal his brother's wounds which again got fresh because of the day's noon incident...

A Big Park...

It was early morning of Sunday and CID Mumbai team could be seen present inside the park while roaming around and checking security arrangements with other intelligence forces' officers as a day before, they were informed that there would be a Winter-Gala, organized in the very park, having traditional concerts, stalls etc., so a large amount of foreigners was expected in the event and the organizing NGO of the event had kept the free entry passes, resulting the security responsibilities directly got transferred to the intelligence forces who divided the park-area between the teams to avoid any kind of clutter or security problem while the head of teams took the responsibility to keep eye on the whole park...

The Winter-Gala was going on with its smooth and liveliness and all the officers were alert about every happening around the park while roaming between the people and were connected with each other through Blue-tooth...

Abhijeet was also roaming between people when heard Daya's anger filled voice as: Tameez nahin hai kya tumhien, bach'chy sy iss tarhan sy baat kerty hain...

Abhijeet who had got stopped on his place on that sudden rash-angry tone, suddenly got sparked with the situation and rushed towards the area where he had asked Daya to keep eye on, to prevent any big clutter...

Within the minute he reached in the area and from distance could see Daya's red angry face while people of that area, gathered there, including few officers of other forces too... Abhijeet moved forward in hurry to find Daya grabbing a man from his collar and was ready to give a slap to him as now the clutter had reached to that point...

Abhijeet hurriedly grabbed his wrist to stop him from doing so with: Daya choro inhien, kya ker rahy ho yeh tum...

Daya angrily after leaving the man with great jerk that he was about to fell on the ground, turned towards Abhijeet with: Iss bdtameez insan ko bach'chon sy baat kerny ki tameez nahin hai... (While signaling him towards the kid of around four years, whose lip was little raptured and face was covered with tears, added as...) Woh daikho, kya kia iss ny...

The man while trying to defend himself: Saab ager main iss ko rokta na tou yeh larka tou ab tk yahan sy koe na koe khilona utha...

Daya roared in extreme anger with: Bkwas band ker nahin tou yahin zinda garh doon ga, tujhy chor dikhta hai kya yeh bach'cha...? Kal ko ager iss masoom ki jagah taira khud ka bach'cha hua issi haal mein aur koe uss ko easey hi boly ga tou kaisa lagy ga tujhy...

The man angrily: Zaban sambhal k baat ker tu, taira bach'cha hai kya jo itna dukh raha hai tujhy...

Daya angrily was about to step towards him when Abhijeet clutched his wrist and Daya his wrist out, turned towards the man with: Haan maira bach'cha hai... Hr woh bach'cha js ko tum log kachra samjhty ho, maira bach'cha hai aur ager koe unn ki taraf ghalat nigah sy daikhy ga bhi tou mujh sy bura koe nahin ho ga aur hath uthany wala ka tou main hath toor dun ga...

The man internally got scared seeing fire in the later's eyes while Abhijeet easily sensed the extreme pain and hurt behind that anger so just tried to displace him from the place...

AAJ MAILA LAGA HAI USSI SHAAN SY,
JO CHAHON TOU EK EK DUKAA MOL LUN...

Abhijeet in composed tone: Daya issi waqt jao yahan sy...

Daya instantly turned towards him in shock with: Kya...?

Abhijeet in strong-firm tone: Jao yahan sy aur seedhy ghar jao, yahan ka hum log daikh lien gy, tum issi waqt wapis jao...

Daya instantly shook his head with: Kyun, main kyun jaon...? Iss ny bdtameezi ki, iss ny bach'chy py hath uthaya aur tum issy kuch kehny ki jagah mujhy yahan sy jany ka keh rahy ho, main nahin jaon ga...

Abhijeet in extreme strict tone: Main ny kaha na tumhien k ghar jao tum, aur tamasha kerny ki...

Daya cut him angrily with: Main tamasha nahin ker raha, samjhy tum...? (In angry-pain filled tone...) Iss bach'chy ka koe aagy peechy nahin hai tou koe bhi ussy kuch bhi kahy ga aur uss k sath kuch bhi karey ga aur tum chahty ho k baki sb ki tarhan main bhi aandha, gunga aur behra bn jaon tou yeh mujh sy nahin ho ga... Main apni aankhon k samny kisi masoom phool ko khilny sy pehly hi murjhany nahin dun ga... (Turned towards the man in extreme rash with with...) Aur iss jaisy zameen k khudaon ko tou zinda nahin choron ga main...

And before he could step towards him again, Abhijeet while stopping his way in extreme angry-strict tone: Daya abhi aur issi waqt iss park sy bahir jao, mujhy majbor mtt karo k main tumhien kheench k yahan sy bahir ly k jaon, samjhty tum...? Foren ghar jao aur ab aik shabd aur nikla tumhari zaban sy tou main samjh jaon ga k tumhari nazar mein mairi kitni izzat hai...

Daya was looking at him in anger and pain and giving a fiery glance to the stall-owner, stepped forward and after placing few currency notes there, grabbed the toy helicopter and toy tank, he had seen the kid was looking at, and moving towards the little bud, silently got seated in front of him on his knees and giving him the things while requesting through eyes not to deny to accept them, he suddenly hugged the kid...

JO CHAHON TOU SARA JAHAA MOL LUN,
NA'RASAI KA JEE MEIN DHARKA KAHAN...?

After few minutes, he got separated, placed few currency notes on his small palm which the kid thorough gesture denied loudly but he smoothly grabbed the bag from his small little palm and took out few empty bottles from it and giving a kiss on his soft cheek, left from there with fast steps without even turning once leaving all silent people behind...

PER WOH CHHOTA SA ALHER LARKA KAHAN...?


Abhijeet opened his eyes, seeing his Panda sitting beside him while hugging him around his waist and resting his head on his chest... A small love filled smile got appeared on his face and he smoothly secured his younger brother inside his shell while placing a soft kiss on his head and rubbing his fingers in his head to heal his brother's wounds with the magical effect of his touch while the magical effect was nothing but the element of unbreakable trust, love, care, sincerity and understanding with a unsaid promise of to-be-together for forever...


Abhijeet softly, still weaving inside his brother's head: Anand ko uss NGO ny apny sath ly lia hai jinhon ny woh festival organize kia tha...


Daya said nothing just buried his face a bit more in his shelter's chest assuring about his relaxment level where Abhijeet also went silent after that as he spoke the whole in that single line and his Panda had got the whole...


After few minutes' more complete silence, Abhijeet getting that his brother was alright and healed now, smoothly separated him from the hug...


Abhijeet in light smile: Chal Daya ab jaldi sy ja aur acha sa taiyar ho k aa...


Daya confusingly: Kyun...?


Abhijeet winked him mischievously with: Tujhy date py ly k jana hai...


A shy grin got appeared on Daya's cheek which elder brother was missing badly while...


Daya stood up with: Kya Boss tum bhi... (And getting stopped on the door-step, turned towards Abhijeet with...) Abhi...!


Abhijeet turned towards him in question with: Hmm...?


Daya mischievously: Boss ager mujhy bhabhi pasand na aaien tou mujhy convince kerny ki koshish na kerna...


Abhijeet in warn tone while standing: Jaa raha hai ya maar khany ka mood ho raha hai sahab ka...?


Daya in sweet chuckle left inside his room with: Boss, achy sy soch lo, baad mein na kehna k khaber na hue...


Abhijeet in warn tone from outside: Daya tu ny baaz aana hai k nahin...?


And in return got a light laugh from his silly sweet brother who was really enjoying that scenario of the expected "Date" of his brother and his brother's invisible and non-existing girl-friend while Abhijeet too made his way towards his room in small soothing-disappointed and excited smile as in few minutes his Panda was going to become a "Birthday Boy", who had completely forgot about his day but did he really need to worry about this thing when he was having the "Precious Gem" in his life who could never forget about anything tiniest thing which could make his Panda happy and soothed...


Soon both brothers were headed towards the beach because the elder one knew well when and where to go to relish their beautiful present which was actually the "Present" from Lord given to them in the shape of each other for each other...

DON'T THINK ABOUT PAST, IT BRINGS TEARS...
DON'T THINK ABOUT FUTURE, IT BRINGS FEARS...
JUST LIVE THE PRESENT, IT BRINGS CHEERS... 😊 😊 😊


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Entry 3

Title: Limerence

When I first saw you

Part of team running behind the bad

Determined to eradicate the illness of the world

A strong sincere officer like my fatherly figure.

Knowing you was not intentional but

Happened as time flows

I experience your gentleness and

Oh that cute foolishness

Sea of sorrows buried deep under your innocent smile

While you were empathizing with victims

While you were so worried about your friends

While you were the walking eyes

While you were blamed but stayed strong

I really forgot the timestamp

I realized you are handsome




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Entry 4


DIRECT THE SCENE

Voice: Theek hy, Light Idhar, Clap kidhar hy, (shout 😡) Spot Boy.

A Man stepping out from His Car and coming towards Shooting spot feeling Hustle Bustle so asking a nearby Person as;

Daya: Ashoke, kya hua.?😕

Ashoke: Anna, Ghazab ho gaya hy, Aap jao jaldi.

Daya moving ahead in Little Confusion and when reached at main Area find a Short heighten Girl wearing Jeans and Kurta with Sneakers having a Scarf Loosely Wrapped around Her Neck with a Rimless Specs on Her Nose which Mostly She is Fixing on Her Eyes while continuously doing Bak Bak either with around People, in Her Cell or Mostly with Herself.😉

After seeing Daya, Assistant Director named Abhinav moved ahead and Tell the Girl as;

Abhinav: Maa'm.😊

Girl (in shock tone): Maa'm.😲

Abhinav: ohh, I mean DayaAbhiDuoCidLover.🤣😎

Daya Eyes Wideness while Girl Smiles Broadly and Tell with Appreciate tone;👏

Girl: Theek, wesy aap Mujhy DADCL bhi Bula skty hain...😳😉

Daya really Hides His Smile on such Long Abbreviation of Girl Name, while Abhinav Introduced Her with;

Abhinav: wo Anna, I mean (signaling over Daya with) Daya Sir aa gaye.😳

Girl look at Him and turned Mesmerized, Daya moved ahead, extend His Arm, Stretched His palm still hanging in Air because the Girl already Smashed over Floor really gives Daya a Deep Sigh.

Next Hour, They all are in Waiting mode although during this, Abhinav Telling about the Girl to Daya as;

Abhinav: New Director hy, FW nay Appoint kiya hy.😊

Daya (murmuring): is sy tou Better tha kuch Achy Fresh Script Writers Appoint kr dety (sadly nodded with) magar.

Abhinav: aaty sath hi bas Bak Bak kary ja rahi thi aur ab tou.😡

A Girl coming with a Good News that New Director coming in Conscious State Relaxed All and now again Arrangement of Today shoot started.😊

Director coming out, Look at Daya again, Smiles Broadly as her Cheeks turned Little Pink, remember;

Voice: Dr ko kaun Fees dy ga, aur kya FW tou Duo ki bhi Marham Patti kay liye Dr nahi Bulwaty, Becharun ko Khud hee Apni Dekh rekh krni parti hy, main tou Nahu dun ga, haan already is Maheeny itny Kharchay hain, hunh.😡😡

She feels that its Better Not to turn to Dark Age again so gives Slow Pat on Her Chest inside it a Fast Beating organ named DIL working in 5G Speed and murmuring slowly as;

All is Well, All is Well 😆😆

Daya (now straightly introduced himself): Hello, I am Daya.😳

Girl: hello, I am.😊

Daya (interrupts with): DADCL.😆😆

Girl (amazed): awww, aap bhi Mujhy jaanty hain.😲😲

Daya: Jee.😊

Girl (proudly): I m so Popular na.😎

Daya (teasingly): jee, Big Boss ki tarah.😵

She nodded with Big Smiles, while now Abhinav told Both that Scene was almost Prepared, so giving Script to Daya and now DADCL said;

DADCL: tou Daya Sir, Aap ko Fight krni hay Villain Uncle sy.😊

Daya Sweetly Smiles on "VILLAIN UNCLE" term, while DADCL added as;

DADCL: Theek hy.👍🏼

Daya nodded, Villain came and Daya gives Him a Tight Punch Confused on a Shout of CUT, asked;

Daya: kya hua? 😕

DADCL: ye kya, Aap ny Direct Mukka he dy Maara.

Daya (confusingly ): tou Aap ny kaha tout ha kay Fight Scene hy.😕

DADCL: tou, (sadly ) bhala aisy koi krta hy, Pehlay Aap ko Bolna chahyey kay

Daya (interrupts with sigh): Hum Log Fight krny aayein hain.

She nodded and Daya Only takes a Sigh while now She added few More Scenes as;

DADCL: aur haan, Fight kay Beech Villian uncle bhi Aap ko Maarein gy aur phir Aap Ceekhna (Shout 😉) ABHIII.

This time Not Only Daya but All the Other Technical Staff Look at Her in Complete Shock, while Daya added as;

Daya: Yahooo bhi Bolna hy na. 😡

DADCL (with Smile ): Wow, aap kitny Intelligent hain.👏😃

Daya look at Her Shockingly although Staff gives a Big Smile while Daya asked in Harsh tone;

Daya: Aap ny kabhi Pehlay kuch Direct kiya hy.😡

DADCL: kyun nahi, (telling) Roz Main kaam wali Bai ko Direct krti hun ky kahan Katka krna hy 😉; aaj Auto waly ko bhi Direct kiya saary Raasty aur.😆

Daya really feels Helpless while having a Vibration inside His Jeans Pocket so move aside, Picking it and hearing;

Voice: Daya, kesa raha, Abhinav Bol raha tha kay koi New Director hy.😃

Daya: Buht Acha, kya Director hy Boss (Sparkling eyes) sach Maza aa gaya. 😉😆

Abhijeet: Ain, Really.😲

Daya: aur Nahi tou kya, Tum kal aao gy na Shoot pr, (naughty tone) Pagal he ho jao gy.😆

Abhijeet: acha, Mujhy tou abhi sy curiosity ho rahi hay is Director kay Sath Kaam krny ki.😛

Daya: arry Tum Kal aao tou, (look over Director stIll doing Bak Bak with Herself added) Saari Curiosity End ho jaye gi.😉😉

Abhijeet: acha chal, Main Kal aata hun, Tu Apna Kaam karwa, Bye.😊

Daya: Bye Boss, (after ending call murmur) Kala aana, phir pata chaly ga.😊

DADCL: Daya Sir, (remembering 😉) wo Mukka.

Daya: haan, (moving with) pr Main koi ABHIII nahi Ceekhun ga.😒

DADCL: tou kya bolein gy (angry tone) Tareeka jii kya.😡😡

Daya (in tense tone): nahi matlab...

DADCL (straightly): yahan Director kaun hy.?😎

Daya (low tone): Aap.

DADCL: tou Aap ko Mery Kahy pr Chalna hy na.😈

He nodded Disappointingly and moving ahead while giving and getting Few Punches and with Extreme Disappointed Expressions, Shout;

Daya (during Beating): ABHIII...😆😆

Voice (loud): Cut.😡

Daya (wipes His Sweat with): Shuker.

DADCL (asking angrily): aur Yahoo kaun Boly ga, haan.😡😡

Daya takes Deep Sigh, did the Scene again with a Loud shout as;

Daya (again during Beating): ABHIII, Yahooo. 😆😆

DADCL started Laughing Loudly 🤣 while Daya Completely Angry still in Helpless and disappointed Avtar while Staff totally Sad 😭😡, Heard as;

DADCL (Chewing tone 😈): Humein bhi aisi hee Sharmindagi hoti hy, aisy hee Aahein Bharty hain Hum aur itna hee Gussa Humein bhi aata hy, jub Hum yehi sub kuch Screen pr Dekhty hain, kyun shayed Humari Tarah Unhein bhi Direct krna nahi aata, hunh.😡😡

She Left the Shooting Spot while the Actor and Staff really feeling how much Pain their Viewers Tolerating.!


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Entry 5



Sr. Ins Daya (Character)

Akkad Bakkar bambay boo

Daya ka Birthday aany do

Daya kay Saary Dost aur Yaar

Masti krny ko Tayyar

Cake ka Un ko Intaizar

Yummy Foods be Shumar.

Akkad Bakkar bambay boo

Daya ka Birthday aany do

Mil kr Dhoom Machana hy

Sweet sii Smile dikhana hy

Sub ka hy bas aik hee Pyar

Daya hy Apna Rock Star.



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Entry 6



Dayanand Shetty

Tall and Fair

Macho in Figure;

Walking in Style

Having Sweet Smile;

Shy with Slight Grin

Giving a Sparking Beam;

Naughty when Playing Pranks

Enjoying the Laughing Bricks;

Humming in Melodious Tones

Running like Speedy Stones;

Talking with Soft Voice

Meeting with Hearty Choice;

Caring and Loving in Nature

Concerned as Gentle Creature;

A Man with Golden Soul

Daya Shetty as a Person whole;


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Entry 7




LETTER

Respected Sir;

(ahan 🤔, application lug rahi hy 👎🏼, tou ab kya likkhun 😕, haan 😊)

Dear Sir;

(hawww 😲, ye bhi thora awkward lug raha hy , pata nahi kya samjhein 🤔, tou ab, ahan 😊)

Sir;

(malum kesy hoga kisy likha hy , nahi bhae, ye tou bilkul bekaar hy 👎🏼, ummm 🤔, haan ye theek hy 😃)

Daya Sir;

(Hello likhun 🤔, chalo choro, samjh tou jayein gy kay Hello bhi hy is mein 😉, theek, ab aagy 😊)

Main CID Buht Dino sy dekh raha hun (nahi 😲, samjhein gy abhi dekhna shroo kiya hy 🤔) matlab buht Saalun sy (ahhh , agar Mujhy Buddha samjh liya tou ) (kuch aur likhna chahyey, ummm, haan 🤔👍🏼) thory Saalun sy jis mein kafi Din hoty hain (haan ab Theek hy, Dono aa gaye, Saal bhi aur Din bhi 👍🏼😃) 3 Haftun sy CID kay kisi Episode mein aap Nazar nahi aa rahy, KYUN (ohhh , aisy pooch liya, Kyun mita deta hun 😉, ummm 🤔, nahi phir sochein gy kay Fiker hee nahi hy Meri 😆, likhy rehny deta hun, haan, ab aur 😊) Mujhy Aap kay Episode mein Na hony sy Episode Pheeka lagta hy (lo bhae, ab tou Pakka sochein gy kay Khat kisi aur ko likha hy🤔, pr Suna Suna likha tou kahein Bura na lagy, ab aagy 😊).

Aditya Sir, yani Senior Inspector Abhijeet alug Akely Bolayey phirty hain, Becharay kay Kaan BOSS sunny ko taras gaye (ch ch ch ), Dheery Dheery Dialogues Bolty hain (sadly hain na 😭) aur wo Pankaj tou Un ka Dushman ban gaya hy, hr waqt Bekar ki Baatein krta hy (hunh 😡 ) aur ACP Sir pr bhi kitna Burden ho gaya hy, kai baar tou Wo Daya bolty bolty re jaty hain (hahhaha 😆😆, sacchi mein 😛) aur Freddie Sir bhi Becharay Phanse gaye hain.

Jaywanti Bechari tou bas Aahein bharti rehti hy aur Aap ko Yaad krti rehti hy aur Baaqi Purvi aur Sherya bhi Chup Chup sii rehti hain (haq ha ).

Nikhil tou Sakty mein rehta hy, aap wali Waist Coats pehan kr Gham Mana raha hy (Muskurayey Mut 😡) aur Vansh bhi Sad hee rehta hy, Bolta tou hy hee Nahi (pr kya wo Bolta hy 😕, Hum ny bhae, Us Bechary ki Aawaz Suni nahi 😉, Phir hans rahy hain ).

Jub bhi Saray Forensic Lab aaty hain, Humari nazar Aap ko hee Dhoondti hy, Salunkhe Sir ki Daya Bacchy ki Gonj Sunai deti hy, Dr. Tareeka bhi Sad lagti hain aur Murdy bhi aap ko Miss krty hain (Hilty bhi Nahi Becharay Apni jagah sy 😉😉).

Mujrimun ki tou Eid ho gayii hy, Kuch nay tou Ficial bhi kara liya hy, Cham Cham krty hain Un kay Gaal (hehehe 😆😆); Ek Do tou aap ko itna Miss kr rahy hain kay Gaal pr Thapper ka Tatto bhi Banwa liya hy (hahaha 🤣🤣).

Wo saaray Darwazy jin ko kabhi Aap nay Toura tha, Buht Khush hain, kuch tou Jaldi Hospital sy Discharge ho gaye hain aur jo Ilaj karanay bahar kay deshun mein gaye thy na, wo bhi Wapis aa gaye hain Khushi sy Phool kr.

Kal tou Airport kay Cargo pr itna Rash tha, sub Darwazy jo laut aaye (Aap phir hanse rahy hain ).

Aap kay Wardrob ko tou Complex ho gaya hy, Silent Zone mein chala gaya hay kay Usy sirf Abhieet Sir kay koi Kholta nahi, jo wohi Grey Joggers uthaty hain, Jis kay Twin Bhai ny tou Apny Laces sy Kal Raat Aatmahatya karny ki bhi Koshish ki thi aur aap ki Shirts nay Usy Bachaya tha (kyun Hanse rahy hain 😡, ye koi Hansny wali Baat hy, Rona chahyey Aap ko tou ).

Scorpio aur Quillas bhi Aap ko Yaad krti hain, Miss kr rahi hain Aap ko, Bol tou kuch skti Nahi, bas Khamoshi sy Aap ka Intaizar krti hain Humari tarah (acha acha, ab Royey Mut 😭).

Kal tou Saary Mujrimun nay Party bhi Manaii thi aur tou aur Jungle ki Aag ki tarah ye Khaber Underworld mein Phail gayii hy.

Kuch nay tou Apni Deals ki Planning bhi kr lii hy, ye tou Acha Nahi hy na, Aap Khud Sochyey Senior Inspector Daya kay Naam sy Jo Mujrim Kaanpty thy, ab Wohi Dewali Mana rahy hain; Desh ka kya hoga Boss (oopss 😵).

Senior Inspector Abhijeet bhi Aap ko Buht Miss krty hain, itna kay ab tou AIN bhi Nahi krty (Sadly Sacchi 😒) aur wo Grey Joggers bhi Kum Kum Pehanty hain (haaa 😉).

Aap kub aayein gy, kyun nahi aa rahy, kub aayein gy, Kaun sii Tareekh ko aur kitnay hee Sawal hain jin ka jawab Chahyey(aur chahyey matlab tou chahyey, samjhy 😎😈).

Waiting for Your Return

Your's Fan (Pankha nahi, AC bhi nahi, bas Handy Fan 😳)

(Mujhy jawab Likhyey ga 😃, English Mujhy Zyada aatii Nahi , Hindi bhi thora Weak hy 😭, Tulu mein tou Zero 👎🏼 aur Marathi bhi Sar sy Nikl jati hy 😒, tou kisi Aasan Zaban mein Likhyey ga 😉😆).



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Entry 8



OS

Voice: Sir, I'll Try again.

Another Voice: Pulkit, plz, Dihan do, warna yaqeenun Production House Koi Faisla ly ly ga.

Pulkit: ji Sir.

Pulkit coming out either a Man sitting on His Car Seat Relaxly waiting for Someone, Heard Every Word of that Conversation which takes Him in to another World, a World of Past.

Year 1997

Time: 11: 47 pm

Location: FireWorks Studio Parking, Mumbai.

Voice: ye kya keh rahy ho Khadim Hussain?

Khadim Hussain: Sunny mein tou yehi aa raha hy Mahesh.

Mahesh: abhi aayey Din hee kitny huay hain Usy?

Khadim Hussain: bas jo Ooper waly ki Marzi (moving ahead with) acha bhala Seedha sa Larka hy.

Mahesh: Wage Guru ki jo Marzi.

A Small Tear Falls from His Eye, which He Wiped from His Sleeve Roughly although moving ahead in Dark as No One Seeing Him.

Year 1997

Time: 07: 20 pm

Location: Producer Office.

Pradeep: matlab, Tum chahty ho kay Usy aik mauqa aur diya jaye.

Brijesh: haan, kum sy kum aik Season mein tou, wesy bhi Anurag jana chahta hy aur Aditya nay tou abhi tak koi Green Signal diya he Nahi.

Pradeep: Theek hy, Aditya sy Baat karo.

Brijesh: Pata raha hun Usy.

Both exchanged a Sweet Smile and the Discussion moved to another Issue.

Year: 1997

Time: 03: 31 am

Location: Studio Parking.

A Man after Finishing His work moving out from the Spot feeling a figure sat on Parking Stairs.

Man looking around for Mahesh or Khadim Hussain as Both worked here as Watchman's Day and Night but after finding no one was there, moving towards and heard;

Voice: Sir, Humein Thane, (nodded head again and after rolling some Papers with) nahi, (with little modulation in voice with) Sir, Humein Thane ja kr.

He wanted to Interrupt but feel that its not a Nice Idea to Disurb Someone Busying in His work so Leave the Spot without any word.

Year 1998

Time: 07:00 am

Location: Shooting Spot.

Character: Mujhy kuch yaad nahi hy Sir, (sobbing) aaj Kal Mujhy kuch Yaad Nahi rehta (Crying) Mujhy kuch Yaad Nahi.

Voice: oh You, Idiot.

A CUT voice Appeared with a Loud Sounds of Claps while the Seniors Pat on Character Shoulder to Praise on His Acting as His Crying was Real without any use of Glycerin.

This is the First time, He feels Himself Achieving 1 Percent of what of His Gaol Set after coming on this Field gives Him Pleasure.

Year 1999,

Time: 09: 31 am,

Location: Production Office.

Some People coming out from a Cabin, Shaking hands with Each One and suddenly, a Man approaching asked;

Man: arry Sir, Aap.!

Brejesh: haan, dekho Pakr he laye Hum isy Yahan.

Man: Acha kiya Sir, (Sweetly with Meeting) hum ny Aap ko Buht Miss kiya Sir, Aap tou Ghayeb he ho gaye thy.

Pradeep: haan, bhae, Ghalati sy pehlay sirf 26 Episodes kay liye Haan karwai thi.

Voice: aur ab.

Brejesh: Zindagi bhar ka.

Year 2000,

Time: 07:31 pm,

Location: Vanity Van.

Voice: arry Chorye Sir, thora aaram tou krna chahyey, (suddenly) hain na Phadnis.

Phadnis: haan, aaj tou Thakan ho gayi. Ashwani bhi chali gayii thi.

Voice: aur Daya.

Phadnis (with smile):Wo Saleem ko Cheez Omelate banana sikha raha hy.

Year 2002,

Time: 11:11 am,

Location: inside Car.

Voice 1: itni rash driving Achi Baat nahi.

Voice 2: Sach.

Voice 1: aby.

Voice 2: Sir.

Year 2004,

Time: 10: 05 am,

Location: Kitchen inside Office.

Brejesh: Zabardast, kyun Shivaji.

Shivaji: haan bhae, Socha bhi Nahi tha kay is kay hath mein itna Zaiqa hoga, Adi Zara Dish Pass krna.

Adi: Pait Bhar gaya magar Dil Nahi, Kyun Fandu.

Fandu: haan Sir.

Salunkhe (to Manav): aur bhae, ye Biryani RETURN OF DAKSH kay karan mili hy, Yaad rakhna.

Manav: jee Sir.

Adi: wesy Sahab hain kahan.?

Fandu: Dr Sahab usy Chira rahy thy tou Sharma kay Bhagg gaya.

Narendra: Ilzaam, wo bhi Mujh pr.

Shivaji: haan, abhi Wig utar kay dy dy ga (with naughtiness) kyun Salunkhe.

All started laughing Loudly while the Someones Smiles Shyly seeing this through Window.

Year 2005,

Time: 02:02 pm,

Location:Trio Together.

Voice's: ek Phool Chaman mein Kesa Khila.

He always Smiles after Reminding that where He with Aditya and Shivaji Sir Sing a Song Together from Anupuma Movie of hreshikesh Mukherjee.

He remember that He always Humming and his and Shivaji has a Kaanty ka Muqabla because Both have Treasure of Old Songs so One day Brijesh said;

Brijesh: Main Jald he ek Episode banaon ga jis mein tum Log Apni Aawaz ka Jaadu jagan.

Daya: Sach Sir.

Brijesh: Bilkul Sach, magar Teeno (to Aditya) Aditya Tum bhi.

Daya: Sir, Sir ko tayyar karna Mera Kaam.

That was one of the Cute Moment still memorized by Cid fans in their Brain having a Lovely Voices of their Favorites One.

This Year have another thing which He Reminds, yes, He got a Bullet in first time at His Shoulder in an episode where a Predictor Predict about His Murder before the Attack still gives a Cute Smile on His Face.

Year 2006,

Time: 09:02 am,

Location: Top of a Building.

Someone running behind a Masked man in Speed, the Lane having Barriers of Walls, Roofs, Ditches and with Accurate Measurement of Distance and Force makes Jumping Difficult but Both tried and at One Point, when Jumped, Fell on Floor with a Sound of AHHH Vanishing with Voices of Shouts, Screams and Echos of DAYAaa.

Figure laid on Stretcher moving inside the Trauma Ward either Figure tried to Relax the Panicked Friends and Supporters with His Smile and when a Soft Finger Wipes a Tear coming out due to Extreme Pain from His Left Eye Swiftly, He invaded inside Emergency.

These Two Weeks are Terrible not for the Injured Figure but for His Family, Relatives, Friends, Supporters, Well Wishers even for His Fans too.

The Shooting Spots looking Empty in His Absence, the Lively Atmosphere was Missing even His Pals just doing their Role in Silence in that Black n White Continuous Rolling of Frames.

Year Same,

Time: 11:20 am,

Location: CID Bureau Hall Set.

A Man appeared in Crutches, really brings Multi-Color in that Hall where His Best Friend coming ahead showing His Peak of Happiness with His Words, Smiles and Sparkling Deep Eyes and giving Him Support to take a Seat in Comfortable Position.

This is the First time in His Shooting Career that He was on Chair while His Head in Standing Position still gives Him a Sweet Feel of their Caring ways.

Year 2007,

Time: 09:17 pm,

Location: inside a Truck.

He was Tied in the Truck while feeling Dull as he was Showing the Character under Drug either Shifting as He was Kidnapped.

In this Year, Two Back to Back Episodes based with Difference of 3 Months on His Character gives Him a Huge Round of Applause.

This is the time, where He got Thousands of Praising and Appreciation of His Unique Outlook where He mostly using Bright colors of Shirts with Waist Coats still gives Him a Cute Shy Smiles remembering those Naughty Sweet Compliments about Himself.

Year 2008,

Time: 08:37 am,

Location: FireWorks Stodio.

Voice's: Happy Birthday to You, Happy Birthday to CID, Happy Birthday to You.

Yeah, CID Completed its 10 Anniversary at 21st January 2008 and it's the Party time.

He really Smiling Broadly reminding that Dance which He and Aditya doing in that Celebrations without any Steps but still Memorable.

Year 2011,

Time: 11: 09 pm,

Location: Switzerland.

Yes, This is the first time, Trio moved to Abroad Together as before that Only Shavaji Sir went to London for Shoot of TRAIL IN LONDON Episode so Masti also Doubled, the Series was a Big Flop still gives Him a Sad Sigh but their Trip was Wonderful.

The Walking on Bridge to Aditya Cycling, His Hanover in Bullet while Cable Car Travelling in such Cold Weather really gives them Pleasure.

Year 2012,

Time: 12: 58 pm,

Location: inside a Desetred Factory.

Voice: Cut.

He gives a High Five to His Pal after completing the Scene where Abhijeet Fell the Pulley over Daya Shoulder Hurts Him Badly while Daya still thought that the Series Only Sustained or Carved Deep Impressions on Viewers Minds just because of Aditya Best Performance.

This Year, CID Mostly Showed Series while Some Lovely and Dangerous Stunts Memorized in Brains although after ages, He got a Chance to Drive a Bus feels Him still Spark.

Year 2012,

Time: 08: 00 pm,

Location: inside Vanity Van.

He still Remembers This Year was a Big Disaster as DARAAR and GARHAN in CID was still Bad Dreams for them having Low Scripts and Bad Direction too.

Year 2013,

Time: 12: 38 am,

Location: at Vehicle.

Voice: kya Daya, Chor na.

The Man Quietly drove the Car either Completely Frustrated, FW told Him about Small only Few Episode Single sided Love story from His Junior Cop towards Him initially gives Him Confusion which Wiped by His Friend Naughty Glance, Tease and Smiles but the way it Stretched, feels Him Webbed in a Wool of Anger, Helpless and Disappointed even somehow Painful Emotions.

He knew, its part of His Job to do what He was Ordered but the way the Track Approaching really gives Him Tons of Anger He was Facing from His Fans really Regret Him.

Year 2014,

Time: 06:02 pm,

Location: at Shooting Spot.

The Path Selected by Itself from Production House gives a Complete Bad Patch not for Only Product but for the People Associated to it, gives their Best with Complete Honesty and Loyalty while as because They are Presents ON SCREEN so got Lots of Opponent Force and to Tackle them, He turned Dull, Dumb, Frustrate, Lazy and All.

How many times, He Talked to Production House, about Changing so many Things but They were turned as Deaf; So Many Valuable Gems like VIVEK MASHRU, VIKAS KUMAR, VINEET etc Left CID just because of Sidelining their Characters.

He Completely Quiet after seeing his and His Friends and Fellow Efforts to at-least Realizing Production House about their Mistakes but Failed so Leaves it on Time.

Year 2015 (on going),

Time: 09:02 am,

Location: inside RamPyari.

A Better Year till now, Daya and Aditya coming with Different Images, there Dosti Dastaa'n roaming in Ghar Ghar gives Him Soul of Soothes.

He Loves when People coming and Praised His Mimic Mannerism, His Embrace to Aditya on Show, His Comments about His Fiend cum Brother, Some Specific Terms They Used in Episodes as Bhai, Bhaiyya, Chote etc.

The Best Part of this Year is 18 Years of CID Celebration Shoot in all days, Some Special Memories They All Enjoyed during Repetition of Golden Era Episodes All day; His ONE DAY although Half Happy on that as his Friend ONE DAY still Pending; His Appearance with His Team in KBC against Big B, Sing Songs with Him, Lata Jee house Visit again, His Own Birthday Party on ADAALAT Set where He got Some Unexpected Guests and Gifts, His visit to Fan House while His Journey with CID.

He Jerked Out from His Beautiful Past feeling a Pat on His Shoulder where His Bro Look at Him in Concern Eyes and asked;

Aditya: kya hua.?

Daya (coming out from Car with): Nahi Wo, aisay he.

Aditya: hmm, (look at the Another Studio Gate with) New Entrants ko Dekh kr Khud bhi Tum Kho gaye hoon gy.

Daya (smilingly): haan, Accha laga phir sub Yaad kr ky.

Aditya: tou kuch aur bhi Yaad kr lein.

Daya: kya.?

Aditya: Shooting site jana hy, do baar Santosh ka Phone aa chukka hy jo Apnay ANNA ko Buht Miss kr raha hy.

Daya (shy tone): kya Sir, Chalo...

Both Occupying their Seats in Car Waiting for them, taking their Past together with Broad Smiles.!



Edited by _YuviFanatic_ - 9 years ago
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Can We Try to Guess the Creative Worker or Fiction Writer Openly too...❓
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Shurti plz Remove HTTP from Entry 5, 6 and 7 as it was Not opening because having two Hypertext Together...
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Creative...

Static...
Entry # 01:- Sweet idea of including the birthday boy pic.s from the year 01 to now... ⭐️ And that ladder-theme idea was really nice... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 02:- Nice pic.s and editing... ⭐️ Daya sir's different facial expressions were looking really nice... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 03:- Daya sir's different pic.s in disguised avtar was a nice idea... ⭐️ Selected pic.s were given nice editing... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 04:- Very beautiful pic.s having Daya sir's cute-sweet smiley face... ⭐️ Loved all the pic.s... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 05:- Beautiful idea of including Daya sir's pic.s from other than CID series... ⭐️ All the pic.s were really nice especially the one from Singham Returns... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 06:- Beautiful pic.s of my cutie pie Daya sir having serious and thoughtful expressions... ⭐️ His pic. in the specs is the one I liked the most... 😳 The idea of dark corners with bright mid was looking great... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 07:- Nice idea of including different shades of Daya sir from his life... ⭐️ Pic.s and editing was nice... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Movable...

Entry # 01:- Beautiful pic.s of my handsome dude having different shades of emotions... ⭐️ The idea of falling heart petals with light music in the back-ground was really sweet and lovely... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 02:- Very beautiful clips of my cutie pie Daya sir... ⭐️ He was looking the sweet-heart in all avtars... 😳 The lines were really lovely, sweet and awesome... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 03:- Nice pic.s of Daya sir... ⭐️ The captions written in them were sweet... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 04:- Awesomest, loveliest, bestest... 😃 Loved this whole journey with this beautiful effort of the maker, the whole journey of Daya sir with CID get revived through this... ⭐️ Very very beautiful work of the respected participant especially the inclusion of the same dialogues instead of some song or music... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 05:- Excellent song with beautiful inclusion of Daya sir's pic.s, especially his old ones, loved them to my core... ⭐️ I was really feeling that the song's lyrics were saying my heart's words... 😳 Only one thing that in the end at 3 minutes and 20 seconds, the song got stopped otherwise it is an awesomest effort of the respected participant... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 06:- Beautiful song... ⭐️ Clips of Daya sir's life's different moments were really nice and sweet... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊

Entry # 07:- Nice idea of including the scenes of Daya sir's journey in CID, loved it... ⭐️ The song was very well-suited to Daya sir though Daya sir jaisy bhi hain THE BESTET hain, hehehe... 😉 Some clips were really sweet bringing light giggles from my mouth, tight hug for that... 🤗 Only one thing that at some scenes of old CID episodes where Daya sir was getting snubbed by ACP sir, there the song over-wrapped the dialogues of the two though the scenes were seeming funny having Daya sir's silliness... 😆 The ending part of the video was really sweet, loved ACP sir there... 😳 Over-all very sweet and lovely effort of the respected participant... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊


MARKS...
Creative...
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Entry # 01:- (6.5/10)
Entry # 02:- (06/10)
Entry # 03:- (6.5/10)
Entry # 04:- (07/10)
Entry # 05:- (7.5/10)
Entry # 06:- (8.5/10)
Entry # 07:- (07/10)

Movable...

Entry # 01:- (07/10)
Entry # 02:- (08/10)
Entry # 03:- (05/10)
Entry # 04:- (10/10)
Entry # 05:- (9.5/10)
Entry # 06:- (6.5/10)
Entry # 07:- (09/10)

Thanks a lot to all the participants who have put their efforts for us... 👏 Thank you once again to you people and haven't read Fiction yet so will review it soon... 😳 Love you all and thanks once again... 😊
Edited by CIDlover-01 - 9 years ago

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