CID Story: Corruption

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Benzaiten

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Posted: 9 years ago

The credit of a certain portion of this plot and the idea goes to Visrom di. More on that to come once you read the story. If I give the description here the fun of the story and your reactions will disappear. 😉

Oh and the rest of the credit goes to me I guess.😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Rifah

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res😛

*Edited*

Awesome story👏

Dcp per banduk talna...was cool😎😆

Ye Abhijeet bhi naPata nahi kya kya natak karta rehta hai😆

Last Trio moment was very soothing😳

Loved the story⭐️

Edited by aditya_anjaana - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice story...
enjoyed a lot😊

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gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sheryu, dunt know which Portion of Story Plot Idea given to U by Vis DII...😉😉

so I am Reviewing, based on Totality...😊😊

The Start was Thrilled...👏👏

First Scene mein hee Attempt to Murder...😆😆

wo bhi Direct ACP Sir pr...😉😉

I like the Quick Decisions of Salunkhy Sir...👏👏

then All Work and at last Daya Sir Wrapped All...👏👏

Very much Human Touch, We Feels...⭐️⭐️

Then the Commissioner Jaidev and DCP arrival at Bureau when Cops almost got the Floor, Sniper used for His Attempt...👏👏

after that Jaidev Shocking News...😉😉

Yes Sheryu, The Story Flair with its Second Twist...⭐️👏

I really Enjoyed Abhijeet Sir Reaction...😳👏

Awesomely Amazing...⭐️⭐️

then, all about that Corruption Report case...👏👏

Nicely Brief of Report to Cops...👏👏

I Loved that Judge Part to Issued Warrants on Back date too...⭐️⭐️

I dunt know as Commissioner already Handed All Decision regarding that Report Case so Why He does not Cut Off Abhijeet Sir with any Assistance to Deal Only that Report Case Separately and Trying to take out any Link of that to ACP Sir Shoot Out...😕😕

khair, I Like DCP Panga's...😉😉

Absolutely Nice...😆👏

Abhijeet Sir Leff Out from Case and doing as per His Idea in Presence of ACP Sir is Third Twist...👏⭐️

Like Daya Sir Joining, even His Query about "Main kahan sy Start karun" was Awesome...⭐️⭐️

then His Query and that Small Convo was Really Classy based on Real Tone...😳👏

The Suspects List and then Team Inclusion was Lovely...👏👏

Team Search was Good as I Loved the Fake Story They all Provided to Suspects for Detail Searching of their Houses and Lappies...👏👏

Like that DUO time to time Contact to Salunkhy Sir even that Salunkhy Sir CHOR Comments were Laughter...😆😆

Nice Engagement of Team with DCP when again back to Bureau..👏👏

then Abhijeet Sir Meeting with His Informer...😊😊

I Really find that Part Wonderful...👏👏

Somehow I Feel that, in such Big Cases, nor the Witnesses or Assistance, such Easily Open Up like Babu...

either in such days, Main Culprit did not take back that Report...😲😲

its really Not Acceptable...

The Rifle Idea OK, but again, why He does not Wipe it in Pieces from His House...😕😕

yaar, He is a SWAT Sniper Rifler...😊😊

Usy tou Extreme Sharp hona tha na...😊😊

the DCP Idea was Not Appealing for Me...

as when Daya Sir after Confirming about that Culprit with DCP, Not Directly call to Commissioner...😕😕

Khair, I Like DCP Cancel Abhijeet Sir Promotion on Revenge...😉😉

He is Really a Gadha Yaar...😆😆

ACP Sir Back and last Sweet Convo was Lovely...😳👏

Thank You so much Yaar... 😳😳

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Sheryu, dunt know which Portion of Story Plot Idea given to U by Vis DII...😉😉 Woh kuch din baad reveal karenge. 😉 Kuch aur log padh len aur Vis di bhi kuch comments de de. Phir.😉

I dunt know as Commissioner already Handed All Decision regarding that Report Case so Why He does not Cut Off Abhijeet Sir with any Assistance to Deal Only that Report Case Separately and Trying to take out any Link of that to ACP Sir Shoot Out...😕😕 Kyun ki until his promotion Abhijeet is still part of CID and DCP Chitrole is still boss.
Somehow I Feel that, in such Big Cases, nor the Witnesses or Assistance, such Easily Open Up like Babu... Babu jaise criminals ko pata hai ke unke khilaaf koi saboot nahi hai lekin agar woh madat nahi karenge police ki toh unke khilaaf saboot khade kiye jaa sakte hain. Aur aise criminals ka koi imaan toh hota nahi hai. Aapne aap ko bachne ke baare main zada sochte hain.
either in such days, Main Culprit did not take back that Report...😲😲
its really Not Acceptable...
The Rifle Idea OK, but again, why He does not Wipe it in Pieces from His House...😕😕 Because she had to use it still. Abhi bhi paanch targets bache the. Aur pehle do bhi maare nahi the after all.
Thank You so much Yaar... 😳😳 Thank you yaar. 😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

Thank You so much Yaar for Clarifying These...😳👏

Kyunky Ending Progression mein Story Kafi Fast Paced ho gayii thi...👏👏

tou Main Thora Confuse ho gaya...😕😕

is liye Samjh Nahi aayii Mujhy...😆😆

Thank You so much...😳😳

Sorry for Troubling You Boss...😊😊

I m Waiting for that Revealing...😉😉

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice quickly paced story, Shreya. 😊

There was no time to breathe or relax...it was just jhing bang...and a very nice story. 👏

For me, I knew what you were writing, so the suspense wasn't really there, except to see how much more masala you have added. 😛

I asked you to take out one particular sentence before too many people read it...😉

I actually wanted something in another way...I'll PM you about it. 😛 I don't want GD reading it...😈

(at least not now...😉)

Edited by visrom - 9 years ago

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome Story 👏👏

Loved the last Trio moment 😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: visrom
Nice quickly paced story, Shreya. 😊

There was no time to breathe or relax...it was just jhing bang...and a very nice story. 👏

For me, I knew what you were writing, so the suspense wasn't really there, except to see how much more masala you have added. 😛

I asked you to take out one particular sentence before too many people read it...😉

I actually wanted something in another way...I'll PM you about it. 😛 I don't want GD reading it...😈
(at least not now...😉)

Ye tou Buht Ghalat Baat hy Dii...😭😭

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