Fiction...
Entry # 01:- Pleased to see Daya sir creating a beautiful aroma there with his melodious voice... 😳 Liked Daya sir's sweetness and soft appearance here... ⭐️ But sorry, did not find it much entertaining as the theme the respected organizer had given is to write about directing Daya sir in a particular scene which was no where there... 😕 It is strictly my own POV and I am soo sorry if have hurt you but find it so, so said it, sorry again... 😔 A nice effort by the respected participant... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 02:- Nice story with beautiful portrayal of emotions... ⭐️ Only found few spelling and typing errors as few things were typed twice and few were not typed... 😊 The poem was beautiful and well-suited here... 😃 Over-all a soothing effort by the respected participant, enjoyed it... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 03:- Beautiful poem having the element of love and respect in it... ⭐️ Loved the line "Sea of sorrows buried deep under your innocent smile"... 👏 Only found that the ending words of the stanzas were not the same ones as the work was not in the shape of "Poem" though it was very sweet and lovely and I personally enjoyed it... 😃 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 04:- Hahahaha it was funny, serious and angry at the same time and I have guessed it's writer too... 😉 But I'm not going to share my guess here because of having no idea of either we are allowed to do so or not... 😛 Loved this attempt of the respected participant and fully agree with the one too about such disappointed and super-natural scripts... Anyways no comments about FW otherwise I may not will get stop... 😆 Loved "Bechargi" of Daya sir and that DADCL scenes, hehehe... ⭐️ Beautiful and lovely work... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 05:- Hahaha sweet lovely poem... ⭐️ Last stanza was lovely... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 06:- Lovely poetry with awesome description about my cutie pie Daya sir... ⭐️ Loved the whole... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 07:- Haha hmm Daya sir bohut intelligent hain samjh jaien gy k "Hello" bhi hai, haha... 😉 Hahaha Daya sir k na hony k GHAM mein murdy bhi nahin hilty, awesome... 😆 Loved this "Handy Fan"... 😆 Very beautiful and entertaining effort and can imagine the shy grin present on Daya sir's innocent-smiley face while reading such a sweet and love-filled light tone letter... ⭐️ Beautiful and lovely attempt... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
Entry # 08:- The journey of Daya sir has shown very nicely and sweetly... ⭐️ But I think this is not an OS as, as per the organizer's given theme, in OS Inspector Daya sir should be reminiscing on his past but here Dayanand Shetty sir was recalling his whole journey in CID... 😕 Strictly my own POV, do not want to hurt the respected participant and I apologize in advance too, if have hurt the respected writer... 😊 Over-all the journey of Daya sir's memory lane was nicely portrayed and I enjoyed it... 👏 Thank you dear... 😊
MARKS...
Entry # 01:- (05/10)
Entry # 02:- (8.5/10)
Entry # 03:- (07/10)
Entry # 04:- (10/10)
Entry # 05:- (07/10)
Entry # 06:- (09/10)
Entry # 07:- (9.5/10)
Entry # 08:- (6.5/10)
A huge THANK YOU from my side to all the respected participants and the respected organizers for putting their efforts just to entertain us... 👏 Thank you so very much dears, love you all... 🤗
Edited by CIDlover-01 - 10 years ago
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