Story: The Unknown Skeleton (Posts 2 - 4)

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow, waiting...😃

Insp...Jhanvi????? 😛 I think she worked with Abhijeet in Khatre mein CID officer. 😆

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SavageMinion

@Minionite

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: visrom
Wow, waiting...😃
Insp...Jhanvi????? 😛 I think she worked with Abhijeet in Khatre mein CID officer. 😆

Did she? I don't remember. 😆

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Promo is extremely interesting 😃

Waiting eagerly for the Story 😊

Waise bhi Aajkal bahut kam stories padhne ko milta hai 😭

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ice-cold

@ice-cold

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hey! Nice promo..⭐️

Eagerly waiting for story!😃

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SavageMinion

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Story posted and PMs sent!

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Excellant Story Di 👏

Read such a good Investigative Story after a long time 😊

Each scene was handled perfectly without any kind of dragging 😃

Keep writing such Wonderful stories 😃

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

That was brilliant investigation.
Loved it :)

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Nice one..
Investigation and the steps were not cnfusing and jumping japang like FW
kuch jagah do bar parna para..credit goes to my brain..
Hehe

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

So Yesternight of Mine going Good Reading This Sheryu...😉😳

I find it really Intriguing and Interesting Yaar...😳👏👏

the Revealing of Skeleton was Lovely...😳👏👏

U always started Ur Stories with such Regular manner which Gripped the Reader...⭐️⭐️

then Forensic Jaanch...⭐️⭐️

Somehow Initially U said that Sameer the Director taking Permission from Malek as He was the Owner but later U changed Owner Name as Shanker Bahadur... hahahah..😆😆

Yaar, the thing which I find was little Confusing especially for Me that U never told that mansion already Used in Shooting Movies/Plays and how it Burnt...?😕😕

Khair, I Loved that Half sketch Matched with 3800 Missing cases Reports having Same Credentials...👏👏

Loved the Test Results coming Late...👏👏

then started One by One...😛😛

I really Enjoyed that U always gives Social Messages/Awareness to your Readers regarding their Lapse/Carelessness...👏👏

U really give a Very Solid matter where Victim Families does not Closed their Cases...👏👏

the Verification in Every case either through Families/Suspicious and Police was Outstanding...👏👏

the Twist of This Story is Salunkhy Sir Mistake...⭐️⭐️

honestly Boss, here U showed the Human Error/mistakes from an Expert Excellently...⭐️⭐️

the Ria/Sia Case coming in this Verification and Ended by taking out a Culprit after 10 Years...👏👏

Somehow, that Ragini case showed, How Our Moral values Ruining...👏👏

Yes, a brother in law Affairing with His Bhabi (Ok he did not knew it) and Loved that He Deactivated His account after knowing about the Next Person...👏👏

the Father in law as in Such Character Portrayed really a Social norms devaluing such speedly...😭👏👏

i really Enjoyed that U showed that Only younger got Gyan from net and social Sites, Elders or rather I said Older also...⭐️⭐️

Motive was Not much Impressive...

Ragini Mother Comments about Her Daughter was Heart Wrenching... 😭👏

the Shifting of laash was another Classy Point...⭐️⭐️

Team Distribution and Investigation was Wonderful... 👏👏

ACP Sir and Salunkhy sir Nok Jhook was Cute...😆

I really say, Both Fumbles by Culprits after Team Plan was Absolutely Fantastic...⭐️⭐️

i realy Enjoyed this after Long Sheryu...😳👏👏

Story was Little Lengthy as U easily Cuts Some parts...😉😉

but its really Very Very Very Excellent Attempt...👏👏

Thank You so very much...😳😳

NOTE: Thanks for some extra Gyan for Me as Strangulation, Cold cases, hyoid Bone etc...😳👏👏

Edited by gadhadada - 10 years ago

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SavageMinion

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Somehow Initially U said that Sameer the Director taking Permission from Malek as He was the Owner but later U changed Owner Name as Shanker Bahadur... hahahah..😆😆 Nahi nahi I was using Hindi word for owner - maleek or however it is spelled. 😆
Yaar, the thing which I find was little Confusing especially for Me that U never told that mansion already Used in Shooting Movies/Plays and how it Burnt...?😕😕 Actually I just didn't feel that added to the story. You know like one of those things that doesn't really affect the case. Waise kaise bhi jaal sakta hai. Kisi ki galti, on purpose, yah bas koi technical failure.
honestly Boss, here U showed the Human Error/mistakes from an Expert Excellently...⭐️⭐️ I just can't believe that he can never make any mistakes. Kabhi toh galti karte hi honge. 😉
i realy Enjoyed this after Long Sheryu...😳👏👏 Thanks yaar! 😳
Story was Little Lengthy as U easily Cuts Some parts...😉😉
but its really Very Very Very Excellent Attempt...👏👏
Thank You so very much...😳😳

NOTE: Thanks for some extra Gyan for Me as Strangulation, Cold cases, hyoid Bone etc...😳👏👏